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Old 05-31-2006, 01:22 PM   #41
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Old 05-31-2006, 05:56 PM   #42
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Well,jedi exile,is my first Star Wars fic,it will get better.And this one was a bit rushed.Next one will be longer and hopefully better.
i liked it alot its my first time also can you read mine its called master naskin
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Old 05-31-2006, 06:10 PM   #43
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Sure,you read mine i read yours.And check out my RPG,it's in my sig.
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Old 05-31-2006, 07:34 PM   #44
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I actually had time to read this. Well done, I'm not that good with comments, but good.



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Old 06-01-2006, 04:59 AM   #45
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Thanks for the comments.I'll see when i can get Chapter IV up.
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Old 06-05-2006, 12:51 PM   #46
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That was SWEET when is chapter 4.

I'm new to this and I've already found a lot of fanfics after jedi academy but this is the first light side one.

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Old 06-05-2006, 12:57 PM   #47
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Don't double post. Use the edit post button in the bottom right hand corner. I also wrote a Light Side Fic after Jedi Academy. It is called Jedi Forces - Shadows of War.

My main Dark Side one is called The Sith Lord.

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Old 06-05-2006, 01:12 PM   #48
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Thanks for the tip.I've seen The Sith Lord but I haven't finished reading it.But I haven't seen JF-SOW. There are to many sith names for jaden Darth Malus,Darth Qollous ect.

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Old 06-05-2006, 01:15 PM   #49
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You should read it quick, before I decide to delete it. I shall also delete it's unfinished Sequel, Vengeance of the Empire.
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Old 06-05-2006, 02:15 PM   #50
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I finished reading the sith lord I think you should finish the sequel.Anyway when is chapter 4? What is descedant of the exile about?

p.s vengeance of the empire sounds cool.

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Old 06-05-2006, 06:38 PM   #51
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Thanks for the replies Connor.I've been very busy,so it's really hard to finish Chapter 4.I'll see what i can dig on weekend though.
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Old 06-05-2006, 07:03 PM   #52
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Old 06-05-2006, 07:59 PM   #53
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Old 06-07-2006, 05:57 PM   #54
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Just finished reading it. It's pretty good, I like it. Keep going!
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Old 06-08-2006, 09:50 AM   #55
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Thanks for the replies Connor.I've been very busy,so it's really hard to finish Chapter 4.I'll see what i can dig on weekend though.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but don't rush it. I can totally relate to being busy. You don't always have time to write. That's fine. I managed whip out a new chapter yesterday. I've started another chapter today. (Most of my finals are done with ) Anyways, great job so far.



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Old 06-10-2006, 01:01 PM   #57
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Thanks Niner,i'll check it out.Well,i don't have any more exams,i think i can get the chapter ready on my last week of school (19th-23rd) because it's mainly activities.
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Old 06-10-2006, 02:15 PM   #58
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Old 06-10-2006, 03:26 PM   #59
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I know. My activities week is on my last week.
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Old 06-10-2006, 04:36 PM   #60
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Niner,it's fun because some teachers skip the classes to take us to the activities.
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I'll probably be watching movies and having study halls on my last week. Too bad its only two days. Oh, and I'll be studying for my regents tests, too.



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Old 06-11-2006, 07:14 PM   #62
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Old 06-14-2006, 11:09 AM   #63
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like ive said before, good job. hey remember to check out my fanfic too


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Old 06-19-2006, 12:57 PM   #64
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Thanks for the comments,Chapter 4 probly coming this week.Final week!Also,check out front page for a image.Many thanks to Sabretooth.
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Old 06-20-2006, 01:41 AM   #65
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It seems everyone is stealing my front Pic idea! Well acutally, I got the idea from Alkonium's Fics. Can't wait for Chapter 4. Please be a good one.
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Old 06-20-2006, 09:11 AM   #66
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The title pic is just a fun thing to have. I hope that Sabretooth enjoys making them. I am waiting with impatience for chapter four.



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Old 06-21-2006, 05:39 AM   #67
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I think i can get it today.If not then Friday.
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Old 06-21-2006, 09:52 AM   #68
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Don't worry, I'm finding it even more difficult to work on mine, even though I'm on break. During the school year, I had a schedule; I worked on it a little each day. In the summer, I've been going on all day trips, and I haven't been able to find much time.



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Old 06-21-2006, 10:46 AM   #69
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Well,it's going good.
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The title pic is just a fun thing to have. I hope that Sabretooth enjoys making them.
As much as I love writing ! I don't see the title pic for this one, though. It's probably my Norton blocking it. How ironic, the creator can't see his creation...

This is a very good fanfic and I'm checking this out regularly. Can't wait for the next chapter...


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Old 06-22-2006, 04:23 AM   #71
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Cool,now Sabretoothe reads my fic.I just hope i get more viewers.Also Pottsie,the English-Latin translator is very cool,comes up with some good Sith names.
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Old 06-22-2006, 11:18 AM   #72
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Thanks very much Jason. If I find anything else useful, I'll put them in my Fanfics.
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Old 06-23-2006, 11:52 AM   #73
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Chapter IV right away!

Chapter IV
Games of Mistrust-Part II

Jaden and Rosh prepared the ship, giving it a extra seat for them to fit in while Kyra talked a bit about the Dark Side with Luke: how to evade it, how to get away from it and how to fight it. Rosh then interrupted.

“Kyra, the ship’s ready, we should go.” Said Rosh.
“Alright, thanks Rosh. Bye Master Skywalker.” Said Kyra.

She waved her hand at Luke and ran with Rosh to the ship. They saw Jaden finishing something on the engine.

“Well, the Raven’s ready to go.” Said Jaden. “Also, there is one seat at the front, the other two are behind and can turn around for the turrets.”
“We should get going.” Remarked Kyra.

A droid set up some stairs and they climbed them. Jaden sat in the front seat and Kyra and Rosh in the backseats. He set the coordinates to Nar Shadda and blasted off.


Meanwhile on a space ship, Kayn watched onto Nar Shadda.

“My Lord, the Jedi’s are on their way to Nar Shadda.” Said one of Kayn’s officers.
“Send starfighters Officer Skyrider. Also, tell Darth Tenebrae to go to our base on Nar Shadda. He should straighten those kids up.” Said Kayn.

Officer Skyrider got on some sort of mic and ordered many star fighters to look for the Raven’s Claw while Tenebrae went to Nar Shadda.


“What the? Rosh, Kyra, turrets, hurry!” said Jaden.

They both got their fingers on the triggers and started shooting. Many star fighters appeared and they were skilled shooters. Jaden evaded many shots but they weren’t enough for them. They needed a trap. Rosh prepared some sort of missile and shot it. It destroyed 5 star fighters. They went all at the Raven’s Claw but Jaden simply went up and they all crashed and burned, destroying each other.

“Well, we got out alive, that’s good to know. Now we should continue our trip to Nar Shadda.” Said Rosh.

When they got there, the welcoming party was Han and Chewie.

“Finally, you made it. I was starting to think you wouldn’t do it.” Said Han.

They walked off a little to the docks. They saw a TIE Fighter landing.

“Quick, hide!” said Jaden. They hided behind some boxes and saw a Sith coming out. His face was red and black, he had a cape and looked very shady. He asked the Dock Master if a ship known as the Raven’s Claw had landed but he didn’t knew. The Sith then walked off to the Jekk Jekk Tarr, a cantina which toxic fumes could kill a human.
They continued their “trip” to settle the Bounty and found that a Hutt named Gordon was near there.

“So all we need to do is get in there and talk to him?” asked Kyra.
“Unfortunately not. We need to seek a servant of his.” Said Han.

They walked off to the cantina where they found a Twi’lek. Fortunately he worked for Gordon.
“Hey you there!” shouted Han.
“Well well, if it isn’t Han Solo. What do you want?” asked the Twi’lek.
“We want to settle a Bounty with Gordon.”
“Oh, that. Well, you see, Master has certain “tastes”.”
“What do you mean?” asked Kyra.
“Oh, a girl. She’ll do nicely.”
“What does he mean?” asked Rosh.
“Well, kid, to settle the bounty you’ll have to…dance for Gordon. And to make matters worse, you have to wear a certain suit.” Said Han.

The Twi’lek showed them the suit. Kyra didn’t like it but she knew it was the only way to settle the bounty.

“Alright, I’ll do it.” Said Kyra as she put the dress on.

The Twi’lek then brought them to Gordon’s place. Kyra started dancing but eventually Gordon fell asleep as the Twi’lek ran off. Kyra put her normal clothes on and ignited her lightsaber.

“Wake up!” she shouted. Gordon immediately woke up.
“Ha, wah, oh, wait, what do you want?” said Gordon noticing she had her lightsaber ignited.
“I want you to stop the bounty we have on our heads!” she shouted once again.
Gordon looked right and left and then pressed a button. The Sith they saw came out.

“Tenebrae, deal with them!” said Gordon.

Tenebrae ignited his dual red lightsabers while Jaden and Rosh ignited theirs. The battle lasted about ten minutes with red, violet, orange and yellow sparks flying. Eventually Tenebrae knocked down both Jaden and Rosh and Kyra into Gordon. He was about to stab her when she flipped and rolled on his shoulders and he stabbed Gordon, killing him. Tenebrae then turned around only to be decapitated by Kyra’s spinning lightsaber throw. Finally it was done, there was no longer a bounty on their heads and Darth Tenebrae was dead.

“That’s for making me wear that dress!” said Kyra with a angry look. Jaden and Rosh calmed her down and to relax a little, they went to the Cantina and played a little Pazaak and then finally went to the Raven’s Claw to go back to Yavin IV.


“Master, Darth Tenebrae is dead.” Said Cyrus.
“It does not matter Cyrus, he was weak anyway. Let’s see how this meddling kids get out of my next idea.” Said Kayn as he laughed a evil laugh.

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Good Chapter. Took a while though... . Looking foward to next Chapter.
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Old 06-23-2006, 05:17 PM   #76
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Thanks for the comments. Also, remember, rate, hate, advice!

Connor: try to post more than cool, it's kinda spammy.
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Good chapter. I had to refresh on what happened earlier, lol. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll have to too for mine by the time I get the next chapter out. Good work.



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Old 06-27-2006, 12:10 PM   #78
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Thanks for the comment Niner. Also, Chapter V's coming soon. I plan on doing 20 chapters.

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I am sorry to say this but after much thinking, i've decided to quit this fic. I may write a KOTOR one in the nearby future but now it's just especulation.

Peace out.
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I am sorry to say this but after much thinking, i've decided to quit this fic. I may write a KOTOR one in the nearby future but now it's just especulation.

Peace out.
I'm disappointed to hear that, but I think you should maybe continue this, but maybe not make it twenty Chapters. Maybe something like ten. If you want, I'll help you with ideas, etc.
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