lfnetwork.com mark read register faq members calendar

Thread: Star Wars: Gamma Squad
Thread Tools Display Modes
Post a new thread. Add a reply to this thread. Indicate all threads in this forum as read. Subscribe to this forum. RSS feed: this forum RSS feed: all forums
Old 06-04-2006, 10:29 PM   #1
Alkonium
To Mend and Defend
 
Alkonium's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Divinity's Reach
Posts: 3,882
Current Game: Guild Wars 2
Roleplayer Forum Veteran 
Star Wars: Gamma Squad

This a new fanfic I decided to write, based off a group of characters in the Sith Resurrection RP series. I decided to try to model this slightly after Republic Commando, but I think you'll still find it interesting.

Gamma Squad Journal Entry (Date: 83.21 ABY) Amidala1:
Just made it back from lone recon on Nelvaan and now the Kaminoans are making me join a squad of commandos. I for one work best on my own, but if the Kaminoans think that by sticking me with three other commandos will help save the Republic from the Sith, then who am I to disagree? I hope at least one of my squatmates is good with a blaster.

Gamma Squad Journal Entry (Date: 83.211 ABY) Demo1:
Well, if my new squad is any indication of the Republic military, we are doomed. Amidala would rather work alone, yet she's our leader, Niner's our sniper, yet he can't hit the broadside of a Star Destroyer, Slicer's our slicing expert, yet he can't tell a computer terminal from a blaster rifle. Thank the Force I'm here to blow stuff up, or we'd really be kriffed.


Last edited by Bee Hoon; 02-21-2009 at 10:39 AM.
Alkonium is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-05-2006, 01:58 AM   #2
Diego Varen
Left and may not return
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 4,850
Contest winner - Fan Fiction 
Good intro. I've never played Republic Commando.
Diego Varen is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-05-2006, 08:15 AM   #3
RC-1162
Liquidious Fleshbag
 
RC-1162's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 3,447
Current Game: SW:TOR
Forum Veteran Contest winner - Fan Fiction Helpful! 
by amidala, you do mean Padme? i can just imagine her in commando armor


Duct Tape is ALWAYS the answer
RC-1162 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-05-2006, 08:36 AM   #4
Alkonium
To Mend and Defend
 
Alkonium's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Divinity's Reach
Posts: 3,882
Current Game: Guild Wars 2
Roleplayer Forum Veteran 
Quote:
Originally Posted by RC 1162
by amidala, you do mean Padme? i can just imagine her in commando armor
No, but she is a female commando. See, all four of them are composite clones, each using different combinations of DNA, and one of Amidala's donors was Padmé Skywalker, daughter of Ben Skywalker and Great-Granddaughter of the Padmé we know from the prequels. I probably should have cleared that up earlier.

Alkonium is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-05-2006, 08:44 AM   #5
RC-1162
Liquidious Fleshbag
 
RC-1162's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 3,447
Current Game: SW:TOR
Forum Veteran Contest winner - Fan Fiction Helpful! 
oh this is set after the OT? ok, thanks for clearing it up


Duct Tape is ALWAYS the answer
RC-1162 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-05-2006, 04:33 PM   #6
Niner_777
[RC-1270]
 
Niner_777's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Desert canyons of Praesitlyn
Posts: 1,491
This looks interesting. I love clone fics.



(^Click the pic to reveal my...) | Republic Commando: -]RC[-AjaX
BF2142: -]RC[-Auxidus | www.redcellgaming.com (I really need a userbar, eh. >.<)
Niner_777 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-05-2006, 05:54 PM   #7
Alkonium
To Mend and Defend
 
Alkonium's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Divinity's Reach
Posts: 3,882
Current Game: Guild Wars 2
Roleplayer Forum Veteran 
I decided I should probably
Gamma Squad Journal Entry (Date: 83.211 ABY) Niner1:
How could it get worse? Not only do I have three other commandos to blow my cover while sniping, but two of them are full of themselves and the other is a complete idiot. I don't think we'll even make it off Coruscant alive.

Gamma Squad Journal Entry (Date: 83.211 ABY) Slicer1:
I know the rest of the squad is already thinking the worst about eachother, but I say why jump to conclusions? I for one think that the only reason the other squadmates doubt Amidala's abilities is because she's a woman, they think Demo is going to blow himself up just because he's the explosives expert, and they think Niner can't fight at close range just because he prefers to snipe the enemy. If we keep this up, we're going to get ourselves killed before our first mission.

Alkonium is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-06-2006, 01:36 AM   #8
Diego Varen
Left and may not return
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 4,850
Contest winner - Fan Fiction 
Good. Are all Chapters going to be like this?
Diego Varen is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-06-2006, 08:19 AM   #9
Alkonium
To Mend and Defend
 
Alkonium's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Divinity's Reach
Posts: 3,882
Current Game: Guild Wars 2
Roleplayer Forum Veteran 
No, those were just the intro, the rest is going to be a normal narrative, although there will be other journal entries.

Alkonium is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-09-2006, 08:49 PM   #10
Alkonium
To Mend and Defend
 
Alkonium's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Divinity's Reach
Posts: 3,882
Current Game: Guild Wars 2
Roleplayer Forum Veteran 
Shortly after Gamma Squad, they were briefed on their first mission. Their new commander, an Aqualish Jedi Master by the name of Varthis Nudo, stepped infront of the briefing room's holomap, and began briefing the squad. "Alright commandos, here's the plan: we believe the Sith troops are planning a strike from Adumar, so we're sending you in there to investigate. You're going to go about seperate transports, drop down and meet up there. Amidala, Demo, you two are going directly into the Sith Compound in Cartann City for basic recon." He said. " Niner, Fixer, you two are going to make contact with the Perator of Cartann in order warn him and to get him to prepare the Adumari military." He said. "Sounds fun." Demo commented. "Well said." Amidala replied. "Sure, let them have all the fun." Niner stated jokingly.

Alkonium is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-10-2006, 08:03 AM   #11
Niner_777
[RC-1270]
 
Niner_777's Avatar
 
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Desert canyons of Praesitlyn
Posts: 1,491
I like it.



(^Click the pic to reveal my...) | Republic Commando: -]RC[-AjaX
BF2142: -]RC[-Auxidus | www.redcellgaming.com (I really need a userbar, eh. >.<)
Niner_777 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-10-2006, 09:32 AM   #12
Diego Varen
Left and may not return
 
Join Date: Jan 2006
Posts: 4,850
Contest winner - Fan Fiction 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Niner_777
I like it.
Me too.
Diego Varen is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-10-2006, 11:38 AM   #13
RC-1162
Liquidious Fleshbag
 
RC-1162's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 3,447
Current Game: SW:TOR
Forum Veteran Contest winner - Fan Fiction Helpful! 
me three


Duct Tape is ALWAYS the answer
RC-1162 is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 06-15-2006, 12:01 PM   #14
Alkonium
To Mend and Defend
 
Alkonium's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Divinity's Reach
Posts: 3,882
Current Game: Guild Wars 2
Roleplayer Forum Veteran 
The Republic Star Destroyer Liberator came out of hyperspace over Adumar, carrying the commandos of Gamma Squad to their destination. The squad waited in the in the aft hangar for further briefing from one of the Republic officers. "This is ridiculous, if we weren't waiting for that officer to give us another unnecessary briefing, we could have already gotten down there, destroyed the Sith Base, and warned the Perator." Niner commented.

Alkonium is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Old 01-29-2009, 01:38 PM   #15
machievelli
Local curmudgeon
 
machievelli's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Las Vegas Nevada
Posts: 2,819
Current Game: Dungeonseige series
Hot Topic Starter Veteran Fan Fic Author Helpful! Forum Veteran 
read


'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that?

From the one who brought you;
What we die for...
Acceptance
KOTOR excerpts
Star Wars: The Beginning
Star Wars: Republic Dawn
Return From Exile
machievelli is offline   you may: quote & reply,
Post a new thread. Add a reply to this thread. Indicate all threads in this forum as read. Subscribe to this forum. RSS feed: this forum RSS feed: all forums
Go Back   LucasForums > Network > Knights of the Old Republic > Community > Coruscant Entertainment Centre > Star Wars: Gamma Squad

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:59 PM.

LFNetwork, LLC ©2002-2011 - All rights reserved.
Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.