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Old 03-18-2006, 04:15 PM   #1
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I'm writing a KOTOR III play!

I'm writing a KOTOR III play about how my version of the game would
go if I had my own personalized copy. If any of you would like to read
it and give me feedback on it, please post here and I'll send you a PM
with my e-mail address. The play is already way too long to post here,
and the formatting would be all messed up if I tried to.

Here are the characters in my play who travel on the Ebon Hawk:

Me, Tysy, later called Tysy Dvukh, a Jedi Padawan
Master Visas Marr, Leader of the Jedi Consulars (she switched classes)
Canderous Ordo, Mandalore, Leader of All Mandalorian Clans
T3-M4, a loyal utility droid who served Revan and the Exile
HK-47, a loyal (if belligerent) assassin droid who served Revan and Exile
Revan, a former Sith Lord who defeated Darth Malak (male in the play)
The Exile, an ex-Jedi who defeated Darth Traya (male in the play)
T'varish, otherwise known as the Comrade, an exiled True Sith Lord
Bastila Shan, Revan's love and a Jedi Master who was once a Sith
Griegaa, a female Wookiee who cares for the aged T'varish on Korriban

And here are the chief True Sith, who indeed follow the Rule of Two.
They both have Darth Nihilus' voice, and they have grey, wrinkled skin
with white eyes. Like Kreia's. They were once human, but only T'varish,
who has been exiled, is still human. One of them might not make it to
the end of the play, and someone will have to replace him...

Dark Lord Krov' (whose name means "blood" in Russian)
Dark Apprentice Golod (whose name means "hunger" in Russian)

If interested, send me a PM. I can't wait for some readers and critics!


Edit by Darth333: since there was an interest in the play, and since I was just as curious as everyone, here it is:
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File Type: doc KOTOR III.doc (64.5 KB, 84 views)

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Old 03-18-2006, 04:32 PM   #2
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Wait, did you say Kriea's a man in this play? WTF?

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Old 03-18-2006, 05:43 PM   #3
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Nope. I said the True Sith have white and atrophied eyes, like Kreia's were.
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Old 03-18-2006, 06:11 PM   #4
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Ah, the part that's got Alkonium confused is the Exile... the Exile defeated Darth Traya (male in the play)

Alkonium, this means the Exile is male, not Kreia.


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Old 03-18-2006, 06:28 PM   #5
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Good idea.. wish i had thought of it..


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Old 03-18-2006, 06:30 PM   #6
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Ah, the part that's got Alkonium confused is the Exile... the Exile defeated Darth Traya (male in the play)

Alkonium, this means the Exile is male, not Kreia.
Actually, after thinking about it, it now makes sense.

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Old 03-18-2006, 10:08 PM   #7
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Tysycha, why can't you post it? Just cut and paste it a bit at a time, you don't have to post the whole thing at once.


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Old 03-19-2006, 05:08 PM   #8
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Old 03-19-2006, 07:08 PM   #9
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I'm not entirely sure if this would work, but is it possible to save as rtf or html so that the formatting transfers?


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Old 03-20-2006, 11:53 PM   #10
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I want to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Old 03-23-2006, 11:46 AM   #11
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I want to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well you can read it. Have another look at the first post
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Old 03-24-2006, 07:42 AM   #12
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this was great i really enjoyed cant wait for more


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Old 03-27-2006, 03:27 PM   #13
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You wouldn't believe how much progress I've made on this play. Like, dude,
the 8 pages I had before are now, like, 20. No kidding. My muse hasn't been
on this big of a roll since my "Two Years, Two Masters" roleplaying thread!

Unfortunately, like, my grammar is so NOT on a roll today. Cheers!

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Old 03-31-2006, 10:46 PM   #14
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Good news, everyone!!!

I posted my play, as written thus far, here: http://tysyacha.livejournal.com .

Enjoy!
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Old 12-25-2008, 12:08 PM   #15
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have not reviewed because I did not have time then to follow additional links, and still do not have time


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