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Old 09-16-2005, 05:27 PM   #41
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Gus was angry at Jax, but he had to put that aside and help his fellow soldiers. He was going to lead his old team again.... Gold squadron. Originally, they had all been Spec Ops, But after Gus's Special Ops years, he quit Gold Group. when he saw all his old comrades he was shocked. they seemed.... Tougher... Gus also noticed a girl that caught his eye.
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Name: Kaitlyn
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Class: Co-Pilot of Gold Group
Fighter: modded x-wing
Apperance: Red hair down to shoulders(Carrot Top)
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Gus walked up to the girl. She was putting on her pilot helmet.
"Hello"
"Oh, Hello.... Ah.... Sir?"
"Guess your new, huh?"
"Yes, sir"
"You really dont need to call me sir you know. besides, Im the same age as you so..."
"Ok, No Problem!"
Gus could tell the girl was nervous.
"So, you're my Co-Pilot, Right?"
"Yep"
Kaitlyn climbed into her Modded X-Wing. Gus took one last look at her.
"Good Luck" He said queitly.
Gus's B-wing lifted off the ground, and flew out of the hangar.
"Gold 2, Kaitlyn, Standing By"
"Gold 3, Wes, Standing By"
"Gold 4, Flare Standing By"
"Gold 5, Marine, standing By"
"Gold 6, Alex, Standing By"
"Gold 1, Gus, Standing By"
"All Fighters, attack Position!"
All ready, 3 TIEs were firing at them.
Wow, His squad was amazing! They dodged every shot, every torpedo.
Kaitlyn was right beside him, When He looked at her ship, his stomach felt... Funny.... Hmm... Odd...
Wait coul- No, pilots never knew ''love''. He never had feelings for anyon in his life, since he was a pilot....


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Old 09-17-2005, 05:06 AM   #42
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As Jax glanced over at the motionless Emperors Servant he knew he would have to the face up to his demons sooner or later. He had a plan imbeded in his mind. Jax turned and fired An EMP torpedo into the bridge. A rippel of elecetricity engulfed the bridge. Don then followed the attack by firing a cluster torpedo into the bridge. They seperated and bombarded different part. The bridge had sustained minor damage but the ship was still moving towards the rebel cruisers.
"Carlon, do you copy?"
"I do Jax"
"Whats the situation over there"
"well it's looking good we're all still here and this star destroyer soon won't be"
"Ok keep going"
So far Jax had only lost one pilot. He knew that theses guys knew what they were gettng them selves into. He glanced towards Gus's ship. He saw how gold group dived and dodged and felt a sudden rush of anger. Those kids were all spins and dives know but just wait until they saw one of their mates blown out of the sky. Jax had been like that once, cocky, but it all changed. Jax snapped back to the here and now. He dodged Tie fire. If Gus was imressed from that wait until he saw what him and Don were about to do.
"Don....do it!"
"now?"
"yes now!"
"Got it bo-"
"lets go!"
Jax and Don dived towards the bridge. Don fired an Seismic charge....It exploded gashing the bridge and the hull. They saw their opurtunity, the shields were down and there was a hole in the ship. They dived into the centre of the star destroyer....


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Old 09-17-2005, 08:05 AM   #43
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meanwhile on the planet below.......

Kenny ducked behind a tree log. He had sworn the had seen a imeperial scope pointing at him....but if he had he was sure he would have been dead by now. He crouched. He could just about see under the log. The scope was moving. He looked down his own scope. He knew what he had to do. It wouldn't kill him but ruin all chances of killing someone and possibly blind him. Kenny took the shot. The scope on the imperials sniper shattered. He cursed. Then he made a big mistake, He stood up. Kenny shot again and hit him in the chest. The scout fell. Kenny's comm link buzzed and an explosion ripped the still air. An AT-ST?
Over the intercom: "Return the the base now!"
Kenny stood. It was a bad idea. The AT-ST shot in his direction. he hit the deck and then ran. He saw his friend Ryan ahead. He caught up with him and they ran flat out until they were safe. They jumped into a trench near the base.
"Base this is scout-89 they saw us, they're coming!"
An AT-ST crashed through the undergrowth. It came out of the forrest. It looked beat up. It stood there for a moment....then it exploded. Kenny looked at ryan. Then looked behind them and in a tower was a rocket trooper. clutching a rocket launcher. He looked stunned. "I didn't get a chance to fire" he yelled
Kenny raised his eyebrow. More crashing. The imperials were getting closer. The other soldiers manned guns and mortar launchers. Kenny grabbed Ryan and they jumped out of the trench. The position of the base was in between a sought of valley. There was hills on both sides. On top of the hills were more soliders. with snipers, roket launchers and machine guns. Kenny ran up the hill. as the jumped to the ground and Ryan hit the floor next to him and Fyling Imperical carrier come into view from behind the trees in circled and landed heavily on the grass. the ramp dropped. and hundreds of imperial soliders jumped out and all hell broke loose....


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Old 09-17-2005, 08:20 AM   #44
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Jax kept his finger on the trigger. he had to constantly blast debrey, metal wires out of the way. They could run out of space real quick. Jax dodged a beam, He blasted at some wires and they sparked and expoloded. He dived throught the fire.
"Jax this is crazy! what do you expect to do? this isn't like the death star this has no core!"
"Just follow me!"
Jax knew they were going to be in trouble soon. The hull of the star destroyers wasn't a walk in the park. well it was a walk in the park....if it was a park full of the possibility of running out of space and crashing into a wall. Jax Fired a torpedo. The torpedo exploded. He could see the end. He fired. He closed his eyes. The force of the explosion threw him through space.
"I AM NEVER DOING THAT AGAIN!" Don yelled as the star destroyer exploded.
"i have no idea how we just did that.....it's....impossible" don muttered
Jax and don flew back to regroup with blue group....


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Old 09-17-2005, 10:55 PM   #45
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Green group witnessed the destruction of the star destroyer.
"Jax, Nice shot but theres still a few left,Do you have a plan to take the others out?"
Adrian:"Stu,We have some company."
"All E-wings attack position."
Colleen:"I cant get it into position its jammed but i can still fl..*Explosion*
"Colleen?! Do you read me?"
*Static*
"Damnit its just us three now guys."
"Take out them TIE's by any means nessecery!"
Adrian:"I've got a l..o..c..k on it FIRE!!"
*Explosions*
"Good work guys all we need to do now is wait to hear Jax's Plan."
Stu and his men flew up to Jax and Don....


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Old 09-18-2005, 06:08 AM   #46
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Jax was deep in thought. He knew there were more star desroyers than they could handle. as if reading his mind 6 rebel cruisers exited hyper space. Jax was shocked. They released fighters. Like a plague of locusts the fighters were released.
"This is white leader, does anyone copy?"
"White leader this is Blue Leader"
"ahhh jax could to hear from you"
"you too"
"what's going on?"
"well i was expecting more...resistance but it's.....OH GOD!"
At least 1000 Ties were being released from the emperors serant.
"This is it guys!"
"who have we got here?"
"Red Group, white group, grey group, black group and yellow group"
"Ok guys let's do it!"
Jax shot towards the cloud of Ties...


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Old 09-18-2005, 08:00 AM   #47
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Green Group Sped towards the TIE's....
"R7 Power up all front shields and increase the range of the cannons."
R7:"Bee-Woob."
"Ok guys new plan."
Alan:"What is it stu?"
"Just blast any tie you see and try to stay together so we dont accidently kill each other,ok."
"OK!"
"Fire!....Fire!...FIRE!!!!"
*Multiple explosions.*
"Good work guys keep it up."

The Battle in space was heating up.....


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Old 09-19-2005, 12:17 PM   #48
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Jax fired at ant tie that came in range. which was most of them. The ties dodged and ducked. The rebels were out numbered but not out classed.The rebels were certainly better flyers. An explosion ripped through space and jax was thrown forward. A Star Destroyer had exploded.
"What happened? we didn't hit it?"
"It just.....went"
"Theres somehting weird about this"
"I agree White Leader, all fighters full back...IT'S A TRAP!"
Another star destroyer exploded. And then suddenly out of no where star destroyers surrounded them. Jax was speechless. The rebel cruisers were surrounded. But a few seconds later more rebel cruisers arrived. The real battle was about to start...

(meanwhile....)

Kenny fired. A storm trooper hit the floor. The storm troopers had realised, too late, that they had walked into a trap. The anti-aircraft guns had taken down the landing veichles. And were on the watch for more. The imperial soliders did not know which way to turn. They were surrounded. The rebel cannons stopped firing. The imperials had their hands in the air. They had surrendered. A cheer rose. Kenny did not cheer.
"We've won!" cried a soldier
"HOLD POSITION AND DO NOT LOWER YOIUR RIFLES!" yelled a commanding officer
Kenny understood, this was a trap.
"You boy, which one of those is the leader?"
Kenny looked down his scope
"that on" he pointed
"The one with the blue markings on his armour"
"Right....take him out"
"what?" voiced a soldier
"we arn't permited to shoot prisoners"
"we are when it's possibly a trap and the imperials wouldnt hesitate to kill you!"
*Silence*
"Do it" he said simply
Kenny took aim. and fired. The officer hit the deck. The storm troopers automatically started shooting again.
"see, they had hidden weapons and...."
The last trooper hit the floor, dead.
"see if we had fallen for that..."
*silence*
"well get ready i doubt we will be alone for long"


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Old 09-21-2005, 07:48 AM   #49
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Green Group were about to attack the cloud of TIE's when Jax gave an order...
'All Fighters Fall back....IT'S A TRAP!!!'
Stu:"You heard him guys fall back!"
Adrian:"Right boss."
Alan:"Copy that."
"Jax or white Leader, do you have a plan for this."......


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Old 09-21-2005, 12:29 PM   #50
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"this is....un-believeable"
The rebel cruisers released fighters and at the same time so did the star destroyers. This massive battle was about to heat up.
"All groups this is Blue Leader, im pretty sure this is a trap, something dosn't feel right, the emperors servant hadn't done anything and some star destroyers have exploded without being hit. I think they all might be filled with-"
The emperors servant exploded
"what the-"
and the real emperors servant took it's place. It was even bigger than the false one. It's glaring lights fixed on Jax and he felt a pounding in his head. He then knew this was the end.
"Don take control of blue group"
"what?"
"you heard me, i have to board that ship"
Jax spead off leaving a dazes Don behind
"right blue group follow me" Don said dazidly
Jax was allowed to get close to the star destroyer, some how they knew it was him two Tie fighters escorted him to the hanger bay. Jax was sure he was also surrounded by Tie Phantoms. Jax docked with the ship. He got out and was immediatly grabbed by storm troopers. His lightsaber was taken and so was his pistol then he was lead to the commander.
"Ah Polara i thougt i'd be seeing you"
"Did you or did your master tell you"
The commander went pale
"My master has awated your arrival he will see you shortly, throw him in a holding cell" he added to the guards who nodded. Jax was thrown roughly into the cell and waited for a visit from an old friend.


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Old 09-21-2005, 07:01 PM   #51
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"SAVE JAX!" I yelled into my mic.
"Gold Group Give us cover!"
"Kaitlyn, Follow me!"
Kaitlyn and I flew closer to the Emperor's Servant. they knew why we where here. The turrets opened fire on us. Two shots hit my left wing and a fleet of Fighters opened fire on Kaitlyn. I turned my shields to 100 percent and flew in front of her fighter.
"Gus!?"
"Kaitlyn, Listen to me, we have to save Jax, we'll board the destroyer and- AHHH!"
My shields were 8 percent and a roclet came flaring towards me.
The last thing I saw was Kaitlyn's ship.

"Unnnhhh..."
Kaitlyn was on top of me, she seemed lifless, but she was still alive. We had made it, We were inside the Emporor's Servant.
I woke Kaitlyn and yamned.
"Thanks."
I said, she had saved me.
We stood up and saw that our destroyed fighters had breached the hull of the Servant when we went down. There was a small silence, the only sound was the red alert alarm. The door slid open, and Stormtroopers poured out. I grabbed the rifdle on my belt and opened fire. Hmph.... Who said 14 year olds are useless.... I took out 4 troops and Kaitlyn chucked a fag and killed the rest. She picked up her blaster and we advanced.


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Old 09-22-2005, 04:14 AM   #52
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Jax jerked his head upwards. He could hear an alarm and he could sense Gus. The door slid open and stadning there tall and mysterious was...
"Rezillo...why"
Jax's old friend who was believed dead was standing there, he black robe billowed out in a mennacing way
"Jax....I expected something of this nature from you, when you heard the name the emperors servant you knew i had once mentioned it before"
"you did and then....I sensed you"
"hmmmm your becoming the Jedi that scum always wanted you to be"
"He wasn't scum!" Jax yelled
Rezillo smiled
"Your friend...the one who crashed into us...he will dead shortly and you will kill him"
"w-what...i wont! you can't-"
"You can do what ever you set your mind to"
"But-"
An officer walked into the cell
"sir, you asked me to bring you what he was armed with, just these" He handed the lightsaber and pistol over to rezillo. Rezillo threw the pistol aside as the officer left.
"A jedi's weapon....so you are a jedi?"
somehting flickered in jax's mind
"Yes" he lied
"I can tell you're lying" Rezillo said simply
Jax glanced at his saber. he had to stop this...
"You have always been a bad lyer"
Jax had to help Gus
"you have always been a failure..."
Jax snapped
He did something he had never done before he flung his hand out and his lightsaber shot into his hand like a magnet had invisilby pulled it there. He ignited it but rezillo was ready. The two blades clashed. And Rezillo smiled...


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Old 09-22-2005, 05:32 AM   #53
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"oh boy Jax and Gus are at it again." Stu said to himself quietly.
"Alan,Adrian Follow orders from Don ok, goin off to help them."
Both:"Yes sir."

Stu Put his ship into full speed and raced off towards the star destroyer, trying his best to avoid the TIE's but he was hit by 6 TIE's and the engines were cutting out,Stu quickly made it to the hangar bay..

"Ah crap, how am i gonna do this?" he asked himself.
Stu flew in the hangar and shot as many Imperials impossible. He set down the ship and got ready...


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Old 09-22-2005, 10:49 AM   #54
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Rezillo stopped. he looked up. Jax felt it too. Stu was now on the emperors servant.
"another foolish friend of yours has just docked with us" He said in a voice of pure hatred
"what happened to you?" Jax said resuming the fight
Rezillo's lightsaber clased against Jax's and forced it against a wall.
"I saw you get blown out of space and then...you wern't evil!"
"Oh jax there is no good or evil there is only power and those too weak to seek it...LIKE YOU!"
Rezillo force pushed jax against a wall and it gave way. Jax stepped out of the debrey.
"what happened?" he said again
"when i was shot, i survived i floated in space suffocating when something took me, i could breath...it was like a bubble had formed around me, i was dragged to this ship where my master tought me the ways of the sith"
"But that would have taken years!"
"yes....but my master is very powerful. He invented a room called the hyperbolic time chamber, A year in there was a day on the ouside. within a week of this dimension I was a sith"
Jax gulped
"scared?"
"you wish!"
They glashed blades again. Rezillo's red blade and Jax's Blue blade combined made a spectaular display of light and sound but if they wern't careful all would be lost...


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Old 09-23-2005, 08:58 AM   #55
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Stu got his Rifle ready and exited the cockpit..
"R7 go and protect the ship."
R7:"Bee-woo."
Stu had a wierd feeling in him..like he could sense a friend in trouble..
"Jax!" Stu said aloud.
2 stormtroopers heard him and stu fired at them, they were both killed alomst instantly.
"Jax,Where are you my friend."
"Is this what Commander Skywalker descibed as 'The Force'." He asked himself.
Stu began the walk to find his friend...

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Old 09-23-2005, 11:34 AM   #56
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(you do whatever you want, but i imagine it will be a bit of both)

Jax stared into the eyes he had once trusted.
"You...lied...to me!"
"what do you mean?"
"you said you would never turn to the sith, never work for the empire"
"ahhh yes....things change Jax!"
Rezillo force pushed him against a barrel. Jax slumped against it.
Rezillo breathed heavily
"you are strong...i never knew you had skills outside being a pilot....what are you now Blue Leader?"
"How do you know?"
Rezillo smiled....
"I am...the phantom"
"w-what? you can't be!"
"I assure you i am"
Something clicked in Jax's head
"I should have known...no one had the same flight style as you....but wait you took out some imperial ships"
"I did...i had to make it look convincing. On my masters orders of coarse"
"you...."
Jax jumped up and ran at Rezillo who just smiled. Rezillo pushed him back and smiled
"tut-tut....you never learn to do jax?"
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Old 09-23-2005, 03:57 PM   #57
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Gus couldn't take anymore of this. He got shot twice in the shoulder and once in th eleg. he could barely breath anymore.
He stood up and screamed as loud as he could, he grabbed Kaitlyn's hand and screamed even louder.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! "
The Imperials fell back and couldn't breath. Kaitlyn stood up.
"You're a..."
"Yeah, let's go!"
A dark jedi master jumped out of nowhere. Gus took out a green saber and a blue saber. I attacked vigurously, but alas, he was defeated. The fiend stabbed my chest and we both fell back. Gus screamed again. Partly in pain and partly in self-defense. I quickly grabbed Kaitlyn's foot. If he didn't hold onto her, she'd die too. I was too late, she stumbled over and fell. Gus stopped and the dark jedi couldn't breath. I crawled over to Kaitlyn.... and kissed her on the lips. Aside doing this because Gus was in love with her, it also transfered his remaining power to her. she slowly opened her eyes and saw what he was doing. He stopped and fell to his knees. I felt my face slam against the cold, metal floor.

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Jax felt Gus's remaining power disapeer. In a state of rage he jumped up. Surprised Rezillo let his guard down and was almost beheaded. Rezillo blocked the slash. Jax was painting he looked like a mad man.
"You...Gus is....I'LL KILL YOU!"
Jax stopped
a voice echoed in his head
"Jax don't give into hate"
He stood there a second too long. Rezillo slashed at Jax. His jump shuit ripped and a gash across his chest spewed blood. Jax wasn't badly injured. He stepped back
"whats the matter?" Rezillo demanded
"tired of our fight? shall i finish it off?"
Jax looked at Rezillo
"I will never fogive you" he said quietly
"I do not look for forgiveness"
Jax kicked Rezillo out of the way. he grabed his pistol and blasted at him. Rezillo reflected the blast. Jax's pistol was wrenched from his group as Rezillo used the force.
"Jax you will not get far without the force"
Jax glanced to the side. there was a red button on the wall saying "Grabage shoot" he looked at the floor. It was one huge platform. Jax guessed when the button was pushed the floor would fold in and what ever was there would fall into the garbage disposal. Jax looked up. Running along the ceiling were pipes. Jax looked at Rezillo.
"Goodbye" he said simply
He pushed the button. Before he knew what was happening Rezillo fell. Jax grabbed the pipe. He hung on for dear life. Rezillo disapeared. Jax was loosing his grip. He couldn't hold on much longer. He focused all his mind power on the button. He felt something flow through him. The button clicked and the floor slid back into place. Jax dropped down. He could still sense Rezillo but he had to find Stu and Gus. Jax ran out of the room to find his friends...


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Stu Ran down a corridor a turned to see Gus,Blooded and battered with a beautiful young woman..
"Gus!" Stu yelled aloud.
3 stormtroopers heard him and ran down to him.
"Damn! i got to stop doing that!"
Stu fired at the troopers, but when one died he pulled the trigger and shot stu..
AAARRRRRGGH!" Stu yelled in pain.
"My Arm! My Arm! What gun in the name of the Force could do THAT!!"
Stu looked at his left arm..his wrist and most of his forearm was blasted off,Stu also looked at the troopers gun..it was an E-11 blaster rifle-Standard issue gun for stormtroopers, but it was Customized.

Stu Applied pressure on the wound and he went and crawled over to Gus and his friend.
"Gus! are you ok?"....


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Jax felt a sudden pain in his chest. He stopped running. Something had happened to Stu. Jax turned, A storm trooper appeared at the end of the coridoor.
"HALT!" he yelled
Jax defelcted back some shots and then ran at the trooper. He jumped and beheaded the storm trooper. He never knew he could do that. Jax turned, Rezillo was getting closer. He ran towards the control center. The controls told him that Gus had breached some, 400 yards away from him. He ran. Rezillo was getting closer. Jax hurtled round a corner and he saw stu and Gus.
"Stu! Gus! run-" Jax yelled
too late rezillo had shut the door between the two parties. Jax turned.
"You will not escape" he said in a voive of hatred
Jax grabbed his lightsaber and ignited it.
"I'll make you pay!"
Jax and Rezillo started fighting....

(meanwhile...)

Kenny looked obver the mound. In the distance he could see...
"theres....hundreds...of drop ships coming at us!"
"Ready your weapons!" cried the commander
"This is it!"
An AT-AT came out of the trees followed by 8 AT-St's.
They could hear the rev of speeders and Ships.
Kenny grimaced. He looked down the scope. He could see a dark trooper. getting ready
"FIRE!" yelled a voice
Kenny took the shot...


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Old 09-24-2005, 06:59 AM   #61
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hey guys just realised there is another topic now
phantom: The Emperors Servant
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(just to let you know Jedi-you typed 'Jax withdrew his lightsaber and ignited it.' not just to make you realise your mistake but if that is the case then Rezilo would have an advantage because jax would have his saber stuck in his Leg. lol just to let you know.)
Meanwhile back on the story line....

Stu heard footsteps coming closer and then...
"Stu! Gus! run!"
"Jax?" Stu said, then the door closed and sealed..
"Crud!" Stu said, he looked around and seen a dark jedi, dead next to gus.Stu seen his Laser-Sword.(He doesnt know its a lightsaber.) Stu picked it up and seen a Ventilation shaft across the room.He Got up in tremendous pain and ignited the sword, he cut a hole in the vent and climbed in..


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