Next 2 chapters I'm taking a while off to make the Cliffhanger at the end scare you a bit
Kuat is the Biggest Shipyard in Republic Space.
Commodore John Sarisa stands on the bridge of the Liberty watching the Fleet patrol.
"Time since we arrived?"
"3 hours. or ten minutes since the last time you asked sir."
"What of Caridia?"
"Nothing but reports coming from there."
"Is he coming today or another day I wonder."
"When I suggested this I didn't think he would attack straight away but maybe..."
On the Bridge of the Kadin's Fist orbiting the now lifeless Dantooine.
"Hmm no Fleet to protect the site of one of the most important Jedi Enclaves that's odd. Take us back to our space."
"My Lord not everyone knew there was an Enclave here."
"Indeed did our Assassins get any holocrons My Apprentice?"
"Only Stories Master they checked the Sublevel as well."
On the Liberty.
Alarms are blaring.
"Commodore we're picking up a distress call from Dantooine."
"Put it on."
"It's Automated sir."
Just then a Jedi Master ran in.
"Master K'Reiza do you know anything about Dantooine?"
"There's a Jedi Enclave there why?"
"YOU DIDN'T THINK TO MENTION THAT!!! WHY?"
"It's not important for the Republic to know where every Jedi Enclave is."
"IT IS IN A WAR AGAINST THE SITH!!!!"
"Fine. Why did you ask?"
"Ensign would you care to inform the good Jedi Master."
"We picked up a distress call from Dantooine. It was Automated."
The Jedi Masters Features went pale.
"The Senate will want to know why we left an important planet to the Jedi defenseless."
"We tell the truth. The Jedi didn't care to inform us of the Enclave there."
Meanwhile On Malachor.
"Ahh our newest Dark Jedi. Good Day Jerec."
"My Lord. The Academy's Archives are always locked why is that?"
"The Info in there belongs for The Dark Lord of the Sith's eyes only."
"Dangerous Holocrons, Ancient Techniques and the like."
On Coruscant in the senate chambers. (A/N This is important to the Storyline they're there instead of the Chancellors office.)
"...You said that they would attack Caridia or Kuat."
"If the Jedi had cared TO TELL ME THERE WAS AN ENCLAVE ON DANTOOINE I WOULD HAVE SPLIT THE FLEET INTO 3."
"The Jedi Council Accepts that maybe keeping that piece of information secret wasn't a good idea."
"The fleet will return to patrols and Guard Duty. However we have good news Commodore please stay."
"I have recently got Sullust and Mon Calamari to join the Republic."
"What has that got to do with me."
"Both worlds have major shipyards. Their shipyard strength is equal to that if not more of Kuat."
The whole room gasped.
"They also have bigger solar systems than Kuat which mean we can have more Capital ships constructed from them."
On the Kadin's Fist. Darth Kadin is watching the Senate meeting.
In the Senate chambers.
"Alas. The Mon Calamari have informed me that we can't construct our ships there."
General out roar was heard at this.
"However. *the room goes quiet at this.* They have said they will use their own Capital ships alongside ours."
On the Kadin's Fist.
"Hmm we Can't have that. But we could steal their ship design."
He walks onto the bridge.
"Admiral, call Malachor for me."
"Understood My Lord." 5 minutes later. "I'm patching it through to you My Lord."
"Greetings Lord Kadin."
"Master Guan. I have a mission for your Assassins."
"What is the mission My Lord?"
"Steal from the Mon Calamari the designs for their Capital ships. Get Copies of them."
"Yes My Lord."
"Excellent with The Star Forge churning these new ships out we will not be stopped."
End Of chapter 10.
So after 10 chapters we finally find out where the ships are coming from. Did anyone figure it out?
On Mon Calamari.
"The Republic needs us to get our fleet into theirs as soon as possible Admiral."
"Understood Mr President."
The Transmission was cut.
"Greetings President Ackbar." (A/N An ancestor of Admiral Ackbar."
"Who said that?"
4 Sith Assassins appeared out of thin air with A Dark Jedi leading them.
"Uh oh. Is it impossible to hope your a Jedi Knight?"
"Kill me then."
"Oh no that's not what we want."
"What do you want then?"
"Either Mon Calamari to stay out of the war..."
"Or give us copies of the plans of your Capital Ships... Which our Lord would prefer."
"Those are the choices here."
The President gets them out and copies them hands the copies to the Dark Jedi and puts the originals back.
"Also don't tell the Republic till asked... or we will bomb you with your own weapons."
With that they dissapeared.
'As the Humans say God help us' The President thought as he walked back to the window. 'Why only copies I wonder. To see how they're version fared against ours?'
On the Kadin's Fist sitting in an Unknown System with A massive structure behind it. (A/N People if you don't know what the structure is your dumb. Also when in the game we didn't see the Star Forge or hear about it till we found the Star Map so don't have a go at me.)
"So the Mon Calamari don't have much of an imagination for names." Darth Kadin said while looking at the plans for a 'Mon Calamari Star Cruiser.' "No matter it's New name will be 'The Republics Worst Nightmare.' (A/N Ok I don't know which is better ok It's not my POV here It's his. also it won't stay.) I wonder what the Commodore will say."
Making a few modifications he placed 100 to be made on the second Capital ship construction bay. The first he put a new class he had thought up the other day Star Destroyer. (A/N People be nice it's his idea in his POV.)
"Excellent. With these 2 new classes The Kadins Fist. and the Interdictors we will be unstoppable."
On the Good Old Liberty.
"How is it every time I'm on a Patrol I get this ship?"
"Aye sir whatever you think."
"What is it Ensign."
"The Kadin's Fist just dropped out of Hyperspace alone."
"Now that's plain stupid."
"Saying that that ship is probably their most powerful ship."
"Good point. Block their scans."
"Their not doing any."
The Commodore snapped around.
"It's almost as if they know about the New ships."
"I know I'm not being very helpful by saying this but I have a bad feeling about this. Get me him on audio."
On the Kadin's fist.
"Put him on."
"Commodore how are you, still got your little Ship there I see."
"Still got that beast of a ship I see. Kadin." (A/N Typical banter. modification of the stand off between Kozara and Bateson in the Star Trek book Ship of the Line.)
"Dare to pelter her shields Commodore?"
"Mute. Don't worry he won't attack if he meant to do battle he would have come with more ships Resume Audio."
"Ahh Commodore keeping your Crew calm huh."
"Yeah Kadin do your crew need to be kept calm?"
Static. Or was it? No it was laughter. it calmed down eventually.
"Did that answer your question Commodore?"
"Indeed. Cut audio. *Cut* THAT CHEEKY LITTLE CHARRAK!!!"
"Return us to patrol."
Darth Kadin hadn't gone far though.
On the Kadins Fist leading 1999 Interdictors were on their way to a Fleet with mostly Green crews.
On the Freedom. *Hammerhead.*
Admiral Darety (A/N pronounced Dar-i-ty.) was on a patrol of the Republic Mid Rim border.
"None of the new Mon Calamari ships damn them."
His fleet had recently got an infusion of new ships.
"New Ships Green Crews." He Muttered.
"Admiral if I may say..."
Alarms start Blazing.
"Great some action."
"Admiral it's a Sith fleet... FOLLOWED BY THE KADIN'S FIST!!!!"
On the Liberty.
Alarms start Blazing Making the Commodore jump.
"Oh for gods sake am I going to have a break."
He walks onto the Bridge.
"If this is another visit from his Dark Lordship it can wait till tomorrow."
"Commodore it's a visit but not to us. He's attacking."
"Battle Stations. change course to wherever it is."
At the battle.
"Admiral the Liberty's fleet has arrived... With Mon Calamari ships."
"Very well Form up with them."
On the Liberty.
"All ships have formed up."
"Commodore hundreds more Sith ships have been reported, at Caridia, Kuat, Sullust and Mon Calamari."
"It's an Invasion." The Commodore said Echoing the thoughts of the Bridge crew.
End of Chapter.
Well people now THAT!!!! is a cliffhanger.