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Old 08-24-2005, 03:49 PM   #121
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"Not quite checkmate," Enigma whispered to herself. "More like check."

She listened for the answer the guards would give.

"We follow orders," one of the guards answered. "We do not give them and we do not question them." He glanced behind to the other guards. "Keep your guns on them. Ready to shoot!"

Enigma grinned at the answer and continued to wait. Sooner or later, one side would start a fight. The guards would die and Enigma would be ready.


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Old 08-24-2005, 04:25 PM   #122
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"ok then...let us do this now"

Khaos pushed a botton on his comlink, and then he got down " get down Zarlak..."
and soon the Black Voyager unleashed several and rapid shoots at the guards in every direction...it took only a few seconds to eleminate them all.

Khaos rose as he painted a slight smile on his face, he senced a survivor
"show your self...whatever you where hiding.."
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Old 08-24-2005, 07:22 PM   #123
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At the barrage of weapon fire from the Black Voyager, Enigma immediately dropped to the ground. When Khaos challenged her to show herself, she sprang lightly to her feet and fell into a crouch, teal lightsaber in her right hand and red in her left. She stood slowly and held up the teal saber.

"Teal," she said. "A non-standard color to prove that I am not your average Sith." Then, she raised the red saber. "Red. The standard color of the Sith to prove that I am no puny Jedi." She twirled both sabers. "I am Darth Enigma."

She laughed softly. "This is a time for introductions. May I ask... who are you?"


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Old 08-24-2005, 10:04 PM   #124
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{Drekker steps calmly through the door to the hangar bay, and observes the carnage. he smiles to himself, and turns to hear Lady enigma's voice, and steps forward into the Bay to answer her her question}

"His Name is Azdashir El-Zayka, the long lost son of Babek. Tell me boy have you come here to die? Or is it vengeance you seek this day? Either way it matters not, you like every other member of your filthy little bloodline will be erased from this galaxy, and Lord Sinceros will reign supreme. Long have I hunted you, the last living descendant of your kind, you will not escape us."

{turns toward Zarlak} "And who are you, another El-Zayka puppet eager to die?"


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."

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Old 08-24-2005, 11:23 PM   #125
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"Let us spare words, Drekker," Enigma said sharply. "See to it that El-Zayka does not leave this hangar alive... I'll see to the same for this El-Zayka pawn."

She twirled her sabers again and dropped into a defensive stance in front of Zarlak. Proving again her love for the game of Chess, she said, "Check. Your move."


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Old 08-25-2005, 07:26 AM   #126
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"You talk too much for a shattered body" Khaos said to Drekker.

He gazed at Enigma, he saw her before but he did not know where "so Senceros is the one behind all this…as you are here tracking me, then I supposed that my family is dead now, and my father's apprentice Lord Raad also…and that makes me the last heir of El-Zayka…"

He nodded his head and speaks to himself as he grasp his rosary once given to him by his father "I wont let you down father…"

Then he activated his two curved-hilt lightsabers and charged at Drekker…
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Old 08-25-2005, 09:01 AM   #127
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{Smiles coldly at the charging Khaos} "You won't be the one to bring me down. Your fate is sealed." {Ignites Lightsaber}


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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Old 08-25-2005, 09:14 AM   #128
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Exuro has managed to get into the Fist of ragnoses enviromental ducts, as he moved through them he could hear the sound of patrols searching for him. He decided the best cource of action was to shut down the ships tractor beams so he could escape.

Exuro found the main generator which was currently unprotected due to a redeployment of all the troops. Exuro placed charges all around it and the ran to the hanger through the ducts.

He looked down and saw khaos begin to run towards enigma and dekker. He used his sabre to make a hole in the ducts and then jumped down infront of drekker and Enigma, with his sabre ignited.

"I hope you didn't miss me"
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Old 08-25-2005, 10:27 AM   #129
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{to Exuro} "On the contrary.....your right on time."

{Readies stance for attack from Khaos and exuro.....saber raised.}


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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"Concentrate on El-Zayka," Enigma snapped at Drekker. "I can handle the other two."


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Old 08-25-2005, 11:32 AM   #131
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Khaos attacked Drekker furiously but the last one seems to be very skilled with the lightsaber as he blocked everyhit with his solo saber, the duel stopped as Khaos sabers involved in an X position with Drekker's.
"A half-sith…Senceros accepted the help of strangers to kill his own people…well, this is a treason he will pay for…"

Suddenly a man jumped from above and stood in front of Drekker and Enigma as he ignited his lightsaber, it was Exuro.
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Old 08-25-2005, 11:44 AM   #132
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"Concentrate on El-Zayka," Enigma snapped at Drekker. "I can handle the other two."

He knew that it was only a matter of time for him to notice her, she was Jessa, Senceros's daughter, and he was a friend of her before he left Samaraa, he knew her from her words …

"You were always overconfident Jessa…"

He said as he gazed at her, she looks deferent she grew up, became more a woman.... then he turned his face to Drekker, "no more playing…YOU WILL DIE"
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Old 08-25-2005, 01:03 PM   #133
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{Drekker sneers his scared and corrupted face at Khaos, his Red eyes burning with darkness} "Spare me your boring threats, I have heard them all before, from countless victims, accross countless worlds. NO El-Zayka, YOU WILL DIE."

Drekker leaps forward and attacks Khaos with his Saber, both combatants strike, and deflect blow after blow, in a fast paced display of Saber Mastery.


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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Old 08-25-2005, 03:19 PM   #134
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She twirled her sabers again and dropped into a defensive stance in front of Zarlak. Proving again her love for the game of Chess, she said, "Check. Your move."
"Chess is boring. I perfer pazzaka" Zarlak said and used force push. She was sent flying and hit the metal wall
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((Careful with the char controlling, Steven.))

Enigma was driven backward by Zarlak's push, but managed to retain a level of control. Her feet hit the wall and she rebounded off of it, landing again directly in front of Zarlak.

"You're gonna have to try harder than that to catch me off guard," she said. Her sabers became a flurry of movement. She attacked, bringing one saber down toward his head and the other up toward his crotch.


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Old 08-25-2005, 03:31 PM   #136
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Zarlak defended the attacks but didnt counter-attack "Well we're fighting, do you mind telling us why we're at war? I've been wondering for quite a while"
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"If you must ask the question, you deserve to die," Enigma scoffed. "Open your eyes! The way of the Sith is Treachery. One rises, but another kills him to take his place." She paused thoughtfully. "We serve two different masters. Our masters oppose each other. So it is we must follow their lead. I follow Sinceros. You follow El-Zayka. We fight because we must."

She attacked again.


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{Drekker and Khaos continue their battle accross the hangar bay, each striking blow after blow, and deflecting strike after strike, their sabers colliding again and again. Finally their sabers lock, drekkers between bothe of Khaos's which form an X.}

"Your skills are impressive, but you will not be the one to bring me down."

{They bothe tempoarily break away, and stare down one another.....}


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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"you are just wrong…for all these years, El-Zayka masters studied the two sides of the force to embrace its mysteries from all views…that's why we've been stronger than the Dark Jedi and thier Jedi masters, that’s why we succeeded in manipulating them and lead them to their own destruction while they were thinking that they are destroying their enemy, that’s why DARTH TRANKA was the strongest of all…that’s why my powers as a mere apprentice are equaling yours as a master…while you depend on one side, I have the knowledge of the two…"

he smiles as he force-grasped a metal box on his right and through it into Drekker's direction…
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Old 08-25-2005, 10:34 PM   #140
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{Drekker dodges the object by rolling in a somersault, and quickly springing back to his feet} "There is only the DarkSide, everything else is irrelevant. The Darkness flows through me, it is who I am. It makes me stronger than you could possibly imagine. It is what I am. I have only begun to toy with you apprentice, your powers are impressive, its a shame that you are a member of the soon to be extinct el-Zayka line, for a powerful Sith Lord, you could have become. Your feeble skills are no match for the power of a Dark Lord. Know this Khaos, as you die, and look up at me you killer, know that you were bested by a man who was once a human, like so many before you, your underestimation of me and my abilities will earn you the same fate as your brother, and father. Darth Tranka like the rest of your family, was a disgrace to the Sith Order, the kept us subdued under teachings meant to weaken us. Lord Sinceros, realized this and started The Sith down the path of true power, so that we may take our rightful place as rulers of this galaxy. Soon the republic will be a distant memory, and the jedi order destroyed, but you will not be alive to see it."

{Releases a barrage of Lightning towards Khaos.} "HAHAHAHAHAHA"


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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Old 08-26-2005, 12:29 AM   #141
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On an uncharted planet he robbed a merchant of his aicraft and took him a droid and a pilot under his command and was trained in the Real Sith Base, Always looking for a fight to win and kill his oppenent

"My ship "Speeding Bullet" came into the hanger as this battle was emerging, I went to the armory with my droid knowing that there was a battle he couldnt wiggle out of, equipping his droid with all he could he strapped 6 grenades to each side, holstering 2 blasters and taking out his heavy blaster, the ship landed and he opened up the doors, stepped out and ran to El-Zayka, i backed him up and warded off Egnima with a warning shot


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((Enigma's fighting Zarlak, not El-Zayka... but I suppose you could have still shot at her...))

As she continued to press her attack on Zarlak, Enigma sensed the oncoming shots and flipped up and away over Zarlak's head, landing behind him and forcing him to deal with the shots the newcomer had fired.


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Old 08-26-2005, 07:26 AM   #143
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((Darth Tranka is the sith lord behind the events in KotOR period, so he is the true architect of the real sith order thus he was not weak at all, Khaos's father called Darth Babek))

Drekker Released a barrage of Lightning towards Khaos, but the last one absorbed it successfully,

"If one is to understand the great mystery of the force, then he must study all its aspects, not just the dogmatic narrow view of the Jedi and the Dark Jedi…you have to know the force as whole not just one of its many sides…"

Khaso through his lightsaber towards Drekker then grasped another object and direct it into Drekker's position, and then he ran towards the Black Voyager.

"Get into the ship, the party is over…"

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Exuro had already ran into the black voyager and started the engines while the others fought, He set off the detanators destroying the tractor beam to make sure they could ecape, now he waited for El-Zayka.
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My ship "Speeding Bullet" came into the hanger as this battle was emerging, I went to the armory with my droid knowing that there was a battle he couldnt wiggle out of, equipping his droid with all he could he strapped 6 grenades to each side, holstering 2 blasters and taking out his heavy blaster, the ship landed and he opened up the doors, stepped out and ran to Zarlak, i backed him up and warded off Egnima with a warning shot

"Hey you, get lost. We're fighting here. She can kill you in five seconds. So can I so if you wanna keep your life, get lost."
I easily dogded the shot and jumped close to the Black Voyager
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"Looks like I have no use being here"
*Goes back into the ship with his droid*


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"Drekker!" Enigma snapped. "We can't let El-Zayka get away. Hurry!"

She made a wild lunge for the Black Voyager, but the ramp closed just before she got to it. With a wild yell, she thrust her lightsabers up into the closed ramp...


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{Drekker stands up after avoiding the objects from Khaos...Into his comlink} "Admiral seal hangar bay doors."


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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Enigma took a step back from the Black Voyager and looked at Drekker. There was an amused smile on her face.

"Well I suppose there might be more than one way to hold them here," she said. "I think you chose the smarter one."


She stepped away from the ship and went to stand beside Drekker. As she did so, she thought of El-Zayka's use of her real name.

"I haven't been called Jessa in years," she whispered. "It's sort of odd now to hear it..."


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{Drekker turns towards Enigma}
"Your thoughts are disturbed....I can feel it. Do not allow this treacherous El-Zayka whelp cloud your intentions. He will die."

{Into The comlink} "Admiral get a battalion of troops in here to surround this vessel, and set a course to Samaraa.....we will bring Lord Sinceros his gift."


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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"you think your self smart, shattered flesh...well behold this"

The Black Voyager shoot at the hangar bay doors, but it was so solid, thus Khaos shoots the ships waiting on the hangar bay, they caused a big explosion and harmed the door.

"and now the last episode"

Khaos lunched two missles at the doors caused them to blow and quickly got out of the fist of ragnos leaving its hangar in a missy situation because of the whole in its doors that sent the troops to the outer space.

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{Drekker leaps for the exit, and grabs hold of a column next to the door, as every loose item in the Hangar got sucked into the vacuum of space. Drekker holds the column with all of his power. He watched as enigma grabbed hold of something to hold herself to. The Black Voyager sped off into space. After 30 seconds the emergency Magnetic field activated itself putting an end to the vacuum in the hangar bay. Drekker picks himself up off the floor, and angrily glares out the magnetic field into space. He speaks to several troops who have just run into the Hangar.]

"Hunt him wherever he goes, find him, kill him. He will not escape me again. I will cast his broken body at Lord sinceros's feet. Wretched Fool!"


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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"whats going on Exuro? whats happened to my family? and what about Lord Raad?"
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"I'll eplain later... when we are on my ship. it's hidden behind the far planet in the system." Exuro went to the navigation computer and typed in the co-ordinates.
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{The Bridge door opens, and Drekker storms in, pure hatred in his eye. A young officer approaches the Sith Lord.} "My lord Drekker.....w-we lost their signal, forgive m......."

{Before the Officer can finish his status report and apology, Drekker executes him by sending bolts of lightning coursing through the young soldier. His corpse falls lifelessly to the floor. The entire bridge goes silent, each soldier staring intently at their command consoles, none wanting to incur Drekker's wrath.}

"Admiral?!" Drekker Hissed angrily. "Yes my lord?" {Drekker whirls around to face the humbled fleet commander.} "Set a course for Samaraa."

"As you wish m'lord."

{Drekker speaks up to the whole bridge crew.} "Now listen up all of you dregs. The Last of our El-Zayka enemies has escaped us, and made a fool of us and the master we serve. The Lord Sinceros does not tolerate failure! And neither Will I! Hunt that ship where ever it goes, find them.....they will not escape me again."

{Drekker turns to leave and stops next to the corpse of the soldier he murdered.} "And get this stunted slime off my bridge, and cast his wretched corpse into space." {Drekker turns again and storms out of the command deck, and to his chamber, as troops scurry to dispose of the body.}


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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Enigma stood in stunned silence in the docking bay when Drekker stormed out. Finally, she shifted and stared at where the repair crews were already working to replace the destroyed doors. She glanced down at her hands and swore softly.

"I lost my red saber," she muttered. With that, she left the docking bay and went to the bridge. The crew stiffened at the arrival of another Sith, though Drekker had already left. She saw that two men were working to pick up the corpse of their comrade and wrinkled her nose.

"Was this Drekker's doing?" she asked quietly. There was no response and she lifted the Admiral off his feet in a Force choke. Then, she shouted, "Was this Drekker's doing!?" The looks on her faces told her what she wanted to know and she dropped the Admiral. He landed roughly on his knees and Enigma left the bridge. She found her way to Drekker's quarters.

"The crew lost them, didn't they?" she said, forcing the door open and entering to face Drekker.


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{Drekker is on his knees his back to the door as enigma enters, he rises and to face her} "They are wretched fools, not worthy of life. All they had to do was track the ship, and they couldn't even deal with that, They will all be summarily executed by Lord Sinceros when we return to Samaraa."

{Drops back into meditaion} "I am reaching out accross the galaxy, through the darkness, to seek them out. They will not be hidden from me for long. It does not matter how many fools flock to his cause, or how many wretched whelps shield him, I will find them, and I will kill them."


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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"Good," Enigma cooed. "I like the anger I feel coming from you. You will find them, Drekker." She spun back toward the door. "El-Zayka will fall."

But for now, she had her own thoughts to deal with... and she would do so in the privacy of whatever room this ship had to offer her.


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{The fist Of Ragnos exits Hyperspace above the dark world of Samaraa. Drekker makes his way onto the bridge, he soldiers there go silent and stand at perfect attention, remembering all to well what happened the last time he entered their presence. The admiral approaches the sith Lord.} "L-lord drekker we have arrived at Samaraa, what are your orders."

"Inform Lord Sinceros of my arrival, and prepare my shuttle for departure to the Imperial Palace." Drekker snapped coldly.


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

"The failure is yours, no longer does your voice whisper within my skull, no longer do I suffer beneath teachings that weaken us, and now you run in search of the Jedi. They are all dead....save one, and one broken Jedi cannot stop the darkness that is to come."
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The Black Voyager entered the bridge of The Trident, soon a lot of soldiers gathered around it, as Khaos ,Exuro and Zarlak got out of it, all of them seemed happy to see Azdashir El-Zayka alive, he was their last hope, and he sensed that he have a lot of responsibilities ahead of him, thus he said to them.

"Thank, you heroes…you've proven your loyalty to El-Zayka, and to the core of the real sith teachings…without you I'd be a dead body right now…"

at these words all soldiers start to hail El-Zayka, and promise to kill those who betrayed them….Khaos now know that he can depend on these men…
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