lfnetwork.com mark read register faq members calendar

Thread: Aprentice of Me
Thread Tools Display Modes
Post a new thread. Add a reply to this thread. Indicate all threads in this forum as read. Subscribe to this forum. RSS feed: this forum RSS feed: all forums
Old 01-09-2006, 03:22 PM   #1
ExiledFish's Avatar
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 168
Aprentice of Me

This is a Star Wars fanfiction and is in 1st person I hope you enjoy it as i will writing it.
__________________________________________________ _________________
Chapter 1 -return from the Outer Rim-

The gray came out of hyperspeed thruster burning and the ship on fire it hurtled towards the planet Telos .
Alo had failed the council and himself he went to malachor to save the Jedi who had left with revan instead he came out with a broken Hk-49 droid one hand missing and a ship that was now compleatly doomed. He flinched as he touched his hand he would have to get a robotic one and tried to control the ship to do a safe crash it hurtled towards the Telos academy hangers and instead missed and smashed straight into the snowy plaines which thankfully put out the fighter bu compleatly ruptchered the hull. Alo got up and had to chop through aloa of snow to get out he left the Hk droid and would pick it up later 2 jedi were waiting outside and looked upset that he had not saved any Jedi then they saw his arm and took him into telos as to Repair ship transported the grey to the hangar.
Alo whent straight to the medic bay and let the Medic's do there work they but a jab in him and he felt woozy and slowly drifted off.

"Master Atris will my Master be okay?" A voice echoed through Alo's head.
"yes he should be but I have news that a Jedi has returned from Malachor after leaving us for revan I must leave for Courascant for the Jedi will be exiled." Atris replied she walked out the room and desapeared ALo's eyes fliquered open as he saw Atris leave and he looked at his aprentice and got up.

" Talim how are you?" Alo asked her.
" [Question] the question is master how are you?" A voice suddenly said Alo looked over and saw that the Hk-49 droid he had saved was up and running.
"I got board so I did some moving meditating like you taught me and it seems "I fixed him oh and I am fine." Talim replied smiling.
" Good we must fix the ship so we have transport. " Alo said and started walking out the room and Hk-49 followed Hk stopped and turned round to face Talim.
"[Threat] Try shutting me down again and I will destroy you meat bag" It said and then buzzed and left the room.
Talim was left alone the past 5 days had gone so quickly but she felt some thing was coming she checked her lightsabers were on her belt and left the Medical room and headed for the Hangar.

[Center] |*~|My Work|~*| *~|~* Star Wars: Darkness Of The Past *~|~* Atop The Rakata Temple *~|~*

Last edited by ExiledFish; 01-09-2006 at 03:53 PM.
ExiledFish is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 12-04-2008, 01:26 PM   #2
Local curmudgeon
machievelli's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Las Vegas Nevada
Posts: 2,874
Current Game: Dungeonseige series
10 year veteran!  Hot Topic Starter  Veteran Fan Fic Author  Helpful! 

'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that?

From the one who brought you;
What we die for...
KOTOR excerpts
Star Wars: The Beginning
Star Wars: Republic Dawn
Return From Exile
machievelli is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Post a new thread. Add a reply to this thread. Indicate all threads in this forum as read. Subscribe to this forum. RSS feed: this forum RSS feed: all forums
Go Back   LucasForums > Network > Star Wars Gamer > Community > Coruscant Entertainment Centre > Aprentice of Me

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:11 AM.

LFNetwork, LLC ©2002-2015 - All rights reserved.
Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2016, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.