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Naboo 0 0%
Coruscant 9 56.25%
Yavin IV 3 18.75%
Other 4 25.00%
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Old 05-28-2006, 01:20 PM   #1
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The Sith Lord: Need Help

In my Fanfic, The Sith Lord, I'm having trouble deciding the Final Battle on the last few Chapters. I have three locations I've decided to put the Final Battle, however I'll let you LF people decide. I've decided Yavin IV, but that was the Final Battle for Jedi Outcast, so it might be a bit repetitive. Also suggest a Planet in Other if you don't like my suggestions.

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Old 05-28-2006, 01:23 PM   #2
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Well, I recommend either Yavin IV, since that's where most of the Jedi are, or Coruscant, since it's the most important planet in the galaxy.

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Old 05-28-2006, 01:50 PM   #3
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have a hand to hand battle on the outside of a star destroyer or somethign. with them both in bulky space suits. how original.


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Old 05-28-2006, 02:21 PM   #4
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have a hand to hand battle on the outside of a star destroyer or somethign. with them both in bulky space suits. how original.
Talking about Star Destroyers, I was thinking of having a Space Battle over the Planet that gets voted the most.
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Old 05-28-2006, 02:48 PM   #5
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Coruscant, how about a saber fight litereally as they plummet down from the top of a really tall skyscraper. They are actually swinging sabers at each other in mid air. Awesome.


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Old 05-28-2006, 02:57 PM   #6
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Yeah, Coruscant. At first I wanted to suggest another planet, but Coruscant would be best.

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Old 05-28-2006, 04:08 PM   #7
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Kashyyyk.....


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Old 05-28-2006, 04:15 PM   #8
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Kashyyyk.....
I was thinking of putting a Kashyyyk Battle in my Fanfic, but not as a final Battle.
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Old 05-28-2006, 06:02 PM   #9
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shouldnt these type of things go to the fanfic forum ?? they are becoming tedious...

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Old 05-28-2006, 06:57 PM   #10
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If you've thought out the story adequately, then you shouldn't need to ask.

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shouldnt these type of things go to the fanfic forum ?? they are becoming tedious...

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Old 05-29-2006, 04:53 AM   #11
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All I was asking, was for LF people to choose the Final Battle for me. I thought I'd let LF people decide for me as I respect their opinion.

And also, what other Threads? The only one I've noticed is the Dark Apprentice: Name For A Vessel Thread and many people took part in that. So in my opinion, I think you're overreacting. Sorry if I sound rude.

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Old 05-29-2006, 11:42 AM   #12
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Yavin IV. It's a dramatic place, with the temples, the rains et al. Besides, it's the root of Jedi Academy. I recommend you set it up over there.


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Old 05-29-2006, 11:49 AM   #13
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It says you can chat about anything and everything, so why not post it here?

I don't really have any ideas for planets. Coruscant might be cool. Or maybe Mustafar. They could fight above lava, lol. Mygeeto... probably not. It's a cool planet, IMO, but I don't think it has much importance.



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Old 05-29-2006, 11:59 AM   #14
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It says you can chat about anything and everything, so why not post it here?
Thanks Niner. At least someone agrees with me.
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Old 06-03-2006, 09:52 AM   #15
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im with ya's ... (niner and pottsie)
i recommend Yavin IV, its the planet of the Jedi Academy, the place where Jaden learnt what he knows now, the planet is important, but what is more important is the people, who are in the final battle

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Old 06-03-2006, 09:55 AM   #16
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Either Coruscant or maybe a KOTOR planet *coughMalacorVcough*.
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Either Coruscant or maybe a KOTOR planet *coughMalacorVcough*.
It can't be Malachor V, that planet was destroyed at the end of Kotor II.

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Old 06-03-2006, 10:00 AM   #18
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Old 06-03-2006, 10:39 AM   #19
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Old 06-03-2006, 10:40 AM   #20
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That's bad then.How about Taspir III?Mustafar?
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Old 06-03-2006, 10:48 AM   #21
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IIRC Yavin IV has already been the site of a battle when Malus and his forces attacked the Jedi Academy so I don't think Yavin IV is the best choice.

Pottsie, IMO it depends on how your story ends. If you're going with the galatic conquest scenario then it makes sense to have the final battle occur at the planet where the seat of government is. You wouldn't necessarily have to do it this way but that would make sense to me. If you intend on having Kyle, Luke, and company take on Malus, Caos, RedHawke and company before they make their bid to take over the galaxy then it makes sense to write the story so they have that final confrontation somewhere else. It could be on a Star Destroyer, on a planet like Kashyyyk or Korriban, or you could create a new location that has some sort of significance, like a Force artifact or something like that. IMO the important thing is that you provide a compelling reason for the two groups to have their final battle.


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Maybe it could be on that planet that Malus visited in the dream. I forgot which one it was, but it seems like it was obvious.



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Old 06-03-2006, 10:54 AM   #23
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Maybe you could create one,or a Outer Rim planet.Maybe Tatooine,lol.
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Old 06-03-2006, 11:55 AM   #24
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Poor Naboo, no votes in the world. I've decided to go with what the public have voted with. Coruscant. It makes sense now. As cutmeister has already said, in my Fic, Yavin IV has already been attacked by Malus and his forces. The Chapter I'm writing at the moment is where Malus and his forces take over Coruscant. After that the final Chapter shall be either victory for the New Republic or defeat.

PS. The Sith Lord is near 1,000 views.
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Old 06-03-2006, 12:08 PM   #25
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im with coruscant, and as Hrebie said, it would be really cool if they were fighting in midair.

@ The Doc, you were just too rude in your post. if pottsie cant personally decide, its not his/her inability to write but his/her inability to decide. maybe he/she thought all the three places were good enough for a climax duel. and only constructive critisicm is allowed here. so please refrain from posting stuff like that. if you dont like the story, dont say anything.


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Old 06-03-2006, 12:21 PM   #26
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Thanks RC for the support. We can all forget about the Doc's post. Anyway just to let everyone know, I'm male.
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Old 06-04-2006, 03:02 AM   #27
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The sith lord really has been a great fanfic. Along with Heart of the guardian, Galactic scream, and anything by Forcefight this board is full of talented writers. I may be starting my own fan fic and you and I want you and the others listed to keep your eyes open


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Old 06-04-2006, 03:58 AM   #28
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The sith lord really has been a great fanfic. Along with Heart of the guardian, Galactic scream, and anything by Forcefight this board is full of talented writers. I may be starting my own fan fic and you and I want you and the others listed to keep your eyes open
If you like my Fic loads, post your views on it. If you do a Fanfic, I may read it.
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