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Old 09-21-2006, 02:39 PM   #1
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The Galaxy Is Yours

Here's the fic. It's a crossover of KotOR and a different movie. The main character is not going to be Revan but he will be trained as a Jedi.


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Old 09-21-2006, 02:41 PM   #2
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Chapter One: The Endar Spire

(Mind you, this fic follows KotOR's storyline but not directly)


The Endar Spire flew over Taris. To their surprise, they were ambushed by a Sith Battlefleet. In bed, a man kept rolling. Due to a bad sleep. His door opened and a man and a woman walked in. "We've been ambushed by a Sith battlefleet. The Endar Spire is under attack. Hurry up, we don't have much time." told the man.

"Who the **** are you?" asked the shorter man who woke up?"

"I'm Trask Ulgo, ensign with the Republic fleet, hurry up, we don't have much time." told Trask.

The shorter man stared at the woman, "What the freak is wrong with this guy man? You kidding me or what?"

"Antonio, turn around." told the woman.

"Easy with Antonio, just call me Tony. Or Montana, or Scarface, it don't matter to me." Tony turned around and saw the Sith attack. "Point taken. Okay, Trask, Bastila, let's get the **** out of here."


Tony, Trask and Bastila exited the quarters and entered a hallway filled with gunfire. The only soldier fighting got killed. "These Sith must be the advace boarding party. FOR THE REPUBLIC!" cried Trask. One Sith started shooting at Bastila, but his shot's were blocked. "No respect for a woman, I'm disgusted." Tony raised his pistol and aimed it at the Sith's head. "YOU DIE MOTHER**-" and he shot. "No respect for women makes me sick."

"Well I like you sense of respect Liutenent, but that ship won't fly." told Bastila. The three kept walking until they got caught in a battle with many Sith. "You wanna play rough?" asked Tony.

"RUN IT'S MONTANA!" told a Sith."

Tony put his pistol back in it's holster and got his repeater outfitted with grenade launcher ready. "SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND!" He yelled as he shot at the Sith, body parts flew everywhere. "YOU FIGHT WITH ME, YOU FIGHTIN' WITH THE BEST!" Tony was known by much, whenever Sith saw that scar down his face, they ran. Tony is a Liutenent in the Republic Army, he's a great leader, intimidating and deadly to his enemies and the best shooter the galaxy has seen. Tony opened the next door to see a Dark Jedi fighting one of Bastila's companions. "It's a Dark Jedi." said Trask "This fight is too much for us, we'd better stay back, all we'd do is get in the way." Tony didn't listen and walked up beside the Dark Jedi. "Hey, hey" he called pulling out his pistol. When the Dark Jedi turned to him, he had a blaster pointed in his face. "Red light." he said before he pulled the trigger. The Sith lay dead on the floor, one could see the floor due to a hole in his head. Tony noticed a spark behind the female Jedi. Tony grabbed the Jedi and pulled her down and covered her from the blast. "Thank you, Liutenent." told the Jedi "My name is Scarlet Page."

Tony got up "A pleasure Miss Page, Antonio Montana." he said helping her to her feet.

"You're a gentelman." she told.

"I can whenever I want to be."

The four continued on to the bridge. "Wait! we should equip ourselves with melee weapons." suggested Trask.

Scarlet threw Tony a lightsaber. "Do you know how to use one of those?" she asked.

Tony found the switch and ignited a green blade. "Yes." He opened the door to the bridge, the sight of Tony was fearful enough for them, but him wielding a lightsaber makes them intimidated even more. Tony was well trained in sword combat so he was able to cut the Sith down quickly. Tony gave the blade back to Scarlet and he got his repeater at the ready. As they walked beyond the door Trask noticed something going on behind the next door. "****, another Dark Jedi, I'll try to hold him off, get to the escape pods!" Trask ran to fight the Dark Jedi, and shut the door behind him. Tony and his company ran into the starboard sector and quickly killed a single Sith. "Be careful, you're gonna get close to a large squad of Sith troopers, you'll have to find a way to decrease their numbers so your fight will be less one sided." told a Republic soldier.

"I got an idea" told Tony "Scarlet or Bastila I need you to cut a small hole in the door." Bastila did what she was told, the Sith curiously looked into the door where they saw it was quicly replaced with blackness. A grenade shot onto the table and exploded. "HA! HOW'D YOU LIKE LIKE THAT? HUH? YOU FREAKIN' SITH!" Tony and his company knew that they would be going to the escape pods in the next room. They walked through the door to meet a Republic soldier waiting for them. "Good to see you've made it Liutenent Montana." told the soldier giving a salute.

Tony saluted back, "At ease, Sergeant Onasi."

"We've only got one escape pod left." told Carth.

"Better than none, we gotta go." replied Scarlet. Everyone crammed themselves into the escape pod and ejected from the Endar Spire, where it exploded shortly after. It landed and Scarlet and Bastila were badly hurt. Carth and Tony carried them back to an apartment to let them rest.


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New fanfic Metroid/Star Wars Crossover: http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=183539 Chapter four is up.

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Old 09-21-2006, 02:44 PM   #3
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Scarface with KOTOR. I don't know much about Scarface, so I won't get it much. I'll keep reading though. Hope this goes better than your other Fics.
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Old 09-21-2006, 02:52 PM   #4
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Databank of characters I have now:

Antonio "Tony" Montana
Age: 27
Status: Republic Liutenent
Bio: Tony is the most feared soldier in the galaxy. He has killed many Sith and lead his men to many victories to get where he is now. Tony now is under a Sith quarentine on Taris and has to find a way for him and his companions to get off the planet.
Original Movie: Scarface

Bastila Shan
Age: 19
Status: Jedi Padawan
Bio: Bastila is the key to the Republic war effort, she is hunted by Malak under fear of her battle meditation. Bastila now travels with Liutenent Tony Montana to get off Taris so she can take them to Dantooine.

Scarlet Page
Age: 24
Status: Jedi Knight
Bio: Scarlet is a newly knight Jedi and a valuble asset to the Republic. But in her mind sleeps a dark secret, when awakened will change the lives of her and her companions forever.
How I got the name: Scarlet Page is the daugher of guitar legend: Jimmy Page.

Carth Onasi
Age: 38
Status: Republic Sergeant
Bio: Carth's past is a dark one. Carth's family was killed by his former mentor: Saul Karath. Carth now trusts no one due to the events that happened to him. Carth now travels with Tony in hopes to leave Taris.


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Old 09-21-2006, 02:55 PM   #5
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I'll give you a link so you can see what it's about. If you wanna understand my fic better, then go. If you wanna see the movie, then don't follow the link.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Scarface_%281983_film%29


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Old 09-21-2006, 03:16 PM   #6
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ookay, the first chapter was kinda wierd, in a good way, though. i'd have loved to see Revan shouting "DIE MOTHA****A" in the original game
keep it up MJ.


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Old 09-21-2006, 03:20 PM   #7
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Well I said that the main character wasn't gonna be Revan. That means Tony's not Revan.


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Old 09-21-2006, 03:31 PM   #8
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ookay, the first chapter was kinda wierd, in a good way, though. i'd have loved to see Revan shouting "DIE MOTHA****A" in the original game
keep it up MJ.
QFE, ALOT. A shame about your fic and all of the other recent closed fics. Keep it up altough!

The recent closed fics were closed at the authors' requests. --Jae

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Old 09-21-2006, 06:04 PM   #9
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Chapter Two: Taris' First Impressions

Tony and Carth watched Bastila and Scarlet. Bastila was resting soundly, but Scarlet wasn't resting too well. Scarlet was in fact having a vision. She saw Bastila aboard a Sith ship and killing a Dark Jedi. She then saw Darth Revan. "You cannot win, Revan." told Bastila. Revan swung into Soreseu, but the an explosion knocked out both Revan and Bastila, Bastila got up shortly and carried Revan off. Scarlet woke up. "I take it you've had one **** of a nightmare." told Tony.

"I had a vision." replied Scarlet.

"Like what?" asked Tony.

"Revan fighting Bastila. It wasn't even a fight. Revan was knocked out cold due to an explosion." explained Scarlet. "I hope he or she died."

"Revan was a she, I was serving under her as a captain. Carth, a copral."

"Well Revan deserved what she got. She deserves no mercy."

Bastila woke up. "I've heard rumors that she is still alive, silently serving us." her eyes un-noticably looked to Scarlet. Tony noticed that, but he decided to drop it. "When we get to Dantooine, I would like to introduce you to the Jedi Council, I sense the Force is strong in you."

"Me? A Jedi?" asked Tony. Scarlet cracked a smile.

"Yeah, what greater asset is there to make the most feared soldier in the Republic a Jedi?"

"To turn an enemy to your cause?" asked Scarlet.

"We have no time, we should get moving, and keep a low profile." told Carth.

"Good idea." replied Tony.

Everyone walked out the door to find a ship to get off. They all saw a Sith and two droids. "Right you alien scum. Everybody, get up against the wall, this is a raid." ordered the Sith.

"There was a patrol here a few days ago and they found nothing, why do you Sith keep bothering us?" asked a Duros. Sadly he got shot.

"That's how we Sith deal with smart-mouth aliens. Now do as I say before I lose my temper again." The Sith heard the four people behind him get their weapons ready. He turned around. "IT'S LIUTENENT MONTANA AND CAPTAIN BASTILA! KILL THEM!"

"You wanna play with me?" asked Tony aiming his piston at the Sith's head. He shot and with two more quick ones, he destroyed the droids as well.

"Poor Xgil, he shouldn't have talked back to the Sith. I have no reward for you, but you have my thanks."

"If they blame you, blame us. Okay." told Tony.

"But-"

"You don't deserve to suffer for what me and my companions did. Besides, they won't look for us anyway."

Tony and his company left the apartment building and he was recognized by man who recognized Tony. "So you're the legendary Scarface."

"That would be me." replied Tony.

"So where did you get your beauty scar, tough guy?"

"This is when I was a kid. You should've seen the other kid though, you can't even recognize him."

"Alright, my name is Canderous Ordo, you beat me over Malachor V."

"Oh yeah, you did good, you were the only one who could fight me."

"I was in many battles that I lost against you."

"Okay, cut the crap, the war's over."

"My boss hasn't been paying me well and I'm gonna get vengeance by stealing his ship and leaving him to rot on this cesspool."

"What would you have us do." asked Scarlet.

"I need you to steal the launch codes from the Military Base." told Canderous.

"Why me? I'm the most feared Liutenent in the Republic." asked Tony.

"Because you are the most feared Liutenent in the Republic."

"Gotcha."

"Don't do it, he'll screw us over in a second." told Carth.

"We should trust him." told Bastila "He means what he says."

"I'm gonna wait in Javyar's Cantina. When you've got the codes, I'll be waiting." told Canderous.


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New fanfic Metroid/Star Wars Crossover: http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=183539 Chapter four is up.

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Old 09-21-2006, 07:27 PM   #10
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good couple of chaps


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Old 09-21-2006, 07:27 PM   #11
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Well, basically K1 with some plot twists and Revan IS obviously Scarlet, but i'm still alive and kickin'! Oh, and reading it!

Hard to see, Scarlet's future is...*coughTonyisprobablygoingtomarryherwhileBasti lahasnoone cough*

Now really, keep up!

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Old 09-21-2006, 08:28 PM   #12
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Regarding the fic:
Your writing style just doesn't work with me, but I like the concept.


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Old 09-22-2006, 01:45 AM   #13
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Anyway good Chapter Revanscool, I mean Master Jimmy! I'm looking foward to more.

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Old 09-22-2006, 10:54 AM   #14
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here's a quick warning for ya: keep the cursing to a minimum, please. this forum is generally reguarded as a family oriented forum, and R-rated material(in this case, adult language) is going too far. i editted the two posts above. keep up with the cursing, and i'll just get lazy and close the thread entirely next time.


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