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Old 10-30-2002, 06:14 PM   #1
Isis Kaldara
 
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"Broken"

(Okay, people, this is a song I wrote for my new band. There's a dialogue first and everything in *'s is notes as to what the music and sounds are like. ^^ Thankies for taking the time and reading my song.)

Broken

*Enter Child's Music Box*
{Dialogue}

I never wanted to grow up. I guess I was scared to know so much. But it's different now. I'm different. They can't deal, they can't deal. I'm not gonna be pushed around anymore. I'm gonna show 'em who they're messin' with. I'm gonna show 'em who...I...am.

*Hinges creak as the music box closes and 3 deep careful breaths are heard.*
*Enter all band loud for intro, backing off to a quiet background for Verse 1.*
{Verse 1}

What's been goin' on?
Can you tell me what you see?
What is through the mirror?
What is through your eyes reflecting?

*Bring in louder, raising dynamics.*
{Lead to Chorus 1}

How I've changed.
How things are.
You can't see...

*Enter loudly, fully blown dynamics.*
{Chorus}

See the changes.
Change in the image.
The image of myself in my old life's mirror.
The mirror's broken.
But not broken hearted.
Heart of my rose left to wilt in the fire...
Fire of this world.

*Fade band to background again for Verse 2.*{Verse 2}

Can't you see this world?
See it for the hell it is?
There is no heaven here.
At least not one for me.

*Bring in again louder, raising dynamics.*{Lead to Chorus 2}

I'm alone.
But that's okay.
Don't cry! Just see...

*Fully blown dynamics, all band brought in loud again.*
{Chorus 2 (Repeat Chorus 1)}

*Change key, make softer, but still louder than Leads.*
{Bridge}

This world is real.
Reality sucks.
Just like the old me.
That old life's SO USE-LESS!

*Bring in loud again and, if possible, make louder as Choruses go.*
{Chorus x2}

*Immediate end to music. Small laughs can be heard. Cut track finally.*

Copyright 2002 Danielle Nicole Weisgerber

(I have a music video in mind and everything. Please tell me what you think. And don't think twice about being critical... I'm always looking for new opinions.)


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