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Old 12-22-2006, 09:22 PM   #1
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Star Wars: The Hunger of the Force

This and other post like this inspired me to write this short fic to annoy yall, heres the post that inspired me to start writing this short fic:

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Looks very good. Nihilus looks good too, despite my hatred for him.
So this is about Nihilous.


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Old 12-22-2006, 09:59 PM   #2
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Sorry for the confusion the post wasn't the fic it was what inspired the fic im working on.

Edit: this will come out on the 25th


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Old 12-23-2006, 05:11 AM   #3
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Too bad, I won't be able to read it until the 26th or the 27th. Looking foward to it.
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Old 12-28-2006, 06:55 PM   #4
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opps I forgot to work on this, im about to finish it and put it up. Hold on...

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Old 12-28-2006, 07:02 PM   #5
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The Hunger of the Force


Nihilus stood up and looked around. He was in the Ravager suddenly he remembered. The battle aboard this ship against the Exile. He reached up and pulled back his hood, it exposed the face of his former name, Zayne Carrick. Nihilus walked through the Ravager Bridge and entered the escape pod bay. He then quickly used the force to jump into one. He slammed his hand against the control panel to get it to launch. It then fired off into space, and the ship exploded behind him.

The escape pod flew toward the Unknown Regions; Nihilus had hacked into it to put in the coordinates for that Region. He had to find Revan and tell him what had happened to there plan. Nihilus had met Revan name under the name Zayne. Revan had told him to find Darth Traya to learn the ways of the sith. Then he was to absorb all the Republic planets and conquer those Regions. Only then would Revan return from the Unknown Regions with it conquered too, so they could rule the galaxy. But the Jedi Exile had put an end to those plans for good.

Nihilus’s escape pod soon landed on the planet “Yoggoy” in the Unknown Regions. He leapt out of the escape pod and looked around. There was another escape pod close to him but it looked old. He assumed it was from the end of the Jedi Civil War, about 5 years ago. He walked over to it and looked inside. Nihilus examined the ground and saw faint traces of a fire.

“Zayne, you are,” a voice said.

“Yes, I thought I killed you on Katarr, Vandar,”

“No, Zayne you did not,”

“Well I make a good job here,”

With that he activated his Red saber. Vandar replied by activating a blue saber. Nihilus charged at Vandar hoping to end the battle quick. But Vandar flipped to the side and reached down to reveal another green lightsaber. Nihilus stared, all the years Vandar had trained him he had never seen him use two lightsabers. He had changed since Katarr.

The two clashed together over and over again. But Vandar had noticed that he could not break Nihilus’s defense nor could his be broken.

Vandar jumped away and lowered his sabers. “Pointless this is,” he said. “Another time, Zayne, another time.” With that Vandar ran to a hidden ship behind a mound. He jumped in and flew away.

Nihilus sighed in failure. He sat down to meditate until Revan found him.

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Its pretty short. Also Zayne was a possible Nihilus as i found out at wookiepedia.

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Old 12-28-2006, 07:03 PM   #6
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Very, very short, Shortie. It was good, but it hasn't been proved that Zayne *is* Nihilus yet. Only rumours at this point in time. Other than that it was alright. Any Sion Shortie would be good too. The Hunger of the Force was also a good title for this Shortie.
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Old 12-28-2006, 07:07 PM   #7
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thanks, yes i know it is short. Zayne could be Nihilus, there were quite a few choice of which rumor to use. I thought this one was the most likely though. But still thanks
This is part of my Unknown Regions saga by the way.

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Old 12-28-2006, 07:12 PM   #8
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thanks, yes i know it is short. Zayne could be Nihilus, there were quite a few choice of which rumor to use. I thought this one was the most likely though. But still thanks
This is part of my Unknown Regions saga by the way.
Is it? Will that be updated as well? Oh and I like the Nihilus picture you've posted too on Post #5.
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Old 12-28-2006, 07:50 PM   #9
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No offense but the fight seems kind pointless, unless you plan on building up on it. But keep going
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Old 12-28-2006, 08:28 PM   #10
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Look, Darth Nihilus is becoming more and more popular recently...




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Old 12-28-2006, 08:34 PM   #11
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That was odd. Interesting, but still odd.
I really can't find any sense in that story, in my opinion. (no offence of course)

First off, Nihilus couldn't of awoke in the Ravanger for two reasons:
1) Nihilus was killed
2) The Ravanger already blew up once the Exile left (unless you intended Nihilus to wake up right before that... which you probably did)

And second, lol @ Vandar.
Other than that, it was fun to read. I like shorts.
Keep making those fics!


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Old 12-28-2006, 08:48 PM   #12
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Look, like me, I was redeemed by Exile...




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Old 12-28-2006, 08:58 PM   #13
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Soon it will be. Thanks about the pic, good old google helped me find it.

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Old 12-29-2006, 11:23 AM   #14
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Look, like me, I was redeemed by Exile...
i was wondering why your avy was blue instead red
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