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Old 12-13-2011, 05:10 PM   #241
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"Resistance is as only as good as the measures the enemy has taken. Have scouts reported capabilities?"

"Not that I know of yet." Belina said with a shrug. "But I was planning on deploying probe droids from outside the system once we got under way instead of putting some of our scouts at risk. I'm open to hearing other suggestions though."

"The pleasure is all mine, admiral. Now, after our activity on Tatooine and Naboo, the Sith will be expecting us to investigate Dagobah. We know that whatever they're doing, they've been keeping it secret from even their own Troopers, so this is likely the only way we're going to find out what they're up to."

"If they are expecting us we're most likely going to be running into heavy resistance. I'd say that due to Dagobah's terrain we're not going to be running into heavy vehicles, but rather infantry and possibly light air support such as small fighters. I'm not going to lie though...they may have a few suprises waiting for us."

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They are in a meeting right now, but I think they would make an exception for us if Komad were to join us when we barged in. And yeah, Belina is actually commanding the ship."

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"My Lord, we've received a message from Lord Vokun demanding you go accompany him to Dagobah at once. What are your orders?"

Varith sighed as he quickly began to think of ways to get both he and his daughter out of this situation alive. A sudden idea came to mind.

"I will be docking shortly. After I am aboard this shuttle is to be allowed to continue on it's way. I managed to gain an ally in the battle against the Resistance. If all goes according to plan we should have an inside source within the resistance."

Varith looked down at his daughter and smiled as he reached out and ruffled her hair. "I'm sorry...but you need to leave if you want to survive. Some...friends of mine will pick you up once they hear my message."

Varith began to reprogram the auto-pilot to take the shuttle to the last known location of an abandoned resistance outpost. Velra should have at least a month's worth of supplies to keep her fed. He regretted that it had come to this, but he had no other choice.

He silently reached out through the force and touched the minds of the two that he had fought the first time he had managed to board the Ackbar. Before he had joined the sith.

If you wish to save an innocent life...go to the abandoned base in the Kivoran system and make haste. The sith do not value the lives of the innocent as the jedi do.

He prayed that the message had been recieved by the two he had fought. It was his daughter's only chance to survive.

The shuttle docked with the frigate and Varith walked through the air lock as soon as it was safe for him to go through. He didn't want to land the shuttle in the hanger bay in case someone checked the shuttle over before it left.

Goodbye...Velra. He thought quietly as a small tear appeared in his left eye as the shuttle undocked, drifted for a moment and then took off into Hyperspace.

He opened a channel to the bridge. "Set course for Dagobah at maximum speed and engage the hyperdrive when ready."
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Old 12-14-2011, 03:03 PM   #242
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"If they are expecting us we're most likely going to be running into heavy resistance. I'd say that due to Dagobah's terrain we're not going to be running into heavy vehicles, but rather infantry and possibly light air support such as small fighters. I'm not going to lie though...they may have a few suprises waiting for us."

Tavaryn gave a slight nod of acknowledgment. Dagobah was one of those worlds that was tricky in any situation. There were some options to consider. He replied, "What about ground forces? Could it be possible to use drop pods or drop ships and move in ground forces? Drop ships are more flexible in terms of mobility. The downside is that they are not heavily armored."

Well...yes. Try and sense Kavrik in the force...it's almost like he's not there. At all.

Tavaryn left off for the admiral's consider his suggestion while he pondered Alriana's request. He could reach out and use the Force, he just didn't do it that often. He tried and he saw that she was right. Thing was he had felt that feeling before and mother once did it. He sent back, I am familiar with the sensation. A few family tricks. My brother would know.

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"While mobility is an issue, the environment will certainly help us in getting in undetected. I agree with Tavaryn; a couple of camouflaged ATT's should be enough to get the team in undetected." Kol commented.

At that point, Komad arrived in the meeting room, along with Valek and Xeran. "Sorry I'm late. I was needed in the medbay." He explained. He then asked, "How close to Yoda's Hut can we land? Based on what Iyav and I found on Tatooine, what we're looking for would most likely be in the nearby cave."

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Valek walked into the room, with his helmet in his right hand. He had the face of a battle-hardened commando, and tried to easily show that he was more than a standard commando. He did so by his movement, his facial scars, the scoring and broken areas of his armor, and the helmet. Valek looked like he was thrown into a pit full of kath hounds and tuk'ata, and then swiftly dragged out minutes later. He held his helmet, placed it onto the table, and then sat into one of the seats near Belina.

"First things first. Eldravin was a failure, as I'm sure you already know. Just to remind you of what we're going against. Not even I, nor Gamma Squad, were able to stop them from gaining this 'artifact'."

Valek paused, glared at Kavrik, then back at Belina.

"But still, it's long time no see. It's good to see you again. You're probably one of the few members of Resistance brass that I haven't been in contact with for a while."

Valek again glared at Kavrik, and suddenly felt a wave of uneasiness slam into his stomach. He quickly shrugged it off, and looked at Komad.

"So, who's the leader of Alpha Squad?"



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Tavaryn nodded and added, "Master Skywalker, perhaps we can get several teams in on different points and they rendezvous at a particular point. This could allow for coverage. The only thing would be cross fire issues if they advance in a circle or something."

He had been sensing Kavrik who was an anomaly. Perhaps another time he could strike up a conversation. It would certainly allow for more exchange of information.

"So, who's the leader of Alpha Squad?"

Tavaryn viewed the newcomer with a wary eye. He usually was that way with people he had yet to meet or haven't met before. His presence there though meant that Belina authorized this to a degree. He glanced at Alriana and brushed her fingers with his. "That would be me."

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Belina turned to look at Xeran and then at Valek and than snapped her fingers as she remembered Valek. "Oh yes...I remember you now. I also heard about what happened to Gamma Squad. I'm sorry to hear about them...they were a good group of solders."

She then turned to look at Xeran sighed. "And I suppose that you want to be included in the mission as well. I know for a fact that you never back down from a fight."

Xeran smiled and nodded.

Belina sighed again and turned to Grand Master Skywalker. "Well Master Skywalker, I think that we already know what units we're going to deploy, do you have any elite jedi units that you might want to deploy?"




Alriana felt Tavaryn's fingers brush up against hers and she was about to say something when a sudden voice went through her head. It sounded familiar but she couldn't place it but she knew she had heard it before.

If you wish to save an innocent life...go to the abandoned base in the Kivoran system and make haste. The sith do not value the lives of the innocent as the jedi do.

She couldn't help but let a out a sharp breath as the message went through her head. She shook her head and tried to clear her head but she couldn't get the message out of her head.

Did you hear that as well? She asked Tavaryn through their link. A message...I recieved a message though the force.


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If you wish to save an innocent life...go to the abandoned base in the Kivoran system and make haste. The sith do not value the lives of the innocent as the jedi do.

Xeran paused for a moment as a sudden message went through his head. He had no idea who was sending it or who it was even intended for him but he quickly opened up a comnline to Fen'harel.

"Sir...I have just recieved some sort of message through the force. I believe that someone may be in trouble."
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Once Belina introduced Alriana, Kavrik nodded a greeting to her. Then, he watched with faint amusement as she tried to hide her discomfort upon realizing she couldn't sense him. He tracked her subtle body language and caught a hint that led him to glance over to Tavaryn. As the other man glanced in his direction, Kavrik stared back, shooting him a knowing grin. From being around other Force sensitives, Kavrik knew how strange he must seem. It was something he'd long since learned to use to his advantage. Once the entertainment of watching their discomfort wore off a little, he'd do his part to set them at ease around him. For now, it was time to focus on the mission.

He listened in silence as the mission was laid out, withholding his questions for the end, just in case some of them were answered by the rest of the briefing. When another newcomer arrived, seemed to know Belina, and reported of a failed mission, Kavrik's interest was drawn. He finished off his hyper-caf in one final gulp, cleared his throat, and looked curiously at Belina.

"For those of us new to the scene," he said, "what's this artifact your soldier man was referring to?" He smirked faintly. "Or is that 'need-to-know'? In which case, how do I give myself that need to know?"


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"I don't know, but the mission to Dagobah certainly doesn't involve one." Komad commented. "We're going there to figure out what exactly the Sith are up to, and if possible, stop them."

"The Jedi I had in mind were Master Kaltas and his son, and I trust Tavaryn will be coming as well." Kol explained. "Our numbers are stretched too thin as it is, and the rest of the Order is either occupied or unprepared for this."

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"Oh yes...I remember you now. I also heard about what happened to Gamma Squad. I'm sorry to hear about them...they were a good group of solders."

Valek smiled. "I'm glad to see that you haven't forgotten me or the deceased. And since I'm here, I guess I'll throw myself into the fire with you guys."

"That would be me."

Valek turned in the direction of Alpha leader, and studied him. Aside from a wary eye and a cautious glare, this man had the look of a Jedi, yet, soldier? Perhaps he was exiled from the Order also? Valek couldn't tell, so he simply replied to the statement.

"Hmm, you have the look of a leader, strange how I couldn't pick you out from the others. It seems so obvious, if I was still connected to the Force, I would've probably been able to pick you out."

Valek had no qualms about revealing himself as a former Jedi. Perhaps this could make them more at ease? Or will it lead them to distrust? He was simultaneously thinking and talking, so he paused for a second to recollect his mind.

I lost good friends on Eldravin, they were like family. They weren't just a 'good group of soldiers', they were family, some of the closest friends I've had in my entire life. All those men in my squad had a different past, different story. Each had different personalities, and each were sown together. We were like a family - brothers forged in battle. But now they're gone. Pretty strange, how you never miss something, until it's gone.

He started reminiscing on the memories he had with his brothers, the worlds they saved, the Sith they killed. All leading up to the grand finale at Eldravin. Sole survivor, Valek was. One, out of an entire squad.

"To the point, I'd like to join your squad, as I've heard you're taking new recruits. However, I have my own reservations of joining a squad - despite it being the best of the best - so soon after the loss of my own."

"The Jedi I had in mind were Master Kaltas and his son, and I trust Tavaryn will be coming as well."

"And me.", muttered Valek under his breath. Was he still considered a Jedi, despite being exiled? Valek had no idea, and even though he has a new lightsaber, he rarely ever used it. Maybe it's time to change that.



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Did you hear that as well? She asked Tavaryn through their link. A message...I recieved a message though the force.

Tavaryn listened and he felt faint stirrings. He replied, Just the part about saving an innocent. What did it say exactly?

Then Tavaryn turned to address the one who was asking for the leader of his team. After giving his response, he was surprised that the same assumption everyone else seemed to make came out of his mouth. Then again it was his own fault that he carried his father's lightsaber.

"Hmm, you have the look of a leader, strange how I couldn't pick you out from the others. It seems so obvious, if I was still connected to the Force, I would've probably been able to pick you out."

"That's because I am no Jedi," Tavaryn replied with a firm stance. "I just happen to spend a lot of time around Jedi and Force Sensitives." He would rather have this guy ask him straight out what he was or try to draw it out by questions. Meanwhile, he focused on the meeting. If he was being called into duty again, he was going to have to get all the specifics. He listened while Master Skywalker gave his plan and input.

"The Jedi I had in mind were Master Kaltas and his son, and I trust Tavaryn will be coming as well."

Tavaryn interjected, "Master Jedi we still have our Avalonian allies both Jedi and soldiers alike. They are still sore about the Sith managing to invade their space and would like any opportunity to help deal a blow. Plus they have some equipment that would be harder to obtain from other sources."

Tavaryn looked around the room. He looked at Belina and said, "That is why I was named the Sentinel. To reiterate this to the resistance."

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Just the part about saving an innocent. What did it say exactly?

It said that if we wished to save an innocent life, we should go to the abandoned resistance base in the Kivoran system and we should leave quickly. I think that we're needed there urgently.

"That is why I was named the Sentinel. To reiterate this to the resistance."

"I agree with Tavaryn." Belina said. "We could use all the help we could get."

"The Jedi I had in mind were Master Kaltas and his son, and I trust Tavaryn will be coming as well."

Alriana spoke up. "I would like to come along on this mission as well. I've had previous experience in fighing sith and I feel I could be useful."
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"Master Jedi we still have our Avalonian allies both Jedi and soldiers alike. They are still sore about the Sith managing to invade their space and would like any opportunity to help deal a blow. Plus they have some equipment that would be harder to obtain from other sources."

"We're all sore about that, and at least they've still got Avalon. But you're right. We'll welcome as many as direction allows." Kol replied.

"I would like to come along on this mission as well. I've had previous experience in fighing sith and I feel I could be useful."

Turning to Alriana, he added, "There's a reason I didn't mention Master Kaltas's daughter as well as his son."

"She won't be happy about this." Komad commented.

"You daughter is a grown woman and a Jedi Knight." Kol replied. "If she was only putting her own life on the line, it would be different. On that, she and I agree."


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It said that if we wished to save an innocent life, we should go to the abandoned resistance base in the Kivoran system and we should leave quickly. I think that we're needed there urgently.

Tavaryn thought about it for a moment. He then sent, Is it wise? Do you know who it is from?

"We're all sore about that, and at least they've still got Avalon. But you're right. We'll welcome as many as direction allows." Kol replied.

Tavaryn gave a respectful nod to the Jedi. He then replied, "Fen'Harel of the Shinigami will be able to relay anything you wish to request."

"I would like to come along on this mission as well. I've had previous experience in fighing sith and I feel I could be useful."

Tavaryn couldn't help but send via their link, Are you trying to make me any older than I already am? There is a reason Master Skywalker didn't mention Kalla going and he's not an apprentice either.

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Is it wise? Do you know who it is from?

The presence that sent the message feels very familiar but I just can't place it. For all I know it could be someone that we've met in our travels or possibly someone who holds a grudge against us. But still, if there is an innocent life at stake we should investigate as soon as possible.

Are you trying to make me any older than I already am? There is a reason Master Skywalker didn't mention Kalla going and he's not an apprentice either.

Alriana smirked. Yes to the first question. But I feel that I could be an asset to the mission. And I'm sure that I can keep the baby safe as well. But if you really don't want me to come along you could always take Xandros along. He has quite a bit of experience.
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"That's because I am no Jedi, I just happen to spend a lot of time around Jedi and Force Sensitives."

"Hmm. If I may ask, what are you, exactly?" Valek clearly felt stupid, and looked like a rambling idiot. However, during the course of the meeting, he picked up that they were going to Dagobah, and decided to give his 'two credits'.

"Dagobah? May I suggest stealth and camouflage? If we attack the Sith at their weakest, they won't be prepared, and we could have an edge in the first half of the battle. Dagobah has lots of swamps, thick underbrush, and trees, so it provides great cover and places to fall back to. It is essential, especially if they have a larger and stronger army than us."

Valek paused for a second, and then continued.

"We shouldn't have to bring an army. Just a few squads, to keep our attention low. Two recon teams, one distraction team, and three infiltration teams. If you guys want to hear my plan, just ask. I'm not going to waste my breath if you guys already have one."



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The presence that sent the message feels very familiar but I just can't place it. For all I know it could be someone that we've met in our travels or possibly someone who holds a grudge against us. But still, if there is an innocent life at stake we should investigate as soon as possible.

Tavaryn gave a slight motion with his head as if to stretch his neck muscles. He then replied, Perhaps in private with Master Skywalker? It would be better.

Yes to the first question. But I feel that I could be an asset to the mission. And I'm sure that I can keep the baby safe as well. But if you really don't want me to come along you could always take Xandros along. He has quite a bit of experience.

Tavaryn gave a side glance and caught Alriana's smirk. He loved her for her sense of humor as well as her spirit. To make her be anything that wasn't her was stupid. He sent back, It's easy to think of yourself but harder when you have to consider those that matter to you. However the reason I love is because of who you are. I trust you even if I do worry especially now. Part of it is... well I'll tell you later. Besides you're not the only one who knows the Sith. He gave a slight smile.

Hmm. If I may ask, what are you, exactly?

Tavaryn moved to adjust his standing position while strategy was being set. He maneuvered until he was within whispering distance to Valek. He was aware that the soldier probably felt like an idiot but it was hardly his fault that he didn't know about him and the order. He replied in a side whisper, "In response to your question, I'm just someone who watches the Jedi and protects them."

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"In response to your question, I'm just someone who watches the Jedi and protects them."

Valek replied with a curt nod, "Like the GenoHaradan?", he said in a barely audible whisper.



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Perhaps in private with Master Skywalker? It would be better.

I don't know...Alriana sent through their link. I can sense some sort of distress through the force...I can barely sense it but it feels like something a young child would be feeling.

Alriana was a little frusterated. She could feel a slight disturbance in the force that was true but it seemed so faint...

It's easy to think of yourself but harder when you have to consider those that matter to you. However the reason I love is because of who you are. I trust you even if I do worry especially now. Part of it is... well I'll tell you later. Besides you're not the only one who knows the Sith.

Thank you. Alriana sent back as she continued to try and reach through the force towards the disturbance but she had no luck.




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Velra looked around the shuttle uneasily as it dropped out of hyperspace. Her skills with the force weren't much but she could still sense the emotions of those that were close enough to her.

Her force sense was telling her that she had to leave. Soon. She looked up at the controls but couldn't make heads or tails of them. There was a small control that was marked Stealth/Distress in basic and in a few other languages that she didn't recognize.

She brought her hand up and hit the control and the shuttle's lights began to dim and certain systems shut down. A voice echoed through the cabin.

"Distress mode has been activated. Shields and long range sensors are offline. Weapons are offline. Engines are online but in stealth mode. Stealth mode is online and is tied into the main engine. Life support has been tied into the main engine. Estimated time until the battery is drained, three hours"
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In response to Valek, Komad stated, "That's the plan. Our best option is to go in with no more than two dropships' worth of Guardsmen and Jedi."

"At this point, there's little left to discuss, and time is of the essence. Admiral, we'll need your best Guardsmen ready to go in the hangar in one hour. I'll do the same with the Jedi." Master Skywalker told Belina.

"Five 'Jedi' still isn't much, Master." Komad pointed out.

"When I said noone else was available, I was mistake. Masters Vel and Mede are on their way from Tython to join us." Kol replied.

"Four Jedi Masters, one Jedi Knight, one ex-Jedi, and one Shinigami. That's a bit more reassuring." Komad commented.

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I don't know...Alriana sent through their link. I can sense some sort of distress through the force...I can barely sense it but it feels like something a young child would be feeling.

Tavaryn listened to Alriana's response and tried again to reach out. The disturbance was like that of a child. He had been around children before within the order and some were sensitive. He was well aware of their capabilities and how they could occasionally surprise you. He replied, I sense it to be a child moi chroi. Perhaps we should bring this to the attention to Master Skywalker.

"Like the GenoHaradan?"

Tavaryn gave a slight snort. He replied in the same tones, "As if I would be a part of that band of cutthroats. The Shinigami are nothing like them."

"Four Jedi Masters, one Jedi Knight, one ex-Jedi, and one Shinigami. That's a bit more reassuring."

Out loud to Komad's comment, Tavaryn replied, "I wouldn't completely discount the guardsmen. Sometimes those without the strength of the Force have done great things."


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I sense it to be a child moi chroi. Perhaps we should bring this to the attention to Master Skywalker.

Alriana thought for a moment. I agree. She sent through the link. But I sense that whatever we do should be done quickly. I can't help but think that whoever this child is is running out of time.

"Admiral, we'll need your best Guardsmen ready to go in the hangar in one hour. I'll do the same with the Jedi."

Belina nodded. "I think we can accomplish this mission with only two squads. "Alpha team will be going obviously, they're the best squad that we have. And I'm thinking that we can also send out Sierra squad. They recently finished up a recon mission a few days ago and currently aren't doing anything."

Alriana looked over at Master Skywalker. "Master Skywalker, Tavaryn and I have picked up a distress call through the force. It feels like a child somewhere is in trouble and needs help as soon as possible."
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"Alpha team will be going obviously, they're the best squad that we have. And I'm thinking that we can also send out Sierra squad. They recently finished up a recon mission a few days ago and currently aren't doing anything."

Tavaryn replied, "Yes ma'am. The team will be ready to go on your say so."

But I sense that whatever we do should be done quickly. I can't help but think that whoever this child is is running out of time.

Tavaryn gave a slight nod to indicate that he heard her. He then sent back, Perhaps you should go on this mission to retrieve the child. You seem fairly well connected.

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"As if I would be a part of that band of cutthroats. The Shinigami are nothing like them."

Valek thought about asking Tavaryn on what these "Shinigami" were. He had never heard of them, perhaps they were in the shadows, much like the GenoHaradan. Valek thought about asking him, but decided to not take any more of his time, and walked to the other side of the table.

"Alpha team will be going obviously, they're the best squad that we have. And I'm thinking that we can also send out Sierra squad. They recently finished up a recon mission a few days ago and currently aren't doing anything."

"I'd suggest Omega squad as well. They've just finished their little campaign in the Outer Rim, and are looking for some action." Valek said with a smirk.

"Since I have an hour to get ready, I'm gonna try to fix my armor." Valek paused, thought for a moment, and then thought out loud. "Any armorsmiths in here?" He said, unhopefully.



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"Master Skywalker, Tavaryn and I have picked up a distress call through the force. It feels like a child somewhere is in trouble and needs help as soon as possible."

Master Skywalker pondered that for a moment. It could be a trap, but even so, that was no reason to turn away aid.

"Very well. I'd ask that you leave as soon as possible, and that you not go alone." He finally replied.

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"I'd suggest Omega squad as well. They've just finished their little campaign in the Outer Rim, and are looking for some action."

Belina shrugged. "I suppose three squads couldn't hurt. Good suggestion Valek. Garja, all three squads are to be briefed on the upcoming mission. Make sure they're all prepared."

"As you wish Admiral."

"Any armorsmiths in here?"

Garja thought for a moment. "I believe the section where you can get your armor repaired is on deck 7 section 32. Thats where most of the repairs are made on this ship. If you need to have anything replaced your best bet is to talk to our quartermaster."




"Very well. I'd ask that you leave as soon as possible, and that you not go alone."

"Yes Master Skywalker." Alriana said as she got up. "I was hoping I could complete this mission before you deploy for Dagobah and I still intend to try to make it back in time. Do you have anyone you wish to accompany me?"
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"I was hoping I could complete this mission before you deploy for Dagobah and I still intend to try to make it back in time. Do you have anyone you wish to accompany me?"

"I'm afraid that won't be possible. We leave for Dagobah within the hour. As for who to accompany you, the only other Jedi available on short notice is Kalla Kaltas." Kol explained.

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Kavrik smiled faintly as the Grand Master objected to sending a Jedi to accompany Alriana. He cleared his throat and raised a hand. "Not that I have no appreciation for what Jedi can do," he said, "but Jedi are not your only option here. And since your plans for Dagobah were only recently modified to include me, I can't think they'd suffer much from my absence."

He turned to look at Alriana. "I'll join you for the rescue, if you'll have me, and I promise we'll get to Dagobah before they have too much fun without us."


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"Master Skywalker isn't objecting to sending a Jedi with Alriana just because I'm the only one available." Kalla stated, stepping into the room.

"Thank you for coming, and of course not. In retrospect, if I had chosen to keep you from going to Naboo for the same reasons that I chose to keep you from going to Dagobah, the Sith might still have control over the system." Master Skywalker replied.

"So you want me to go with Alriana on this rescue mission?" Kalla asked.

"Yes. Your way with words might be exactly we need." Kol replied. "And Kavrik, I welcome your help as well on this. You won't have to time to join us on the ship before we leave, so head directly to Dagobah once you've rescued this child."

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Tavaryn had been listening to the whole discussion and it seemed as if for the moment he had been forgotten. He didn't mind since he was used to it and he had been taught how to blend into the shadows and the like. When Kavrik volunteered his services, he was slightly wary. He could call it his protective instincts and it was his right considering that he was going to be a father and the mother wanted to go on the mission. He would feel more comfortable if family were going and possibly a brother of the order.

Finally he spoke up to Master Skywalker, "Master Jedi, might I suggest that one of the Shinigami accompany the group along with Lady Jun-la? Shinigami are capable of scouting without being seen and there is a brother available."

He sent the thought to Alriana, Perhaps you would consider having Xandros accompany you?

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"I'll join you for the rescue, if you'll have me, and I promise we'll get to Dagobah before they have too much fun without us."

Alriana smiled faintly. "Your welcome to come along with us. And as for getting us to Dagobah I'm going to hold you to that." She said jokingly.

She looked up at Kalla Kaltas as she entered the room and thought for a moment as she heard that she was coming along as well. "I'm glad that your coming along." She said.

"Master Jedi, might I suggest that one of the Shinigami accompany the group along with Lady Jun-la? Shinigami are capable of scouting without being seen and there is a brother available."

"I would welcome Lady Jun-la's presence on this mission." Alriana said. She always enjoyed chatting with Jun-la and she did have a few questions for her about raising a force sensative child.

Perhaps you would consider having Xandros accompany you?

Alriana thought for a moment and than smiled. I would welcome his help. I think he's been wanting to talk to me since he was brought out of cryosleep but hasn't had the opportunity.

She felt a tremor in the force and her smile quickly disappeared. She could feel that something was wrong with the child. It was becoming more and more frightend by something.

"Something is wrong..." She said quietly. "We need to leave now. I sense that something is happening that is causing the child great fear."



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I would welcome his help. I think he's been wanting to talk to me since he was brought out of cryosleep but hasn't had the opportunity.

Tavaryn made a slight noise at the back of his throat and sent back, I think it is more along the lines about you and me. I may appear oblivious at times but I still pay attention. He gave a slight smile at her to show that he wasn't upset. It was something that would have to be dealt with.

Out loud he said, "I suggest that the team leave to rescue the girl now. I am sure that Jun-la could get them there and back in the Ebon Hawk."

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I think it is more along the lines about you and me. I may appear oblivious at times but I still pay attention.

Alriana looked over at him and a slight smile appeared on her face. You think that he may be upset that you and I are together? She sent through the link.

"I suggest that the team leave to rescue the girl now. I am sure that Jun-la could get them there and back in the Ebon Hawk."

"Xandros, this is Jedi Alriana. Please report to the starboard hanger bay. We're going on a mission and we could use your help." Alriana sent as she headed for the door.

Xandros's voice answered back. "On my way. I'll be in the hanger bay in a few minutes."

Alriana then sent a message to Jun-la via the comnlink. "Lady Jun-la, this is Alriana. We're about to go out on a mission and we're wondering if you would like to come along."

She then turned to look at Kavrik and then at Tavaryn. "Kavrik, if we end up taking the Ebon Hawk do you think you could bring your ship along as backup in case we run into trouble? I'd rather be safe then sorry and something is really scaring this child."
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Kavrik nodded. "Shouldn't be a problem. Freedom's AI would get a bit cross with me if I left her behind, anyhow." Chuckling, he added, "And trust me when I say that's not a pleasant experience. Freedom may look a bit old and beat up, but she was built as a predator and Lys can handle her with remarkable skill."

He glanced down at the empty hyper-caf container, suddenly remembering one of the reasons drinking the energy drink in public wasn't one of his better options. It had the tendency to make him ramble. Seeking to hurry things along, he got to his feet.

"Anywhoo," he said, "if this Ebon Hawk is cramped quarters, people can tag along with me too. Freedom's got room for six more to fly in comfort." He chuckled. "Eighteen if twelve don't mind their quarters not having doors."


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"Then it's a good thing there aren't nearly that many of us." Kalla commented. "And if the Ebon Hawk's not an option, my father and Operative Dourden left the Silver Eagle ready to go, and they won't mind if I use it, especially not for something like this." She then suggested. "They're matched for speed, and the Eagle's a bit more spacious."

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As Valek heard them talk amongst themselves on what ship to use, as well as some 'child', Garja told him that he could head to deck 7 - section 32 to get his armor repaired.

"If you need me, I'll either be in my quarters, or at the armorsmith's.", he said to Xeran.

He said a quick "Thanks." to Garja, and strutted towards the elevator to ask a fellow crewmember where the crew quarters were. He took him to the crew deck, and Valek left him in the elevator. He found a long hallway, with adjacent doors on both walls, perfectly symmetrical. He walked into one room, and saw a woman getting changed. He quickly turned around and locked the door, walking swiftly down the corridor. He went inside another room, and found it empty. He made it his own, and used his lightsaber to carve a small 'V' near the access panel on the door.

He threw his weapons into a plasteel cylinder at the corner of the room, and took off his armor, placing it onto a workbench. Obviously, he still wore his jumpsuit, but there was a tear near his right shoulder. He shrugged it off, and focused himself at the armor. The right shoulder guard could be easily refitted on, but the mechanism that connects it to the mesh had been melted. He needed another one. The main plate of armor on the lower chest area of the armor mesh had been split, and there was a missing plate of metal and mesh near the leg area. It was obviously the place where his tibia was fractured by the vibro-ax.

He then looked at the helmet, and noticed that the only area damaged was the fractured black visor. He noticed that it offered less that 45% visibility, and promptly ripped it from the helmet, completely unusable. He had to repair his armor before he had to go to Dagobah, so he made a list of the armor components onto his datapad:

1.) Right shoulder connector mechanism
2.) Sheet of durasteel (for chest)
3.) Leg mesh
4.) Sheet of durasteel (for leg)
5.) Black Visor
6.) Right wrist bracer

He then strutted down to the elevator, and went to deck 7 - section 32. He saw the quartermaster leaning on the wall perpendicular to Valek, so he walked towards him.

"Looks like your armor needs some fixin'." , the quartermaster said, as he saw Valek approach him.

"Yes, and I'm heading on a mission in a few. Think you could get the armor repaired?", asked Valek.

"Well, I could, but there's a price.", said the quartermaster, holding out his hand.

Valek stood, knowing he had no credits on him, and simply stared at the man.

"But,", the quartermaster said with a grin, "since you're a soldier, and an ex-Jedi at that, you'll get your armor repaired for free."

How did he...?, Valek thought to himself. It doesn't matter, he needs his armor done as quickly as possible.

"Sure, fine. go for it. I'll be back in a few minutes.", Valek replied.

He handed the man the armor and the datapad, and entered the elevator to head to his quarters.



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You think that he may be upset that you and I are together?

Tavaryn gave a wry grin and sent back, Of that I have no doubt. He would eventually talk to Xandros but right now it seemed better that he talk tot he person that he had the most contact with. It seemed only fair since he was just but what a boy then.

He turned to Kavrik and said, "I wouldn't go saying bad things about the Ebon Hawk. It's pretty much the pride and joy of the family even if it is on the side of being a scrap pile."

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Jun-la was busy seeing to Kaillian's needs when her comm went off. Now that the danger was lessened, they could come out of hiding.

Lady Jun-la, this is Alriana. We're about to go out on a mission and we're wondering if you would like to come along.

Jun-la looked at Matton who gave a nod. It would be hard being away from Kaillian but it seemed that Alriana needed her even if the message didn't really imply that.

"Alri need Mama," Kaillian said. She held Belina's medal in her fist as she looked up at her parents. "Will ease Tavy's mind."

Jun-la couldn't help but smile at her daughter's perceptiveness. She replied, "lright. I'll meet you at the ship."

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Overhearing the conversation between Alriana and Jun-la over the comm, Kalla asked Alriana, "I take it you met Kaillian last night? She seemed like a pretty nice kid the last time Tonatius and I saw her."

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Of that I have no doubt

I'll have a talk with him about it. She sent back. I think I may know the reason he's upset and if I'm right about it he may understand.

"lright. I'll meet you at the ship."

Alriana turned to look at Tavaryn and then at Belina. "Xandros said that he would might us in the hanger and it looks like like Lady Jun-la is coming along as well. We'll try and make it to dagobah as soon as we're done."

"I take it you met Kaillian last night? She seemed like a pretty nice kid the last time Tonatius and I saw her."

Alriana smiled as she looked over at Belina and once again noticed the missing medal. "I thought she was sweet. And she seems to have the ability to get the Admiral here to give her her medals."

Belina looked down for a moment and muttered something about what she would have done if she was in the situation.

Alriana took a last look at Tavaryn. Be safe. She sent through the link as she turned towards the others accompanying her on the mission. "Is everyone ready?"
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I think I may know the reason he's upset and if I'm right about it he may understand.

Tavaryn gave a slight nod. I have no doubt moi chroi. I'll be as careful as I can be but you know me. He couldn't help but add, And you watch out for yourself. There's two of you to think about.

Tavaryn then turned to the Admiral who was muttering about something and noticed she was embarrassed. He replied, "Don't worry Admiral, you know the entertainment will fall back on me and the viper. Now what are your orders?"

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"I wouldn't go saying bad things about the Ebon Hawk. It's pretty much the pride and joy of the family even if it is on the side of being a scrap pile."

Kavrik froze, his mind racing. What had he said? Had he somehow managed to insult their ship? He forced his thought process to slow down, reviewing everything he'd said. Breathing a small sigh of relief, he finished his review and found nothing. His comments had done nothing more than suggest he was ignorant of this Ebon Hawk's size. Perhaps Tavaryn was simply being overprotective of what he himself had called a family treasure.

"Wouldn't dream of it," he reassured the other man.

"Is everyone ready?"

Kavrik nodded. "All set." He rose to go, then turned back, doing a little quick figuring. "So that's five people, if I've counted right. Anyone coming with me aboard the Freedom? I don't want to jet off without someone, y'know." He grinned. "Not a good way to make friends, or so I hear."


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