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Old 06-05-2006, 03:05 PM   #41
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Where is the resttttttttttttttttt.CHAPTER 7 must be made I advise you add ferus olin from the last of the jedi long live star wars!!!!!!

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Old 06-06-2006, 06:21 PM   #42
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good work, man. id like to see another planet destroyed
In a couple chapters or more you will see one


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Old 06-06-2006, 06:23 PM   #43
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In a couple chapters or more you will see one
whens one of those chapters
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I presume you've seen the original trilogy


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Old 06-06-2006, 10:21 PM   #46
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spoiler:
It's about 3 or 4


everyone:

I won't be able to continue working on my fanfic yet because I'm working on a project for school, sorry. If i'm extremely lucky, I just might be able to get in posted 2morrow


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Nice Story.... I think you should add in 'The Corrupt' armies from the Empire At War Expansion Pack l8er in the story
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Old 06-07-2006, 07:34 PM   #49
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Chapter 7: The Final Stages

It's been a year after the destruction of Geonosis and the Skywalker twins have been progressing admirably. Bastila called Luke and Leia out of their studies and into the courtyard. She claimed that she had one final test for them. Bastila was waiting for them outside. Where she was standing next to a small tunnel. "This will be the final stage of your training" Bastila told.
"What will we be doing here?" asked Luke.
"I have 3 saber crystals with me, I will ask you a few questions and you will go into that tunnel with one saber crystal that is most suited for you and build your lightsaber." she explained.
"What?" asked Leia "It has to be harder than that."
"It is" told Bastila "When you slide down that tunnel, you will have to go through a series of trials to get back up to the surface in a room where you will build your lightsaber. Got it?"
"Got it!" they both said
"But first you must answe some questions where you will get one of three saber crystals: Blue, Yellow or Green."
"Are they supposed to symbolize something?" asked Luke.
"Blue is the path of the Jedi Guardian, Yellow: The Jedi Sentinal, Green: The Jedi Consular."
"Okay, a mother and child are attacked by a group of thugs and you two are the only people there." Bastila explained, "What will you do?"
"I'll attack the thugs." told Luke.
"I'll help them flee." told Leia.
"Next, you are in combat with Darth Vader and there is a pause in the battle." explained Bastila, "What will you do then?"
"Attack." told Luke.
"Find a weakness." told Leia.
"I suspected as much, next question, you come across a locked door and your objective lies on the other side." told Bastila, "What will you do?"
"Try and pick the lock." told Leia.
"Use my saber to make an opening." told Luke.
"I'm beginning to see a pattern here, final question, you are both the head of a Jedi Acadamy on a contested world and the Sith are turning your students to the Dark Side. What will you do?" asked Bastila.
"Hunt them down." told Luke.
"Lure them into a trap." told Leia.
"Very good, we're done. Luke: you would be most suited as a Jedi Guardian, and Leia: you would be most suited as a Jedi Sentinal." told Bastila, "But I only make the recomendations, you make the final decision on what you want to be."
Luke and Leia consulted each other and made their decisions.
"I want to be a Jedi Guardian." told Luke.
"And I want to be a Jedi Sentinal." added Leia.
"Here are your crystals." told Bastila giving Luke a blue crystal, and giving Leia a Yellow crystal.
The Skywalker twins walked right up to the entrance with their crystals in hand.
"Good luck" told Bastila. "Hopefully you won't need it."

The twins jumped into the tunnel and slid down to the bottom. Where they saw before them a large room, but they could only go to one area, they followed that hallway and only found a small room with a cracked wall. Luke thought about the situation for a bit and used Force Push on the wall.
"Good thinking." congratulated Leia.
Luke blew his hand as if he was blowing the smoke out of a DL-44 blaster pistol.

They followed another hallway which led them to another room except with a locked door and a lever which was impossible to get to. Leia quickly used the Force to pull the lever towards them to open the door.
"Good job' congratulated Luke.
Leia made a brief smile.

They followed another hallway which seemed to lead to a dead end. Luke looked up and found a ledge he could jump to.
"Time to jump sis." told Luke.
"What?" asked Leia.
Luke made an extremely high jump and made it up on to the ledge safely.
"NEXT TIME TRY LOOKING!" yelled Luke.
Leia quickly jumped up to rejoin with him.
"This place has seen better days, definately." told Leia.
"Yeah, I assume they had stairs once." added Luke.

The twins ran down an open hallway where Bastila was waiting for them.
"Finally, an open door." told Luke.
But as the twins got close, the door closed.
"No-no" said Luke in dismay.
Leia notice a switch on the ground and the door reopened. She ran to get outside the door. When the door started to close, Leia ran faster, all she saw was a slow door. Luke walked back to the switch and started running to the door. Luke entered the same state Leia was in and got through the door.

"Great job you two." congratulated Bastila, "I have two lightsabers with no crystals in them waiting for you two to put them in."
Luke and Leia walked over to their tables, no questions asked and started building their weapons. When they finished, they turned them on and they were working perfectly.
"Well done." congratulated Bastila, "You have completed your apprenticeship, and are now Padawans! I am honoured to call the both of you: Jedi."
"Thank you" the twins answered.
"Now when the time comes, you will be called to help the Alliance in their struggle against The Empire." Bastila explained,"There should be a change in your wardrobe back in your quarters."

The twins were sent back to their rooms and found that their regular clothes have been replaced with Padawan Robes. They were now Jedi, ready to help the galaxy whenever necessary.

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Old 06-08-2006, 01:38 AM   #50
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Good Trials. I always imagined Leia to be a Jedi Consular.
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Old 06-08-2006, 10:01 AM   #51
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Old 06-08-2006, 01:32 PM   #52
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Gud Chapter

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Old 06-08-2006, 02:13 PM   #53
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Good chapter,was expecting Leia as a Jedi Sentinel.
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I think you're talking about a Signature. When you're signed in, click on Quick Links in the top right hand corner. It will bring a list down. One will be Edit Signature. Do what you want from there and then press Finish Signature.
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Old 06-08-2006, 08:27 PM   #55
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Chapter 8: The Death Star Plans

"Miss Padme?"
"Yes Captain Antilles?"
"We have recieved a transmission from an imperial transport craft, on the scanners it has no escort."
"The prisoners on the Death Star have escaped" said Padme with glee, "Let them land, let them land."

Padme ran to the imperial transport to welcome her men home. "Welcome home, I was beginning to worry."
"Well, we made it just fine." said a Jedi who was also being kept prisoner, "When we escaped, we found the plans of the use of that battle station."
"Where are they?" asked Padme.
"I have them right here." told the Jedi giving a data disc to her.

Padme made her way to the computer and inserted the disc, it read: "With this battle station we will crush the alliance in one blow, once we find the planet they are cowering on, we will fire our super-lazer upon them so no one can appose Lord Vader." Padme turned off the computer and took out the data disc. "We cannot forward the plans to Coruscant from here..." explained Padme.
"Then I suggest that we bring them to Coruscant." suggested Bastila who was there with them.
"The idea is good but I don't know who to send to escort them." told Padme.
"Padme, can I speak to you in private?" asked Bastila.
"Okay."

Padme and Bastila left the room.
"I suggest that you send Luke and Leia to escort them." suggested Bastila.
"What?!"
"Darth Vader doesn't even know he has children, it could work to our advantage." told Bastila.
"Then we'll have to make a transmission to Coruscant when we get in range, I don't want to risk their lives, they're all I have left of Anakin." told Padme.
"I understand, and that is a reasonable change. answered Bastila.

Padme went outside and found Leia. "Hi Leia, what are you doing?" asked Padme.
"Watching Luke and Wedge fly around in their X-Wings." answered Leia.
Padme went to the hangar to call her son down and they met with Leia in the courtyard. "Kids..."
"Yes?" asked Luke.
"I think it would be a good idea if you transmit a message to Coruscant for the Rebellion."
"Yes." both the kids whispered.
"I need you to fly into space so you can make a transmission to Coruscant about the Death Star plans, you do that, and the Rebellion will make a large step in liberating the galaxy from evil." explained Padme.
"We'll do it mother." answered Luke.
"Good... for your own safety, I'll be sending a large force with you on a Corellian Corvette."
"Don't worry mother, we'll have Vader out of office faster than his head will spin." told Leia.
"Okay kids."
Padme brought them to the Tantive IV. "Good luck." told Padme.
"Don't worry mother." replied Luke.
"I'm not going to like this at all, I hate flying." said a golden droid.
"Beep beep *whistle* (You Mynock)"
"Switch off"
"*Whistle* *farting sound* beep (Aww **** off)"
"Watch your speech"

After a long journey, The Tantive IV was almost in transmission range but, the were being chased by the Executor, which blew off the transmission dish. The Executor caught up to the Tantive IV and started pulling it into the hangar via tracktor beam. Troops immediatly ran over to the airlock to prepare for imperial boarding. The Skywalkers ran over to help but Captain Antilles told them to get down to the nearby planet. Sparks started to fly at the airlock then suddenly the door blew open and blasters started blazing. Luke and Leia ran immediatly to the escape pods, droids C-3PO and R2-D2 followed.
"Okay, you and the droids first." told Leia rather paranoid. She looked down the other end of the hall and began to sense trooper prescense very close.
"LEIA COME ON!" yelled Luke.
Leia just shut the door and locked it.
"NO- NOO!"
"Master Luke hurry." told 3PO.
Luke and the droids followed the hallway to the nearest escape pod and launched.
"There's one!" said a Storm Trooper noticing Leia, "Set for stun!"
Leia picked up a gun and shot a trooper and made a run for it, but another trooper stunned her.

On the escape pod, Luke hung his head and looked as if he was about to cry. He felt horrible knowing that he's safe heading for the planet below, and his sister about to face the wrath of Anakin.

Back onboard the Tantive IV, one Storm Trooper met Lord Vader who was interrogating Captain Antilles. "The Death Star plans are not in the main computer." told the troooper.
"Where have you been sending transmissions? What have you done with those plans?!" asked Anakin.
"We never made any transmissions... we're on a diplomatic mission."
Captain Antilles died and was thrown down.
"Tear this ship apart, and bring me the passengers, I WANT THEM ALIVE!" roared Anakin.

Stay tuned for my next chapter


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Old 06-09-2006, 01:39 AM   #56
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Good Chapter. Nice to see 3P0 and R2 again.
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Old 06-09-2006, 02:39 AM   #57
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Old 06-09-2006, 04:19 AM   #58
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good work, revanscool, i always wanted luke to be a guardian


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Old 06-09-2006, 05:20 AM   #59
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Good chapter again.Also,a Corvette?Lol.And how much lenght do your chapters have?2 pages?3?
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Good chapter again.Also,a Corvette?Lol.And how much lenght do your chapters have?2 pages?3?
The Tantive IV is a Corellian Corvette, I know that my chapters are definately not as long as Pottsie's when he was writing his Jaden/Malus fic


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Old 06-12-2006, 10:04 PM   #62
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I'm sorry for the delay on my fic everyone, but I was grounded, I'm now working on it.


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Chapter 9: The Truth

(It's finally here W00T!!!)

Leia was taken prisoner by Imperial Stormtroopers and taken to Anakin knowing nothing of who he used to be.
"Emperor Vader, why am I not surprised...? The Imperial Senate will not sit still for this!" she told.
"Where are those transmissions you made?" Anakin asked.
"I don't know what you're talking about... I am a member of the Imperial Senate returning home from a diplomatic mission." Leia bluffed.
"YOU ARE A JEDI, PART OF THE REBEL ALLIANCE AND A TRAITOR!" Anakin yelled not calling it, "TAKE HER AWAY!"
Anakin's apprentice Darth Moordenaar walked up and began to tell him about the some escape pods that escaped the heat of the battle.
"Send a detachment down to the planet below and send a distress signal and tell them all the crew were killed."
"Yes master" replied Lord Moordenaar, she bowed and took her leave.

Down on the planet below, Luke and the droids were travelling the desert and were tired as hell.
"I sense we're getting close to a house." Luke told the droids, "Don't worry we'll be safe."
"This desert is hell." told 3PO, "It seems like we're made to suffer."
"Beep whistle beep beep (aww shut your voice box you walking junkpile)" told R2.
3PO didn't answer.

Luke scanned the area and noticed a moisture farm, "There's some shelter." yelled Luke excited. Luke and the droids bolted to the moisture farm and Luke knocked on the door. The door opened. The man who opened the door noticed the rough state they were in and invited them in.

"Get lost in that desert and it's hell to pay." told the man.
"Thank you for offering us shelter." told Luke.
"Owen Lars." said the man introducing himself offering a handshake.
"Luke Skywalker." replied Luke accepting the handshake.
"Sorry, I didn't catch that, what's your name again son?" asked Owen.
"Luke Skywalker." Luke replied.
"... Skywalker? Shmi Skywalker, my stepmom."
"You must know my father then! Who is he?" asked Luke very quickly.
"He was my stepbrother, Anakin..." answered Owen.
"Then you're my uncle." told Luke.
"Whistle whistle (awwww what a great family reunion)" told R2.
"Watch your mouth, you rude little twirp."
"My father was a Jedi wasn't he?" asked Luke.
"A great one." Owen answered, "He was the most powerful of them all, he had many friends, his closest were: Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Darth Vader, when Anakin and Vader entered the order, they were trained by Obi-Wan. They were both arrogant and both wanted to learn more. After the Clone War, Vader was seduced by former Emperor Palpatine with promises of ultimate power, Vader then killed all the Jedi, even your father, then when he killed their mentor he killed his new master and took his place as Dark Lord of the Sith and Emperor of the Galaxy." explained Owen, "Word of these events travel fast."

Luke got angrier by the minute, he clenched his fist and it began to crack.
"I'm sorry." apologized Owen.
"It's better that I know the full truth." forgave Luke, "My mother only told me he was killed after the war, now I know who to look for, why didn't Bastila tell me?"
"Beep whoop whistle (aww, poor baby.)" R2 insulted.
Luke ignored him.
"Owen, I need to leave this planet to rescue my sister from that murderer, can you help me?" asked Luke.
"I can only get you to Mos Eisley Spaceport and lend you some credits to pay for a ride." Owen answered.
"I appreciate that, thank you."
"First get some rest, and I'll give your droids an oil bath." told Owen.
"Thanks."


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Good one.Funny as how R2 is such a bastard.
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Good Chapter, never knew how insulting R2 could be.
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R2 deserves to be pwned by luke . mecahnical SOB

anyway, good chapter.


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Luke should dismantle R2 for that,lol.
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Chapter 10: Han Solo

"You can borrow my landspeeder to get to Mos Eisley" offered Owen, "But then you'll have to hire someone to help find your sister."
"Thank you, I appreciate that." told Luke.
"Beep whistle whistle (YESSS! We can leave this hell hole)" whistled R2 in glee.
"What's that little bucket saying?" asked Owen.
"*Farting sound* beep whistle (Don't make me bust some lightning on your ass, old man!)" warned R2 thinking Owen was insulting him.
"You don't want to know." told Luke, "I should dismantle him soon for all the insults." told Luke.
"*Farting sound* (F**K)" wailed R2.
Do it, do it! 3PO thought to himself.
"But he might be useful." told Luke.
"Whistle (awww Padme thank you)"
"We've got to go." told Luke, "Thank you for your hospitality."
"Find your sister!" ordered Owen.
"I'll do that!" replied Luke.

Luke drove Owen's landspeeder to Mos Eisley Spaceport in search for a pilot who would be daring enough to help him. He searched the cantinas until he found a Wookie who told him that he knew someone. The Wookie led Luke to an empty table and asked him to sit. Seconds later he was met by a scruffy looking man. "Han Solo, I'm captian of the Millennium Falcon." boasted the man.
"I'm Luke Skywalker, I am a new Jedi in search for my sister." replied Luke.
"A Jedi, eh? Where were you planning on searching?" asked Han.
"Every Imperial Vessel until I find her!" answered Luke.
"Whoa whoa whoa, that commited huh? The cost will be big, are you sure you have enough money to pay that kind of flying kid?" Han asked.
"My mother was the former senator of Naboo, and she is now the leader of the Galactic Rebellion, once you help me rescue my sister, my mother will pay you handsomely." explained Luke.
"Wow kid, you've got yourself a deal." replied Han cheerfully, "We leave this rock as soon as we can. You look beaten, help yourself to a drink before we go."
Luke walked to the bar and asked for a Tarisian Ale, he was drinking when he was inturrupted by an Anqilish then a man witha flat face. "He doesn't like you." told the man.
"Sorry." replied Luke.
"I don't like you either, we're wanted people, we don't want you telling anything about us." ordered the man.
"I'll be careful." told Luke.
"YOU'LL BE DEAD" roared the man.
"This little one is not worth your trouble, let me buy you a drink." told a familiar woman. The man pushed the woman out of the way and attacked Luke, Luke raised his blue saber and killed the man. "Bastila, what are you doing here?" asked Luke.
"Guiding you... I see you have us some transportation, good good." congratulated Bastila.

Han Solo tried to make his way back to Luke to tell him that he's ready, but he was intercepted by a Rodian, "Going somewhere, Solo?" the Rodian asked.
"Greedo, tell Jabba that I have the money now, I just need a bit more time" told Han reaching for his blaster.
"It's too late, you're too late." replied Greedo.
"Don't do it." ordered Han.
Greedo took a shot but missed, Han took a shot and gave him another eye socket, he tipped his server and got Luke ready. "Who's your new friend?" Han asked.
"Bastila Shan." Luke replied.
"One extra eh?" asked Han.
"Yes." replied Bastila.

Han led Luke, Bastila and the droids to the Millennium Falcon and invited them aboard, "Enjoy your trip" said Han.
"I don't sense any deception from him, which is good." told Bastila.
The Falcon took off.

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Good Chapter Revanscool. It still feels the same as ANH, but with some things different.
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Good Chapter Revanscool. It still feels the same as ANH, but with some things different.
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Chapter 11: Boarding the Station

"If you want your brother to survive, then name the system!" demanded Moorenaar.
Leia started crying "Yavin IV" she sobbed. "All on Yavin IV."
"Do it." ordered Anakin.
"WHAT?!" screamed Leia.
"From here, my lady, Yavin IV is very remote." replied Anakin, "But do not fret, your Rebel friends will perish soon enough."
"No please! Don't kill my brother." Leia begged.
"Why? So he can board the ship and rescue you? I cannot allow that." answered Anakin.
"No." sobbed Leia.
"Don't test my patience!" demanded Anakin, "You will join him one with the Force soon enough."
Leia sniffed, thinking her brother was going to die and knowing she couldn't do anything about it. A green laser shot at the barren planet, it then exploded, just as Anakin did to Geonosis. Leia only stared into space letting her tears run down her face. Leia turned around and tried to use Force Pull to grab one of Anakin's sabers, while she was pulling the saber, Anakin grabbed it saying "I am the Dark Lord of the Sith. I am not a moron, you imbecile!" Anakin then turned to his apprentice and ordered her to take Leia to the detention centre on level 5.

Lord Moordenaar took Leia into her cell but then she heard her master talk to her through the Force "Punish her, for trying to put up a fight at the observation level." he ordered. Moordenaar started beating Leia and using the Force to torture her until she passed out.

Aboard the Millennium Falcon, Luke got increasingly angry, feeling his sister's pain.
"Luke, there is no chaos." said Bastila reciting the Jedi Code to calm Luke down.
Luke took a deep breath and followed "There is harmony." he completed.
Han Solo noticed the Death Star "What in the hell is that?" he asked himself. Luke and Bastila walked into the room and also noticed the Death Star. "Do you want to start there, kid?" asked Han.
"Yeah." answered Luke.
The Millennium Falcon began to rumble and steadily started flying toward the Death Star.
"Faster!" demanded Luke.
"Shut the hell up kid, there isn't a damn thing I can do, they've caught us in a tractor beam." snapped Han.
"Then we must wait." told Bastila.
Chewie roared. The Millenium Falcon moved slowly and steadily towards the Death Star, and her crew awaited the landing.


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Good Chapter, again with several changes.
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Good one once again.
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well RC wanted to see another planet blown, fortunately for him, Tatooine was my plan.


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announcement to my readers: I am currently working on my fanfic, It's hard to with my summer job in all,

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I am currently nearing the ending chapters of the fanfic, I will be creating a sequal.


but I won't be doing it right away

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because I want to do one on KotOR



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