Originally Posted by connor
good story lne but ahh needs longer chapters and ah wanta the sith and jedi have lightsabers and not guns also needs to be longer abaut 28 lines at least counting spaces between pagrafs other wise i need to know..what does p.e.a stand for??
What does P.E.A stand for?
Also connor you can talk. Your Chapters aren't long either.
I agree with connor that Chapters need to be longer. It doesn't make a good story.