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Old 12-16-2005, 03:47 PM   #121
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Ray Mesterio his move is the 619, right?

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Old 12-16-2005, 07:17 PM   #122
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I don't know who that droid is, but I like the idea of the jedi using assasins.
@Vlad: You need a custom title, it make you look cooler.


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Old 12-16-2005, 07:20 PM   #123
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Ray Mesterio his move is the 619, right?
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@Vlad: You need a custom title, it make you look cooler.
He/She might not want a custom title.


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Old 12-16-2005, 08:14 PM   #124
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@Vlad: You need a custom title, it make you look cooler.
How do I make a custom title? I tried looking under the section "Edit Options" but I couldn't find anything that affects the custom title.

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He/She might not want a custom title.
Um... Vladimir is the most common Slavic male name.
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Old 12-16-2005, 09:18 PM   #125
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^Go to 'edit Profile'. Its the first option you should be able to edit.


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Old 12-16-2005, 09:21 PM   #126
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^Go to 'edit Profile'. Its the firs option you should have to edit.
It's okay I just found it.

Anyway, RC 1162... Uh, what characterises this droid?
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Old 12-16-2005, 09:22 PM   #127
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^Thats a good question. Does he like like long walks on the beach, pina coladas or dancing in the rain?


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Old 12-16-2005, 09:27 PM   #128
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Er... I meant is he a sissy C-3PO too-much-talking droid; or a mean, sadistic, emotionless killing machine.
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Old 12-16-2005, 10:22 PM   #129
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^I doubt they want C-3PO assasinating the emperor, but I know what you mean. He'd probably either be emotionless, or maybe a less violent HK.


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Old 12-17-2005, 06:32 AM   #130
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this droid is more obedint to masters that 3PO and more violent to enemies than HK 47.
maybe i should name it an RK 0 unit (haha).


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Old 12-17-2005, 11:43 PM   #131
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Great chapter! I could actually hear the voices of Samuel L. Jackson and Ewan MacGregor in my head while they were arguing over the assassination droid. Great work!

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Old 12-18-2005, 10:10 AM   #132
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thanks. i thought it would be good to show you that even great Jedi Masters argue like kids
next chap will be up soon


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Old 12-18-2005, 10:19 AM   #133
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i thought it would be good to show you that even great Jedi Masters argue like kids
I think that it would be better if they argued about who is going to take the type of food with less calories (They need to be fit. Ha Ha Ha)
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Old 12-18-2005, 11:31 AM   #134
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"Arparagus is better"
"No, broccoli is."
"Apsaragus."
"Broccoli."
"Apsaragus."
"Broccoli."
Mace punches Obi Wan in the face and a cantina fight begins.

that good enough for ya?


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Old 12-18-2005, 12:20 PM   #135
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^Ha Ha Ha! Thanks for that.
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Old 12-18-2005, 04:13 PM   #136
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Old 12-20-2005, 11:30 AM   #137
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NINETEEN


The elevator doors in the Hangar levels of Palpatine’s place opened and a fully hooded figure strode in. Every inch of his body was covered by a cloak; his head was shrouded in shadow by a large hood. The figure stayed in the elevator until he reached the 100th level. As he walked out, a stormtrooper came up to him.
“Hey!” he said. “You don’t have authorization to be here.”
The figure turned to face him.
“I don’t need it.” he replied in a synthetic voice. He raised his hand and sent the trooper flying into the wall with one punch. Nodding in satisfaction, he made his way into the Emperor’s office. The place was cleaned up from the Jedi’s strike at the Sith and Palpatine seemed to have no worries as he sat in his seat, looking out onto the great surface of Coruscant. Sensing the approach of a strange personality, Palpatine turned and faced the figure.
“Who are you?” he demanded. “How dare you enter my office without my approval?”
RM-619 threw off his cloak and drew two Sharpshooter pistols from his waist holsters.
“Kicking your Sith butt.”
RM began to fire at the Emperor at full speed, pulling the triggers in the blink of an eye alternatively. Palpatine jumped up and about trying to evade the bolts but eventually the droid would get him and he knew it too. Grabbing his lightsaber from his belt, he jumped in front of the droid and swiped at the droid’s waist horizontally. The droid’s heightened capabilities and excellent joint maneuverability served it well. As the red blade came near his waist, RM bent backwards at his hip joints, making a right angle between his legs and his torso and when the blade was flying away, he straightened up again in a smooth fluid motion.
RM stepped back and raised both his arms. With his right arm, he grabbed the hilt of a Poison-VibroSword and on his left arm, a panel opened and a small canister popped out. A flamethrower.
Working both the weapons in conjunction, RM-619 began overpowering the Emperor. Finally, with one vicious swipe, he forced the Emperor on the ground. As he raised his VibroSword, a red bar appeared through its torso. The droid’s circuitry sparked and it fell over. Behind him, stood Darth Vader.
“I am sorry I did not arrive earlier, My Master.” Vader said.
“Save your apologies, Lord Vader. Find out who sent this droid after me and reprogram it to attack them. These strikes on my Palace will ruin the peace of the Galaxy.”
“It will be done, My Lord.” Vader said with a bow.
*************************************************
4 hours later, the droid was repaired. Vader then accessed its main memory core. Connecting it to a datapad, he went through the data stored in the droid. It was apparently newly constructed by some ‘Tara’ and was ordered by an ‘Obi Wan’ to assassinate the Emperor by any means necessary.
Vader frowned beneath his mask. Obi Wan was the last person he would suspect of doing such a thing. Vader brought his attention back on the droid. He wiped its memory and programmed new objectives: “Track down and kill my maker, then activate self-destruct sequence.”
Vader powered up the RM-619 unit and it walked out without a word.


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Old 12-20-2005, 02:46 PM   #138
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Nice chapter A little short, but nice

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Old 12-20-2005, 03:04 PM   #139
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thanks, wait till you see what happens to the Jedi


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Old 12-20-2005, 04:12 PM   #140
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*thunder dies of old age, I ressurect it from the dead and it rumbles one more time* Is it me, or did you use a different font for the chapter number than you did for the others???????????????????????????

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Old 12-21-2005, 02:28 AM   #141
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yeah because the other fonts come out small, im changing the others too.


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Old 12-21-2005, 08:42 AM   #142
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Nice one. for you.
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Old 12-22-2005, 12:36 PM   #143
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TWENTY


The droid got back into the ship it came to Coruscant on. It flipped a switch and the Dexconn lifted off the hangar floor. 10 minutes later, it was in hyperspace.
**************************************
Tara was pacing up and down tensely. She turned to Obi Wan.
“Are you sure that you instructed it to report to us after its objective was complete?”
“Yes, Tara, I am very sure.” Obi Wan replied. “Why are you so tense?”
“I’m worried that they might access the droid’s memory core and find out our location.”
“Now, now.” Yoda said. “Hardcoded, all assassin droids’ memory cores are. Break them, No one can.”
“Anakin can.” Tara replied, not calmed one bit. “He bypassed the code on a hunter-killer prototype version of an SBD when we came across on while on a self assigned mission to Muunilist to get Durge. When we heard that you were there, we were on our way back but this thing stopped us. Anakin just powered it off with the Force, bypassed the code and sent it after Grievous. Apparently it didn’t kill him as it was supposed to.”
Obi Wan also began to feel tense after this bit of information.
“We can only hope for the best.” he said.
Tara continued pacing.
**************************************
The Dexconn shot into realspace and RM took it skillfully to the hut of Obi Wan Kenobi. It set the ship down and got out. Wrapping its metal fingers around the butts of his Sharpshooter pistols, he walked up to the door of the hut and knocked. Obi Wan opened the door; and the Force’s warning came to him as strong as a slap to the face. Obi Wan dodged to the side as RM pulled the trigger. The Jedi whipped their lightsabers out in unison and began deflecting the bolts. But Tara had done her job well. Even without the Force, the droid’s excellent reflexes allowed it to evade the deflected bolts as a Jedi would. It continued to fire and dodge as the Jedi desperately sought a way out. Finally, without thinking, Tara yanked the droid through the Force and it flew across the room into the wall.
“Let’s go!” Obi Wan yelled. They scrambled out of the hut with the droid in hot pursuit.
“To the Chyyra!” Mace shouted, running like mad. The four of them piled into Obi Wan’s ship and took it off the ground, Tara in the cockpit. She was about to engage the main drive when an idea struck her. She turned the hovering craft to face the droid, who was now firing at the ship’s fuselage, not causing and damage. She flipped a switch and small cannon appeared out of its side. She pushed a button and an ion burst deactivated the droid in an instant. She set the craft down and opened the ramp.
“What are you doing?” Obi Wan yelled. “Get us out of here!”
“The droid is offline, Master” Tara said. “It’s a good thing you had ion cannons.”
Tara ran down the ramp to the droid.
“No major damage,” she announces. “It’s just offline. No doubt Vader got to its core.”
“Repair it, you must.” Yoda said. “And next time, go with it, we shall.”
“Repair it!” Mace asked, not believing what he had heard. “That thing almost killed us, how do you know it won’t turn on us again.”
“Change its program back to default, we will.”
“And what if Vader turns it on us again? Next time, we won’t be as lucky.”
“That is why he said we will go with it.” Obi Wan said exasperatedly. “No offense, Master, but please stop being so pessimistic. If you don’t want to come, you can stay here and we’ll go without you.”
Mace was quiet at this for a few seconds; then he said,
“My conditions still stand.”
“Decommissioned, the droid shall be. But for now, need it we do.” Yoda said, finally beginning to get annoyed.
Mace nodded and the three other Jedi heaved a sigh of relief inwardly.


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Old 12-22-2005, 12:54 PM   #144
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Nice. for you.

By the way, how does the thing look like?
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Old 12-22-2005, 01:08 PM   #145
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ill post it soon.


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Old 12-22-2005, 01:42 PM   #146
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you better or else, im hunting your ass down with my OWN DROID!!!!! *thunder kills itself*

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Old 12-22-2005, 02:10 PM   #147
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*slaps your face again*

here ya go:
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Old 12-22-2005, 02:41 PM   #148
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A BIONICLE????????

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Old 12-22-2005, 02:42 PM   #149
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hey i had only that. and i thought it looked cool too.


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Old 12-22-2005, 02:48 PM   #150
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Well, I'm not saying it doesn't look cool, its just funny your "killer assasian droid" is really a lego

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Old 12-22-2005, 02:52 PM   #151
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ah well, lets say he looks very similar


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Old 12-23-2005, 01:44 AM   #152
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Very good couple of chapters! You are really progressing as a writer.

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Old 12-23-2005, 05:30 AM   #153
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cool! thanks. nowadays, even my friends at school are calling me an awesome writer, i thought they were just buttering me up for something. its nice to know people like my work.

next chapter will be up only in a week, im afraid. im going to india for my uncle's marrige. maybe ill post from there but i have only a 56 - 100 k connection there. depends.


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Old 12-23-2005, 06:31 AM   #154
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i had almost finished it so i thought id complete it and give it to you guys as an early christmas present. enjoy:
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TWENTY ONE


The Chyyra dropped out of Hyperspace again. Though, this time, it was not Coruscant that was in front of them, and this puzzled everyone except Obi Wan and the repaired and restored RM-619.
“What are you doing?” Mace asked. “This isn’t Coruscant. It’s Sullust.”
“Yes, Master.” Obi Wan said. “I had a talk with Senator Bail Organa about the present situation while you were getting ready to leave and he agreed to send a full thousand men and 50 Elite Commandos to help us in our mission.”
“A thousand and fifty men?” Yoda asked, startled. “Discovered, we shall be, before entering the Emperor’s Castle, even.”
“No Master, they will come in small shuttles at around twenty men per shuttle and will enter the planet from all side. Once that is done, they will report to the base of Palpatine’s Castle via various modes of transport.”
“That would mean around 53 shuttles. Wouldn’t this operation take time?” said Mace.
“Not necessarily. All the units will come by either maglev trams or by airspeeders. That way, everyone will be on time.”
“Wouldn’t such a large number of men be noticed in the castle?” Tara asked.
“No, we've managed to get our hand on adequate Stormtrooper Armor for the infantry. The will be indistinguishable among the rest of the troopers to the casual eye.”
“Then how will we know whether we’re shooting at a friend or foe?” Tara enquired.
“They have navy-blue bodysuits instead of black. That was the color the Sith used about one month ago. Now it is reserved for the best Stormtroopers, so we won’t only be hidden, but also treated with respect.”
“Right,” said Tara and fell silent.
****************************************
The ship set down smoothly on the surface of a landing platform set high above a lava river. Obi Wan stared at the lava sorrowfully; then shook his head to clear the bad memories it brought back.
“Stay with the ship, Aarem.” Obi Wan said.
“Affirmative, Master,” the droid replied and went back in.
They walked to the turbolift set in a wide pillar and got into it. At their destination, it stopped and the door hissed open, revealing Bail Organa.
“Masters,” he said with a bow. “It is good to see that you are well; you especially, Master Windu.”
Mace nodded and said,
“Thank you, Senator.”
“Are the troops ready?” Obi Wan asked, getting straight to the point.
“They are in peak condition and ready to serve loyally, Master Kenobi. And you will be pleased to know that young Miss Leia has begun to crawl independently.”
“That sounds cute,” Obi Wan said with a smile. “I wish her good health. Say hello to her mother for me.”
“Of course, Master. Now, if you will step this way, I shall introduce you to the Commanders.”
They began to walk into the base. After a few minutes, they came to what looked like a briefing room. There were around fifty men gathered there, in full stormtrooper armor, the Elites of the Rebel Alliance. Senator Organa proceeded to give them their instructions and locations for landing. Half an hour later, 54 shuttles, containing the ‘best’ stormtroopers of the Imperial army, blasted off from Sullust and entered Hyperspace a few minutes later.


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Old 12-23-2005, 06:32 AM   #155
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the 54th shuttle contains Obi Wan and the rest of the jedi and droid, so dont get confused.


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Old 12-23-2005, 07:34 AM   #156
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A battle. Hmmm... I wonder how you will make them. Oh and does Sullust have lava?

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Old 12-23-2005, 06:08 PM   #157
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Nice chapter RC cant wait for the next one
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Old 12-24-2005, 03:04 PM   #158
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That was awsome RC i need to show that to friends
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I know i'm a little late in posting, but I just started visiting the Fanfic section, and writing my own story. You tell the story very well, I like your use of dialogue....keep up the good work. Two thumbs way up.


"Have you come here for answers? There are none. The call of Korriban is strong, but it is the call of the dead. It is fitting you came here."

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Old 12-25-2005, 07:20 AM   #160
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here i am, and i just found out that the fastest connection speed here is 18 kbps, ITS PURE TORTURE I TELL YA!!
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TWENTY TWO


Obi Wan’s shuttle dropped out of hyperspace before the others did to check on the situation. The planet looked peaceful enough. He headed to the location above the planet from where he was to make his descent. Space rippled around the planet in about a 2 mile radius from the planet and 53 other shuttles dropped into realspace one by one. They were fitted with cloaking devices just in case and they all switched them on at Obi Wan’s command. 53 ships entered Coruscant’s atmosphere under cloaks and touched down at their destination locations. From all shuttles, twenty men in Elite Stormtrooper armor marched out in single file and headed for the nearest maglev tram station or public airspeeder station and requested locations very close to the Emperor’s Palace. The locals were very careful around their new customers. So far, the plan was working smoothly but Obi Wan had a biting worry at the back of his head that the Emperor or Vader might sense them. But Tara had made a short side-trip to Yavin-4 and captured an Ysalamiri to cloak them from the Force, but Obi Wan still had doubts, given Anakin’s strong affinity to the Force. Besides, the bright yellow reptile made it hard for them to use the Force. They had to concentrate even to levitate something, but luckily, after a small test, Obi Wan was sure that their reflexes were not affected. He shook his head softly and focused. Five minutes of walking brought them to a tram station. Obi wan went to the ticket counter.
“Give me five tickets to Chance Palp Spaceport,” Obi Wan said, his voice synthesized by the Stormtrooper helmet.
“Yes, of course, sir.” The man said and got out five tickets to their location in a jiffy.
“How much?” Obi Wan asked.
“25 credits, please.”
Obi Wan paid the man and they got into the tram.
“Statement: I believe visiting the spaceport will cause my circuits to get disrupted occasionally by the ion blasts of the ships that come and go, Master.” RM said from beneath a large cloak and hat.
“We are not going into the spaceport, Aarem.” Obi Wan said softly. “We will simply make it seem so. The Emperor’s Palace is only five kilometers from the Spaceport, this distance we cover by walking.”
“Question: Won’t the locals feel suspicious of us, Master?”
“They might, but that is a risk we have to take.”
“Negatory: No Master. Although it is not my place to correct you, even the slightest risk could upset the delicate balance of this operation.”
“What do you think we should do?” Tara asked the droid.
“Suggestion: We could jet to the top onto the main levels, Master.” The droid said.
“Jet?” asked Mace. “We do not have jetpacks, in case you didn’t notice,”
“Negatory: You don’t need jetpacks, Master. Suggestion: you can use this ‘Force’ and levitate yourself off the ground onto the main levels.”
That will arouse the suspicions of the locals.” said Obi Wan. “How do you know they won’t notice four flying Stormtroopers?”
“Heckle their minds, we must,” said Yoda from under the shell of an R2 D2 unit. The Jedi Master was not very happy with this but he took it in good spirit and occasionally played the sounds the R2 line of droids usually use to communicate from a playback radio taped to the inside of the shell.
“Okay,” said Obi Wan. “But the Ysalamiri will make it difficult for us to hold ourselves up for long.”
“Hold it, the droid will,” said Yoda.
“Affirmation: I will do so with pleasure, Master,” said RM.
“It’s settled then,” Mace said.
All five of them made their way to the nearest wall.


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