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Old 09-16-2006, 03:21 PM   #1
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[FIN] Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic III: The Second Sith War

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Chapter One

"Revan, this is what remains of the Jedi Temple on Coruscant." said the former Jedi Exile: Jaden Page. Revan stared out the window in deep dispair. "Why wasn't I there?" Revan asked himself "This is all my fault."

"You made a choice for the greater good, Revan Skywalker, this is not your fault."

"I hope she's alright." Revan said.

"Bastila?" Jaden asked.

"Yes... I can't lose her."

"I'm sure she's alright, my friend." encouraged Jaden.

"I hope so... I can't live without her."


The Ebon Hawk landed in a clearing inside the ruined Jedi Temple. "The Force is strong here" told Mira.

"It might be her!" Revan replied with hope. Revan searched the corridors calling "BASTILA... BASTILA, WHERE ARE YOU?"

"Revan?" said a familliar voice.

"Bastila, is that you?" asked Revan.

"It's been too long." answered the voice.

"I had to come back, I felt I would do a better job protecting you if I was close to you." explained Revan as he turned arount to greet the woman he loves.

"It is good to see your face again. I still remember."

"Bastila" Revan strode over to Bastila and they shared their love.
There was a pause, "I have waited so long for your return, it feels great to have you back, and in my arms too." after Bastila finished, they continued kissing.
"Geez-Leweez, they should get a room" Mira told Jaden.

"I pity her actually, she has gone to great lengths just to see him again." replied Jaden.

Atton walked down the loading ramp of the Ebon Hawk and saw Revan and
Bastila kissing in the distance, "I'll come back later"

Visas walked down the loading ramp "This is the temple?"

"Yes Visas." answered Jaden.

Revan and Bastila were through kissing and they both had many things to ask eachother. "Are we the last of the Jedi?" asked Revan.

"I'm afraid so."

"We'll have to rebuild our numbers, one by one." told Revan.

"I have a question for you... Did you ever forget me." asked Bastila.

"Not for a damn second." Revan answered "I left to protect you."

"How fast do you think it'll take to rebuild this temple?" asked Bastila.

"We just need the help from old friends." answered Revan. Revan walked back aboard the Ebon Hawk and called an old friend.

Jaden Page?" answered a Republic officer.

"No, Revan Skywalker."

"Revan?! Is that you ol' buddy?"

"Carth, aren't you a sight for sore eyes!"

"What do you need? I'm sure we can help you."

"I need a construction crew at the Jedi Temple ruins on Coruscant. We're going to rebuild the Jedi Order, starting here."

"I'll have one there straight away."


Hours later a construction crew arrived along with Carth and his son Dustil. "I always live up to my word." said Carth.

"I always knew." replied Revan.

"Revan... Do you remeber me?" asked Dustil.

"How can I forget that time on Korriban?"

"I'm aware that you are in need of new Jedi, and I'd be happy to join the order, seeing as if I have some experience with the ways of the Force." told Dustil.

"What place was that? Korriban?" asked Visas.

"Yes ma'am." answered Dustil.

"I am like you, until I met Jaden I was a Sith apprentice, I would be happy to teach you the rest of the ways into the Light." told Visas.

"I'd be honoured."

"Then your training begins now... Padawan Dustil Onasi."

"Thank you... master."


"I have one more question for you, Revan." said Bastila.

"What is it?" Revan asked.

"Why did you begin to love me in the first place?" Bastila asked.

"Well... On the Star Forge after our duel, I saw your pretty blue eyes return. I then realized that I wasn't just the one you wanted... I realized I was also the one you needed." answered Revan.

"What was I to you then?"

"You were the one I loved." After that, Revan and Bastila shared another kiss.
Mira glanced at them and quickly looked away.

"Do you have any ideas where we can search?" asked Revan.

"We can search Telos." answered Brianna.

"Visas has already found her apprentice" Atton pointed out.

"We're going to have more than one student per master, because we are the only ones." told Jaden.

"What about Vrook?" asked Bastila.

"He could be possible." answered Bao-Dur, "I'm sure that he would be happy to help restore the order."

"The outer-rim." suggested Mira.

"That's possible." answered Revan, "That's where me, Malak, Jaden, and Bastila were found."


"Query: Shall I motivate these meatbags master?" asked HK.

"Let them do their jobs HK... They're doing us a favour."

"Answer: As you desire master, signing off."

"Maybe you can help them do some heavy lifting, HK."

"Irritated Answer: Fine Master, fine."

"Beep whoop whistle"

"You can help do some techical work. Revan then turned to Carth, "Can you watch over my droids carefully? We are going to search for new initiates."

"I'll watch them for you."

"Thank you... Jaden, Bastila, Visas, Brianna, Atton, Dustil, Bao-Dur, Mira, Mical, lets go." ordered Revan.

"Our leader's back." Bastila pointed out with glee.

Atton and Mira took the pilot seats and prepared for take off, everyone held on while they made the jump to Dantooine.


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New fanfic Metroid/Star Wars Crossover: http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=183539 Chapter four is up.

Last edited by Jae Onasi; 09-17-2006 at 11:14 AM. Reason: Added link to fic in CEC
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