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Old 05-17-2005, 08:23 PM   #41
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Rik was setting up his tent when he heard something from the cliff, so did everyone else, they all whipped around with tomohawks in hand. One of his tribe memebers came over the edge with an unconscious human with him.
"Hertali! why were you not with us! and why did you bring that filth here?"
"sorry sir, he was the assassin and i thought we'd be better off if he was dead, or we had him constantly in our sights."
"gah, you know nothing, tie him up, tightly." with that Rik finished setting up his tent.


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Old 05-18-2005, 07:21 AM   #42
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Zoric awoke as he was being tied to a pole. His weapons had been taken. The pain in his back was bad and it was stinging badly because the gash was against a wooden pole. He looked around and saw trolls everywhere. He saw the cheif of the trolls finishing up his tent. Zoric sent out a sharp whistle only known to assasians and blacked out once again.


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Old 05-18-2005, 05:02 PM   #43
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"Their departure is their business," Meliana answered. "As to our business, it is the same as it has always been. We protect our territory and keep our family well fed."


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Old 05-18-2005, 05:17 PM   #44
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"As the way of the elves has always been, untill I was exiled from the Elven territory by the elven high council. That happends to alot of Elves, but unlike them I didn't stay in this forest and get my own territory, I left completely and examined the world around us. The reason for my return is quite imprtant, but I only have one problem, I can't do what I must. You see, I overheard some Orcs talk about their General's plans to take over the Elven Capital, and burn it. But since I've been exiled, I need someone to tell them for me."


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"I do not think we feel incredibly honored," Mol said before Meliana could answer. "After all, you are an exile."

"Ignore him," Meliana snapped, glaring at her brother. She turned back to Segolas. "As you know, our father is on the Council. We have the ears and the vote of at least one."

"Quiet, Meliana!" Mol ordered, returning the glare. He turned to Segolas. "Tell us, Exile. Where would we have heard the information available only out of the forest? It cannot have come from you, an exile."

"He makes a good point," Meliana said thoughtfully. "As an exile, your word would not be accepted, even if it were to come through us."


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Old 05-19-2005, 11:36 AM   #46
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"True, but there has to be a way. If not the capitol will come cumbleing. Either you guys do it, or I do it myself and get killed." Segolas let out a long sigh "Well I can tell Mol won't help me, but what about you?" Segolas said to Meliana's youngest brother "I knew you when you were just a baby."


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Old 05-19-2005, 04:41 PM   #47
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"This is true," Rovin, the youngest brother answered. "And it is also true that I never understood the reason for your exile."

"Be quiet, Rovin," Mol snapped. Rovin had a legendary temper among the Elves, even for one so young and his temper came to the surface now.

"You be quiet, Mol," he thundered. His eyes rested on Segolas as he spoke. "Segolas was always a close friend of mine. I will never forget that."

"My eldest brother will never have the voice of my youngest," Meliana said with a smile. She turned to Mol. "None of us were told the reason for Segolas being exiled. It was one piece of information father would not tell us."

"But an exile!" Mol protested. Meliana laughed harshly.

"And for what!" she retorted. "You don't know, Mol. You don't know any more than Rovin and I. It may have been something rather silly."

"The High Council does not take things lightly," Mol answered icily. "Those who are exiled usually deserve it."

"If Mol will not help us, Meliana and I will come up with a story of where we heard this news," Rovin said. Mol stared at him.

"Do not forget that I am the eldest," he growled. Rovin's eyes found those of his brother and the two began a staring contest. As usual, Rovin won.

"You are the eldest only in age," Rovin finally said. "But you have not matured in mind."

"Is your faith in the council so blind that you can't hear the words of one you once played with?" Meliana asked quietly. Mol refused to answer.

"You have been among the high branches too long, brother," Rovin said. "Listen to those who are wiser than you."

"Segolas," Mol said, finally turning again to the exiled Elf. "Had I been alone, I might have challenged you to the duel that the High Council required upon the finding of an exile." He sighed. "I cannot do this. If being seen with you exiles me, I will obey, but my sister and brother cannot be involved."

"What?" Meliana exclaimed.

"I am the spokesperson of an exile," Mol answered. "My demands will not be denied. Meliana, Rovin, return to our home. Tell father that his eldest son is an exile because he cannot kill another exile. Tell him also the information Segolas has brought."

"If you are to be exiled, I stay with you," Rovin said. Mol shook his head.

"You have brought maturity to me, Rovin," he said. "Do not give yours away by blindly following the path laid before me."

"Come, Rovin," Meliana said suddenly, tugging at her younger brother's arm. "Let us leave the exiles."

They turned away and made for home and Mol turned to Segolas.

"Tell me, friend," he said. "What have been your adventures since you left?"


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Old 05-19-2005, 07:36 PM   #48
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"Well after leaveing the forst I travelled to a near by city, where I happened to find Nelorg the wise. You remember Nelorg right? He was the village Mystic untill they exiled him, and I shared with him my story. He refused to tell me his story, but told me what he'd been up too. After some good byes I left and travelled to the Sanctuary, a place for all exiled beings. I did not stay there for long, only to gather infromation on some scrolls that I've been looking for. They happened to be in the most disgusting place you'll ever see, Tantoga. I purchased the scrolls, and I had to get a job at the tavern for being framed of a crime. I spent years there working, I didn't think I'd ever get away. One night, I over heard the Orc's plans, but I couldn't leave. I went on, only the next morning to find everyone in taht area of the city dead, then I headed here and here I am now."


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Old 05-19-2005, 11:57 PM   #49
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Rik heard the whistle, he knew what it was, as did some of the other elder members. One of them approached Rik.
"let us converse in your tent."
"as you wish" they went inside and Rik tunred to his closest friend, Kilrot.
"Rik, that elf, she had something about her very familiar."
"i sensed it also Kil, i do not know what it was but elves do not travel alone..."
"could she be related..?"
"it is a possibility..."
"have you given up your quest for vengeance?"
"no, but i will not blindly tromp through the forest looking for the elf who slaughtered my family."
"i see, well when you do find him, i will be there."
"thank you Kilrot, it means alot to me." with that the exited the tent and began preparations for the night.


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Old 05-20-2005, 02:07 PM   #50
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"Let us walk," Mol said suddenly. When they had been walking for a little while, Mol spoke again. "The High Council has been creating more exiles every day. Not a day goes by when they are not satisfied with somebody. My father is the only one who objects and I fear that he will be exiled next."

"An Elven civil war is coming," Mol continued sadly. "If it happens soon, the Orcs will have no difficulty in destroying our capital."


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"Where is Mol?" Meliana's father demanded. Rovin stepped forward to face his father.

"The exile Segolas Nar has returned to the forest," he answered. "Segolas was a friend of my brother before he was exiled and Mol still feels a bit of loyalty. He could not kill him and has therefore joined him."

"This is grevious news indeed," Vertwin, the father answered. "Meliana, speak."

"Segolas returned because he had information vital to the survival of Elves," Meliana said, approaching her father. "The Orcs are planning an attack."

"Come with me," Vertwin said suddenly. They left the house and walked deep into the forest. Vertwin suddenly stopped and faced his children.

"An Elven civil war will come before that happens," Vertwin said quietly. "The exiles keep their distance and are not the trouble. The trouble is here, among the remaining Elves. The Council continually disagrees with itself, divided halfway and looking to the Council Chief to make the decision. No matter what he does, some Elves are unhappy."

"What must we do?" Rovin growled, clenching a fist. Vertwin placed a hand on his son's shoulder.

"You must join your brother," he said. "Find the exiles and persuade them to return to the forest to defend us while we are in civil war and ignoring all else."

"Will we never see you again?" Meliana whispered. Vertwin smiled.

"I think I will be exiled soon," he said. "When it happens, I will join you."

Rovin bowed to his father and Meliana repeated the gesture. Then, Rovin caught Meliana's arm and turned them both to run toward the place they had last seen Mol and Segolas.


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Old 05-21-2005, 10:18 AM   #51
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"I've feared as much. The elven high council always knew the Orcs would attack, but this attack is very organized, and they have perfect timeing. I think the orcs knew about the comeing war, they must have some Elven contact. I belive I know just who it is..."


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"Mol!" Meliana called as she and Rovin came closer to Mol and Segolas. Mol turned sharply on one heel to frown at his younger siblings.

"I thought I told you to stay away," he growled. Rovin nodded.

"You did," he said. "But the words of one above you brought us back."

"Father told us to return," Meliana agreed. "He thought that, if this information about the Orcs is true, the Orcs would end up attacking during the oncoming civil war. If that happens, we have to collect all the exiles and protect our warring country. Rovin and I are here because the exiles could use our skills."

"Is this what father said?" Mol demanded. When Rovin nodded, he sighed. "And what of him?"

"He said he is not long for being exiled as well," Meliana answered. "Mother will not be exiled because they need her sewing skills still. But father will join us within a few weeks. He has been the one keeping them from going to war and they will exile him to get him out of the way."

"Meliana, you and Rovin must stay in the forest and keep your eyes open for trouble," Mol said. "If you see any, make sure you pester the problem until it runs in terror. Segolas and I will go to gather the exiles."

Meliana and Rovin nodded and Mol turned to Segolas. "We had best get going."


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Old 05-21-2005, 01:13 PM   #53
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Segolas shook Rovin and Melinana's hands "Good-bye, you can expect us to be back in two to three Elven Months." Segolas turned to Mol

"We'd best get some Horses for our Journey. Unfortuneatly, mine was killed by a group of Troll bandits."


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"Exiles are thought to be thieves," Mol answered with a grin. "My old horse now belongs to my father since I am an exile."

"Rovin and I will get them for you," Meliana offered. Mol hesitated, but then nodded. Meliana and Rovin slipped back into the forest toward the Elven city.


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"So, where should we stop first? I know where to find Nelog and some other exiles, so I think we should stop at the near by city. The only thing is, we'll have to take a secret route in, like all the other exiles do. We can only go in one at a time, or risk being spotted."


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