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Old 05-27-2006, 07:38 PM   #1
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[FIN] Star Wars: The Beginning of the Galactic Empire

Hi, I'll be writing the story about Anakin Skywalker if he survived Mustafar, this will begin after Anakin's ending from the Episode 3 video game. This will contain some characters from KotOR and I will have my first chaper shortly!

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Old 05-27-2006, 07:38 PM   #2
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Sounds promising.
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Old 05-27-2006, 07:41 PM   #3
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Sounds promising.
The alternate ending from Episode 3 Game. I didn't like that ending much. Like Jason, I think it also sounds promising.
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Old 05-27-2006, 09:15 PM   #5
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Chapter 1: The Birth of the Empire

Anakin entered the Lambada class shuttle leaving his Jedi Master, Sith Master and wife behind on Mustafar. He was headed for Coruscant to inform the members of the senate of his reign. When he reached Coruscant through hyperspace, he immediatly made his way to the Galactic Hub to annonce his reign. Members of the Senate were surprized to see Anakin instead of Sidious.
"I am Darth Vader, your new Emperor" announced Anakin, chatter scattered all over the place asking why Anakin has taken Sidious' place.
"What makes you think you can push us around, Sith Apprentice?" asked Senator Organa
"Sith Apprentice?"
"Yes, our alliegience wasn't even to Palpatine at all what makes you think we'll be loyal to you?"
"This..." Anakin raised his hand and Senator Organa's hovering platform became unstable, Anakin then sent it plunging to the floor! "If any of you even thinks about separtism, you can join Organa..." warned Anakin. No one spoke back. "Good!"

On Pollis Massa, Yoda dropped to the floor and his face was scrunched up as if he was about to cry. "Failed Obi-Wan has!" Yoda didn't bother to move.

In his office, Anakin sat thinking.
"What do we do now?" asked Anakin's advisor.
"What are we gonna do...? We hunt down Yoda, That's what we're gonna do" replied Anakin "Make sure I'm uncontested in my reign... wipe out that itch on my arm" he ordered.
"Yes my master, I'll prepare the army-"
"NO! He's one Jedi, I'm gonna do it on my own, show anyone that dare oppose me what will happen to treason" declared Anakin
"Y-y-yes m-m-master"
"Is the prototype to the new ships ready?" Anakin asked.
"Only the prototype my lord" answered Anakin's advisor
"Then I leave now" Anakin took a newly built ship that sort of looked like a tie, and left to find Yoda.

Anakin searched all across the galaxy and found an iscolated asteroid base, Anakin thought that would be the perfect place for Yoda to hide. Anakin searched all over the place and found Yoda he did. Anakin drew his saber.
"Stop, Anakin!" told Yoda "have to do this, you do not!"
"Save your preaching tratior!" ordered Anakin "Your words mean nothing to me, the Jedi shall become one with the Force this day!"
"Be it so" said Yoda, Yoda then drew his saber and the two started fighting. Strong blows from Anakin forced Yoda to frequently make a run for it but Anakin found him one way or another. He then followed Yoda and cornered him in a small room. Yoda dropped his saber.
"See if you will strike down a defenseless prisoner, we shall" said Yoda
"I am not a Jedi, old midget!" replied Anakin "I have no need for mercy!" Anakin shot a bolt of lightning and started killing Yoda. The more Yoda screamed, the more Anakin laughed, Anakin had completely fallen to the Dark Side. Yoda stopped screaming and started twitching after a while of lightning.
"Now to make sure" Anakin said to himself holding his saber. Anakin impaled Yoda and Yoda stopped twitching. The Jedi are no more.


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Old 05-27-2006, 09:39 PM   #6
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Please give me feedback on this, I need to know what I have to improve on. Feedback would be greatly appreciated


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Old 05-28-2006, 04:13 AM   #7
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Sorry it took me so long to read, I was tired last night. It is good, a bit sad that Yoda has died. I suppose if this is the alternate ending of the Episode 3 game (Which I've played), this will be set in an alternate Galaxy.
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Chapter 2: Two There Shall Be; No More; No Less; One Embodying; One Craving;

Anakin stood over Yoda's dead and charred body saying to himself "I've fallen so far, how the hell could he believe there was hope in me?"
A figure wearing a mask walked out of nowhere and said to him "Because there always is, at least in the Jedi point of view, but you choose not to embrace it, so you choose to embody power and only power!"
"Who are you?!" asked Anakin.
"I am like you" replied the figure "A fallen Jedi, an all powerful Sith, or at least I was four-thousand years ago"
"I need a name!" demanded Anakin.
"Okay, my name is Darth Revan" answered the figure.
"What do you want from me" asked Anakin.
"From you?! Nothing!" Revan replied, "Except to help you."
"I don't need your help!" yelled Anakin.
"Oh I believe you do," told Revan "You were always over-confident and arrogant Vader! I've been watching you for thirteen years, I've seen your incident with the Sand-"
"BITE YOUR TONGUE!!!" demanded Anakin
"Anakin, you are not a Sith yet!"
"Who are you telling me what I am and what I am not"
"YODA STOPPED FIGHTING BECAUSE HE DIDN'T SEE YOU AS A TRUE SITH!" roared Revan "You do not have a Sith army, Skywalker! Hell you are so arrogant, you went to take Yoda alone, without an apprentice to watch your back! He could've been planning a rebellion, he could've had armed men here!"
Anakin started breathing deeply, "What do you propose I do?" asked Anakin.
"I propose you rebuild the Jedi Temple into a Sith Temple, build an army and find an apprentice to follow in your footsteps."
"Okay, but you are only a ghost, what asset are you to me?" asked Anakin.
"I can only be seen be you, I can be your advisor." answered Revan "I'll meet you on Coruscant."

Revan dissapeared, Anakin jumped into his Tie Fighter and made his way to Coruscant.
Back on Coruscant, Anakin went back into his office and sat down in his chair.
"Have you completed your task, my lord?" asked Anakin's advisor.
"I'm here arent I?" answered Anakin, "You're lucky Polis Massa was close to Coruscant this year, there was no effort to put a Hyperdrive into that starfighter...! Anyway we've got work to do, I want the researchers busting their asses off in improving that fighter, and I want the engineers and construction workers rebuilding the Jedi Temple into one of the Sith!"
"Yes master"

Weeks later, the Sith Temple had been built and Anakin had some welcoming to do.
"Welcome, my Sith Army to be! I am Anakin Skywalker but you will address me as Master, or Lord Vader! Here I will teach you in the ways of the Dark Side of the Force the more powerful and intimidating alignment! The most powerful out of all of you shall have the privilage of being my apprentice to take my place when the time comes" announced Anakin.
"Repeat the Code of the Sith after me... Peace is a lie!"
"PEACE IS A LIE!"
"There is only Passion!"
"THERE IS ONLY PASSION!"
"Through Passion I gain Strength!"
"THROUGH PASSION I GAIN STRENGTH!"
"Through Strength I gain power!"
"THROUGH STRENGTH I GAIN POWERR!"
"Through Power I gain Victory!"
"THROUGH POWER I GAIN VICTORY!"
"Through Victory my chains are broken!"
"THROUGH VICTORY MY CHAINS ARE BROKEN!"
"The Force shall free me!"
"THE FORCE SHALL FREE ME!"

Through months and months of his army training his army, Anakin saw two equally powerful individuals and asked them to step into the throne room.
"I've been watching you two, very closely" Anakin told the two, "but only one can be my apprentice..."
"What would you have us do?" asked a beautiful female Twi-Lek
"I will have you fight to the death" answered Anakin
"Why the death?" asked a tall man
"Because the Sith do not have time for mercy, that's why!" growled Anakin, "... begin."

The two students fought a fierce battle knowing one will only walk out alive! After fierce swings and chops the battle was won... by the Twi-lek!
"What is your name?" asked Anakin.
"Oola..." replied the Twi-lek.
"You shall now be known as Darth.. Slaaf"
"Thank you... my master" replied Oola.


P.S: Slaaf is Dutch for Slave


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Old 05-28-2006, 05:28 AM   #9
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Old 05-28-2006, 08:39 AM   #10
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yeah, great work, revanscool, i like the intro of revan there.


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Old 05-28-2006, 08:45 AM   #11
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Good fic Revanscool.I like the way you put Revan in there.
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Old 05-28-2006, 12:41 PM   #12
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thanks alot guys, I'll have chapter 3 comin up soon


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Old 05-29-2006, 08:46 PM   #13
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but now I'm putting in summaries of the main characters up to here and the next chapter, and will keep adding when a new character is introduced.

Name: Anakin Skywalker
AKA: Darth Vader, Emperor Skywalker
Age: 24
Occupaton: Lord of the Sith, Emperor of the Galaxy
Family: Mother (Shmi: confirmed dead) Wife (Padme Skywalker: presumed dead)
Master: Obi-wan Kenobi, Darth Sidious
Apprentice: Darth Slaaf, Darth Moordenaar
Homeworld: Tatooine
Weapons: 2 Lightsabers (Blue and Red), The Force

Name: Oola
AKA: Darth Slaaf
Age: 17
Occupation: Vader's Apprentice, Sith Lord
Family: Unknown
Master: Darth Vader
Apprentice: No one
Homeworld: Ryloth
Weapons: 1 Double Saber, The Force
(Dead, killed by Darth Moordenaar)

Name: Revan
AKA: Darth Revan
Age: Over 4000
Occupation: Vader's Military Advisor
Family: Unknown
Master: Kriea, Zhar Lestin
Apprentice: Darth Malak, Bastila Shan
Homeworld: Deralia
Weapons: None (Can't fight)


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Old 05-30-2006, 03:11 PM   #14
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Nice,and oh,it's Deralia.
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Old 05-30-2006, 07:19 PM   #15
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Old 05-30-2006, 08:04 PM   #16
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Chapter 3: The Naboo Uprising

"You are progressing well, Lord Vader." told Revan.
"Thank you." replied Anakin, "But I must return to the Galactic Hub to get the Senate members into giving control of their planets over to me."
"What will you do if they do not" asked Revan.
"The Senator that refuses will suffer the same fate as Bail Organa, and the planet will be givin to me by force" told Anakin.
"Good... good." said Revan.

Anakin made his way to the Galactic Hub and was going to force the Senators to give him power over their planets because Palpatine couldn't make that happen when Anakin killed him. "Okay I am going to have total control over the galaxy as of this moment, you will sign this document to give control of your planets over to me!" ordered Anakin. Chatter went out and about over Anakin's order. "I'm going to give you two options, the first is that you hand your planet over to me, the second is that you join Senator Organa." Even more chatter scattered, then a senator came forward.
"I will sign this document of yours... Emperor." obeyed the senator of Manaan.
"Smart move on your part" said Anakin.
Senators kept coming forward to sign Anakin's document all but one, the new senator of Naboo.
"Why do you not sign my document?" asked Anakin
"Because our alleigence is to the Republic, not you...! Naboo demands its full independence!" demanded the senator of Naboo.
"Request... denied!" replied Anakin.
Anakin raised his hand, lowered it and then the senator and his advisors fell right down to join Senator Organa.
"You're all smart people" told Anakin.

Anakin raced back into the Sith Temple and ordered his Oola to ready the 501st legion of Troops and the 107th legion of Dark Jedi for they attack Naboo immedietly!

Aboard his flagship The Executor he gave his army a briefing on what they were going to accomplish. "My fellow troopers and warriors, we attack the planet of Naboo, for their incompetent senator refused to sign my document, for that they will pay! We will show no mercy, we will teach them the penalty for defying me!"

Anakin sent his troopers down first to let them weaken the Naboo Royal Guards and penatrate their defences. The troopers managed to end up having the Royal Palace flanked, to that event, Anakin and Oola went down in a tank with all the Dark Jedi to finish the Queen. The Queen had been sheltering some renegade Jedi who left the Order during the Clone War, and she had unleashed them against Anakin's army. Anakin took them all down one by one and went to hunt down the Queen who was making a break for it. The Troopers blocked her way out of the city and took her prisoner and brought her to Anakin.
"What do you reckon we should do with her, My Lord?" asked a Storm Trooper. Anakin looked at the river and and then ordered the Trooper to bind her hands and feet and let her drown.

Meanwhile on a distant planet,
"Miss, reconnisance shows that Naboo has been taken the hard way... your husband led that campaign" told an officer "What do we do?"
"I don't know what to do, Captain *sniff*" said Anakin's wife Padme.
Padme dropped her head and started crying because of Anakin's evil ways.


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Old 05-30-2006, 08:14 PM   #17
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Name: Padme "Naberrie" "Amidala" Skywalker
AKA: Milady
Age: 28
Occupation: Former Senator of Naboo, Former Queen of Naboo, Leader of the Alliance to Restore the Republic
Family: Mother (Jobal), Father (Ruwee), Siblings (Pooja, Ryoo, Sola), Husband (Anakin), Kids (Luke, Leia)
Master: N/A
Apprentice: N/A
Homeworld: Naboo
Weapons: Dosn't usually fight

I'll have Luke and Leia introduced when they get older.


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Ditto,lol.And so,Padme is alive.Interesting.
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great chapter, though the "give me your planet" thing was a bit rushed.


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I just thought that they wouldn't give it to Anakin willingly because he was sort of new, I mean most trusted Palpatine because he was Chancellor for 13 years. And they saw what Anakin did to Organa in the first chapter, see where I'm going?


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I need a bit of help... I need to know the name of the planet that has the Valley of the Jedi because a spirit of the Force goes there to regain human form.


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I need a bit of help... I need to know the name of the planet that has the Valley of the Jedi because a spirit of the Force goes there to regain human form.
Rusaan.
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Spelling mistake. It's Ruusan.
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Chapter 4: A New Hope

(This is not the going to be the chapter where the Tantive IV is attacked by a Star Destroyer)

It has been years since the events of Naboo and Padme's children: Luke and Leia Skywalker, have reached the age of five. Meanwhile, in the netherworld of the Force, "Milady, you are the most powerful out of all of us" told Obi-Wan "You mus go and train my friend's children into becoming Jedi!"
"But how?" asked a female Jedi "I'll only scare them, I can only walk the galaxy as a spirit seen by the Force sensitives."
"As a living woman, seen by all you can be, if you pay a visit to the Valley of the Jedi." told Yoda.
"Yes, Master Yoda."

The female Jedi spirit made her way to the planet of Ruusan to find the Valley of the Jedi, when she did she was hit by a beam of the Force and she gained visibility. "Now to find a way out of here!" she told herself. She noticed a small mining colony and found a ship there, she took it and made her way past a gas giant called Yavin. She past three moons and stopped on the fourth.

She landed and asked if she could have permission see Padme Skywalker, she was granted permission and was led to her quarters. "Miss Padme, my name is Bastila Shan, I am a Jedi of four-thousand years ago." Bastila said as she introduced herself.
"Four-thousand years?" asked Padme surprised
"I died and spent my time til now in the netherworld of the Force." explained Bastila.
"Why you?" asked Padme.
"Us Jedi agree that I would be the best choice to train your kids to be Jedi." told Bastila. "We know that you and former officials loyal to democracy are plotting a rebellion to stop all this bloodshed. Only your children can be the catalyst of stopping your husband and the rest of the Sith."
"If they must be trained... can you train them close to home Master Jedi, please?" asked Padme.
"Don't worry, I wasn't planning on taking them off Yavin IV at their first stages of their training." told Bastila.
"I'll bring them out." said Padme.

Minutes later, after Padme telling her children on who they were, Padme brought Luke and Leia out. "Luke, Leia, this is Bastila Shan, she is going to train you into being Jedi." Padme told her kids.
"Hello, Bastila." greeted Luke and Leia.
"Hi, children" Bastila greeted back, "I am going to train you into being Jedi, do you know what a Jedi is?" Bastila quizzed the two.
"Keepers of the peace?" asked Luke.
"Very good, Luke" congratulated Bastilla, "Clearly your mommy has told you a thing or two about the Jedi."
"She has told us about daddy" said Leia.
"Yes, it's sad isn't it" said Bastila feeling her sadness, "I lost one who I loved to the Darkside too..."
"Where do we begin." asked Luke eager to begin his training.
"We will start with the Jedi Code" answered Bastila, "Repeat after me, There is no Emotion."
"There is no Emotion."
"There is Peace."
"There is Peace."
"There is no Ignorance."
"There is no Ignorance."
"There is Knowledge."
"There is Knowledge."
"There is no Passion."
"There is no Passion."
"There is Serenity."
"There is Serenity."
"There is no Chaos."
"There is no Chaos."
"There is Harmony."
"There is Harmony."
"There is no Death."
"There is no Death."
"There is the Force."
"There is the Force."

"Good job kids." Bastila congratulated, "Always look to the code when you feel astray from your teachings."
"Yes, Master" obeyed Luke and Leia.
"Normally, that's what you would call me, but please call me Bastila." corrected Bastila.
"Yes, Mas-uh Bastila." said Luke.
"You got it Bastila!" said Leia.
"Great, when do you want to begin?" asked Bastila.
"Now-"
"Now-"
"Ha-ha-okay." laughed Bastila.
Bastila and her two new students started to make their way outside to begin their training, until Padme stopped them for a moment. "Bastila?"
"Yes?"
"Thank You, for doing this" thanked Padme.
"You're welcome." Bastila told, "I will take good care of them, for you."
Padme nodded. As Bastila, Luke and Leia left the room, the whispered "Thank you."


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Name: Bastila Shan
AKA: N/A
Age: Approximately 4000
Occupation: Jedi Master
Family: Mother (Helena: Died of sickness), Father (Name Unknown: Killed by a Krayt Dragon)
Master: Vandar Tokare, Darth Malak, Darth Revan (Until she saw the light and died as a noble Jedi)
Apprentice: (You could say) Revan, Luke and Leia
Homeworld: Talravin
Weapons: Yellow Double-Saber, The Force

Name: Luke Skywalker
AKA: N/A
Age: (At the moment) 5
Occupation: Jedi Student
Family: Mother (Padme), Father (Anakin: Now Darth Vader), Sister (Leia)
Master: Bastila Shan
Apprentice: N/A
Weapons: Just became a Jedi, so no

Name: Leia Skywalker
AKA: N/A
Age: (At the moment) 5
Occupation: Jedi Student
Family: Mother (Padme), Father (Anakin: Now Darth Vader), Sister (Leia)
Master: Bastila Shan
Apprentice: N/A
Weapons: None


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Old 06-01-2006, 05:47 AM   #29
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Good Chapter.
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Old 06-01-2006, 05:47 AM   #30
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Nice chapter.And good,Bastila's in.
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Old 06-01-2006, 08:52 PM   #32
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Chapter 5: The Droid Rebellion

One year has passed, Anakin has watched 3 students very closely at his acadamy and has been training them as powerful generals aligned with the Dark Side to help command his army with him and his apprentice. "You must feel the power" told Anakin training his soon to be generals, "You must wait till your enemy is most vulnerable, then strike!" After dozens of minutes training, everyone put away their sabers, "Good, good, I can only have one apprentice and unfortunately for you three, I already have one, but you shall be my generals." explained Anakin. Anakin turned to a Kel-Dor and said "But you will also be Sith Lords, you, what is your name?" Anakin asked the Kel-Dor
"Telvert Hadom" the Kel-Dor answered back.
"You shall be known as Darth... Oorlog." Anakin told.
"Thank you... my lord."
Anakin turned to a male human, "What is your name?"
"Zepnam Ledkor" he answered
"You shall be known as Darth... Macht." Anakin told.
Anakin turned to a young woman, "What is your name?"
"Janice Wisurr" she told.
"You shall be known as Darth Moordenaar"
"Thank you... My... Master." she replied.
Anakin looked at her suspiciously and then turned away.

Anakin went into his throne room to meditate, then he was met by Revan.
"I see you have trained some new generals Anakin." told Revan.
"I can't watch over every planet all the time" Anakin answered.
"Then I recommend that you bring the 501st to and a squad of Sith to Mustafar, I have senced a disturbance there." Revan told.
"I'll bring my generals too, they can use this experience." said Anakin.
"Good idea." replied Revan.
Anakin called Oola and his generals to the throne room, "We are going to Mustafar, to check a possible rebellion." Anakin explained
"From who?" asked Lord Oorlog
"I don't know, we are going there to check if there is so I can sleep better at night." Anakin answered, "We will leave now!"
"I'll prepare the army." said Oola.

Oola prepared the 501st and a squad of Dark Jedi for the take off to Mustafar. While on the flagship Janice glared at Oola for the whole trip. She was plotting something against her.

Upon the arrival, they weren't welcomed warmly when they landed on the planet, droids of the CIS were waiting for them guns blazing. Oola and Anakin's generals jumped off the ship destroying every droid they saw.
"I'll scout ahead" told Janice.
"You're not ready to go alone" told Oola, "I'm going with you."
"Okay." replied Janice sounding rather pleased.
Oola and Janice, scouted ahead and destroyed every droid in sight. Janice walked up behind Oola and threw a pair of hand bracers on her.
"What are you doing?!" Oola asked in horror.
Janice slapped her down and started kicking her.
"The role of the apprentice is not for damned pieces of dirt like you!"
Janice brought her out on the lava observatory balcony, killed a sniper there broke it apart and tied some wires around her neck and hung her from the balcony rail.

Anakin walked out out of a room close to the lava observatory and noticed his apprentice hanging dead. Anakin fought the droids still focusing on the task at hand. He planted a beacon so his flagship will know where to bombard. Janice noticed a Geonoshan trying to escape, she took some rubble and crushed him like the bug he is. Anakin ordered everyone to get back on to the Executor. When everyone was safely on, they watched the fireworks. Anakin called over Janice.
"Did you have anything to do with Oola's execution?" he asked
"You shouldn't ask... I was the only one with her." Janice told.
"Right... You are now my new apprentice, Janice."
"Thank you, my master"

P.S. Oorlog is Dutch for War
P.S. Macht is Dutch for Power
P.S. Moordenaar is Dutch for Assassin


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Old 06-02-2006, 06:00 AM   #33
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Nice one.I knew Janice was going to kill Oola,i just knew it.After all,the Sith are soo jealous!
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Good Chapter, I bet the new Droids are being led by Gizor Delso.
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Old 06-02-2006, 07:32 PM   #35
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I was planning to be led by a geonosian but I forgot the name and the reason why I made Janice was because I wanted to have someone similar to Tony Montana, the desire to be number 1 (if you've seen Scarface you'll know what I mean)


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Chapter 6: Firepower

This will be a short chapter (Just so you know what to expect)

"Master I think I know where the uprising will lead us too!" told Janice.
"Geonosis!" answered Anakin.
"You know?" asked Janice.
"Of course... the production plants are on Geonosis." explained Anakin.
"My master, shall I ready the fleet?" asked Janice.
"No Janice." told Anakin, "We shall something new!"
"Yes, My Lord" Janice said.

Anakin made his way up to the bridge. "Pilot!"
"Yes sir!"
"Set a course to Geonosis." ordered Anakin.
"Yes sir!" obeyed the pilot.
Anakin made a hand gesture and he started raising the pilot off the ground.
"How long have you been on the job?" asked Anakin.
"gha-three-years" answered the pilot gagging.
"Then you shouldn't be reminded to address me by My Lord or Lord Vader." told Anakin, "Are you clear on that?"
The pilot's feet started to twitch, "Perfectly clear *choke* My Lord!" answered the pilot, "Please, *gag* let me *choke* go!"
Anakin threw him up in the air, "fine."

Anakin walked to the transmission room and made a transmission to his new "Spacestation". "General Veers?"
"Yes Lord Vader?"
"Set a course to Geonosis!" ordered Anakin.
"Yes My Lord." said Veers.

The Executor and the new "Station" made their way to Geonosis. "Fire at will Veers." told Anakin. Everyone, sit back, watch the fireworks. Everyone stared at Geonosis and within seconds, it was gone and a shockwave flew right past the Executor and the the "Station" that did Anakin's dirty work.
"What will shall it be called My Lord" asked Janice.
"... Death... Star!" answered Anakin.

Meanwhile on Yavin IV, "Captain Antilles, what activity on Geonosis?"
"Milady... it's gone!"
"WHAT?!" Padme shouted.
"I don't know what the hell just happened... these are the proper co-ordinates... right?" asked Captain Antilles.
"Come home, Captain."
"What has happened?" asked Bastila.
"I think my husband knows how to break more than just lives now... *sniff*" answered Padmem, crying.
Bastila patted Padme on the shoulder and took her leave.


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Has Geonosis been destroyed? Good Chapter as always.
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Yeah,really nice chapter.
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