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Old 12-26-2005, 01:03 PM   #121
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(Well go ahead and do it)

Dyce reached the Keep's port in a hurry. He and the other Jedi opened the cockpit to show that they were friend.
"Alright, Jedi are FIRST priority" Dyce privately commed his engineers. Soon, Dyce had 24 onboard Jedi of miscelaneous rankings. Dyce flew up and out of the dock toward the GS port as hurried as he could possibly be. As soon as he was back in the air, he decided that this time he would rescue his friends. Tan Relod, Borse H'jall, Kep Albro, Naial Penlei Bac Reuben...where was Bac anyway? No time left...but he had to save his friends...


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Old 12-26-2005, 06:43 PM   #122
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The imperial fleet was powerful, but Bac Rueben knew all their space battle plans. He also knew their weaknesses. Bac flew into the battle with his men and zoomed past them. Jedi starfighters outran the imperial ships easily. They soon landed in the main capital ship and fought all the pilots there. If they could get through, he would destroy the ship's internal systems, causing it to lose it to be nearly destroyed and head towards the planet and crash. This would send the fleet into disarray, and Bac's men could get through.


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Old 12-27-2005, 10:25 AM   #123
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Zion's smile faded slightly. No hassel? They had just given up? Oh well.
"Goodbye"
The bomb ticked. And it exploded. The warp bomb created the energy Zion needed and Zion disapeared. He re-apeared just outside the cave. His energy was low. He felt the reactor blow and felt the earth beneath his feet shake. The planet would implode soon and then a black hole would appear destroying anything in it's path. Zion knew he would not survive but then again....you couldn't kill something that is already dead....


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Old 12-27-2005, 03:22 PM   #124
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when zaran heard the explosion he though he was dead... but it seems he was not yet destined to die. he passed out agian..
when he awoke he was in a pich black room... he couldnt move.... he used the force to sense his surroundings. he was underneath a pile of rock..... he then used half of his full force to through the rocks in every directions.
he was back at the keep. and there was zion. he didnt know how or why but he had been sent back in time. he igited his light saber.


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

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Old 12-27-2005, 07:55 PM   #125
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Dyce zoomed in and out of RIG fighter formations and hurried onward to the Keep. He had passed over the hills and it was now in sight, but then he felt a sick, churning feeling. A small luminous sphere of energy was forming at the base of the keep. There was nothing he could do. The Jedi Keep errupted in several explosions. The Keep was demolished. Fissures were branching from it, the ground began shaking hard with the force of atomic energy. But Dyce was unaware of his surroundings. He gazed fixedly at the collapsing, still exploding Keep. His friends were gone. Then the image of the dark Jedi appeared in his mind. Dyce knew only three about Zion: he was a Dark Jedi with a red saber, he was near the cave that he had entered, and that he would soon be dead at the hands of Dyce Fondoa.
Dyce turned around his Grand Starfighter to face the cave's entrance and there he was, somehow outside of the rockslide. Dyce fired some well-aimed shots at Zion, not at his head, but in symbolism of vengence; directly at his heart. Dyce curved up, flew a short distance and turned back around. Zion was unscathed somehow through that barrage, and Dyce knew that the only way to kill him was to fight him one-on-one down on the Niaj Qad soil.
"Dyce?" his comm interrupted his battle plan. "Dyce get out of there!" It was Eptima. "I've received a final transmission from War Admin Maas Corva. The Emperor is replaced by an evil man named Rures Sith...we must terminate him if the galaxy is to live peacefully ever again. Don't waste your life on grief Dyce." Dyce cared nothing of the galaxy any more. His only moral, his sole mission in life was to avenge his friends.
Dyce belly-landed on the hard-as-rock surface of Niaj Qad, near his only hopes of destroying Zion, a lightsaber. Dyce opened the cockpit and slid off the huge starfighter. He Immediately picked up the black lightsaber blade of a Master whos corpse was nearby and pocketed it. Dyce charged his spread blaster and fired. Zion twirled his dual-bladed lightsaber and blocked all of the shots.
Dyce didn't know how to use a lightsaber but he was going to learn fast. He ignited it and walked calmly toward Zion.


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Old 12-28-2005, 07:02 AM   #126
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Zion smiled at this new comer
"I take it you're not a fan of my work?"
Zion laughed
"A man with no training in the ways of a sword against a sith? Hmmmm this will be interesting"
Zion's smile flickered. He was taunting the man. The man anger would explode and then Zion would attack.
"Your friends all died in what they believed in...A pile of Jedi crap. The Jedi have destroyed many civilisations and now I have destroyed theirs. And now you wish...or hope to kill me"
Zion's smile faded slightly. He twirled his blade infront of him. He looked over at the dead Jedi body and then back at Dyce and grinned
"heads up" he murmered
Zion flung the body at Dyce using the force. The body hit Dyce but Dyce did not seem to care. Zion's grin faded
"Lets begin" He said in harsh voice. He spun his blade and attacked....


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Old 12-28-2005, 05:39 PM   #127
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Dyce parried with Zion's dual-blade, cautious of the other end. An image of his friends appeared in his mind, and flashbacks of training with them for all those years formed. Dyce's anger swelled and he went into a raging blitz, throwing blows with his dark blade. He cared not if he died, only if Zion did.
Out of the corner of his eye he saw another grand starfighter land. It was Ronin, on his search of Zaran and Scur.
Dyce caught Zion off guard and threw a saber blow. Zion blocked it. It was then that Dyce realized that Zion was too powerful to destroy. He was blinded by vengeance, and now he would have to fight his way out or die trying. Dyce fought as hard as a force-less Jedi could. But it wasn't enough. Zion was far beyond Dyce's power. He was left with only one option. Ronin boarded his ship with two Jedi Masters and took off. That was Dyce's chance. He reached into his armored garb for a grenade just as Zion let forth a jab with his saber...right through Dyce's chest.
In his last breath, Dyce attempted to throw his grenade at his starfighter but failed. Dyce died right as a huge fissure of light erupted behind him and fell toward the core of the devastation.


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Old 12-29-2005, 02:39 AM   #128
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(hey jediofdoom im in the past about to try to kill you so when u ready let me know)


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

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Old 12-29-2005, 07:23 AM   #129
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(ok I'll do it after this post. Which part of time are you in? Os Zion evil or is he still a Jedi?)

Zion watched Dyce fall to the ground. His job was almost over.
But he found himself asking
"was it the right thing to do?"
Zion turned and stared into the sky. The ships out there would all disapear. All of the men would die. The ground beneath Zion was crumbling. He turned in time to see a massive hole appear. He fell through it but managed to grab onto a small ledge. His saber dropped in the lava below. The lava was rising. soon this planet would implode. Zion tried to hoist himself up but he couldnt. He didn't have the strength. He had lost the will to survive. The lava was inches away from his legs. Suddenly sense snapped back to him. He hoisted himself up and began to climb. He was quite a way down and the hole at the top was widening all the time. Zion reached the top but a Jedi stood there.
"Phinius?"
Phinus looked down upon him
"If your in there...I'm sorry master"
He ignited his blade and sliced off Zion's hands. Zion screamed Phinius then force pushed Zion back into the hole. He plunged into the Lava below and did not re-surfice.....


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Old 12-29-2005, 11:40 AM   #130
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(in the past? that makes no sense. also I'm about to start a new RPG that takes place 3 weeks after this called The Origin of the Sith...and sinse u guys went back in time jediofdoom try to come out alive so that it will make the plot more interresting.)


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Old 12-29-2005, 03:12 PM   #131
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Sounds cool. Trust me Zion will survive he will just be in a cool suit like darth vader but less darth vader like if you get me


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Old 12-30-2005, 01:37 PM   #132
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After destroying the internal systems, the ship was starting to fall apart. Bac and his men hurried to the hanger and entered their ships. Once they were outside of the ship, they headed towards Tatooine to escape.


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Old 12-30-2005, 09:42 PM   #133
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((This is right when you planted the bomb jediofdoom. I'm doing this because i haven't been on in a while))

Scur quickly thought for a moment after Zaran(If Zaran is still with Scur) showed up and asked what to do. As Scur started to open his mouth an explosion was heard in the other room and the hallways lit up in flames. Scur quickly thought about the sake of the others on the planet even though they were enemies to let them live. "Zaran!"
"What Master Scur!?"
"Use Force Barrier on the explosion except try and keep everything from escaping instead of getting in."
"I shall try that Master."
"I'll help you." as both Jedi started concentrating on keeping the explosion inside the area and keep it from breathing(like fire) and starve it, making it die out and keep from growing larger.

((Present Time Posting))

The Bluish glow from the Force Barrier started fading out as the explosion started to grow larger. "Concentrate!" yelled Scur as he started sweating.


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Old 12-31-2005, 12:43 AM   #134
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The 86th division were speeded out right before the captial ship started blowing to pieces. The imperial fleet were retreating and the 86th division took the chance and sped towards Tatooine. Yet, Bac Rueben couldn't help but think of all the people on the planet. He knew it would mean his life, but he decided to risk it anyway. He turned around and sped towards the planet.


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Old 12-31-2005, 02:33 PM   #135
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(Because Im bored Im going to continue the story as Phinius)

Phinius stared into the lava that had consumed his old master and friend. He picked up some soild. He blew it into the now gail force winds. His robe billowed out and he had to remain focused to stay up right against the winds. The planet was almost at breaking point. It was crumbling apart. The keep was no more. The only thing that remained was a lone Jedi start fighter that Phinius had used to get here. As he made his ay to the ruins of the keep he saw a dark shape. It was a terrifying sight. A man in a black cape. He noticed Phinius and stopped. Phinius grabbed his lightsaber. The man said in a cold voice over the wind
"YOU'VE LOST ME AN APRENTICE!"
He knew who the man was talking about
"YOU KILLED MY MASTER!" Phinius yelled back
The man got out a saber and ignited it. The red blade glowed threateningly. Phinius gt out his blue saber and waited. The man snorted and lunged at Phinius. He blocked it. The man was powerful probably more powerful than Phinius. Phinius stumbled against the wind. The man laughed. Phinius jumped up and front flipped over the man and tried to strike him but the man blocked him and force pushed him away. Phinius landed on his ship. The winds were now so strong Phinius could no longer stand. His ship began to move. Phinius turned off his saber and pocketed it. He held on to his ship for dear life. The man had vanished. The winds were too srong. The ship lifted off the ground and was thrown away. Phinius still held on. He tried his hardest to make it to the cockpit. It opened. He pulled as hard as he could but could not fight against the wind. The ship plunged into a casmn it was falling woards the lava below. Phinius used all his strength and managed to get into the ship. He closed the cockpit and pushed the ignition the ship roared into life and stopped inches before the lava. Phinius turned and flew out of the Casmn. He felt the presence of other Jedi and knew he could not leave. But what could he do?


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Old 01-02-2006, 12:00 AM   #136
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Bac Rueben got near the surface of the planet and it looked devastated. Lava was now spurting up out of the chasm and the land was blown everywhere by the explosion. Also, he noticed the broken up keep was finnaly destroyed. He tryed everywhere to look for survivors, but he noticed none. Disapointed, Bac put his ship throttles to full blast and flew towards Tatooine.


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Old 01-02-2006, 12:48 PM   #137
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(((Wheres deamonomic at i'm waiting for him to post about the reactor part??????)))


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Old 01-02-2006, 03:35 PM   #138
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(Jedi Atomic just continue. The reactor has blown and the planet is imploding. So get out of there)

Phinius flew over to the cave. He blasted at the rocks that covered the entrance. It created a small opening which was big enough for Phinius to climb through. He jumped out of the ship and ran over to the hole in the rocks. He clambered through and ran down the passage.
"SCUR? ZARAN? WHERE ARE YOU?" He yelled
He saw them behind a fading force barrier.
"Guys lets go! The planets going to imploded you can't stop it!"
He knew what they were trying to do
"COME ON! You can't starve it! It's getting out anyway it can!"
Phinius pointed at the ground. Deep cracks had appeared and the walls of the caver were crumbling.
Phinius backed away
"Don't be fools" he murmered
Phinius knew it wasn't worth it. He had to leave.
The planet would implode at any moment. He ran back to the rocks. He clambered through the hole and ran to his ship. The winds were now even stronger. He jumped in and took off. He sped into space.
(This story isn;t really going any where so I'll do the obvious thing now)
The planet shudered and just as Phinius entered hyper space the planet imploded
Phinius hoped that any last minute strugglers like Scur and Zaran had got off the planet somehow.....


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Old 01-02-2006, 06:21 PM   #139
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Bac Rueben looked behind him to see the planet start to implode. He knew that going back to look might mean his life if a black hole emerged. Bac just hoped for the best and pushed his thrusters to full power. At least he knew his battalion was safe.


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Old 01-03-2006, 10:00 PM   #140
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((I'll take control of Zaran until deamon gets back))

Scur noticed Zaran starting to faint and he quickly brought the shield over himself and Zaran as they were pushed away from the planet surface and into space, still with the shield keeping them alive from suffacation. A starfighter came into view and noticed a bluish glow from the force shield. "Must be Phinius." Scur thought as he looked at Zaran who was still fainted near death but Scur was giving some of his life to keep him alive.

((Deamonomic, just wake your guy when you get back on, sorry for controlling your characterbut but the story really couldn't continue without your character.))


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Old 01-04-2006, 09:37 PM   #141
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(dont appologize. i was the one holding everything up. i dont want to be the one to make everyone wait.)
zaran woke up alone. he was in a starfighter. so they had escaped....


and thus yoda said "whoop your ass i will, yes"

waaaaa jeeedddiii

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Old 01-05-2006, 03:53 PM   #142
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(Fates decision are you going to make this RPG "Origins of the sith" or not. If not I'll do it)


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Old 01-05-2006, 11:09 PM   #143
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Bac Rueben finnaly landed on Tatooine. He gathered with his battalion in Mos Eisley, with new suits that didn't show they were an army battalion. They decided to hold a secret meeting outside the city so they went and pitched some tents. Once everything was set up, They discussed their problem and what they should do about it. With a nearly anonimous vote, the 86th battalion voted to gather voulunteers and make a comeback against the imperial army. They immediately started gathering weapons.


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Old 01-13-2006, 10:39 AM   #144
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(sorry, I don't have a working computer so I'm going to wait to make the new RPG. I want to be available when I start it.)


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