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Old 12-23-2004, 04:40 AM   #1
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Rise of the Federation

Rise of the Federation

For many years, people thought that the
Trade Federation no longer exists. Others have
heard rumors that the Federation still exists.
In reality, those rumors are true. On Roventa, a
planet not far from Corusant, many Trade Federation
factories are well hidden from the New Republic
and from the Galaxy's view. Both the New Republic and
the Jedi Academy have agreed to send out people
to investigate whether or not the Trade Federation
really exist........


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In the Jedi Temple on Yavin 4, Zan-Cool Corizen trains himself with a training drone in one of the various rooms found in the temple. Using the light saber in which he created when he became a Jedi Knight, Zan-Cool deflected the multiple shots fired by the drone. One of the shots that were deflected hits the drone and caused it to explode.

Meanwhile, far away from the temple, in one of the vast jungles on Roventa, Darth NeoVenom and his apprentice, Darth Chaos, are in one of the many Trade Federation factories that are recently built. They watched out a window in one of the control centers that lead to a room where various mechanical arms are building droids. "Progress is very good. In no time we will have an army capable enough to beat the New Republic and Jedi ." said a Neimoidian calmly. Darth NeoVenom spoke in a cold voice, "Good..."



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Old 12-23-2004, 07:35 AM   #2
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Rustic was meditating at the top of one of the massassi temples, he enjoyed it up there, the cool breeze, a view of forest and rivers that went on for miles in all directions. Rustic decided to go back down, he started his long decent to where the jedi Academy was.

after a few minutes he was at the bottom, he walked thorugh greeting padawans, masters and other jedi knights as he went. Rustic walked to the training room only to see Zan-Cool training and hit one fo the drones causing it to explode.
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Alyssa Renolin Solo sat quietly in a tree in the forest. She was close enough to hear some of the activity happening at the Jedi academy, but far enough away to be unseen. Much of what she heard were startled cries and a low, rumbling growl. Finally, she heard her name.

"Alyssa!"

She ignored the call, remaining in her high perch. The call came again, followed by another voice.

"Get it off me!"

"Alyssa!"

Alyssa blocked the sounds as best she could, relaxing in the shade of the tree. She knew that eventually she'd have to do something.

"Alyssa, where are you?!"

With a small sigh, Alyssa let forth a shrill whistle. There was a moment of silence before the second voice called out to her again.

"Thank you!"


"Sure, whatever," she muttered, never moving from her spot in the tree.


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Old 12-23-2004, 10:12 AM   #4
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Zamar yawned while watching a jedi sparring fight. They all thought they were so good.
He sensed how his old master walked up to him, but didn't start a conversation.
"Why did you bring me here?"
Zamar hated these conversations, his old master were the only one who managed to reach beyond Zamar's protective layers and stir him inside.
"Its been a year since you last came, I thought you would like to see me again."
"Do you ever grow tired of trying to convert me?"
"Well, you seem less depressed nowadays Zamar, and less weary."
"The last year has been easy on me."
Chuckling, before the master continued.
"You mean you haven't spoken to anyone in the last months?"
"Yes"
His master knew more about Zamar than himself. Always showing his supreme knowledge.
"And you know what I'm going to ask you?"
"I'm not coming back." Zamar hesitated before adding;"Master".
"At least you still have your manners... But, please, reconsider. You need to be healed, and we both know that time won't heal you."
Zamar grumbled. His master knew how he hated to be reminded of time.
"I have plenty of time..."
"I know Zamar.... Your curse has given you more time than any other human, but use it to become a jedi. Only there can you find peace. And when you found peace, you can help create a galaxy. A galaxy without things such as Project L."
Zamar turned around and without thinking, sent out a wave of force, sending his master into the wall behind him. The man was knocked unconcious.
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Old 12-23-2004, 11:52 AM   #5
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Zan-Cool deactivates his lightsaber. "I'm doing alright, losing a bit of concentration though." Pacing back and forth in the training room, Zan-Cool continues to speak to Rustic, "It feel as if something is wrong, but nevermind. Anyways....have you heard those rumors about the Trade Federation existing?" Zan-Cool looked out of the doorway that Rustic was in and noticed some commotion happening in the temple's hallway. "Wonder what is happening?" he asked Rustic.



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"no, haven't heard those rumors, and i have no clue what is happening, lets check it out." Rustic walked out into the hallway to see a jedi surrounded by padawans and apprentices with activated lightsabers.
"deactivate your sabers, what do you think you are doing?!" Rustic said then directed his attention to the jedi and walked up to him.
"hello, i am Rustic, what happened here?" Rustic said as he took notice of the jedi master.


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Zamar turned to Rustic and nodded at him.
"He....fueled my anger."
The old master woke up, and used the Force to rid himself of the head-ache.
"Bah, fueled your anger? I merely tested your Force-Capability... Wasn't prepared it had grown Zamar..."
Zamar shook his head and turned to the master.
"I told you, I'm no jedi, and I will never be one."
He turned to Rustic.
"Where is the dining room? I'm hungry and the least you jedi could do is to lead me there."
He felt his anger, and felt sorry in his heart for insulting this jedi.


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Old 12-23-2004, 04:13 PM   #8
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Before Rustic could speak, Zan-Cool walked out of the training room and continued to walk towards the Jedi Master that was kneeling before him. Zan-Cool spoke out to Zamar, "Fuel your anger? People who are Force sensitive and who are fueled by anger are usually Sith. If you're no Jedi, then what brings you to a Jedi Temple?" Various Jedi Padawans help the Jedi Master up to his feet.



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Zamar turned to the newcomer, tired of all this talking.
"That's the problem with your kind, there can only be this and that, black and white. What about grey? What about the ones that are and at the same time, are not?"
Before the jedi could answer, Zamar went on.
"All these rules, and I can answer your question why Im here easily."
Zamar pointed at the Jedi master and added: "He brought me here."


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Alyssa left her tree and went back toward the academy. As she went, she passed a bush in which there was a low growling sound. Alyssa smiled and said, "Come on, Cat."

The creature obeyed and came out of the bush to follow her. It was a full grown tiger that Alyssa had tamed during her first year of Jedi training. Though it was not friendly toward many of the other Jedi, Alyssa had given it strict orders not to harm anyone.

As they entered the academy, Cat began to growl. Other Jedi and their students backed out of the way, fearful of Cat.

"Quiet," Alyssa ordered. The growling stopped and they came to a single Jedi surrounded by others.

"Anyone care to explain?" she demanded.


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Old 12-25-2004, 08:09 AM   #12
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Zan-Cool turned to where Alyssa was at and just ignored what Zamar said to him. Before Zan-Cool could reply to Alyssa, a Jedi Master walked into the little commotion that was happening in the hallway they are in. "Master Luke has told me and several other Jedi Masters to notify everyone to proceed to the great hall." Zan-Cool gave a quick glance between Alyssa and Rustic.



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Zamar saw how he was ignored, and could finally turn his attention to the old master. No words, just a nod said he was forgiven.
"What is this all about?"
The old master shrugged.
"I was busy trying to stop you from being such a stubborn baby."
Zamar nodded in response. He had talked and been angry for a month. He hated to speak, everyone always tried to understand him if he did.
"Well, it's probably all jedi anyway. Too fancy to allow regular tailors into their meetings."
His old master sighed, before asking the master if he wouldn't mind his padawan to come with him, and promised he wouldn't talk and squeal throughout the meeting.
Zamar simply waited, his old master would just call him back using the Force if he left.


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"i shall proceed the great hall at once." Rustic turned to Zamar.
"oh and the dinning hall is down the hall and to the left." Rustic said then turned and walked to the Great hall.


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Alyssa stared questioningly at Zamar before turning and heading for the Great Hall. Cat remained behind, growling softly at Zamar until Alyssa turned back.

"Cat!" she yelled. "Get over here!"

Cat growled one last time at Zamar before obeying Alyssa. Then, Alyssa turned and continued to the Great Hall.


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Rustic came in and went down to the middle of the great hall and sat at the edge of one of the rows. Rustic looked to his right across the aisle to see a female jedi smiling at him, she winked, and rustic flushed and turned his face to hide it then turned back and gave her a wave.


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Zan-Cool walked thru the corridors which led to the Great Hall in the Jedi Temple. Once walking thru the doorway, he could see Jedi chattering amongst themselves in whispers. Looking to the front of the Hall, Zan-Cool saw Luke Skywalker looking out the Hall's window with his hands crossed behind his back. Zan-Cool walked to the center of the room as Luke began to talk.

"As all of you know, I have some very important news. The New Republic has notified me that they have seen a couple of droids on Coruscant, but they are not just any droids..." He passed for a couple of seconds and continued to speak. "They are battle droids." Luke could hear the whispers of surprise from majority of Jedi in the Great Hall. He raised his hand to signify everyone who is talking to quiet down and continued to speak, "To clarify this, I'm asking some of you to investigate on Coruscant and notify me if this news is actually true or not. Whoever decides to volunteer, please meet me up at the hanger. Everyone's dismissed."

Luke turned to the window to look out once more as many Jedi in the Great Hall left. Zan-Cool exited the room himself and stood in the corridor for a couple of seconds.



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Rustic joined Zan-Cool in the corridor.
"wanna go? it'll be just like old times eh? heh heh"


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Zan-Cool looked at Rustic and smirked, "Yeah. I've been waiting to do something. You think a lot of people are going to volunteer?" Zan-Cool looked around to see if anyone heard what he said.



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"i think the new padwans might, probably some apprentices will show up but will most likely be held back by thier masters, lets head over now" Rustic said then started walking to the hanger.


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Alyssa left the Great Hall without a word and headed for the hangar. At first, Cat followed her, but she stopped and turned to him.

"No, Cat," she said softly. "You shouldn't come along this time. We're not hunting in a forest with trees. The forest is made of buildings and intelligent creatures will shoot you on sight. No, you'd best stay here."

Cat growled, a mounful sound of disappointment at being left behind. He turned and went toward Alyssa's quarters.

"You know how to get in," she called after him. He paused. "Then again, you may want to spend your time in the forests... take your pick."

With a low growl, Cat continued toward Alyssa's quarters. With a small sigh, Alyssa continued toward the hangar.


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Zamar, having been dragged off to the Great Hall in company with his old master, now sat on the ground, in the hangar, next to the old man.
"No, I'm looking for a ride back to Corouscant. And I'm gonna ask that Luke to make you stop dragging me over here."
"Fine, be that way Zam, but I don't think you can convince Skywalker to make me stop trying to "convert" you."
Zamar sighed, and blocked out the mans voice, waiting for the famous jedi to reach the hangar.


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Rustic walked in and saw some people suiting up, engineers readying the ship. Rustic breathed in a big breath and shotued.
"it's a beautiful day, the air is fresh, the grass is green and the tension is now broken!" Rustic said with a smile. everyone chuckled then continiued on wih what they were doing, Rustic then walked off toward Luke.
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"Me, of course…” said Zan-Cool behind Rustic. Zan-Cool glanced around the hanger and spotted Alyssa, Zamar and his master, and about five more people. "It seems like not that many people want to go to Coruscant." Zan-Cool said to Rustic. Luke Skywalker overheard what Zan-Cool just said as he walked into the Temple's hanger and spoke to Zan-Cool. "That can be to your advantage. The lesser the group, the more conceal you are to enemies."

Luke walked to the center of the hanger. "Alright, seems like all who are participating are here. I suggest that all of you head over to Coruscant now, this way...once you reach there, you would be able to have some rest. The people who own their own ships can ride their ships to Coruscant. Those of you who don't own a ship can borrow one of the temple's ships. Notify me thru commlink if anything comes up and be sure not to resort to violence when you're on Coruscant. You don't want to attract attention. Remember, you're going on an investigation, so be sure to ask questions without being suspicious."

After Luke finished talking, Zan-Cool heads over to his X-Wing. His R2 unit was already mounted on top of the X-Wing. It whistled as he approached. "Good morning XR. Ready to go to Coruscant?" It hummed and whistled again in reply. "That a boy." replied Zan-Cool.



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"alrighty.." Rustic said as he headed over to his ship, The Invigorator (http://www.traipse.com/space_ship/ship.1.jpg)
Rustic powered up his ship and activated the ship's AI.
"good Afternoon sarah."
"hello Rustic" The Ship said in a somewhat electronic femal voice.
"plot a course for Coruscant."
"it is done."
"alright, lets go, engaging Hyperdrive, now"


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Alyssa walked slowly to the little ship she called her own. She loved it for a number of reasons. First, though it had gone through major repairs, it was still a piece of nearly ancient history. It had been built more than 2000 years earlier. Even through all its repairs, it still looked the same as it had then, though it was greatly improved. No droid joined her in it.

"Power on," she announced, slipping into the cockpit. The ship came to life and Alyssa's hands took the controls. "Here we go."

The little ship, more of a fighter really, headed out of the hangar and up into space.

"Coruscant," Alyssa whispered, punching the coordinates into the computer. "Engage."

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Zamar sighed, and saw how everyone made their way to their ships, before boosting into hyperspace.
Rich jedi's, with their own ships.
He never flew, since he couldn't
His old master patted him on the shoulder before pointing towards a small cargo-ship.
"Still not able to steer a ship Zam?"
Zamar grunted and followed the old master into the ship, and soon found it blasting into hyperspace.


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Seeing everyone blasting into hyperspace, Zan-Cool's X-Wing did that same thing. Moments later, all the ships found themselves cruising above Coruscant. All of them can see various lights of vehicles speeding in every single direction. "Home sweet home…” said Zan-Cool as he looked upon the planet. "Everyone check in..." he said thru his helmet. Moments later the five other people say "check..." and waits for Rustic, Alyssa, and Zamar and his master to check in.

Meanwhile, back at the factory, Darth NeoVenom walked thru the many halls found in the building. Many Battle Droids and Super Battle Droids patrolled around the factory, making sure there aren't any intruders inside. "Seems like everything is in order." said Darth NeoVenom to his apprentice. Darth Chaos remained in silence, which Darth NeoVenom didn't mind. Darth Chaos was not much of a "speaker" throughout his past, but Darth NeoVenom knows he is dedicated to the Dark Side.



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Zamar looked over the planet.
"So, Mor, you wanna drop me of there?"
His old master looked at him.
"I drove you here, at least stay a while."
Zamar sighed, he knew it was useless.

"This is Mor, I'm here with the immature kid"


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"Rustic here, ready to contact docking authority and land...on your mark of course."


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Back on Roventa Bok the Changling was and has been in the form of Gorp Gundar the Neimodian for a long time. Bok intercepted Darth Neovenom and his apprentice while they walked between two assembly lines in the droid factory.

"Master, I have some good news. The final upgrades have been completed on the new droidekas. Also...," He looked hesitantly at Darth Chaos and continued,"I have some important business to attend to on Coruscant. With that he turned and left and as he passed he noticed the new blasters being given to the battle droids.


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Outside the rim of Coruscant, Zan-Cool spoke thru the X-Wings commlink. A crackling noise can be heard on everyone's ship followed by Zan-Cool's voice. "Alright...Rustic, can you notify the authority of the hanger? I suggest that everyone just hover where you are. We don't any trouble now. Once everything is good to go. We'll land on Coruscant."



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"sure thing Zan" Rustic said thne opened a channel to the docking authority.
"The Invigorator to Coruscant dock authrotiy do you read?"
"loud and clear, you know what to do Rustic."
"i sure do, there is me and 5 other ships in my party, cargo is just sentient beings, just doing a little investigation."
"thanks, your clear to land at bay 130975."
"no thank you." Rustic said then shut off the channel and spoke to the rest.
"yeah, i got connections everywhere." Rustic smiled even though he knew no one could see it "we are assigned to bay 130975, follow me." Rustic said then swooped down to where the bay was situated.


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"Sorry I'm a little late," she said. "Just a little problem I had to take care of."


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"It's alright" said Zan-Cool to Alyssa. "Alright...Rustic, lead the way since you're more familiar with Coruscant than all of us." While he wait for Rustic to lead the way, Zan-Cool spoke to XR, "Seems a bit to easy, doesn't it XR?" XR beeped and hummed in reply.



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"Oh, it has been too long," Alyssa muttered, more to herself than to the others. "I haven't been here since..."

She was thinking of the death of her family and subsequent adoption and was so lost in thought, she bumped into somebody coming the other way.

"I'm terribly sorry," she began. The other person laughed softly.

"I may be three inches shorter than you, but you should still know when you see the one who trained you, even if it's just the top of her head!"

"Riebe!" Alyssa exclaimed. Riebe looked up into Alyssa's eyes and smiled.

"I have a confession to make, former apprentice," she said. Alyssa looked at her, questions written across her face. Riebe grinned as she continued, "I put myself in your path on purpose after noticing that you weren't paying attention."

"Just like you!" Alyssa scolded, laughing. Then, turning to the others, she said, "Everybody, you may or may not have met this woman, but you have no doubt heard of her. This is the legend, Riebe Sothe, my former master."

"Oh, nonsense," Riebe sputtered. "There's nothing legendary about me!"

"Nonsense yourself!" Alyssa retorted, turning back to her. "You deserve every word of praise given to you... but what are you doing here?"

"Oh!" Riebe exclaimed. "Didn't Skywalker tell you? Goodness! I told him to... I wonder what made him keep it from you. I've been here since I left you... looking for my past."

"Ah, yes," Alyssa nodded. "The time before the disruption, right?"

"Yes," Riebe agreed. "Before the disruption... but you treat it as if it wasn't something very great at all!"

"How could I, who have little knowledge of it do it proper justice?" Alyssa demanded. "We don't even know when it was!"

"Why it was..." Riebe began. Then, she frowned. "Well never mind that. What are you here for?"

"Droids," Alyssa answered. "Battle droids."

"I have seen a few since I've been here," Riebe said, nodding. "I must admit, when I'm trying to search for my past, they are quite distracting. Perhaps I'll join you in whatever you're planning."

"Surveillance," Alyssa said. "We're just here to find out what the droids are here for."

"I wonder how long that investigation will take," Riebe muttered, turning to walk with the others.


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"We don't know. Are you pretty sure those droids you saw were Battle Droids?" Zan-Cool asked Riebe. Zan-Cool doesn't remember much of when he was on Corsucant, since he was send to Yavin 4 at a very young age. Looking above, he saw many crafts speeding in every direction. "Same old Coruscant...busy as usual." he said to XR while he waited for Riebe's reply.



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"I know a battle droid when I see one," she said, her voice almost devoid of emotion. What emotion was there sounded like a mixture of pain, fearlessness, and anger. "Believe me, I know."


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"yeah i know thisis agaisnt orders and training, but i gotta look alone, i get better results that way, please don't follow me, if mycontacts see me witha group, they won't even acknowledge me, for the good of the mission, i go alone." and withthat Rustic turned aroundand walked to a turbolift to go down to some of the lower levels.

Rusticreached the level he wanted level 136, the best one there is rustic thought to himself and chuckled, he hid his lightsaber and walked inot the nearest cantina, he saw an old 'friend' at the other end. Rustic walked over to him and sat down.
"hey, i need information."
"well seeing as you left me with one hand the last time i was with you, i don't think i'll give you any."
"hey! it wasn't myfault, i was trying to get you out of the factory so i-"
"you programed the thing to cut my hand off"
"thats not what i tried to do and besides, your new hand worksbetter for business than your old one eh?"
"heh, yeah but, ah forget it i''ll give you your information."
So rustic proceeded to tell him about the situation.
"now why would you be askingabout that? don't answer that, as you know, i knowa guy that can get you up close and personal with the droids, and yes they do exist, its notlikethey are secretive about being here, anywho, i'll hook you up with my friend, meet me at level 105 at the Jed carr Cantina in 3 days, see ya." with that the contact left the cantina, Rustic walked up to the bar and ordered some corriellian ale.


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Zan-Cool was about to say something to Rustic but decided not to. He spoke out to Zamar and his master, Alyssa, Riebe, and the five other Jedi, "I guess we should investigate now. It's better if we split up into two groups, this way we can get more information quickly."

The five Jedi decided to travel with each other and exited the hanger from the left. Putting on his robe's hood, Zan-Cool spoke out once more, "My suggestion is to head over to a local cantina. There's bond to be someone that knows something about the Trade Federation existing or not."



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