Hey this

SyntheticGerbil · 03-29-2006, 03:01 AM

This was for school. It's the only flash cartoon I made I'm somewhat proud of so far.

Tell me what you think...

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/304071

Ray Jones · 03-29-2006, 09:01 AM

That autobiographical?

itchythesamurai · 03-29-2006, 09:26 PM

I liked it, Gerbil! Needless to say, you've got room for improvement, but it was nonetheless enjoyable.

Samnmax221 · 03-29-2006, 10:26 PM

I especially enjoyed the jumping IV stand

SyntheticGerbil · 03-30-2006, 05:35 AM

Yeah I should probably go back and redraw a lot of it, and not do it for an assignment this time.

Or just do a new one... one day.

**Samuel Dravis** · 03-31-2006, 02:43 AM

It's good, you should make more. I'd watch them.

TSR · 03-31-2006, 07:29 AM

slightly off topic, but anyon here seen "burntfaceman"? class! watch and learn.
http://www.burntfaceman.com/

dont worry, he really isnt gay...

pock · 04-02-2006, 05:18 PM

cool Gerbil, it was good...

**Skinkie** · 04-08-2006, 12:09 PM

Me likey

Samnmax221 · 04-15-2006, 12:32 AM

Gerbil all of your work has a freehand look to it what are you using? Photoshop?

SyntheticGerbil · 04-16-2006, 11:53 PM

Uh, I draw with a mouse...

But the backgrounds on that were scanned pencil drawings then colored like **** in photoshop.

Samnmax221 · 04-17-2006, 08:52 PM

Kinda thought you had one of those tablets

SyntheticGerbil · 04-17-2006, 10:09 PM

Kinda is the key word.

StonerDaveN'Max · 04-22-2006, 11:06 PM

Newgrounds links are usually no click zones due to I enjoy nothing there, but this was quite nice

Edit: oh compliments nice art good work .

Shmargin · 05-03-2006, 02:05 PM

You know Gerbil, I'll be honest, for some reason I didnt think I would like your animation....Just....Because.

But I actually enjoyed it alot.

You talked **** about your own drawings, but it just looked like the style you were going for.

Like those kids shows they put on TV now that use drawing skills worse than I had when I was 8.

But all in all, I thouht it looked cool, I enjoyed the dialog and music, and it was totally fukcing insane.

Good job.

EDIT: I wasnt saying your drawing looked like the horrbile shows drawn for little kids...Upon reviewing my post thats what it kinda sounded like. Just that it looked like you were going for a kinda...How would I say...crunchy style. It worked good. Especially for the content. And the animaion was smooth, which can make anything better.

SyntheticGerbil · 05-04-2006, 07:12 AM

Well thank you.

Ray Jones · 05-04-2006, 07:33 AM

You both can stop massaging your peenises now.

itchythesamurai · 05-04-2006, 05:43 PM

I think Ray's right on this one. Gasp! But overstimulation can lead to a wicked rash, and that's a visit to the doctor we are all better off not having to go through.

SyntheticGerbil · 05-05-2006, 01:32 AM

Get one of those Q-tips in the phallus maybe.

Samnmax221 · 05-05-2006, 06:20 PM

I believe your supposed to put those in ears and push real hard

**Skinkie** · 05-07-2006, 12:52 AM

However thay are also widely used in the study of venerial dieseases. Fun fun.