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Old 01-10-2007, 04:48 PM   #1
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[FIN] Asking for Forgiveness

A poem written after the Leviathan by Revan asking Carth to forgive.

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Asking for Forgiveness

I know you feel the pain inside
And in your heart your thoughts divide
You seek to know a darkened truth
Where lies an existent root

Of hurtful lies and painful words
That once flew away with graceful birds
I met you and you met me
It seemed that it was meant to be

We shared the burden with a hope
In order our enemies be smote
We fought and bled side by side
Growing strong as a rising tide

Still you harbored in your heart
Distrust that threatened not to part
To conquer we fought again
And start anew we began

Time went by and you showed me
A concern and fierce sense of loyalty
Just before our pain and torment
You told me how much to you I meant

Your words were simple yet distinct
And inside my heart turned pink
I carried that feeling through the cell
How long only Time could tell

Up until that fateful meet
We walked a determined beat
Then you found out who I am
And your face turned mad

I wish that I could stop the clock
But tis a memory you cannot block
Now I wait in painful silence alone
And hope you let your true feelings show

I ask that you give me a chance
To tread this difficult dance
I wish that it wasn’t true
But now it is up to you

I wait here in my chosen space
Waiting to again take my place
For I long to say from my heart the truth
That I have come to care deeply for you

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