Okay,cool I'll add it to the fanfiction site.
Well here it goes!
Prologe prt 1
Jackie Limones flopped onto the old, queen-size bed and looked at where Salvador used yo sleep. She thought of him and what felt like the millionth time she held back tears.Then she remembered what Sal had said before he had left "Don't be sad for me me if I don't come back, remember, you'll see me once a year if I go, and that's definetly an if. And don't cry Jacqueline. It's a sign of weekness you know." She smiled as she remembered how he had always called her by her full name and made it sound almost like Shacqueline.Then he had left for war. This sad goodbye seemed like it had happened yesterday, but it had infact happened 8 1/2 months ago. Earlier that day she'd gotten a call from the army sarge. He told her that Salvador had died that day. Salvador used to have dark brown hair and green intece eyes.
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