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Old 01-11-2006, 06:39 PM   #2001
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(1) Vernon stepped out onto the sand, mechanical eyes searching, as a platoon of soldiers surrounded him. "Post-M Soldier Grade 9," a soldier barked at him, "check that warehouse."

Vernon smirked, opening the door quickly, drawing his gun on a small child, lying in the corner nibbling on a pie.

"We found Dart!" Vernon laughed angrily, but his team had left to search other places.

(2) "This power, is unbelievable..." Vernon laughed evilly. "Put all the people to work!" He yelled, slamming on a button on the desk. "Bring me everything I want!"

He smirked darkly, his hair shadowing over his eyes.

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In the the future also....

Eva was clutching the bed tightly, screaming for all she was worth, and then...silence, and finally a baby crying. Eva looked up with all the strenght she had left. With her ast breath, she said "Her name is Glory. Find her a good...home." and then, Eva's eyes shet and her hand dangled lifelessly from the side of the bed.
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Old 01-11-2006, 08:16 PM   #2008
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(1)

"Eyaaaah!" D'Artagan screamed. "I didn't kill him! I swear to god! Someone jumped off a train, and fired a shot through the window - that was all, and he died because of air intoxication!" Vernon laughed. "Please. We don't need excuses. Post-M Response is taking you in, murder or not. You're a fugitive who's living outside of the safety of our city."

"No!" D'Artagan yelled, as a small furry animal similar to a cat crawled out from behind him. "I swear to god! If you want to take me, you'll have to find all of us!"

Vernon lowered his gun.

(2)

Vernon addressed the screens to his sides. "A new citizen is born. Target: Glory. Violation; miscount, unregistered parent."

"Bull****," Vernon growled. "Have her in captivity."

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Old 01-11-2006, 08:20 PM   #2009
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In the present(since future Eva is dead)....Eva sat in the lodge, drinking a glass of peppermint tea she brought from home, she picked up her copy of Ripley's Believe it or not and continued to read.
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Old 01-13-2006, 10:43 PM   #2010
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Old 01-14-2006, 12:52 AM   #2011
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(What happens to Eva in future 1? Does Glory team up with Dart? Eva doing casual things in the present doesn't seem very interesting, or helping with the plot.)

(1)

Vernon sighed, looking out the warehouse, ripping the communicator out of his ear, running across the field and shooting one soldier, before he had time to react. His vital sign failure reactor didn't go off, as the communicator was blasted out of his ear.

"Unit Vernon is down, and Unit Wander has removed his communicator. Something's wrong. It's the hostile."

Vernon smirked, reloading his gun, as they went to the site of the battle.

"Oh ****! Rogue alert! Rogue alert!"

(2)

Vernon smirked atop his throne. "Soldiers," he growled happily, "bring me a drink. A nice glass of water."

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Old 01-14-2006, 12:56 AM   #2012
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(Oh......Maybe we'll have a little present rebound fun, shall we????) Eva got up from her seat in the main lodge. She found a telephone, picked it up, and dieled a number.

"Hello?" She said "Is Matt there, it's Eva."
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Old 01-14-2006, 01:02 AM   #2013
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(Still not doing anything for the storyline.)

(1)

Vernon dived over, firing on the soldiers. "Send in Ship Maelstrom! I repeat, send in-" The soldier quickly had the communicator shot out of his hands, as Vernon smiled a dark smile, revealing the eyes under his hair. However, the other soldiers stood in shock as Vernon waltzed over, biting open his neck and sucking out his throat darkly, as blood gushed all over him.

"Matthew, eh?" Vernon asked, taking his dogtag right off his body.

The soldiers watched in a state of shock.

A gigantic fleet of ships loomed overhead darkly.

(2)

Nothing significant.

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Old 01-14-2006, 01:06 AM   #2014
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Eva and Matt talked for a while

"So, it's really strange that you're in town near here, isn't it?" Asked Eva over the line.
"Yeah, sure is. Maybe I could come visit you at this camp place." Replied Matt.
"Great idea, I guess you could come by around fiveish, okay?" She said.
"I'll be there." He happily replied. "See you tonight, Evita"
"Hehe, bye." Said Eva as she hung up the phone. Then she went to her cabin to change.
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Old 01-14-2006, 01:10 AM   #2015
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Vernon did not stop there. He tore out Matt's stomach, pouring the acid all over the ground.

"Holy ****!" Soldiers screamed, as he drenched himself in blood, painting under his eyes and marking himself. He looked up at the plane with an insane grin.

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Old 01-14-2006, 01:15 AM   #2016
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(Okay, this is just getting icky.)Eva was searching through her bag, looking for somthing relevantly decent to wear. She decided on a nice pair of jeans and a button down blouse she had never chosen to wear before. She was excited to be catching up with old friends, met in hospitals.
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Old 01-14-2006, 01:17 AM   #2017
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Vernon grinned, as bullets tore through the sand around him, the frightened and sickened D'Artagan crying and screaming, running away.

"Bring it on!" Vernon yelled, running under the fleet of planes.

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All of a sudden as if time had flew by it was five o'clock. Eva went out to the gates. She waited a few minutes until Matt arrived. When his car pulled up, and he got out Eva had a look on her face that was completely undiscribeable. Matt was very puny for a 19 year old. He was very skinny and slightly taller than Eva. He had dark brown hair and diamond-blue eyes you could stare into forever.

"Oh Matt, look at you!" Said Eva, her hands on her hips and a smile on her face.

"Well, haven't we changed a bit since Dr. Charmine's." He replied, giving her a hug.She took him by the arm and said "C'mon, you gotta see the place" as she led him through the gates.
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Old 01-14-2006, 01:36 AM   #2019
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Vernon jumped around, from crate to crate, jumping atop a warehouse and vaulting onto a gunship, hanging on for his life as it swerved around, and he produced a psychic pole, jamming it through the windshield, jumping to another one.

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Old 01-14-2006, 01:39 AM   #2020
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MORE STORY PLOT TWISTS? WHY, YES.

(2)

"Wait," Vernon asked. "Is it possible for me to return to the past?"

A soldier nodded. "It's a prototype, though. You'll be only allowed 30 minutes."

Vernon sighed.

"Send me back. Back to Whispering Rock, a long time ago."

He stood up, walking into a chamber, as light flooded around him.

"Something's gotta give," he muttered.

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Eva and Matt were walking down the path to the lake.

"It's been so good to see you." Eva said before they reached the lake. "Well, here it is, Lake What's-its-name." Matt looked at her and smiled. Eva looked up at him and smiled back. "Well, now that you've seen the camp let's head up to the main lodge." She Said. Eva took his hand and led him back up to the lodge.
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Old 01-14-2006, 12:32 PM   #2022
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Vernon arrived, tearing off his mask and breathing in the fresh crisp air. "Where is she?" Vernon asked, opening the door to the main lodge. Scars were visible on his face, insomnia bags under his eyes, and rage present in his eyes.

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Eva and Matt were still walking up the trail. She had to set fire to a few squirells, just to entertiain him. When the two reached the doors, they decided to just stay outside on such a lovely day this was. Eva and Matt sat at a picnic table outside the main lodge. They made small chat on the weather, recent news stories, and whatnot.
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Vernon looked around. "Bastards," he growled. He smashed apart the tables, finally knocking the door down, staring straight at Matt and Eva, directly into Matt's soul quickly with fire in his eyes.

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"My goodness!" Eva yelled," Vernon, what are you doing here?!?!?!"
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Vernon sighed. "Don't."

He commanded his glare still on Matt. "Don't follow him, or me. I have to return to the future. And any way you take ends in pain, for all of us."

He growled. "The only way to stop all of thi-"

As he began speaking, from seemingly nowhere a heavily armed soldier fell to the ground, followed by the child D'Artagnan and his small pet.

"Phew ****!" The soldier yelled. "Wait a second."

Soldier Vernon stared at Emperor Vernon, Matt, and Eva for a second.

"How in hell?" He asked.

"Who are you?" Emperor Vernon gasped.

"I'm Vernon Tripe. I became a soldier on the day Maloof was killed."

"That's impossible. I killed Maloof."

"Oh really? It was this kid that did it. And then he fled to the desert, and I figured the safest place to put him was back in time. Back in the best place of my childhood. But I guess I didn't go far enough."

"No, this is impossible."

Soldier Vernon looked up, hearing the familiar whir of a fleet of ships. "Today is just not my lucky day!" SV growled, leaping off the ground up and grabbing onto the underside of one ship.

"This day gets stranger and stranger," Emperor Vernon sighed. "From leaving Eva at camp to getting attacked by a fleet of planes."

Emperor Vernon sighed, grabbing simply a twig, as it materialized into a psychic sword.

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"Wait a minute, I thought I killed Maloof on that island over there." Said Eva

Matt looked over at her and said "You killed someone?"

Eva looked back and said, "It kinda had to be done, he was like the Psychic Hitler."

"Oh, Alright then." Said Matt staring at Vernon, "Now who are you?"
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Vernon sighed. "I'm... At least, I was... No. Maloof's been alive. He can project a clone of himself anywhere he wants... or at least, he could, before he died."

D'Artagnan looked around, holding his small furry animal and running inside the lodge.

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Eva and Matt both looked up at Vernon with a confused look on their faces. "Well, wanna go up to the lodge and see what's on Vh1?" Asked Eva.

"Good idea." Said Matt. She took his hand and they went up to the lodge.
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Soldier Vernon spun around, ripping the very wing off the gunship as it exploded, sending the fleet into a chain reaction, drawing his pistol and kicking down the lodge door in front of them. "Whoa there, pal," Soldier Vernon laughed. "None of you are going anywhere."

"That's right," the calmer and more refined voice of Emperor Vernon smirked in its tone, "We'll have to kill both of you; although I'm sure we both want to just kill one of you."

They set their gunsights on Matt. "Put your hands up, we got you from both sides."

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"NO! Yelled Eva. "You don't have to kill us. Can't you just erase our memories or somthing?"
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"Hmph," Soldier Vernon grunted, turning his pistol and firing some shots at Matt.

"I've seen enough blood. I'm gonna go check on the kid. Emperor, I won't deny you the pleasure."

The Emperor looked down at his feet, sighing. "No," he whispered, dropping his weapon. "I can't."

He began to fade out of the past, as Soldier Vernon and D'Artagnan sat in the TV Lounge.

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Eva held Matt tightly, tears forming in her eyes. He was her best friend she could remember. They always dreamth of being on Broadway together(Matt is totally straight.) All of a sudden she heard him sing.

"No more talk
of darkness,
Forget these
wide-eyed fears.
I'm here,
nothing can harm you -
my words will
warm and calm you."

Eva looked up at him singing and she smiled.
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Soldier Vernon smirked, watching the sentimental moment. Since that day, killing was his passion, as the child watched TV, impervious to the death that occurred just outside.

"I'm afraid that's his swan song," Vernon smirked, lighting up a cigarette and drawing his pistol once more, closing the door on D'Artagnan, "and you better start composing yours soon."

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Eva then sushed up Matt. There was a moment of silence then she sang.

"Think of me
think of me fondly,
when we've said goodbye.
Remember me
once in a while -
please promise me
you'll try...."
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(She shut him up.) Eva continued to look at Matt and sing.

"We never said
our love
was evergreen,
or as unchanging
as the sea -
but if
you can still
remember
stop and think
of me . . .

Think of all the things
we've shared and seen -
don't think about the things
which might have been . . ."
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Vernon fired a shot, hitting Eva's hand, causing her to drop Matt. "Please. Enough sentimental stuff. It almost makes something as beautiful as death bitter." He loaded his gun once more, sending a shot, however, it was stopped in midair, by the young D'Artagnan, who had seemingly stopped time to catch it.

"Stop it," he muttered. "I don't want little Fluffy to see people get hurt. Stop it."

Vernon looked shocked at the child, and the catlike creature. He sighed almost of sorrow, dropping his gun to the floor and removing his belt full of ammunition.

"I'm sorry," he whispered, looking at the child.

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"Ow!" Yelled Eva dropping to the ground. She held her hand in pain. Matt leaned down by her, and he put her wounded hand in his. The pain seemed to ease from her hand, as if the wound didn't exist.
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D'Artagnan produced a small hand from his sleeve, resting his hand on Eva's shoulder. "Don't worry. My mom taught me how to make people better."

The gunshot through Eva, and all of Matt's wounds disappeared in a hiss and a glow.

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