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Old 04-08-2005, 09:08 PM   #1
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Alternate Star Wars Universe: Maintenance Thread

This thread is for information on the ongoing serese: Alternate Star Wars Universe, which is soon to commence.

In here you will find all the info you need to create a character and all the rules on how to play.

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Do not RP in this thread, this is not for RPing this is a resource/maintenance thread.

First off just a description of what I hope to do with this seriese.


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Alternate Star Wars Universe, is a complete remake of the Star Wars Galaxy. Begining at the form of the first Galactic Republic and Jedi Order, some 25,000 years before the Battle of Yevon.

The main plot of the serese will follow along the basic timeline of Star Wars, and every player will have the opportunity to influence the progression of this plot. However, participating in the main plot is not even neccessary, it will go on no matter what you do. Every player can do whatever he wants with his own sub-plots which may slip in and out of influence with the main plot or be completely seperate. Even after the Main plot has ended, sub-plots may continue out to their completion or be carried over into the next story.

You control one character, created from scratch and seeking a role in the galaxy. Earn points to upgrade your character by training and completing tasks. When that character dies, begin anew with a completely unique new character and choose a different path to explore.

Become a Jedi Master by training from a padwan and completing the Jedi trials, take on a padwan of your own and teach him the ways of the force.

Join the military of any number of worlds, or the Republic, and train to become a top General gaining many victories in combat and become a renown figure in history.

Part from the teaching's of the Jedi and choose a darker path, discover the Sith and learn what power the Dark side wields. Slaughter entire worlds leaving them barren wastelands in you're wake. Hunt down the Jedi until they are completely extinct and the Sith Rule the Galaxy unupossed.

Desert the military on some foreign battlefield and become a mercinary, bounty hunter, or assassin, take on jobs to kill whoever has the most money on their head and become the most feared killer for hire in the galaxy until the utter of your name brings more fear than the mention of a Dark Sith Lord.

Glory or Demise will be your path as you influence the galaxy in whatever way you want, a galaxy that carries on with or without you.

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It's like a game, but one that has no limits exept the immagination. Don't worry about lacking writing skills, there is no writing required. Simply actions, speach, and thought. Leave the writing to me.

If you're a padwan I will control you're master, and teach you in the force. You may have a master who teaches you wisely, but you may not agree with him, or you may want to explore the dark side, but be mindful of you're feelings for he can feel them too. Or maybe your master will be a more reckless one, veering to the dark side and bringing you with him. Maybe you will see his errors and abandon his dark ways turning instead to the true path of light. Whatever befalls you you can not control anything except your own actions and the choices you make.

If you're a soldier you may have to go to war and face the horrors of battle where you will become scarred and suffer trauma or severe injury. Perhaps you will become a feirce warrior and lead battalions of your own some day. Or maybe you will desert, become a traitor roaming the galaxy in search of your own desteny.

I will provide a rich environment for you to interact with, you will play the only role you can, your own.

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That's alot for now, gimmie some feedback peeps. I'm still working on tecknical things like the points and attributes and stuff. I want to know what you think, and what you want. So please give me feedback.


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Old 04-08-2005, 10:48 PM   #2
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Some FYI's that you might enjoy and appreciate.

If this is taking place 25,000 years into the past - there are no lightsabers. Lightsabers were first mentioned around 15,000 BBY and they were said to be slow, heavy and clumsy like a claymore.

Maybe you should start it 1,000 years later? 24,000 years BBY? The reason for this would be that the Sith didn't exist 25,000 years before. Not the kind of Sith you are thinking of anyway. Just the insect race. It was a unified order then. The great fissure took place at about 24,500, so starting it at 24,000 would give the Sith some time to set up.

Blasters aren't very effective yet. Plasma and projectile weapons are still in use around the galaxy. Blasters exist, but you can think of them like early gunpowder weapons on earth.

The weapons of a Jedi are of course the Force, and supposedly swords which are endowed with the Force. Sith have energize there own with there hatred.

Also, a note on the Dark Side. The Dark Side isn't a living entity - neither is the Force. The Dark Side is a very personal thing within each person. It represents there lust, hatred, greed, and violent natures. The light side is the same, but it represents that persons good nature.

The Force is a system of living (though like bacteria) energy that courses throughout the galaxy. No one knows what exactly it is at this point though, so yes, you'll see superstition about the nature of the Dark Side and about the Force. It can be bent towards good or evil however. And it will provide insight to skilled users of it.

Warp Drive in that era was far slower. Ships didnít bristle with the hundreds of laser canons they did in the later era. War was mostly about boarding the enemy ship rather than just blowing it up. Ground battles were more troop driven, but they did have some fairly powerful battle droids to do them justice. And they did have some battle tanks. None of the huge walkers however.

Xim the Despot was defeated by the Hutts, the dominant force in the galaxy before the Republic, and the slug aliens still present a threat to the Republic. Thatís all I can think of right now. Sorry if my post annoyed you with my rambling, but I thought you might like to know some of this stuff.
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Question: If we're gonna span the whole galactic history, how will we handle aging or death
2. Will people that become masters eventually be able to take on padawans? It could be a good starting entry for new people.


Vader's wife was very pregnant when she died 19 years ago. All of a sudden a 19 year old who is very strong in the force and has a distinct resembalance to him in his younger days rolls in from Vader's home planet with his old Master Obi-Wan (Who was the ONLY other person preset at the time his wife died. And to boot, the kid's last name is Skywalker.

So in answer to your question, he knew Luke was his son because his name is Darth Vader, and not Darth Retard.


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Old 04-09-2005, 02:51 AM   #4
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Hiroki, I acctually already knew all that, but thanks. Yes this will be taking place when hyperdrives are first invented and everything is low tech. There are no lightsabers yet and no Sith.

I was refering to the futur in my comments about lightsaber's and Sith.

Your post didn't anoy me with ramblings, I appreciate your expression of interest.

Jokemaster, Yes characters will die of old age, you simply make new characters but only play one at a time. Yes you can take on Padwans whe you're a Jedi Knight.

There will be some fastforwarding done in between stories but sub-plots can still continue or take place in between stories.


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Old 04-09-2005, 07:22 AM   #5
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Mando, if you can actually keep up with the story, this will be great...really really ubergreat.


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Old 04-09-2005, 12:12 PM   #6
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All right, one last question, just to make sure I understand the main idea. Basically the main plot is going to be like the official Star Wars history, but our characters can shape it. Like maybe the Mandalorians won the war, maybe someone stopped the empire from obliberating the jedi, etc.


Vader's wife was very pregnant when she died 19 years ago. All of a sudden a 19 year old who is very strong in the force and has a distinct resembalance to him in his younger days rolls in from Vader's home planet with his old Master Obi-Wan (Who was the ONLY other person preset at the time his wife died. And to boot, the kid's last name is Skywalker.

So in answer to your question, he knew Luke was his son because his name is Darth Vader, and not Darth Retard.


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Old 04-09-2005, 04:08 PM   #7
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Jokemaster, you are correct. But it goes even further than that, I may put new events in there or players may start whole new huge wars. Anything can happen.

Well, if there are too many players and I can't keep up with the story I'll ask for help if there's anyone else willing who's a good writer. And I won't be starting it until my other stories have finished, and I won't be joining new stories.

I'll post if I'm going away or something so that everyone doesn't get stuck.

okay well I'll post the character profile.


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*Character Profile*
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Player:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Homeworld:

Personality
Character Traits:
Character Flaws:
Likes:
Dislikes:

Statistics
Looks:
Inteligence:
Wisdom:
Strength:
Speed:
Charisma:
Force Sensativity:

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I'll edit this as I go.

How it would work so far is you fill out the regular information for your name, age, gender, etc... but for your personality you have to list at least six under each catagory they can be anything you can think of. Statistics will be you're given points to dish out between them. The higher your Force Sensativity the more potential you have in the force. If you're Force Sensativity is low then you may never be able to move objects with the force or suffer other lacking abuilities. The higher it is the more powerful you can become.

Let me know if there's anything you'd like to see in the character profile, and what you think of what's already there.

BTW don't make any characters now.


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Old 04-09-2005, 07:13 PM   #8
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Mando, I would gladly help, even though I don't know if my writing skills are that good/original...check out the book Im writing maybe...

EDIT: 6 things for each personality thing seems a bit hard, but it would keep people serious...what about 3-5?


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Old 04-09-2005, 07:41 PM   #9
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Well, my writing sucks so...


Vader's wife was very pregnant when she died 19 years ago. All of a sudden a 19 year old who is very strong in the force and has a distinct resembalance to him in his younger days rolls in from Vader's home planet with his old Master Obi-Wan (Who was the ONLY other person preset at the time his wife died. And to boot, the kid's last name is Skywalker.

So in answer to your question, he knew Luke was his son because his name is Darth Vader, and not Darth Retard.


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Old 04-10-2005, 12:37 AM   #10
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I'm sure everyone can think of 6 things for each catagory. All I'm doing is making sure this isn't going to become a cheap little pointless waste of time that dies in two weeks. I'm a very serious person, so I want the players to make some commitment to the story and work a bit. I'm going to push and make everyone else push because the human body and mind have incredible capabuilities and I won't let that go to waste or be cheapened.

lol, maybe that's a bit deep for here but anyway. If you have difficulty thinking of six things you can enter a couple less and maybe think of things to add later. I would like people to think of even more than six things though, six is the minimum, but I am not going to be a tight arse about it, I'm a reasonable guy and if six is too dificult for some people I'll help them out any way they need. Maybe give them some suggestions to choose from or something.

Alright, the next thing to discuss is training and ways to gain and improve your skills and abuilities.

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*Training*
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Training is a good way to earn skills and abuilities. Training may be done at any time, before, after, in between, or during the main story. When you first create a character he can do training right away and come into the first story with training which will give him skills and abuilities. Repeating the same training again is the fastes way to improve the same skills and abuilities, doing only the begining of training in multiple fields will not be as rewarding as doing more advanced training in the same feild. Training however takes time, but the process can be fast forwarded by doing at fast forward points in the story.

For example at the begining of the story you can start in the military with Level one military training. At that time you may choose to leave or stay in the military, continuing or abandoning your training. If you stay you will be in the military through the story, but you may leave at any time. You will only gain your next level in military training if you stay until it's complete, there are no half levels. Every fast forward point that you remain in training gains you another level. Some times more than one fast forward point may take place in a row.

Sometimes I may make a thread based solely on Sub-plots, with no main plot if there are many sub-plots taking place in between fast forward points that have no main plot.

To make scanning threads for your plot or sub-plot every post has the title of the plot or sub-plot in between a row of = signs.

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*Title: Example*
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If there are any questions about training please ask me. Any suggestions or helpful critizism are welcome.


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Old 04-10-2005, 12:56 AM   #11
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Okay, Mandy........you're probably starting to scare the others. I'm not scared, I've been posting in this forum almost every day for three years. Except when I go on vacation, have surgery, or during final exam crunch time.

Couple of questions:
1. How will you decide what type of master each guy that becomes jedi gets? Will it be random, will you decide according to the profile or what? If you want to keep it secret, feel free, I'm just wondering.
2. Will you include specialization training? Like maybe once you become a soldier you can become a sniper, etc.
3. How will you handle piloting? Will there be seperate training for that, or will it just be a part of all training, since jedi and soldiers are probably trained to fly
4. Will there be any side-skills, and how will these be handled? Stuff like negotiating, Hacking, etc.


Vader's wife was very pregnant when she died 19 years ago. All of a sudden a 19 year old who is very strong in the force and has a distinct resembalance to him in his younger days rolls in from Vader's home planet with his old Master Obi-Wan (Who was the ONLY other person preset at the time his wife died. And to boot, the kid's last name is Skywalker.

So in answer to your question, he knew Luke was his son because his name is Darth Vader, and not Darth Retard.


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Old 04-10-2005, 01:43 AM   #12
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Jokemaster,

1: I will sometimes randomly come up with a master for players but usually make them compatible to the player's character's personality. In fact we may make a short back ground story to how they became padwan of that jedi. I will make up the personality of the Jedi Master training the padwan (or when you become a master and want a padwan I'll make up a padwan for you) and what they teach you about the force. You may get a slightly darker master who leans towards the dark side, or you may get a very wise master who completely understands the force, you may get a foolish or stupid master who misteaches you. Just as life seems random yet guided.

2: Yes I will include specialized training.

3: Piloting will be seperate training, regular soldiers are not trained to fly, neither are most jedi. Jedi have trained Republic pilots fly them on missions in Jedi starships. (Remember in ep.1 when Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan were flown in by pilots on a Jedi Starship?) Jedi may learn to fly on their own or even take a corse provided by the Jedi on how to fly, and fly their own Jedi Starfighters. (like Obi-Wan in ep.2)

4: Things like Negotiating and Hacking are not going to be as common as they are in most stories. Simply because in acctual life Negotiating and Hacking are not that common. But you may still learn them in more advanced training like special forces or Republic investigators or from underground syndicates or whatever. If you want to learn to hack or Negotiate, I'll provide you with a scenario that enables that. Whatever you want to do request a sub-plot and it will be done. Like I said, no one has to participate in the main story, everyone can be on sub-plots or side quests and make an appearence in the main plot whenever they want or even never.

The thing is though that I want to do so much but I only have so much time and two hands. If it becomes too much I'll ask for help.


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while all this is being discussed, when everything is pretty much nailed down I'll post it in a more organised manner for new people joining to be more able to find and read all they need without filtering through everything.

For now here's an updated character sheet.


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*Character Sheet*
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Identity
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Race:
Homeworld:

Personality
Character Traits:
Character Flaws:
Likes:
Dislikes:

Stats
Looks:
Intelligence:
Wisdom:
Strength:
Speed:
Charisma:
Fortitude:
Dexterity:
Willpower:
Force Sensativity:

Skills
Weapons:
Fighting Styles:
Vehicular:
Force:
Diplomatic:
Other:

Training

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I decided not to do a point system with the stats where everyone is given a number of points to put into their stats. Rather everyone chooses a 1-5 setting for each stat however the want. I just ask that you be fair, no one is perfect so I don't want to see a character sheet with 5 on everything.

on a scale of 1-5: 1/5

Looks: ugly/attractive
Intelligence: stupid/smart
Wisdom: foolish/wise
Strength: weak/strong
Speed: slow/fast
Charisma: crass/charming
Fortitude: weak/enduring
Dexterity: clumsy/skillful
Willpower: weak/determined
Force Sensativity: inept/sensative

for skills, list every skill you have in the proper catagory from highest points to lowest, there is no level cap on skills. Example:

Weapons: sword(5), hand to hand(5), blaster pistol(3), mines(2), grenade(2)
Fighting Styles: Deth'lou(sword)(2), Chow Ish'ko(hand to hand)(2)
Vehicular: Speeder(2), Star Ship(1)
Force: History(6), Knowledge(4), Light(4), Push(2), Pull(2), Speed(1), Stun(1)
Diplomatic: Etiquette(6), communication(5), Negotiation(5), Political Science(4), Planetary Laws(3), alien language(3), Debate(3), perswation(3)
Other: repair(4), comm(4), physical phitness(3), computer(3), star mapping(2)

Skills can get pretty big so I may make new catagories to make it easier to separate them.

training is the last thing I will discuss in this post.

you start with no training, the area beneath the line is blank. When you train you earn things to put there.

List any training, where it was gained, what it trained, and what level it is. Here is an example:

Training
Republic Army - LV.1 Infantry: physical phitness(3), blaster rifle(2), hand to hand(2), military procedures(2), military tactics(2), knife(1), sword(1), blaster pistol(1), grenade(1).


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Old 04-10-2005, 08:38 AM   #14
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*Rules*
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1. No Godmoding
2. No Controlling other characters
3. You may only have one character at a time
4. Try and post every day
5. Edit and Maintain your Character Sheet
6. RP within the limits of your character's stats
7. Your character can and will die
8. You can kill other characters
9. I must aprove of all deaths
10. Request plots do not just make them
11. Post a character sheet before playing
12. Only OOC in this thread unless it's directy related to the current situation in the story.

to elaborate on some of these rules,

Every time you gain stats or learn new skills, or gain more training, edit your character sheet and put it in.

Don't jump a huge cliff if your force jump is level 1. Don't convince a guard to let you pass if you're perswation is 1. Don't defeate a Sith lord if you're a padwan with 2 force sensativity and don't even have a master yet.

For most basic things go ahead and complete the task, if you know you have high enough skills go ahead and post the action that you know I'd aprove of. But if your not sure if level 4 force push is enough to move a huge bolder, ask. Otherwise you'll be editing your post if you know what I mean.

There will be a main plot but everyone should be in sub plots for whatever their character is doing. They will slip in and out of the main plot. Whatever you want to do in your sub plot, let me know in this thread. I will create the sub plot and scenario for you to perform in, I'll create a Jedi Master for you, or your Sergant in the Republic Army. I'll create the war to fight in or the quest to go on.

Always put the title of your plot or sub plot within lines of =.
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*plot*
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So that it's easy to see and find the plot you're in.


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Old 04-11-2005, 12:41 PM   #15
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I'm ready to begin soon.

BTW if anyone knows a good resource on Star Wars planets please share. I need to know as much as I can about as many planets as I can. Things like the climate, events in that planet's history, alein races, culture. Otherwise I'll have to make everything up and might find out later it's different and it'll kind of going to be too late. Please send me some resources if you have them.

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*Getting Started*
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The Alternate Star Wars Universe is a re-creation of the Star Wars Galaxy. From 25,000 years before the battle of Yevon I hope to span the entire Star Wars History and continue into the Future indefinetly. For now, let's just take it one step at a time.

To Join all you need to do is fill out a character sheet, and request a plot. Read as much of this thread as you can but don't feel obliged to read it all now or anything.

Let's go over some things again,

How to play?

You control one character, earning stats and training, and do whatever you want. So far I am the only GM and writer. I will create a main plot centered around the main events of Star Wars and write sub-plots for each character in the story. You just do whatever you want.

You earn training by joining an organization such as the Jedi Order or Republic Military, during plots and at fast forward points you can level up your training to earn and improve skills. Remember to edit your character sheet every time you gain new skills and training.

To make a Plot give it a title,

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*Type of Plot: Title of Plot*
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Include what type of plot it is, Character or Sub-. Every character you make needs a Character Plot, Sub-Plots are extra plots you'd like to make.
Then write a paragraph about the plot that anwers these questions:

What will happen in the plot?
what is my(the player) role in the plot?
who will be directly invovled in the plot?
Who will be affected by the plot?
what other characters may be involved or affected by the plot?

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It can be anything from Jedi training at the Temple, or an investigation mission, a bounty on someones head, a small event on some distant planet, anything you want, it does not have to be related to the main plot.

I will post the main plot tomorow and then you guys can start submiting character sheets and plots.



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Here's a website that has the entire galaxy:

Star Wars Galaxy


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That link doesn't seem to work.

But I don't just want a map of the galaxy or anything. I can always google search for that stuff. I need information on individual planets. And not just the planets from the movies and games and stuff, that stuffs easy to get. Anyone can find plenty of information on Corosant easily. But there are thousands of planets in the star wars galaxy, I need information on as many as I can.


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Well that site had all that info, but I can't get it to come up any more... sorry.


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Try http://www.theforce.net/swenc/

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Well I am going to have to make up planets and make up aliens and all and other players may make up aliens and planets too but let's not go there at least for this first story.

Thanks Redwing, that's exactly what I was looking for.

wikipedia is the site I use the most, if you search for Dates in Star Wars, and it is case sensative, it shows a complete star wars timeline with thorough details on many events, characters, and places. Though I find their planet database to be weak.

I'm also going to edit the info on plots, check that out in 10-15 minutes.

Okay here's the main plot:

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*Central Plot: Dark Side of the Force*
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This plot centers around a young Jedi Padwan named Derrik Nuwest. Eager in becoming a great warrior he persuis his training with dedicated passion. His remarkable talents make him one of the most promissing young Jedi in the Order. Derrik Nuwest is the first Jedi to fall to the Dark side of the force, in a time before the Dark side is known, he is the first.

25,500 BBY, Hyperdrives, the Galactic Republic, and the Jedi Order came to being five hundred years ago. Lightsabers do not exist, blasters are clumsy weapons, and hyperdrives are slow. The galaxy is mostly peaceful with some small wars on distant planets. The galaxy is largely unexplored. Ther Dark side of the force is not yet known.

The plot will mostly affect Jedi who may become Dark Jedi. It will mostly happen on Corrosant but also on some other, more likely remote, planets. Players may be involved in the discovery of the Dark side, they may follow Derrik Newest to the Dark side or oppose him and stand up for what is right. Republic soldiers won't have much if any role, mercinaries may have a very small role, distant worlders may have a small role.

My role as GM (game manager) will be Derrik Newest's discovery of the Dark side of the Force, sharing it with other Jedi.

This plot will set the stage for the first Jedi Civil war between light and dark Jedi.

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You do not have to be so elaborate in making your personal sub plots.

Players may post their character sheets and Character Plots now. Remember to check the update for creating plots in the above post concerning the matter.


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As an exampe, I will post the character sheet and plot of Derrik Newest.

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Player: Mandalorian54
Name: Derrik Newest
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Homeworld: Metellos (core world)

Personality
Character Traits: Handsom, Very intelligent, Strong, Speedy, Charming
Character Flaws: Impatient, Rash, Agressive
Likes: Combat, strength, good looks
Dislikes: slow learning proccesses, weakness, ugly looks

Statistics
Looks: 4
Inteligence: 5
Wisdom: 3
Strength: 4
Speed: 5
Charisma: 5
Fortitude: 5
Dexterity: 5
Willpower: 5
Force Sensativity: 5

Skills
Weapons: Sword(3), Blaster(2), Hand to Hand(2)
Fighting Styles: Lungthyme fighting style(sword)(1)
Vehicular: Speeder(2)
Force: Knowledge of the Force(4), Crafting(3), Senses(3), Reflexes(3), Combat Prowess(3), Force Defense(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Healing(1), Force Power(1),
Diplomatic: Politics(1),
Other: Jedi History(1),

Training
-Jedi Order - Force Sensative Lv.1: Jedi History(1), Knowledge of the Force(1)
-Jedi Order - Jedi Initiate Lv.2: Knowledge of the Force(1), Crafting(1), Senses(1), Reflexes(1), Combat Prowess(1), Sword(1), Blaster Pistol(1), Hand to Hand(1)
-Jedi Order - Jedi Padwan Lv.3: Knowledge of the Force(2), Crafting(2), Senses(2), Reflexes(2), Combat Prowess(2), Force Defense(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Healing(1), Force Power(1), Politics(1), Sword(2), Blaster Pistol(1), Hand to Hand(1), Lungthyme fighting style(sword)(1)
-Jedi Order - Speeder Pilot Lv.1: Speeder(2)

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Lungthyme fighting style is the basic fighting style used by the Jedi Order for sword fighting. Created by the Jedi Master Kellis Lungthyme. (I made it up, it is not an acctual fighting style.)

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*Character Plot: Dark Quest for Power*
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Derrik Newest will be training as a Jedi, he will discover the Dark side of the force and be unallowed to continue his Jedi training. He will gather friends and followers and begin teaching them the Dark side of the Force. The Jedi council will forbit the study of the Dark side of the Force.

Derrik's role is to be the first Jedi to turn to the Dark side.

Derrik, his Master, and his friends are the first to be involved in the plot. Later other Jedi, mostly younger Jedi, will become involved. Most Jedi will be affected by the plot. Some mercinaries and distant worlders may be involved later. Some untrained in the Force who were not recognized by the Jedi Order may train under Derrik and his followers.

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A question before I create my character... It will be a padawan, so how much can I write on training an statistics? Do they have to be blank, or can I be on the same/higher/a bit lower level as derrick in the training?


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You don't make up your own training and skills, your stats can be whatever you want from 1-5.

Request whatever training you want and I'll write it for you to copy and edit into your profile.

If you want to be a Jedi Padwan you may completely copy the same stats and training as Derrik.

Speeder Pilot training is optional, but it is available to all training Jedi 18 years old and up.

Oops, I forgot to add Fortitude, Dexterity, and Will, in Derrik's profile. Well I added them. They arn't in the first character sheet they're only in the second one, make sure you use the second sheet.



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Question: During training he will recieve the force powers and sword weapon training right?

2. How will the levels be applied, i.e. what would be the difference between having a Lvl 1 starship training and a lvl 10?

3. My character begins recently arrived at the academy, so he doesn't have the powers stats

Player: Jokemaster
Name: Weiss Dixon
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Homeworld: Correllia

Personality
Character Traits: Witty, Desicive, Likable, Strong, Brave, Loyal
Character Flaws: Curious, Stubborn, Impatient, Holds grudges, Traumatized, severe emotiaonal problems
Likes: Strength, mysteries, women, adventures
Dislikes: slow proccesses, long trips in hyperspace, getting in trouble, having nothing to do

Statistics
Looks: 4
Inteligence: 5
Wisdom: 4
Strength: 4
Speed: 4
Charisma: 5
Fortitude: 5
Dexterity: 5
Willpower: 5
Force Sensativity: 5

Skills
Weapons: Blaster Pistol(1), Hand to Hand(3)
Vehicular: Speeder Bike (2)
Other: Picklocking (2)

Training
Swoop Bike (2)
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*Character Plot: Masters and Friends*
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Weiss Dixon arrives at the academy for training, having lived most of his life on Corellia, where he had learned to drive speeder bikes and lived mostly as a thief after his parents' death and him being conned out of his inheritance by one of his father's business partners. He was found by a jedi after seven years of living on his own when he tried stealing his lightsaber. He agreed to training and arrived at the academy.

He will be assigned a master, meet Derrik and become friends, but remain at the academy when he is kicked out (yes, I'm leaving it open so maybe Derrik will tempt him later in the story) and finishes his training.
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Vader's wife was very pregnant when she died 19 years ago. All of a sudden a 19 year old who is very strong in the force and has a distinct resembalance to him in his younger days rolls in from Vader's home planet with his old Master Obi-Wan (Who was the ONLY other person preset at the time his wife died. And to boot, the kid's last name is Skywalker.

So in answer to your question, he knew Luke was his son because his name is Darth Vader, and not Darth Retard.


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Most skills won't go up to ten. 1 just means you've learnt the basics and can use it. Every step up is a full level of training.

It also depends on the individual character's Stats. Someone with 5 Force sensative will be better with level 1 Force Power than someone with 3 Force sensative and 3 Force Power. It really depends and it's hard to be technical.

As for the plot, you're not suposed to be writing a history on your character. Write about the future, what you want to do. Your history can come out in the story through conversation with other players or something.

A master that takes you on for trying to steal his lightsaber will have to be merciful and kind. You're master will also be wise and fair teaching you well. If you still fall to the Dark side with Derrik, I'll be surprised. But you'll get plenty of involvement in the main plot and anything can happen.

I would add to your character flaws, emotional problems. The Death of your parents driving such a smart wise kid to life on the streets with poverty and theft...definetly emotional problems. It's going to take a very compasionate master to help such a troubled youth.


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You're right, added it, and he'll have some conflicts between loyalty to the Jedi and loyalty for his friend.


Vader's wife was very pregnant when she died 19 years ago. All of a sudden a 19 year old who is very strong in the force and has a distinct resembalance to him in his younger days rolls in from Vader's home planet with his old Master Obi-Wan (Who was the ONLY other person preset at the time his wife died. And to boot, the kid's last name is Skywalker.

So in answer to your question, he knew Luke was his son because his name is Darth Vader, and not Darth Retard.


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Here is a go at mine. I think he is a pretty unique concept. Wait till you read all to judge. He may seem powerful, but he is easily manipulated.

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*Character Sheet*
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Player: Hiroki
Name: Hassari Trask
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Homeworld: Bakura (Rim World)

Personality
Character Traits: Kind, great strength, fast, fissure in the Force, cute (in personality)
Character Flaws: Impatient, innocent, trusting, naive, congenial brain damage.
Likes: Fighting, playing, funny people, nice people.
Dislikes: Cruelty, mean people, being deceived.

Statistics
Looks: 3
Intelligence: 4(innocent)
Wisdom: 3(naive)
Strength: 5
Speed: 5
Charisma: 5
Fortitude: 5
Dexterity: 4
Willpower: 4
Force Sensitivity: 6(Heresey Child there have been several in Jedi History, though mostly forgotten), fissure in the Force)

Skills
Weapons: Sword(6), Hand to Hand(4), Blaster(3), Specialized Sword(2)
Fighting Styles: Veskasa fighting style(sword)(3), Garik'lah fighting style(sword)(3), Keida-Remus fighting style(specialized sword)(2)
Vehicular: Speeder(1), Star Ship(1)
Force: Knowledge of the Force(2), Combat Prowess(4), Reflexes(4), Senses(4), Force Defence(3), Force Enhancement(3), Force Power(5)
Diplomatic: Politics(2), Negotiation(1)
Other:

Training
-Private Training - age 2-6 Lv.1: Knowledge of the Force(1), Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Sword(1), Hand to Hand(1)
-Private Training - age 7-10 Lv.2: Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Force Defence(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Power(2), Sword(2), Hand to Hand(1), Blaster(1), Veskasa fighting style(sword)(1), Politics(1), Speeder(1)
-Private Training - age 11-14 Lv.3:[i] Knowledge of the Force(1), Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Force Defence(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Power(2), Sword(2), Hand to Hand(1), Blaster(1), Veskasa fighting style(sword)(2), Garik'lah fighting style(sword)(2), Politics(1), Negotiation(1), Star Ship(1)
-Private Training - age 15-18 Lv.4:[i] Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Force Defence(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Power(1), Sword(1), Hand to Hand(1), Blaster(1), Garik'lah fighting style(sword)(1), Keida-Remus fighting style(specialized sword)(2), Specialized sword(2)


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*Character Plot: The innocence of destruction*
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This will take some careful cooperation on your part Mandy. You will need to give him a Master who "disappeared" from the order previously. He won't be trained within the order, but out in the Rim.

His Master preferably wouldn't actually care for Hassari, rather using him for his own gain. He should be a "fallen" Jedi, though not a wielder of Dark Powers, as they haven't been discovered by the Jedi at this point.

Hassari is innocent, and easily manipulated by the clever. Trained for one thing: Fighting, and destruction. When set up right, he will view it as a game which he must "win". Winning can have bad circumstances for many in some cases.

His Master preferably would use his to the highest bitter, exploiting him for his own goals. This also allows you to keep a check on my character, assuming his Master does nothing stupid to piss him off or reveal he is just using him. He sees him like a father, more so than a Padawan does there Master.

It is a very powerful character, but I feel it will add an extra demension to things. And I know your character would want to exploit him later on.

Edit: Oh, and he should probably start on a system fairly distant from Coruscent.

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Sounds good Hiroki, but I think I'll give you a set of training and skills. Remember too, the level of training refers simply to the amount of training not to how good they neccessarily are at that skill. Also they can still be innocent with a higher intelligence, intelligence refers more to IQ, with a low intelligence it would be impossible for him to learn level 5 fighting skills. You can give him 4 or 5 intelligence, his sense of innocence will be more a result of lack of experience in general life, you can give him 3 wisdom too, it's not abnormal for people to be taken advantage of and they don't have to be completely stupid for it.

I think you should lower his Charisma, Fortitude, (and/or) Dexterity. I guess I can let you have 6 Force Sensativity but I just don't want everyone asking for it.

Your character Plot is good, already ideas of how I can fit it into the main plot are forming in my mind...

I don't have time right now because I have to go to work but later this evening I'll post you your training and skills.


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Is that better?
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Player: Weiderudare
Name: Zatch Retylinga
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Homeworld: Coruscant

Personality
Character Traits: Agile, Fast, Eager, Fast learner, Slightly Charming
Character Flaws: Impatient, Dislike of slow progress, stubborness
Likes: Training, learning, try to find that love of your life
Dislikes: Arrogant people, nontrusty people, traitors, blasters.

Statistics
Looks: 4
Inteligence: 4
Wisdom: 3
Strength: 3
Speed: 5
Charisma: 4
Fortitude: 3
Dexterity: 5
Willpower: 3
Force Sensativity: 4

Skills
Weapons: Sword(2), Blaster Pistol(1), Hand to Hand(5)
Fighting Styles: Shi'va(Hand to hand)(1)
Vehicular:
Force: Knowledge of the Force(4), Crafting(2), Senses(3), Reflexes(4), Combat Prowess(4), Force Defense(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Healing(1), Force Power(1),
Diplomatic: Politics(1),
Other: Jedi History(1)

Training
-Jedi Order - Force Sensative Lv.1: Jedi History(1), Knowledge of the Force(1)
-Jedi Order - Jedi Initiate Lv.2: Knowledge of the Force(1), Crafting(1), Senses(1), Reflexes(1), Combat Prowess(1), Sword(1), Blaster Pistol(1), Hand to Hand(1)
-Jedi Order - Jedi Padwan Lv.3: Knowledge of the Force(2), Crafting(1), Senses(2), Reflexes(3), Combat Prowess(3), Force Defense(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Healing(1), Force Power(1), Politics(1), Sword(1), , Hand to Hand(4), Shi'va(hand to hand)(1)


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*Shi'va fighting style*
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Shi'va is a hand to hand fighting style that focuses on using the body as the ultimate weapon, redering other weapons useless. With the hand one can parry a sword, deflect a blaster bolt, and expose vulerable pressure points on the body turning hands and feet into deadly weapons.
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*Character Plot: The ways of Shi'va*
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Zatch has been studing the ways of the Force for a few years, eager to learn how to become a living weapon of hands and legs, not trusting swords nor blasters. Coming from a family of traders, recently rich due to their investment in hyper-drives.

Zatch, as most young men, is also looking for that girlfriend, pushed partly by his parents, to secure the line of the family.
Himself, Zatch wants to focus on learning the ways of Shi'va..

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a bit short, might add later..Changed training a bit to show his focus on speed and hand to hand combat... A master skilled in Shi'va would of course be preferred.

If he joins Derrik or not I will leave open. He got traits and flaws pointing towards both directions


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It's fine Hiroki, except one thing is still bugging me a bit. The whole, Iron will of a child thing. Well by will I mean more like a person is less likely to give up if he has high will, and more likely to quit if he has low will, but not childish things like getting what he wants. Iron will of a child is more like being spoiled and getting what you want when you throw a fit. Since he's a street kid he wouldn't be spoiled in that way so I don't think he should have the iron will of a child. His will should be determined more as his abuility to carry out a difficult task under pressure or being cowardly and running away when things get dangerous.

Edit: oops, got your character confused with Jokemaster's, ignore the bit about being rasied on the streets.

Yeah but still everything else about will. Weather or not he's got the iron will of a child is different from willpower. Put it as a character flaw if you want him to still have the iron will of a child but adjust the will (willpower) based on determination in times of skill and difficulty.



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weiderudare, sounds good, the Shi'va thing I'm a bit doubtful towards...the Jedi always focus more on sword fighting. How are you going to block blaster bolts with your fists? I guess I could say it's a fighting style your master has created and is working on, that he introduced you to it. But it's not a regular part of Jedi Training. Go ahead and keep Shi'va but add on the full skills of the Jedi training. The skills only refer to training, not how good you acctually are at it. So just cuz he doesn't like sword or blaster training doesn't mean he doesn't have to do it like everyone else.

Okay I'm making your masters and working on plots, I won't post your master's character profiles but I will tell you a bit about them when they're finished. I will make their profiles though and keep them on my computer for personal reference but it doesn't need to be comon knowledge and it's a waste of space for me to post every side character's sheet.

The story should be ready to begin tomorow.



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Old 04-14-2005, 12:44 AM   #33
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About the Shi'va, he could block blaster bolts with his hands. That is a force power. A master of that skill can block quite a lot that way.
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Yes, there is the whole thing where Darth Vader blocked Han Solo's shot with his hand then pulled the gun out of Han's hand.

But still...it's different when your standing there across the room one on one. You can't move your hands as fast as a sword or cover as much of yourself. Hands don't reach as far as blades. Sure we'll include blocking blaster bolts with your hand in Shi'va but you're still going to get the full training with a sword.

You get the same training as Derrik, but if you want to you can subtract one point off something and add it to something else. Like a point of blaster and an extra point on hand to hand. So say your master said you could train extra on hand to hand and you wouldn't have to train as much on blaster. But your master still has to train you in everything.


Edit: Oh yeah, your being trained by a Fallen Jedi who left the Order. Okay, um...forget about all the basic training. Just post what you'd like to focus on and I'll write you up some skills and private training. Keep in mind level of training does not mean how good you are at it, just how long and how much you were trained at it.

Edit: lol I keep getting mixed up, weiderudare is the one with the Shi'va.

so, Hiroki, list what you'd like to focus on and I'll cook up some private training and skills for you. And fix your will.

weiderudare, you can substitute points that your master decided to train you less in something to train you more in something else but other than that keep the regular Jedi training and skills.



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Okay, lets see. He was abandoned from the start pretty much. His Master had already disappeared from the order when he found him, just barely over 1 year old. Even then he sensed the fissure he created within the Force. He was taken away by him, and that was basically were all his training came from.

All his life he has been trained in the Force, the blade, and the martial arts by the Fallen Jedi Master, so he would have received a great deal more training in those areas than most Jedi as he wasn't trained much in diplomacy or negotiation. His Master dealt with that mostly. He used him as a weapon against his enemies.

He trusts his Master completely at this point, the idea of him lying to him or using him is beyond thought. And suggesting such would make him extremely angry...

So, I'm going to post the skills here by age.

-Training age 3 - 6 Lv: 1 - Knowledge of the Force (1), sword(1), Senses (1), Reflexes(1), Combat Prowess(1) Hand to Hand (1).
-Training age 6 - 10 Lv: 2 - Knowledge of the Force (2), Sword (2), Senses (1), Combat Prowess (1) Hand to Hand (2), Force Defense (1), Reflexes (2).
-Training Age 10 - 15 Lv: 3 - Knowledge of the Force (3), Sword (3), Senses (2), Combat Prowess (2), Hand to Hand (3), Force Defense (2), Reflexes (2).
-Training Age 15 - 18 Lv: 4 - Knowledge of the Force (3), Sword (4), Senses (3), Combat Prowess (3), Hand to Hand (4), crafting (1), Force Defense (2), Reflexes (3).

I understand what you are saying about it not actually governing how 'good' he is. I'm trying to understand how it works though. Sorry if those skills look odd or anything. Just tell me what you think.
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This is a link I use for alot of the skills.


Okay I've done up your training and skills Hiroki, let me know if that is okay with you, if so edit it into your character sheet, if not, just let me know what you don't like or would like added.

(Edit: I added Force Healing)
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*Hassari Trask*
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Skills
Weapons: Sword(6), Hand to Hand(4), Blaster(3), Specialized Sword(2)
Fighting Styles: Veskasa fighting style(sword)(3), Garik'lah fighting style(sword)(3), Keida-Remus fighting style(specialized sword)(2)
Vehicular: Speeder(1), Star Ship(1)
Force: Knowledge of the Force(2), Combat Prowess(4), Reflexes(4), Senses(4), Force Defence(3), Force Enhancement(3), Force Power(5), Force Healing(1)
Diplomatic: Politics(2), Negotiation(1)
Other:

Training
-Private Training - age 2-6 Lv.1: Knowledge of the Force(1), Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Sword(1), Hand to Hand(1)
-Private Training - age 7-10 Lv.2:[i] Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Force Defence(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Power(2), Sword(2), Hand to Hand(1), Blaster(1), Veskasa fighting style(sword)(1), Politics(1), Speeder(1)
-Private Training - age 11-14 Lv.3: Knowledge of the Force(1), Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Force Defence(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Power(2), Sword(2), Hand to Hand(1), Blaster(1), Veskasa fighting style(sword)(2), Garik'lah fighting style(sword)(2), Politics(1), Negotiation(1), Star Ship(1)
-Private Training - age 15-18 Lv.4:[i] Combat Prowess(1), Reflexes(1), Senses(1), Force Defence(1), Force Enhancement(1), Force Power(1), Force Healing(1), Sword(1), Hand to Hand(1), Blaster(1), Garik'lah fighting style(sword)(1), Keida-Remus fighting style(specialized sword)(2), Specialized sword(2)


Edit: Here's the info on the new fighting styles.

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*Veskasa fighting style*
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On an uncharted planet on the remote edge of the galaxy, the planet Treshima drifted on it's quiet corse. The planet was inhabited by a primitive race of human-like aliens, known as the Treshimans. They lived in large clans spread out across the planet and warred amongst themselves constantly.

A fallen Jedi master discovered them when he was hiding from the Republic and used their planet to lay low on. The Treshimans excelled in various combat forms. Veskasa was a war hero amongst them who waged war all across the planet. the Veskasa fighting style is one for aggressive sword fighting style with various hand to hand moves integrated into it.
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*Garik'lah fighting style*
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Garik'lah was another Treshiman hero, though not a war hero like Veskasa. Treshiman built many temples where he trained his disciples in very graceful and skillful sword combat.
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*Keida-Remus fighting style*
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Keida and Remus were skillful sword masters known planet wide for there unique sword style. Keida and Remus were twins, brother and sister, who fought in many great wars. They both carried a large arsenal of various sword styles. They forged their own sword designs and had many followers. Their sword tecknique is taught all over Treshima and highly regarded.
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weirderudare, I have an idea for Shi'va, let me know what you think.

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*Shi'va fighting style*
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Shi'va is a hand to hand fighting style that focuses on using the body as the ultimate weapon, redering other weapons useless. With the hand one can parry a sword, deflect a blaster bolt, and expose vulerable pressure points on the body turning hands and feet into deadly weapons.
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Edit: Okay well this has taken a long time to do and I'm still not done making masters and planning plots but hopefully the story can begin tonight or tomorow.



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Old 04-14-2005, 01:27 PM   #37
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Sounds great! I've updated. Thanks Mandy.
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*Planet: Treshima*
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Treshima
Type: Planet
System: Treshima
Galactic Region: Unknown Regions
Environment: Tropical
Length of Day: 25 hours
Length of Year: 370 Days
Native Sentient Races: Treshiman
Other Races: None

Description: Treshima is on the outer edges of the Galaxy in unexplored space. The environment is tropical year round and planet wide, a vaporous sheild surrounds the planet, protecting it from the sun's harmful u-v rays and causing a greenhouse effect. The vegitation is lush and the planet's land surface is covered in forest. The animal life is exotic, thousands of different creatures roam the planet's land, soar the planet's sky, and plunge the planet's water.
The Treshimans are a very talented race of humanoids much resembling humans. Their skin colours and textures vary greatly with colorful and bright skins and rough, soft, hary, or smooth skins.
They are a low-tech civilization unkown to the rest of the galaxy but they are very skilled in warefare. They often ride beasts into battle, land, air, and sea alike. They have a beautiful connection with the animals of their planet, some are vicious beats while others are graceful beautiful creatures. They tame the bests for travel, pets, and even weapons.
They have a long history of constant war and many great warriors have contributed weapons and fighting styles to their culture.
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Old 04-14-2005, 05:15 PM   #39
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Sounds great Mando, ill edit my character sheet soon with subsitunial skills and facts about Shi'va...when will I get my master though?

And I use that link too, but for my SWG character...


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Old 04-14-2005, 05:17 PM   #40
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gah...pressed wrong button..slap me someone


You can't say that civilization isn't in progress, because in every war, they kill you in a new way
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