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Old 08-03-2002, 10:41 AM   #6
Pedro The Hutt
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Well for one thing when writing a story you shouldn't make so many spelling errors and the likes. Also adding your own effects like "woosh" can be distracting. And then.. well... stick true to the SW universe. I mean Vader's suit is too heavy for him to make anything close to a backflip, the guy can't even jump O_o But oh well, keep on writing and you might become good ^_^
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