I kinda deleted your e-mail so I can't reply through it. I'll post my comments here instead.
Wow, I was amazed by your play! The way you wrote the characters was excellent, Mr. Fandango really reminded me of Manny. And Conchita... She was my favourite. The Roman Police was fun as well, you have really gone through the trouble of developing the Land of the Dead.
And I have to say that the small mention of Hitler's Konditerei was hilarious!