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Old 09-24-2006, 04:25 PM   #1
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[FIN] STAR WARS The War of the Dead

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Chapter 1 The Beginning of the War

The battle continued, sith and jedi dying, the Cruins had gone to Yavin 5 to await the jedi. Luke had never seen such a battle. He told Kyle to retreat the jedi. He entered his ship, thinking the same Grivis will soon think- War had begun.

Grivis blocked Nordis’s attack as he sung at him. Nordis turned and jumped into a leaving jedi cruiser. Grivis left to his throne.

There he thought- the battle was over and The War of the Dead had begun.

Grivis walked through the hall leading to his throne, the biggest room in the Star Forge. The jedi were overwhelmed by the power of the Star Forge 2. The speakers came on; “Intruder Jedi inside the emperor’s throne full alert” said the voice. Grivis entered his throne, jumped up and removed the Jedi’s head. Grivis walked to his huge window. There were hundreds of jedi ships approaching! Grivis jumped into his ship and flew into the battle. He flew toward the head ship were Skywalker, Katarn, and the Korr’s would be. He entered there hangar, as he flew in he opened his cockpit he jumped out pushing his ship into a group of jedi ships. He ran to the command center and planted a det pack. Then he entered the Jedi consul.

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Chapter 2 Fight to the death

Grivis walked up to Skywalker. “Hello, Luke he said. I have a proposition for you, it is…Die!” He through his saber at him then ripped out his X-saber. “I only use this on special accessions”. He activated all 4 blades and charged in a powerful Kata. Luke jumped up and landed behind him. Jaden jumped in front of him, Kyle jumped to his left and Mordale to his right. “Where is Luke Korr” Grivis asked. “Right above you Grivis” Luke K answered as he dropped from the roof. Grivis sung up stabbing him. “NO” Jaden yelled in rage. Grivis jumped up as Jaden’s lightsaber slung where he was standing. “Yes release your anger and turn to the dark side Grivis said hopefully Join me”. “No Jaden, he’s not dead” Luke said. Suddenly a bodyguard entered the room slinging his saber at Grivis. Grivis dodged it ignited his Y-saber and threw it at the jedi, one blade went through his heart and the other his side…

Grivis took out his detonator and hit the button, the explosion distracted the jedi as Grivis jumped to Jaden’s desk and hit the ships self destruct button he jumped back into an escape pod and escaped. Jaden and Luke got the others into another escape pod. Jaden hit the abandon ship alarm and left.

Grivis exited the escape pod and looked around he was on Kamino.

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Chapter 3 The Chase of Death

Grivis waited for the jedi to land, when they did Grivis jumped up into one of there fighters and flew off. They followed, Grivis grinned he used the force to make the 2 jedi ships blow up. Jaden shot a missile at him. He dodged it by jumping out of the ship and landing on a Jedi’s ship. He activated his lightsaber and used the force to open the cockpit. He pulled the jedi out and through him into space and got in shut the cockpit. His old ship has shot down by Jaden. “Mission Complete Luke he said I’m returning now”. Grivis opened his cockpit and landed on Jaden’s ship he stuck his lightsaber through the glass and Jaden’s heart killing him. He set the ships auto pilot for there cruiser. He jumped back to his ship and flew to the Death Forge.

Grivis entered Arca and Forus’s room and explained his plan… Grivis entered the jedi temple on Yavin 5, the jedi were still returning. Grivis killed the jedi there and left. Then he entered the new Senate chamber during a meeting, the chancellor was speaking. Grivis pushed him off his private senate stand he fell thousands of feet to the ground. He had made one of his sith lords become the vice chancellor before the war he was now chancellor. Grivis entered his ship and hit his det detonator and the jedi temple blew up.

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Chapter 4 The War Continues

Luke k ran to the Jaden’s ship it had been severely damaged. He jumped up cutting open the cockpit with his saber. Jaden lay there with a hole in his chest. Luke lifted him up fearing that he was dead…

Grivis landed in the Death Forge, he jumped out of his ship it was over Jaden was dead Luke k was his next target. He told Maul to set course for there new secret base on Dagabah…On Dagabah, Grivis moved through the swamps with Forus and Arca.
I wished he left Arca behind he thought all he did was complain. “This is boring and gross” he complained. “Oh, shut up” Grivis replied. They walked a little more till they reached the rebel base. He leaped up slicing the guards head off. Forus flanked the rebel sarge. Arca jumped up landing behind the sarge, Grivis charged and cut him in half. “Well done, both of you” Grivis said. Suddenly Forus swung his saber killing Arca, and then he turned on Grivis. “I thought I sensed too much power in you, I just didn’t think you’d try to kill me too” Grivis said. Forus stabbed at Grivis but he simply jumped aside and destroyed the saber. Forus leaped back and used the force to get Arca’s saber. Grivis stepped back and swung to the left twirling catching his breath, and then he slashed his back then cut off his head. He then took Arca’s saber, completed the new base and flew to Dantooine.

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Chapter 5 The Attack of Maul

Grivis landed on Dantooine, He walked down the ramp of an imperial shuttle.
He then killed the jedi guarding the temple. Then he used the force to blow open the door. Suddenly Obi-wan Kenobi jumped out of the door and stabbed Grivis.

Maul suddenly stopped in the middle of his speech as 2nd command. “Continue, Lord Maul” said a member of the counsel. “I have suddenly felt a stunning disturbance Maul started but only the sith that knows this order must follow me…Order 166, move. Maul led the troops to Dantooine, “You know the routine order 166 Lord Grivis is in danger” Maul shouted. As the soldiers charged killing jedi after jedi Maul pulled out his comlink, “To HQ send in all available troops to Dantooine order 166”. Maul then joined the search for Grivis.

Maul ran down to the brig, he found Grivis in a cell with a hole in his chest. Maul opened the cell, pick up Grivis and left. He was just going across the bridge when Grivis woke up. “Where am I” he asked. Maul was about to answer him as a grenade hit near them sending Grivis down toward the ocean.

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Chapter 6 The Death and its fears

Maul shouted with fear as Grivis fell into the ocean. For Maul time seemed to have stopped. Grivis was dead and the counsel would blame it on him. There was only one thing to do: make the jedi retreat. That was the main goal, and the counsel would appoint him empire. Maul ran to the fight. He swung his saber slicing a jedi in half, and then he quickly flipped up removing a jedi’s head.

The first thing he felt was the coldness, Grivis had fallen into the water. He struggled with his wound. He had to pull out his aquabreather he thought. Suddenly he could think no more.

Maul was tiring; he ran to the command post and jumped into a ship. He flew the ship and fired down at the jedi.

Luke had fallen to sleep; he was on the jedi cruiser going to Dantooine. Suddenly he awoke by a yell. He looked up and Jaden was sitting up. Luke yelped, 2 days earlier Jaden had been stabbed by Grivis, but a medical droid had healed him. Jaden asked him “What happened”. “Grivis beat you 2 days ago you’ve been out since” Luke K replied.
Suddenly the Computer said “We will be landing shortly”. Suddenly with his father by his side he felt a lot better about the fight.

Nordis jumped up trying to defend the temple, the sith had all there available troops. The jedi had only half of there force. Suddenly, a jedi cruiser landed near him, and 1_5th of there troops ran out. Nordis smiled suddenly they had a lot more.

Vader led his part of the army to one of the jedi’s command posts and attacked. Sith killed jedi and jedi killed sith, but it didn’t matter to him it was war. Like it was when he died. Luke Skywalker had finally allowed the light that was still dead take over him. He turned around and saw him in the distance, Skywalker. He charged, jumping right in front of him. “This time you will not win Skywalker, my light side is still dead” Vader said.
He struck, with so much force Luke fell over when he blocked it. Luke quickly got up and killed a passing sith. Vader’s anger increased and dealt Luke heavy blows. Luke ready this time blocked the blows with little difficulty. Vader tripped him and prepared the final move. Suddenly Jaden flipped up kicking Vader into the air. He called Mordale and Luke and went to a different area of the fight away from Vader.

Maul jumped out as his ship exploded, he landed killing many jedi as he swung his saber.
Suddenly an earthquake shook every thing including the whole ocean and a powerful sith landed in front of him with no wound or scratch on him. Vader felt the earthquake and turned seeing the sith. Luke, Jaden, Luke S, and Mordale all turned after the small quake and all saw the sith.

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Chapter 7 The Return of Grivis

Maul stared at him, it was Grivis impossible, he was dead.

Strander ran to a half-dead sith, and asked him where Nilin was. The sith looked puzzled, “Don’t you know he’s dead, Grivis killed him”? The sith lord said. “What”!!! Strander yelled in fury. He ran up to the newly risen Grivis, and swung his saber at his head but Grivis blocked it easily. Strander swung down attempting to remove Grivis’s hand, but Grivis blocked it and quickly lowered it removing Strander’s own hand. Strander yelled in pain as his hand fell to the ground. Then he jumped back using the force to get his light saber into his other hand. Then Grivis suddenly turned blocking a quick attack Maul. So Grivis thought Maul had betrayed him. Grivis then had to turn yet again to block Strander’s charge of fury. He pushed Maul off the bridge as he attacked from behind and sent him plunging into the ocean.

Maul’s life flashed before his eyes as he fell from the bridge every thing seemed to be in slow motion as he fell. So this is what death is like he thought before the next flash consumed him.

Maul blocked the jedi’s attack, he than hit up stunning him for a moment, then stabbed him. Ha, he thought his master would be pleased. Maul turned seeing the other jedi through the energy shield. He frowned now he would have to deal with this one. The jedi charged slashing at him. The jedi cut his saber in half forcing Maul into using one saber.
The jedi cut Maul in half a few moments later, and he fell into the core.

Maul was falling strait through Naboo’s core. When he noticed a stump
like the jedi had grabbed. He grabbed it, with one hand grabbing his legs with the other,
he grabbed a cable gun from his utility belt and dropped the legs. He activated the gun,
shooting it but made himself go down to grab his legs. Then pulled up, when he reached
the top of the cable he stopped and attached the gun to him and the legs, so they would
not fall. He got his second cable gun and shot it up taking the first with him when he
reached the top he shot the first. He continued till he was out. He used some crap in his
robe to re-attach him to his legs.

He flew to Korriban to find a sith medical droid. It attached his legs to him properly. He
went to a freezing plant and programmed a droid to free him after the sith return…
Maul than fell into the water wishing he never betrayed Grivis as he died.

Grivis blocked Strander’s attack and swung to the left cutting his side. Strander moved
his saber toward Grivis’s head and swung, but Grivis moved to the side and leaped hitting
Strander’s hand making his saber into the water. He killed him with a flick of his saber and turned away.

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Yavin 13
Planet Type: Terrestrial (moon)
Climate: Dry, hot
Terrain: Desert, rocky plains, cacti forests
Atmosphere: Breathable
Gravity: Standard
Diameter: 6,794 km
Length of Day: 19 standard hours
Length of Year: 4,818 standard days
Sentient Species: Gerbs, Slith
Language: Gerbese, Slithian
Population: 43 million (19 million Slith, 24 million Gerbs)
Species Mix: Gerbs 53%, Slith 47%
Government: Tribal
Major Exports: None
Major Imports: None
System/Planet: Yavin
Region: Outer Rim


Chapter 8 The End of the battle

Jaden, Luke, and Mordale finally reached the jedi cruiser and flew away.
Little did they know they were being tracked…

Grivis grinned as the jedi’s ship flew to there secret base, soon he would attack the desert planet Yavin 13. Soon the republic will fall he thought as he set his navigation computer for the planet. There he would reveal his secret weapon Triteradur.

They landed on Yavin 13 right when the Death Forge and hundreds of star destroyers appeared out of lightspeed. Jason looked up and sounded the alarm. The republic fleet flew up flying into a possible suicide mission.

Grivis jumped into the Triteradur, and flew out of the hangar bay. He piloted it into the battle. He switched his weaponry system to low power and fired destroying the nearby x-wing. He turned and flew to a republic cruiser and headed toward the control bridge. “This better work” he said out loud right before he rammed the ship. He tore through the command bridge destroying the ship. Then suddenly tons of republic ships came out of all the surrounding planets. Grivis gasped. The republic’s base was the whole solar system. Then he grinned first he will give the republic a better chance then he will blow up the solar system.

The republic’s ships flew around him A-wings, B-wings, X-wings all first class. They were nothing compared to the Triteradur. The name had come from an old stormtrooper his father had known. The stormtrooper’s number was RC-1162. Suddenly a star destroyer exploded beside him ripping him out of his thoughts. If he had been in a TIE fighter he would have of died. He looked around and noticed that quite a few star destroyers had been destroyed. It was time to change the tables around. He put the ship on medium power and fired. Destroying Yavin, Yavin 8, and Yavin 13 and many other planets one by one exploded. The star destroyer aware of what was happening jumped away into hyperspace, however the republic was able to save about only 20 cruisers. Then Grivis turned around and blasted into hyperspace.

Grivis entered the Death Forge, landing in his personal hangar. He walked into his chamber and was shocked to see a legion of stormtroopers. One of them stepped up and stretched his hand out, Grivis barley sensing the force jumped to the side as a bolt of lightning flew out of his fingers. Grivis activated his saber and pre-pared to strike when his weapon scientist jumped out and shouted to him. Grivis de-activated his saber, “Ah, Grivis he said I see you have met my new invention he said, Force clones. They can use the force, use a Lightsaber, and a jedi can’t sense the force inside them. Also we have more powerful TIE fighters, they have a hyperdrive so they are called HIE fighters (Hyperspace Ion Engines)”. “Good for us Grivis replied Now leave”. “But sir, there’s more like th-. “I DON’T CARE” Grivis shouted. The scientist scrambled out of the room with the new troops. Grivis walked up and sat in his throne.

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Chapter 9 Triteradur’s army

The new legion of stormtroopers walked to the new HIE fighters and took off flying toward the new improved star destroyer escorting Grivis even though his ship was invincible. Thanks to doctor Toff Andrew almost every imperial creation had been improved, including them. The trooper TK-421 also now known as triter knight had been selected to be the leader of the new legion. “General TK, said the private, the star destroyer Kun is ready to leave”. “Good, get us out of here” TK replied. TK left going to the command bridge, he ordered his men to stand guard as Grivis passed by going to his throne.

Grivis entered his throne and stood stunned for a second seeing how improved it was. “Damn” he muttered as he sat down in his chair another score for Toff. He got up locked his door and went to sleep.

TK left the command bridge he had got his first order, he had learned that a jedi baby had been transferred to the system Anoth . He ordered his men to return to the hangar and to set course to Anoth.

23 hours earlier, Luke Korr walked down the long corridor of the republic cruiser. He sighed; they have been losing battle after battle. Suddenly his uncle Mordale ran in front of him, Mordale stopped and turned. “Luke there you are, come quick, he turned and ran.
Luke ran after him, he stopped puzzled then suddenly frightened Mordale had entered the med center. He worked up his courage and entered there sat his mother, holding a baby. Surprised he stumbled while he talked. “M-Mom, but your supposed to b-be in hiding”.
“Yes, I know but I came out because of this.” She replied. Then his father entered holding another baby! “What two” Luke yelled once again surprised. “Yep, his father answered twins”. “Where sending them to a hidden planet Anoth, the empire went there once after Anakin Solo.” His mother continued. “But that was the third segment, recently we found a forth segment so we are sending them there.

Grivis awoke; he got up and checked his messages. Toff appeared, “Lord Grivis I am sending my new troops to take care of the new Korr brats personally expect updates soon.” Grivis anger boiled he was going to do that job himself. He ordered his guards to through Toff in a brig for a week, he would pay for this.

Toff sat down once again he had outsmarted Grivis one day he would kill him and become the emperor himself. Suddenly his door blew down, and Grivis’s guards stunned him. He felt himself lifted up and carried out of the room. He later felt his body being thrown into a cell.

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Chapter 10 The fight of the Korr children

TK landed his ship on the third part of Anoth. He raised his blaster as he ran through to the entrance of the base expecting for the secret defenses to attack. Nothing came, he turned seeing all his men had landed and joined him. He turned back inspecting the door. He ordered his men to plant a det pack to blow the door. They backed up as the solider ran up planted the pack and ran back. “Hit it” TK ordered eager to see the fire works. The explosion shook the ground as the door became noting but ruble.
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They ran through, ready to fire if they needed to. TK and the rest of the squad searched the building and found nothing. “All right boys maybe they haven’t arrived yet, let’s blow this place.” TK said. They entered there Star Destroyer and activated the built in mini Death Star beam it shot blowing the planet fragment to smithereens. “Sir,” said the Captain of the Star Destroyer the Force runner, a rebel ship flew trough here and disappeared at sector 8.” “Good TK replied go there, now.” “Yes sir”
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Ex-jedi Tenel Ka walked down the hall toward the exit of the rebel cruiser. She had volunteered to protect the twins. Jaden had second the action so had his wife. Jania had reluctantly disagreed but was over voted. Ever since Zekk had disappeared in the unknown regions she had almost refused to take someone she cared about out of her sight. Suddenly yelling sounded down the hall. She ran to the spot where it was coming from. “What happened” she asked Jaden. The empire has destroyed the first part of Anoth and there coming here the planet is now on full evacuation every one is coming here. We must get away they probably plan to steal the twins.” “The intercom came on, Master Jaden we are ready to take off. Please join me as co-pilot. “Right away, Master Vinson Jaden answered. Also next time use a comlink”. “Yes sir” Vinson replied.
Suddenly a sudden jolt made them hit the floor. The intercom came back on “Beware the empire is boarding the ship. I repeat the empire is boarding the ship.”
* * * * * * *
TK jumped in the rebel’s ship he had one job: to capture the Korr babies. But he planed to have a little fun. A jedi girl turned around the corner he activated his special clone saber in one hand and his blaster was pointed at her heart. She stood her ground instead of charging as this jedi usually did. He knew that by her looks and the force. He learned why as he looked behind her there was the entrance to the med center the twins would be in there. He fired charging as he did anger fuelled him as he dropped his blaster. Instead of grabbing it he shocked her sending her into a wall unconscious. He then entered the med center.

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Chapter 11 The children are stolen

TK raised his blaster at the jedi Brianna (jaden’s wife) he had to be extra careful since the children were also in this room, but so does she. He aimed at her then moved as he fired, the shot hit right beside the girl. The mother screamed with surprise as she leaped toward her. The few last seconds of her life she realized the trick. He fired hitting her in the face, she slumped down dead. He bent down and picked up the twins, turned and went to his ship.
As he left and disappeared around the corner, Jaden ran down the hall. He stopped as he saw Tenel Ka unconscious and the door to the med center forced open. His heart skipped many beats as he stared in horror at the dead body of his wife on the floor. Anger poured into him. He did the thing he vowed to never to do, his let his anger take over. He stepped out of the room. He noticed Ka had stirred he froze for a second then sent her down to the floor. That woke her up staring right into the face of the bloodied Brianna. She flinched, as she looked away. Then she looked up, Jaden stood over her with his saber activated about to kill her. He stopped; he struggled as he dropped his saber. He could not strike a fellow jedi even with so much pure anger. He turned and ran down the hall looking for his children.

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Luke Korr climbed into his ship he had seen a stormtrooper leaving with his brother and sister, he had to catch him. He took off he had two problems; one he couldn’t shoot since he would kill his siblings and two his opponent could. But if he got away the babies would be thought the dark side. With all his feelings mixed up as he thought he didn’t notice the missile come up it hit hard but not fatal. Though he jerked he slammed into the controls. Flashing lights came on and words appeared saying “Firing missile one” his heart stopped as it flew toward the ship.

[Center]* * * * * * * {/center]

Grivis set the cell controls to the most uncomfortable settings that could keep the scientist could stay alive at as he begged for life.
“That will teach you to change the mission records”

“I’m sorry sir, I wonted to try out my new clones…”

“I don’t care if they fail I will kill you privately.”

“I assure you they will not fail…”

“You better be right” he said as he turned and left.

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Chapter 12 The Disappearance of Luke Korr

The missile came closer to the ship. Luke had no time to think, it hit. Nothing happened, suddenly realized he had fired the missile he had installed that was a tracker. Luke was lucky, he had not killed his siblings and he was tracking them. Suddenly a light started blinking; he immediately recognized the problem the Stormtrooper was hacking into his ship. Luke saw he had stolen his data. He looked down again and was shocked to see that he was also setting a lightspeed course. His hyprodrive activated and he shot into space.
Later Luke came out of hyprospace in the middle of the Unknown Regions with his map of space erased.

* * * * * * *

Grivis climb into his ship he had a new mission for the Triteradur squad and this time he would lead them. The mission was simple enough they had to assassinate a jedi named Kyp Duran who had sent the original Star Crusher into a black hole. He had come close to doing that again with the Triteradur after he had stolen the decoy at the Battle for the Korr’s. The two twins had been hidden on the moon of Coruscant that had been half destroyed when the DS4 had destroyed Coruscant. He started his ship and lifted it off the ground. He then flew out of the hanger only to meet an army of New Republic and Jedi ships. Surprised Grivis hit his missile fire, firing all his missiles. He turned flying back to the Star Destroyer ordering his men to do the same. He landed the ship and jumped out. He ordered all sith and Stormtroopers to prepare for boarding. Most of his best sith gathered in the hanger bay waiting for boarding, it never came. Suddenly the Star Destroyer jerked sending the Empire troops to the ground. An officer came into the hanger.

“Sir, the Republic has blown a hole in the ship they must be leaving there ship and entering our ship. But we cannot pinpoint where the hole is.”

“Check every room.” Grivis ordered.

Then he turned to his troops “take me to my throne room” he ordered them.

He left and stopped at his room, he entered. There stood Kyp Duran, Luke and Mara Jade Skywalker, Jaden and Mordale Korr, Tenel Ka, Jania, Jason, and Zekk Solo, and many more. Grivis stood stunned, as he was thrown back into the wall by Tenel Ka knocking him unconscious.

“Ha,” Tenel Ka muttered “Pay back.”

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Chapter 13 The Force Star is Found

Luke Korr had a brief memory of the Unknown Regions he thought to himself trying to help him think positive. He flew for hours when he finally reached a planet. He suddenly remembered it as he started to land. It was an abandon sith graveyard before Korriban. Maybe the sith were using it as a base. He jumped out and entered the huge temple.
He walked forever searching rooms as he went. Finally he reached the end he was happy to be done but sad not to have found anything. He put his hand on the wall and leaned on it while he accessed the force searching for something he might have missed. Suddenly a datapad slid out of a small hidden hatch in the wall. Surprised he picked it up and accessed it. A voice filled the hall, “Congratulations force user who found this datapad now if you are strong enough in the force you can access secret information on how to end the war.” It said. The screen changed and showed two selections: Info on this Sith Lord, Secret information on the war. Luke picked the sith info he would look up the secret info later he thought as he made up his mind. The voice came back, “I am a sith lord named Darth Krayt a sith lord who would rule the galaxy if Cade Skywalker wouldn’t cut me down in the future so instead I went into hiding” The message ended already Luke was annoyed the so called didn’t tell him much and he sensed that some of it was a lie. He accessed the secret info. Suddenly a droid came out of nowhere and grabbed his neck. Luke felt a shock and then nothing, the droid then turned and walked to the end of the hall and self destructed. Even more confused Luke looked back at the datapad. It read: You have the right amount of force power to look at the info. “The war was started by me when I learned Cade would kill me. Then I tried to use my dark side power to go back in time and it worked. I had to prevent that from ever happening solution…kill all the Skywalker scums. To stop the war all you do is find the Force star and redo what it did…” The datapad shut down and the wall moved reveling a secret room.

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Luke walked in, and there on top of a stone was the Force Star. Luke ran to it and activated it, using all the force power her had. It shown bright as it shot out a huge beam of light.

Korriban…
The revived sith looked up as the light surrounded the planet it shot down and turned them back into dust and ash.

Dantooine…
The revived jedi looked up as the light surrounded the planet. Unlike the sith the Jedi sat down and prepared to rest in peace as if they knew what would happen. The light shot down and turned them to ash and dust.

The same happened every where and soon all the jedi and sith that had been revived in the beginning of the War of the Dead where once again rested in peace. Forever.

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The last battle of the war took place on the moon of Coruscant. The return of Luke Korr provided them with that information. The battle lasted for days, though the last of it was the worst…
Grivis was still a captive of the jedi order and was on the ship during most of the battle, finally his anger of not being in the battle was strong enough. He choked the guards and killed them he took there Lightsaber and cut the cage around him. Grivis luckily was put in the command center which was the jedi’s first mistake. He walked over to the missile control, he activated it and shot all the missile locked to ant heat source. Some of the missiles hit the jedi some the sith blood went flying. Grivis slowly marveled at the very sight. Suddenly a Lightsaber was pointed at his face when he turned around.

Jaden Korr entered the sith’s main base he had already freed his twins when a missile hit the base. Rubble crashed onto his leg he cried out in pain. He looked up to see a blood red saber pointed at his neck.

The battle ended because of the threat of the death of the leaders of the armies. A treaty was made soon after the battle stating the sith should move into the Unknown Regions and beyond make there empire there. The Jedi should make there Republic in the outer and the inner rims. The treaty was signed by both Darth Grivis and Jaden Korr. Jaden who had lost his son Luke and his wife had two look over his two twins alone retired his chair in the Senate but continued being the leader of the jedi. The thought that entered Jaden’s mind as he signed the treaty was, so the so called Darth Krayt lost and would never be able to strike and be the ruler of the galaxy. So the galaxy would stay at peace till another threat, sith, alliance, or any thing else came. So far the jedi had managed to maintain peace at the end of the Mandalorian War, the sith civil war, the jedi civil war, the galactic civil war, the Vong War and now the War of the Dead.

The End of the War

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The last battle of the war took place on the moon of Coruscant. The return of Luke Korr provided them with that information. The battle lasted for days, though the last of it was the worst…
Grivis was still a captive of the jedi order and was on the ship during most of the battle, finally his anger of not being in the battle was strong enough. He choked the guards and killed them he took there Lightsaber and cut the cage around him. Grivis luckily was put in the command center which was the jedi’s first mistake. He walked over to the missile control; he activated it and shot all the missile locked to ant heat source. Some of the missiles hit the jedi some the sith blood went flying. Grivis slowly marveled at the very sight. Suddenly a Lightsaber was pointed at his face when he turned around. He jumped kicking the jedi, he brought down his Lightsaber and killed him. Another jedi jumped behind him. The jedi stabbed Grivis in the leg. Grivis screamed as the lightsaber was pulled out. The jedi stabbed him in the face. Grivis twitched then died. That jedi died later releasing his anger on a fellow jedi.

Jaden Korr entered the sith’s main base he had already freed his twins when a missile hit the base. Rubble crashed onto his leg he cried out in pain. He looked up to see a blood red saber pointed at his neck. He brought up his saber and stabbed the sith the sith slumped down dead.

The battle ended because of the death of the Grivis and the rest of the sith armies. Finally a treaty was made soon after the battle stating the rest of the sith should move into the Unknown Regions and beyond make there empire there. The Jedi should make there Republic in the outer and the inner rims. The treaty was signed by both the last sith Darth Zan who was later killed when he later brought a small army to attack the republic and also Jaden Korr signed it. Jaden who had lost his son Luke and his wife had two look over his two twins alone retired his chair in the Senate but continued being the leader of the jedi. The thought that entered Jaden’s mind as he signed the treaty was, so the so called Darth Krayt lost and would never be able to strike and be the ruler of the galaxy. So the galaxy would stay at peace till another threat, sith, alliance, or any thing else came. So far the jedi had managed to maintain peace at the end of the Mandalorian War, the sith civil war, the jedi civil war, the galactic civil war, the Vong War and now the War of the Dead.

The End of the War

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The last battle of the war took place on the moon of Coruscant. The return of Luke Korr provided them with that information. The battle lasted for days, though the last of it was the worst…
Grivis was still a captive of the jedi order and was on the ship during most of the battle, finally his anger of not being in the battle was strong enough. He choked the guards and killed them he took there Lightsaber and cut the cage around him. Grivis luckily was put in the command center which was the jedi’s first mistake. He walked over to the missile control; he activated it and shot all the missile locked to ant heat source. Some of the missiles hit the jedi some the sith blood went flying. Grivis slowly marveled at the very sight. Suddenly a Lightsaber was pointed at his face when he turned around. He jumped kicking the jedi, he brought down his Lightsaber and killed him. Another jedi jumped behind him. The jedi stabbed at Grivis but Grivis moved to the left. Grivis swung his lightsaber at the jedi and removed the jedi’s arm. Then he flipped up and stabbed him. The jedi grunted and fell dead.

Jaden Korr entered the sith’s main base he had already freed his twins when a missile hit the base. Rubble crashed onto his leg he cried out in pain. He looked up to see a blood red saber pointed at his neck. He brought up his saber and stabbed the sith the sith slumped down dead. He used the force to pick up the rock on his leg. He used the force to ease the pain as he limped toward the door he opened it. There stood Grivis, Jaden raised his lightsaber to defend him but Grivis struck killing him. Jaden fell knowing he had failed him and the jedi.

Grivis walked through battle field of the moon. He looked up and saw Jacen Solo killing jedi. Grivis walked toward him.

“We have one my lord” Grivis said with pride.

“So you knew all along…Grivis”

“Yes, Lord Krayt now we can rule the galaxy forever”

* * * * * * *

Grivis and Krayt soon learned of the jedi and senators that were traveling the galaxy getting planets to sign there treaty of peace. Grivis hunted them down and killed them all. The jedi had maintained peace after the Mandalorian war, the sith civil war, the jedi civil war, the clone wars, the galactic civil war, but not the War of the Dead.

The End of the War and the Beginning of Terror and Power

A message from Darth Krayt: Thank you to all who read my fic for helping me rule the galaxy

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