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Old 08-26-2007, 09:38 PM   #1
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Star Wars: Millenia of Darkness

Star Wars: Millenia of Darkness

It has been nearly one thousand, one hundred, forty years since the Battle of Endor. It has been one thousand years of Sith Rule over the Galaxy. The Jedi have long since been wiped out, the Galactic Alliance crumbled without the Jedi Knights. Without the aid of the Jedi, the fragile Galactic Alliance had little protection from the mighty Sith. Dark Lords have risen and fallen, countless wars have been fought for the Throne. The Jedi teachings are all but gone, now only their name remains. The famous battles of the Galactic Alliance Era are lost to time, the impact of the Jedi has lasted still. The temple on Coruscant has been long since turned into a condemned structure by the maniacle Sith. the planet-wide city on Coruscan is now a slum filled with the most vile of creatures and scum. The Force has been broken, the flow has become dark and shrowded.

There is one hope for the galaxy, and it is a young man with a large lineage of famous Jedi Knights. This young man is named Ren Skywalker. He has been noticed by the Sith, and he has been forseen as the saviour of the Galaxy by the last of the Light Force Users. This order of Force Users is called the Lightbringers. A battle has ensued on the icy world of Rhen Var. Two of the Lightbringer Knights have taken the job of getting the boy off of the planet.





A small shuttle zooms down into the atmosphere of Rhen Var. It bares the markings of the Lightbringers. It is escorted by two fighters. The shuttle lands on a patch os thick snow, a few meters off is a small hut. The hut is guarded by Sith Mauraders and Sith Troopers. As the shuttle lands, the Troopers fire on it, and the Mauraders stand ready. The Ship fires back killing a few of the Troopers and one maurader. The boarding ramp descends carrying to white robed figures. As the two step off they ignite their crystal blue lightsabers. The Maurader ignites his red dual bladed lightsaber, and rushes the two. The two figures parry his blows and get into an intense battle as the snow continues to fall as well as the temperature. The white garbed figures beat the maurader and decapitate him. The two run to the door and drive their sabers into it. The two twist the sabers slowly, and the door crumbles.

The two figures run into the room where a pair of Sith Mauraders stand. A battle quickly ensues. The two figures each take one. One of the robed figures jumps and kicks his foe to the ground and swiftly impales him. The next robed figure does a twist and disarms the Maurader, then cuts through his chest. The robed figures use the Force to push open the last door, inside there is a young man around the age of seventeen. The young man has a terrified look on his face, and then the two robed figures unhood. One is an older man with graying brown hair and a thick mustache, the other is a young blonde man with a clean shaven face.

"Are you Ren Skywalker?" asked the older man.

"Yes," replied the young man, a slight quiver in his voice.

"I am Terk Wi, and this is Max Antilles, we are knights of the Lightbringers, we ar ehere to rescue you from the Sith," said the blonde man.

Ren nods and stands up. on his utility belt is a saber with electrum rings. Ren follows Terk and Max to the shuttle. As the shuttle takes off, the wingmen are no where to be seen, and two sliver ships resembling a wedge appear behind the shuttle. The two silver ships open fire on the shuttle. The deflector shields abosrb the blows, and the shuttle's gunners fire back. The shuttle takes evasive maneuvers. As the three are firing at each other, one of the silver ships is struck in the shield generator and then in the cockpit. The silver ship does a nose dive to the ground as it burns up. The last silvery ship fires and hits the shuttle's armor this time. The shuttle shoots back and strikes silver ship in the shield generator. The silver ship pulls away and the shuttle enters the battle in space. Two capitol ships and a few frigates are firing at each other. The Sith capitol ship has a compliment of fighters and bombers, engadged in combat with other fighters of various types and kinds.

The shuttle succesfully navigates the battle field, and fliesa into the hangar. The landing ramp drops, and Terk, Ren, and Max hurry out of the hangar bay. Just as they do so, an enemy shuttle flies into the hangar. A dark shrouded man comes out with a red single Lightsaber, and following him is a large compliment of Sith Troopers. A few Sith Troopers give the party cover fire as they travel into the halls of the ship. The Sith leads the way and they encounter few soldiers. Then they meet a large party of marines in white armor, similar to Galactic Alliance armor. The two engadge in a battle. An alert goes off in the ship, A red light flashes through the halls and Terk, Ren, and Max stop. Terk and Max run toards the battle and Ren behind. When the three come across the battle, Max and Terk ignite their blue sabers, while Ren ignites his green. While the Dark Firgure is distracted, the three cut through the SIth ranks. Then the Dark man turns. He goes to attack Ren, but is parried by Max. Max and the Dakr Man ensue in a battle. Just as the battle between is in its prime, a large explosion sounds. An emergency light goes off and the white clad troops run off. Max and the Dark Man are still fighting.

"Ren, Terk! Go to an escape pod! I will hold him off!" screams Max.

"No, Max, I must help you!!!" replied Terk.

"Take the boy and run, he is to strong for you!" screamed Max. In that instant, Terk took Ren and they ran to an escape pod. After a few minutes of loading people in, the pod fired. The Sith ship left and the ship blew to bits. Just then, the Escape Pod went to Hyperspace. Terk had a sad look on his face, Ren was sitting in his seat scared, and the whole pod had a feeling of sad and regret.

*The End of Part 1* More to come soon.
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Old 08-26-2007, 10:00 PM   #2
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(pods can go into hyperspace?) :P


Otherwise I really like it so far. Keep it up, J-Dog.
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Old 08-27-2007, 05:52 PM   #3
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(Yes they can xD, I am still thinking of stuff)
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Old 08-27-2007, 11:03 PM   #4
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Part 2

The pod exits Hyperspace on the one Lightbringer controlled planet of Bespin. The orange planet dwarfs the pod in comparison. The pod streaks down into the skies of the gas giant Bespin. After a few minutes the pod crashes into a walkway injuring one person and startling many. The hatch bursts open and the Lightbringer Marines, along with the Lightbringer Knights and Ren Skywalker step out. A bunch of white armored soldiers come sprinting to the pod. In the distance several pods are crashed into random places, a few of the pods are still streaking out of the sky. The soldiers check the identification of the group. The Marines take their stations in the city while Terk and Ren silently walk towards a tall building with a Lightbringer flag draped over it. The walkways of the city are bustling with people of all sorts of races. The mood seems generally happy and busy. As the building comes in to view, there are Lightbringers all over the steps, some talking and visiting with one another, some busily heading to places. As the large doorway comes into view, a compliment of Lightbringer soldiers stand guard. The pair walk into the large building, once they are inside the building is filled with people all in the garbs of Lightbringers. At their sides they all have a similar weapon, a lightsaber. Terk leads Ren into a large chamber where a man and several others are seated in a semi-circle. Once there, Terk bows, and followed by Ren.

"What have you brang with you today Terk?" asked an older as the head of the semi-circle.

"I have brang the one you and the founders have forseen, I have brang Ren Skywalker." said Terk. His young face hard and rgid.

An elderly man at the far right of the circle speaks, "He is the one who will restore order to the Force, the one who is to help us restore the Republic, and restore the Jedi Order? A young man?" asked the man skeptically.

"Yes," said a middle aged man to the right of the elderly one.

"If you are indeed who Terk says you are, then show us your weapon. It is said to be the legendary lightsaber of the legendary Jedi Master Luke Skywalker." said the man at the head of the semi-cricle. Ren flicked on the emerald green lightsaber. It shown bright in the room, the electrum couplings visible. The men in the room looked astonished.

"He is the one," said the elderly man. There was a nod of agreement in the room, and Ren turned off the ancient Jedi weapon.

"Train him in the ways of the Force and lightsaber, Terk. He is the one who must bring balance to the Force, allow him to be at his full potential." said the man at the head of the semi-circle. Terk nodded and lead the young man off to a room labeled dojo. They entered and Terk lead him to the center of the floor. Once there Terk began teaching him the three basic stances of combat.

On the Outter Rim world of Korriban, trouble brews. A Dark Man is meditating in his throne room. Suddenly, he opens his eyes. A Sith Maurader approaches him.

"Lord Hysterious, our scouts have tracked the Lightbringers to the gas world of Bespin. They may have the boy there, but we can not be certain, shall I send assassins?" asked the Maurader.

""Yes, send Diro and his assassins, they will get the job done, or die trying," said Darth Hysterious. The Maurader rushes out of the room and down a hall. After a few moments he walks into a training room where a man in assassin garbs and a scarlet cape is instructing a new, Selkath assassin how to use Force Crush. The Maurader approaches the man and bows. The man looks up.

"What do you need?" he says with a harsh tone to his words.

"Lord Hysterious requires you and your assassins to take out a target on Bespin." explains the Maurader, he then hands Diro a Holopic of the boy, along with the planet on which he may reside. The Sith Assassin sneers.

"He is just a boy, this will be easy," snickers Diro.

"He is well gaurded by the Lightbringers, he will be hard to find, and harder to get to." explains the Maurader.

"We will hand his head to the Lord within a week. My assassins and I will leave by nightfall," says Diro, he laughs a bit and goes back to his instruction.

Ren finishes reading a datapad on proper Force Pull techniques. Almost a week has past since he arrived on Bespin. The boy nods off to sleep in his quarters. Something awakens Ren, he senses danger. Instinctively, Ren grabs the hilt of his lightsaber. Ren feels five presences in the room. He backs into a corner and flicks on the emerald blade. Sudennly the five presences ignite matching red lightsabers. Ren takes what he knows of Shii-Cho and utilizes it. He uses swift strikes that are all parried. He begins to parry various swings, his strength is slowly deteareorating. Ren is caught off gaurd by a small slice. He is hit in the shoulder. Ren then quickly jumps behind his attackers and impales one that is off gaurd. Dripping with sweat, and weakening fast, Ren fears he may die. Then suddenly, the man who was at the head of the semi-crcle comes in and attacks the Assassins. He kills two of them and maims another. The last left fights fiercly, unlike his comrades.

"You will not get this boy Diro!" yells the man.

"I will kill you old man! Like I have killed many before you! You are no match to the power of the darkside!" screams Diro, cackling. Diro, then is caught off guard and decapitated, but not before stabbing the man through the stomache. The man falls to his knees.

"Come closer boy..." whisprrs the man. Ren walks and kneels a centimeter away from the man.

"Promise me, that what ever happens, you will rebuild the Republic and the Jedi....Promise me...: whispers the man.

"I promise, I will." Ren replies, tears running down his cheeks.

"Tell them that, Kain Solo, has parished....." with that last sentence the Kain dies.


*That concludes part 2* The End.
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