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Old 02-24-2005, 12:23 PM   #1
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The darkness within

Hmm... Didn't I write a story named this too...

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Galactic republic(Old republic), the sith have been thought to be extinct hundreds of years ago, the only menace in the Republic being the crime organizations and pirates popping up every now and then. The jedi council know anything that is happening in the jedi lines, and with that, helps the republic senate on various missions. It seems that the Republic is peaceful, but...
A young apprentice, under the apprenticeship of Master Eh'Lieno is on his first solo-mission. He finds out about the dark side on the planet of Iridonia, trying to bring a civil war to an end. He seemed not to change on that trip, but the tiought of something more powerful out there corrupted him piece by piece, and his master could feel his apprentice's change...
This apprentice will be later... Darth Revege

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Name: Darth Revege
Age: 21
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Alignment: Evil
Occupation: Sith

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A man in dark robes laughed in the dimly lit room of a space-shuttle. "Captain Peeka, you know your pirates can still do their raids... but with me as their leader, you will get more riches you would ever believe to get" he said, with a deep, vicious and mystical voice. The rodian pirate shivered, looking into the man's yellow eyes. Only those eyes showed under the hood. "Darth Revege, I cannot do that. My head would be more wanted than the Hutt lead-" the rodian never got to finish that sentence as he lifted up to the air, gasping for air and holding his neck. "You will either give me full power of your pirates, or you will find yourself dead before your disgusting rodian eyes get to blink, if they even blink" the sith siad, the rodian nodding his head and then dropping to the floor, gasping for air. "I'll give my power to you. But please, I ask you for only one thing. For starters, stay behind the scenes. I must do some things before you get the power"
"Of course" the sith nodded and rose up from the seat. He left to his fighter, escorted by the Pirate captain and a Gamorrean guard. As he closed the fighter's hatch and left towards Coruscant in hyperspace, he removed his black robes and changed into a more less attracting suit. Something the common traders would use

OOC: Longer than usually. Bare with me. When I get an idea, I'll write it, even if it was an RP


"Our posturings, our imagined self-importance,
the delusion that we have some privileged position in the universe,
are challenged by this point of pale light.
Our planet is a lonely speck in the great enveloping cosmic dark.
In our obscurity in all this vastness there is no hint that help will come from elsewhere to save us from ourselves.
"

- Carl Sagan
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Old 02-24-2005, 02:19 PM   #2
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Name:Chalor Tykoni
Age: 27
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Pirate
Bio: Grew up into a pirate family, took over the family business.

Chalor was in his waiting spot as usual waiting for a ship to come so he could rob it.....
Chalor was finally rewarded when a frieghter came in, at this Chalor flew in and fired a few ion shots and then attached himself to the frieghter. Chalor boarded the ship with his two lackeys.
"this is a raid, hands up and you won't get hurt." the man and woman did as they were told his Chalor's lackeys searched the ship and stole all that was valuable, they soon returned with a box of credits and some precious gems.
"thank you for your time, have a nice day." Chalor and his lackeys left the ship and flew off.


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Old 02-25-2005, 07:07 AM   #3
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Name: Kin Solar
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Occupation: Jedi Knight (Recently lost a Padawan during battle, so has stepped down from Master to Knight)
Bio: Solar was trained since age five, working his way up to the rank of Master. His padawan, Namin, was killed while battling space pirates. Feeling that he is responsile for his Padawan's death, Kin no longer considers himself a Jedi Master and has assumed the rank of a Jedi Knight instead.

Kin strode through the Temple halls towards the Council chambers. He had been summoned, presumably for a mission. Kin sighed. These days, the missions were always the same. Kill this pirate, shut down this illegal market. No real battle could be found. Solar knew he shouldn't feel this way, but there were times when even a Jedi Master could feel bored.
Jedi Knight, Kin reminded himself. Not Jedi Master.
Kin reached the council chambers. The door slid open for him, and he positioned himself in the center of the circular chamber. The Council members sat in seats all around him. All regarded him with emotionless expressions.
Finally the young Jedi Master, Yoda, spoke. "Called you, we have, because we feel you are ready for a mission of this difficulty."
Kin nodded silently, but inside he thought, Oh, let me guess. This time I have to fight two pirates. There's no such thing as a difficult mission.
"We wish you to track down and capture Darth Revege."
Kin's eyes widened and his throat went dry. Suddenly the room felt very, very cold.

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Old 02-25-2005, 08:02 AM   #4
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Revege looked around after landing his fighter into a small hangar inside a building. The jedi's would send someone to him sooner or later, but before that, he needed to confront one of his old friends... His master...
The man slipped throught security, those of the guards that found out about his presence were slaughtered as the sith advanced up to the top floor. He grinned, walking to the door of the room where his old master was staying. He knocked on the door, and as soon as it was opened by a droid, the metallic head dropped down, the buzzing of a lightsaber only to be heard in the hallway. Darth Revege walked inside to confront a couple of droids and the jedi master. He handled the droids quickly, just before Master Eh'Lieno came to see who was the visitor. The jedi master's eyes widened as he saw his old apprentice, scarred of his knew experiences. A green lightsaber blade activated as the master preapred for a fight, but the sith was faster and lunged towards him...

In the mean time, the council adviced Kin to speak with Master Eh'Lieno about Revege.
When he would arrive to the appartment, he would find a body with the head cut off. The head was lying near the windows and there were burn marks on the wall, made with a lightsaber. It read: Welcome to a new kind of pain, jedi

Revege walked to his fighter and launched off towards a larger, privately owned hangar near the floor of the planet. The sith was again hodded by his black robes as he stepped inside a larger ship. One of the many that the pirate organization of the rodian, Peeka, that was now under the sith's power. The rodian himself greeted the sith in the ship. "Welcome, my lord. I have collected my men and fleet in Nar Shadda. I will now give the full power to you, my lord" he said and the dith chuckeled evily walking towards the command bridge. "Get your fleets for immediate movement when we get there. Is this your largest ship?"
"No, my lord"
"I want the largest as my flag ship. I assume you will give all the credits for my plans, Captain"
"Yes, my lord"
"Good. Send a message to the Hutt's. Tell them we will be needing their advice on where to get loyal ship-builders"
"Yes, my lord"
"Oh, and Captain Peeka, do not underrestimate my powers. You will not fail, or you will find youself dead"
The rodian gulped. He hoped that his grandson's wouldn't have such a terrible leader. He couldn't bare the tought of it.

(OOC: Whee... Another loong post


"Our posturings, our imagined self-importance,
the delusion that we have some privileged position in the universe,
are challenged by this point of pale light.
Our planet is a lonely speck in the great enveloping cosmic dark.
In our obscurity in all this vastness there is no hint that help will come from elsewhere to save us from ourselves.
"

- Carl Sagan
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Old 02-25-2005, 10:41 AM   #5
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Alignment: Evil
Occupationark Jedi Lord/Master



A 3 humans were scouting. Tusken raiders attacked there sand crawler and they just escaped. All a sudden one of them stopped, he started to making chocking sounds and it felt like a big ,cold hand was around his throat straggeling. The others didn't know what to do, they just stood there, pretrafied. The man being chocked dropped to the floor dead .
"what happened to Billy!?"said one of the humans to the other.
"i don't know... AHHHHHHH!"replied the other before a lighting shock came out of nowher and hit him. He went flying into the cliff next to him causing huge rocks to fall and killed the last humans.

Darth Titan:Too easy.
Titan walked to the bodys and he began to started to drink the dead bodys blood

(i hope this is allright)
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Old 02-25-2005, 11:14 AM   #6
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Chalor flew to his debtors. Chalor came out of hyperspace to see the beautiful planet of Naboo. Chalor got landing clearence and than did so.

down on the planet Chalor walked with confidence with his two lackeys behind him as if they were shadows. they walked to Baryoni's Palace. As Chalor walked in a hush fell apon the room. at the end of the hallway-like room was a throne with a huge Twi'lek male on it, not huge as in fat but huge as in tall and musculaire, like this guy was giant! to the left was a stage currently filled with band members and twi'leck dancers, the the right there were some beautiful fountinas and all around there were a vast variety of aliens and humans.
"Chalor, how dare you show your face here again, i should kill you on site" said Baryoni in his booming voice, and as he said that he felt two unwanted people senaking up from the sides. Chalor signaled to his lackeys to take them out, and in seconds his lackeys had lunged at the intruders and broke thier necks.
"haha i see you are still resourceful, now beofre i do kill you" at this the rest of the guards got their weapons ready "i have one question for you, do you have my money or not?"
"i got it right here" at this Chalor threw the bag of credits and jewlery he had been stealing and then took out his two pistols and took out 4 guards while his lackeys took out the other 8, then they all pointed thier guns at Baryoni.
"you may be strong but you still need more guards, now try and kill me again and you will be begging me to kill you after i'm done hurting you!"
"hah we shall se, now get out." at this Chalor and his lackeys turned and left to the nearest cantina.

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Old 02-26-2005, 01:57 AM   #7
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"My lord, two fighters and a republic cruiser are heading our way" Captain Peeka shouted from his captain's seat. The sith moved quietly to the windows of the command bridge to look at the closening ships.
"They are going to board us, my lord. What are we going to do?"
"We don't have anything to hide, or do we?"
"Actually, we have some illegal weapionry onboard, my lord"
"I did not approve that, captain. Let this be your first and last warning" the sith grunted and looked at the fighter coming closer to the windows.
"Open fire on all turrets and prepare to jump to hyperspace"
"Yes, my lord! Every man to battle stations!"
A chaos-like mood struck the crew as people ran to battle stations. It took a second for the turrets to start blazing.
"Captain, do you have a tractor beam on this thing?"
"A small one, my lord"
"Good. Pull the other fighter into the second hangar. Get your soldiers ready"
The other Republic fighter started to closen on the hangar. It tried to pull away from the beam, but was unsuccessfull. As it landed into the hangar, the large doors closed in the hangar's entrance and the doors that lead into the hangar opened. Tens of soldiers, armed with identical blaster rifles ran into the hangar and took the pilot. They escorted the pilot into the detention and cell level.
"Captain, do youi know any place where we can train these soldiers some disciplin and skills?" the sith asked after watching the scene from a screen.
"Uh... there are many places where we can. Tatooine for example. We have large areas under our control there... Of course we work from behind the scenes"
"Good. After Nar Shadda, let's go to Tatooine then"
And so the ship jumped into hyperspace, leaving Coruscant and the Republic ship and fighter behind


"Our posturings, our imagined self-importance,
the delusion that we have some privileged position in the universe,
are challenged by this point of pale light.
Our planet is a lonely speck in the great enveloping cosmic dark.
In our obscurity in all this vastness there is no hint that help will come from elsewhere to save us from ourselves.
"

- Carl Sagan
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Old 02-26-2005, 02:15 AM   #8
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A sandcrawler was on route to where Darth Titain was having hi, feast. "grrrrr." and got up and started to to concentrate on it. His hand and flat infront of his eyes. A fireball formed in his palm. "MUHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA" he laugh could be heared throughout the canyon.
"what is that!"ask one of the sandcrawlers crew. Titian through the fireball at the sandcrawler it went booom. Only one man sirvied the explosion and titain used force drain untill he was dead.

"the weak fools" he jumped out of the canyon and began to walk on the edge of the cliff
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Old 02-26-2005, 04:19 AM   #9
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((steven, not anymore acceptable. That's already godmoding. Since when dark jedi or sith have been using fireballs anyways?))


"Our posturings, our imagined self-importance,
the delusion that we have some privileged position in the universe,
are challenged by this point of pale light.
Our planet is a lonely speck in the great enveloping cosmic dark.
In our obscurity in all this vastness there is no hint that help will come from elsewhere to save us from ourselves.
"

- Carl Sagan
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Old 02-26-2005, 06:52 AM   #10
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Chalor dismised his lackeys so he could be alone. and there he was, alone in a filled cantina.
"why so glum stranger"
"well these days aren't as fun as when i was a kid."
"heh, i can drink to that" and both gentlement drunk, whne Chalor put his glass down he saw a beautiful woman, but she wasn't in the cantina, she was walking outside of it, and Chalor being the charming fellow he was, straightened his jacket and walked outside to greet her.
"why hello m'lady"
"uh huh, i'm not that kind of girl."
"no its not that at all i just noticed that you were being stalked." indeed he had noticed.
"oh yeah?" she then stroked his chin "well why don't you be a gentleman and get rid of him, for good" she smiled and so did Chalor, he walked towards the stalker, he started to run but Chalor slowly drew his gun and then shot him dead in theback of his head. so Chalor alked back.
"all taken care of m'lady"
"yeah well it'll take more than that to impress me" with that she turned and left.


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Old 02-26-2005, 07:21 AM   #11
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Originally posted by Darth Tepe
when dark jedi or sith have been using fireballs anyways?))
(a friend of mine told me about a forcepower called force fireball. I didn't know if it was true or not so i went with true.
I didn't mean to god mod. sorry )
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Old 02-26-2005, 09:16 AM   #12
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The rodian captain of the pirates turned in his seat. "Lord Revege, we just got a report that our whole fleet has been scatter all around Nar Shadda. Is there any special place to meet the other captains, my lord?"
"Get the largest ship into orbit. I will board it and meet the other capatains there. Including you, Peeka" the sithe replied, looking out at the bright, stretched stars as the ship travelled in hyperspace. "Captain, we are ready to jump out of hyperspace, sir" a young Twi'lek officer said and recieved a nod from the rodian captain. "Jump out of hyperspace, officer" he said as he sent the message to the other captains.

A while later, inside the conference room of the Space cheetah, the other captains and the sith were introduced.
Darth Revege grinned as he saw the ten captains infront of him. Ten captains meant at least ten ships and tens of fighters and maybe even thousands of troops under his every command...
Three captains were rodian, three were human, two were Twi'lek and the rest two were Iridonian.
After the introduction and a small chat of the upcoming projects, the captains left to their ships, a Iridonian captain leaving with Revege as the captain of his flag ship. The ships left off towards Tatooine one by one, so they wouldn't be suspected of anything.
The first thing they were going to do is make proper uniforms to different ranks, and train all the troops in their right specialties, and not scramble all of them chatoically like before...

((Come on people! Post a bit more. I don't want to skip in time too much while you stay behind... Especially you joe))


"Our posturings, our imagined self-importance,
the delusion that we have some privileged position in the universe,
are challenged by this point of pale light.
Our planet is a lonely speck in the great enveloping cosmic dark.
In our obscurity in all this vastness there is no hint that help will come from elsewhere to save us from ourselves.
"

- Carl Sagan
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Old 02-26-2005, 02:19 PM   #13
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Chalor went to a contact within Naboo. Once there he threw his standerd issue pistol on the counter with his blaster rifle as well.
"turn them into weapons of mass destruction"
"hah i knew you would come to your senses sooner or later" he said as Chalor started to leave.

Back in his Hotel room Chalor recieved a Holocall.
"your "items" are ready"
"i'll pick them up in the morning."


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