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Old 07-05-2006, 11:36 PM   #81
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Chapter 12: The Rescue

"Get into these compartments, people." Ordered Han, "We can hide here." Everyone hid into the compartments of the Millenuim Falcon. They heard the footsteps of the Imperial Troops, until it stopped. "The ship's all yours gentlement." Some Imperial workers brought some equipment on the ship but fell flat on the ground, to Luke and Bastila's sabers. "Hey down there." yelled Han, "Could you give us a hand?" he asked. The Storm Troopers that were previously on the ship walked back up the loading ramp answering his call, but they fell dead to Han's blaster. "TK-421, what's your status?" asked an officer, "TK-421, do you copy?" A Storm Trooper walked out of the loading ramp and tapped his helmet. "Can I get assistance down here? We've got a blown speaker." The man opened the door and there stood Chewie, who quickly killed him.

"I must go and disable the tractor beam, so we can leave. I will go alone." told Bastila.
"I want to go with you." said Luke.
"An- err... Vader is too much for you, you will fight very bravely but die very quickly, to avenge for the crimes he has commited." explained Bastila.
"Okay" Luke obeyed. Bastila closed the door behind her.
"I don't want to wait here to be captured, I want back to my ship." complained Han.
"BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP (HEY ASSWIPES, I'VE FOUND HER)" beeped R2.
"He's saying that he has found Leia." explained 3PO.
"Where is she?" asked Luke.
"Beep whistle *farting sound* beep whistle (Level 5, in the detention centre numbnuts, where else?)"
"We got to go find her" ordered Luke.
"Count me out." complained Han.
"At first you didn't want to wait to be captured, but now all you want to do is stay?" asked Luke.
"Walking into the detention area is not what I had in mind." told Han.
"They're gonna do something to my sister." complained Luke.
"Better her, than me"
"Remember our agreement? You walk out now, you get no money." threatened Luke.
"Damnit, fine." obeyed Han.
"I need you to put some cuffs on Chewie here."
Han walked over to Chewie with some handcuffs, "Don't worry Chewie, I think I know what he has in mind."

Luke, Han and Chewie made their way to the detention centre to rescue Leia. But they weren't welcomed gladly with Chewie. "I was not aware of this transfer, I'm going to confirm it." told the officer. Luke ignited his saber and started killing the men. When he killed the last one, he took his sister's saber from his belt. The Alarm had already gone off and Han was the first one there. "What's your situation up there?" asked an officer.
"Uhh... everything's fine situation normal, we're fine, we're all fine... How are you?" asked Han.
"We're sending a squad up." told the officer.
"Uhh... negative, negative, we have a large reactor leak, very dangerous, give us some time to surpress it." told Han.
"Who is this? What's your operating number?" asked the officer. Han grabbed a gun but didn't shoot when he heard Luke say: "Make something up."
"Uhh... 925-026-7153." told Han.
"We'll leave you to the reactor leak." told the officer.

Luke made his way to Leia's cell where Luke was happy to sense her alive. Luke opened the door. "Aren't you a little short for a Stormtrooper?" asked Leia.
"Damn straight." told Luke as he removed his helmet.
"LUKE! I thought you were dead." said Leia in glee as she ran to hug him.
"The new Jedi won't die so easy, here's your weapon." replied Luke as he gave his sister her yellow blade. Luke and Leia met Han in the hallway, "Wha'd you say?" asked Luke.
"They think we're a clean up crew." replied Han.
"Good, now we have to find a way to get out of here." told Leia.
"Hello, gorgeous... I'm Han Solo." said Han, introducing himself to Leia.
"And I am Leia." replied Leia with a smile on her face.
"Leia, I am going to put these cuffs on you so it makes it look like we are doing a prisoner transfer." explained Luke.
"Okay, where to now?" asked Leia as Luke cuffed her.
"To his ship." replied Luke "We have to meet with Bastila."
"That's good news." replied Leia.

Luke and the others walked the Death Star trying to get back to the hangar, Bastila trying to dis-engage the tractorbeam, with Anakin looking for them all. Bastila found a power room and shimmied over to the controls. She lowered the power and disabled the tractorbeam. Then started making her way to the Millenium Falcon. Everyone eventually were reunited in the hangaer. "Bastila, well aren't you a sight for sore eyes." told Leia.
"It is good to see you too Leia." replied Bastila.
"We have to get back on the ship" complained Han.
"Quit complaining, leave that to the Jedi." told Luke. Luke, Leia and Bastila ignited their sabers and started killing the Stormtroopers one by one until there were none left. Everyone made their way on the ship and Chewie got the engines fired up while Han and Luke took the turbo lazers to make sure no one would get on board. Anakin Skywalker himself tried to get on board, but the loading ramp closed before he could try. The Falcon took off with no worry of a tractor beam.

Unfortunately they were followed by a number of Tie-Fighters. Han and Luke got back on the turbo lazers, guns blazing. They killed off all the fighters until there were none left, and minimal damage was taken.

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Old 07-06-2006, 12:13 AM   #82
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darnt i though bastila was going to be killied by vader istead of obi wan since obi1 is dead anyway sweet chap

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Old 07-06-2006, 12:19 AM   #83
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I want her to be in the sequal


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Old 07-06-2006, 02:26 AM   #84
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I can't wait for the last Chapter. Let it be a long duel between Bastila and Vader, with Vader trying to bribe Bastila to the Dark Side.
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Old 07-06-2006, 11:10 AM   #85
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Good chapter Revanscool. You should really make Luke dismantle R2.
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Old 07-06-2006, 09:35 PM   #86
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You should really make Luke dismantle R2.
Oh, he'll get screwd one way or another!


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Old 07-06-2006, 11:55 PM   #87
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Final Chapter: The Battle of Yavin IV!

"Will you fight for us?" asked Leia.
"For you? Of course!" replied Han.
"Good, thank you so much." thanked Leia in glee. She stood up to leave the cockpit to meet Bastila and Luke, but before she left she kissed Han on the cheek. "Your welcome!" Han said to himself. Leia walked to the guest's quarters to Bastila being interrogated by Luke. "Did Vader kill my father?" Leia heard Luke ask. Leia gasped. "Yes Luke, I'm sorry to sat that he did." answered Bastila.
"Don't be sorry for telling me now, why didn't you tell me earlier?" Luke asked.
"Then your mind would be so concentrated on revenge, you would fall to the Dark Side." Bastila answered.
"I understand, master." said Luke with a sigh.
"I'm sorry." said Bastila. Leia began to weep, she ran to her room and started bawling. "We're coming up on Yavin IV" told Han. Luke and Leia ran to the loading ramp to meet their mother. The loading ramp lowered and Padme was waiting there. "MOM" both Luke and Leia roared, running to give her a hug.
"Luke, Leia." replied Padme.
"We missed you so much." told Luke.
"Same here, kids."
Han walked from the loading ramp to take a stretch. "Mom, this is Han Solo, he help us get here." explained Leia.
"How'dyo do?" asked Han.
"Very fine, thank you for getting them here safe." replied Padme.
"Mom, they know that we're here." explained Leia.
"Excuse me?"
"The Sith have their ways."
"Then we must prepare. And Bastila, Luke, Leia? Can I see you for a moment in the hangar?" asked Padme. Bastila and the twins followed Padme into the hagnar. "Our smugglers have stolen these." announced Padme as she revealed three Jedi Starfighters.
"These are Starfighters from the Old Republic, aren't they?" asked Luke.
"Yes, you'll need them." replied Padme.

Hours later everyone was prepared for a space battle, so were the Sith. "I want there master! I want her battle meditation, I-want-her here." ordered Vader "Is the tractorbeam back online?"
"Sir, yes sir."
"Good."
Back on Yavin IV, Padme was trying to inspire her army with hope. "There were many one sided wars in the period of the Republic... But this is your time and you will win, believe in yourselves." yelled Padme. The army cheered, her speech was a success. Everyone launced to space to meet the Sith at the Death Star. "Is everyone there?" asked Padme.
"Gold squadron, standing by."
"Red squadron, standing by."
"Blue squadron, standing by."
"Viridian squadron, standing by."
"Violet squadron, standing by."
"Rogue squadron, standing by." said Wedge.
"Good to have you with us, Wedge." said Luke.
"Orange squadron, standing by."
"White squadron, standing by."
"Green squadron, standing by."
"Jedi squadron, standing by." said Bastila.
"Millenium Falcon, standing by." said Han.
"Lock S-foils in attack position." ordered Bastila as they approached the Death Star.
"Look at the size of that thing." Wedge pointed out.
"Viridian squadron, bomb the turbo lazers." ordered Bastila. A group of Y-Wings made an attack run on the turbo lazers, taking them out one by one. "I can use my concussion missles to help out" suggested Han.
"That would be appreciated." answered Bastila. Han fired some concussion missles that took out the turbo lazers very quickly, until he was out. Luke fired at random places on the battle station causing him blocking off major hallways. "Sir, the attack force is taking out our turbo lazers one by one sir."
"Then we will destroy them ship to ship, Moordenaar, you take the generals to test out the new fighters."
"Yes Master" obeyed Moordenaar.

Bastila flew past the hangar to take out the turbo lazers there, but she ended up getting sucked in. "Leia we have to save Bastila." told Luke.
"My pain is meaningless, focus on the task at hand, I am not defenseless." ordered Bastila. Anakin observed Bastila's starfighter as it was getting pulled in by a now working tractorbeam, "good, good, come to me my prey." Anakin made his way to the hangar where he would be waiting for Bastila, he closed off that hangar so no one could intrude on the fight.

"I've been waiting for you milady, we meet at last." told Anakin as Bastila landed, "You and your battle meditation would be a great asset for me... Come to the Dark Side."
"I've been there, Skywalker." replied Bastila "I will never go back."
"So be it." told Anakin as he ignited his blue and red sabers. Bastila ignited here yellow doublesaber and entered a fierce battle with the most powerful Sith Lord of all time.

"Attention spacers... enemy fighters coming your way." warned an officer.
"This is where the fun begins." told Han "Chewie, pilot this thing while I take the gun turrets." ordered Han. Chewie roared back. A large space battle had started while both sides had lazers blazing all over the place. "LEIA THERE'S A FIGHTER ON YOUR BACK!!" screamed Luke.
"I can't shake `im." replied Leia. Han fired a persice shot at the wing of the Tie Fighter and it landed on the station. "Thank's stud." thanked Leia.
"Anytime, toots" replied Han.
"I've found the trench" annonced Gold Leader "We're making our run"
"Cover me, I'm on the leader." ordered Moordenaar in her new Tie Advanced X-1.
"Yes Ma'am."
Moordenaar and her generals picked Gold Squadron off one by one.

In the hangar, the battle between Bastila and Anakin continued. There was a pause in the battle, Anakin's head peered of in the direction of the trench. "They've found it, Sith Lord." told Bastila "The trench, it's only a matter of time"
"You can surrender and die with some dignity." suggested Anakin.
"If I die, I will become more powerful than you can possibly imagine." replied Bastila. Then the duel continued. Anakin cut Bastila's saber in half but both sides still worked. Bastila kicked Anakin down and knocked him out. She stroke up to him and was ready to end it all. "You can still join me in the darkness." said a voice very familiar to Bastila.
"Revan?"
"Yes, my love, I've been pulling his strings, join me."
"You can be redeemed... Please."
"You were the one who got me into taking my mantle back."
"You chose to accept, I'll bet if you made the correct decision on Rakata Prime, you would be asking me to come to the light."
"Do you know how hard I've worked to have the Sith rule the galaxy again?"
"You are not the one ruling, Revan."
"You're right."
"PLEASE!!! I beg of you come back to the light, for me... My love."
Revan paused for a moment and closed his eyes, "You would still believe I can be redeemed? You still love me?"
"No one is out of that range."
"I cannot... Saviour... Conqueror... Hero... Villan... I was all those things, I chose darkness..."
"You can choose light."
"I can't... I will forever stand alone... Good-bye, my love, and may the Force be with you." After that emotional conversation, Revan disappeared, he wiped himself from existance. Bastila grabbed a Tie Fighter and flew back to Yavin IV. Anakin woke up, to see Bastila was gone, "DAMNIT!!!" he roared as he ran to the firing room to do the honors himself.

"Almost there" Red Leader said to himself, "IT'S AWAY... Negative, it didn't go in." He was then shot down by Moordenaar. Luke and Leia made their run along the trench to find stopped guns. Leia and Wedge got shot but not blown, Luke ordered them to leave for their safety. Luke evaded Moordenaar's aiming systems very well. She managed to get a shot off, but it grazed the wing. Luke looked at that wing to find no astromech droid on the wing, "Good-riddance." Luke said to himself.
"WHAT!?" yelled 3PO.
"I have you now." said Moordenaar in glee, but one of her generals were shot down.
"YEE-HA!!!"
"Look out!" One Tie Fighter grazed Moordenaar's wing causing her to be set off course.
"You're all clear kid" told Han "Now let's blow this thing and go home." Luke took a deep breath and fired a cluster of missles. They all went down the service pipe and to the reactor. Luke exhaled and retreated. "Great shot, kid, that was one in a million!" congratulated Han. Seconds later, the Death Star blew up.

Back on Yavin IV everyone cheered for Luke's success, while Han and Leia shared a kiss. "Oh no, R2... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" screamed 3PO in deep sadness. Then followed an award ceremony where everone who survived were awarded medals for their Bravery and Valour.








An SW fanfic, written by Revanscool: Hardcore Hockey/Led Zeppelin/Scarface/Full Metal Jacket/Mortal Kombat/Star Wars/KotOR fan!


I hope that you all enjoyed, and stay tuned for the first chapter of my brand new fanfic: Knights of the Old Republic 3: The Second Sith War.


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Old 07-07-2006, 02:39 AM   #88
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What's with all the R2 bashing?

Anyway nice ending Chapter. I was hoping for a duel between Bastila and Vader, but oh well. I was sad to see R2 die, but I suppose that is his punishment for being insulting.

I'm looking foward to your next Fic and I hope it is written well (I have no ideas for a Fic at the moment).

PS. I also like The Beatles.
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Old 09-18-2006, 08:23 PM   #89
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No offense, but like it's still not finished...And some contents need to be enriched, esp. the end. A little loose outta there.




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Old 09-18-2006, 11:09 PM   #90
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Well this was the fanfic I wrote when I had two posts and a Scarface avatar.


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