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Old 12-26-2007, 08:48 AM   #11
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Chapter 15
Restoring The Island- Part 1


Everyone slept peacefully that night, and woke up in the morning tired and hungry. JJ made a long walk back to Crystal City and came back with his peanut butter. Jordan shared her bread, and everyone got a small slice covered with peanut butter jelly.

After finishing everyone was silent and then Clifton stood up and he looked angry.
"This isn't getting us anywhere!" he shouted looking around at everyone who looked frightened. "We're sitting here eating, when half of Crystal Island is in terror, and the Screats and Craltens are rising! We also need to bring our friends back!"

"The what!" everyone shouted puzzled.
"Screats and Craltens" he sighed. "Across in the Green Field's area the Screats are building an army and they want to take over Crystal Island. The Craltens are the only defence. With their strong captains Dreep and Laster, plus their king Grazoid the Craltens are dead meat without us. And now I have worked it out, Leroy and Emma are on a mission, and that mission is to make sure we donít interfere that's why we've had so many close scrapes with them!"

"I get it now" Jamie said nodding his head. "Then, we can do two things at the same time... we can make our way to the war, and restore the dark areas of Crystal Island" he said standing up.

"Exactly, by the time we are there, Crystal Island will be blooming again and we'll be out there to take down our enemies!"

"We make a list" Rebecca said grabbing some parchment and an inky pen.

'Jobs to Do' she said while writing it down...

Restore the Dark Areas.
Kill Leroy and Emma.
Defeat the Screats.
Destroy the "Dreep and Laster pair"
Take down King Grazoid.

"That's alot of enemies" Fazlah said scratching his chin.
"Then we go now" Riko said picking up his slingshot.

The group left the cave, and Crystal City behind them and that was when they first stepped into the Dark Area. The parts that was covered by Cory's attack when fighting Mike.

"Here we go" said Clifton holding up the glass white ball.
"What are you doing?" JJ asked as everyone was frowning.
"I read, we hold up the light, and a dark monster will appear. We have to defeat it before this area becomes light again." Everyone readied themselves for what was to appear...

Clifton held up the light and it shone lightly. A dark cloud seemed to drift over and the orb sucked out a black creature that had devilish pointy ears and bright yellow eyes. It was holding a chain, with a black spiked ball attached onto the end that looked heavier than a car. The monster was twice as tall as Clifton, who was the oldest and tallest in the group.

It grumbled loudly, like it was disturbed and then started swinging its chain until it was spinning round and round crashing into the hills and dangerously swinging close to the group.

Fazlah and Riko began to fly, above the chain when the monster swung it at Riko and it almost tore on his wings.

"Slingshot attack!" they both shouted pinging their slingshots at the monsters eyes. It began to lose its balance and the chain and ball was swinging furiously and out of control. Then Clifton jumped up grabbing onto the chain and holding onto it as it spun round and round. He almost slipped off and then was holding on with one hand, the other hand stretching out to Fazlah who was holding a cutlass.

Fazlah reached out and Clifton grabbed it then holding on steadier as he went round and round the monster. Then waiting for the precise second he jumped from the ball and landed on the dark monster's head slashing away as its ears. Then it screeched and Clifton held his hands over his ears and he fell off the head losing balance, and he landed on its mouldy foot. It kicked him off and Clifton landed on the floor with a large bleeding lip.

"Oi you brute!" Firas shouted throwing a dagger up that pierced its eyebrow. Riko and Fazlah were constantly pinging its eye until they began to bleed. Next thing Jordan ran up drawing a giant staff.

"Whoa, you have a staff?" Jamie asked astonished.
"Iím a Mage" she smiled and chanted something. Then blue vapour soared together in a streamlined beam and blasted the monster's stomach and there was a giant popping noise and it took a step back. It grumbled once more. Then she kept doing that. Clifton was still hurt and was unable to battle.

Firas was now hacking at the monster's foot with a sword narrowly dodging its attempts to crush him.

Jamie and Rebecca decided they needed to be in this as well.

"Steel Power Double!" they both called and their body's shone silver and their armour appeared and they looked more gallant than ever.

They ran forward then jumped up together right over one of the swings from the monster and they headed towards the brute's face and both kicked it. At first it looked like it was going to be harmless but then it screeched as silver metal crushed into it and it almost fell backward and it let go of its chain that went soaring away and landed on the ground as dust blew up leaving a giant crater where the ball and chain was left.

"Ok everyone attack full power!" Jamie called. Everyone stood back, the monster was now screaming and angry making a right noise.

Jordan fired an extra powerful blue beam straight up into the sky that twinkled lightly. Then Fazlah and Riko pinged sharp stones from their slingshots that hovered above Jordan's blue beam. Firas threw a shining dagger up that also hovered above the blue beam. Then JJ popped up from nowhere and shouted fiercely.

"Arrgh!" and threw a metal sword in onto the blue beam. The blue beam then came soaring down towards the monster at tremendous speed with everyone's weapons coming towards it as well. Jamie and Rebecca took a deep breath.

"Silver Beam!" giant silver beams erupted from their hands and swooped alongside Jordan's with the sharp weapons and it crushed into the monster and blood blasted into everyone's faces dampening their clothes. The monster made a final screech and the two beams plus weapons shot right through its stomach.

The monster stood there blankly, the giant hole in its stomach with blood covering the whole area and then it popped and vanished a white light shining the whole area. Then the place went pink and white and everything seemed to stop. The light subsided and the area was dark no more.

"We did it" Clifton sighed looking around proud of the team. "One area down, two more to go!"

Chapter 16
Dreaded Flame

"What is this it, ha-ha a weak pizza man" Dreep laughed as Andrew attempted to stab Laster who merely dodged to the left skimming the sword across his hand.

"Ha to this scruff as well, he couldn't hit me while I was in slow motion" Laster chuckled before throwing a boulder at Andrew with extreme might.

Andrew tried again to stab Laster but again dodged and thrust his mighty arms at Andrew picking him up and bowling him behind him into a stone cold wall.

"Andrew you ok?" Splint shouted as he finally aimed successful right into Dreep's side with his sword.

"Ha-ha not even a scratch, you can't hurt me Iím invincible" Dreep laughed as Andrew rose to his feet.
it's not over yet Dreep as he rose to his feet Andrew got out his bow and arrow.

"Okay time to crush you now" Laster laughed as he rose his hands and pummelling Splint to the ground with intense force.

"Ahhh it's over for you" Dreep chuckled next to Laster while Laster kept his hands making critical pressure on Splint.

"Hey rent a rock and Dumb Dino look here" Andrew taunted holding his arrow when he suddenly fired at Laster who still had his back turned to the arrow.

"Hey Laster behind you" Dreep cried out and as Laster turned the arrow made contact with his right boulder like eye.

"Ouch that hurts get it out GET IT OUT!" Laster screeched as he fell back landing almost on Dreep.

"Hey don't land on me idiot" Dreep screamed as he narrowly dodged.

"Shut up and get that one with the arrow dumb rock" Laster cried before running back with half the arrow remaining in his eye socket.

"Okay um bow and arrow guy, try this on for size!"

Dreep ran over to where Splint was lying unconscious on the floor and picked him up throwing him to where Andrew firmly stood with another arrow ready, Dreep rammed his hand into the rocky wall where his hand started to rumble the wall.

"What's going on" Andrew shouted alarmed.

"Behold my transformation" Dreep started "I can change into a harder version where Laster can't ahhh" He finished as the transformation made a bright shine where Dreep now was, rocks began to crumble out the earth and more alarming the fire on the walls came out the lanterns as Dreep absorbed the fire turning slightly bigger and holding a very powerful looking fire axe.

"Great a fire rock monster, anything else" Andrew complained.

"Uh what happened" a weak Splint echoed as he looked behind him "Holy Banana peels whatís that" he gasped suddenly forgetting his pains and dashing aside of Andrew who stood in shock as the smoke cleared completely to reveal a giant flaming red Dreep on fire with a giant fire battle axe and no eyes just the red anger of fire making the room fill with anger and sadness feelings.

"I am now complete, I am uh actually Iíve never done this before oh yes I am Dreaded Flame a completely new Dreep and twice as powerful as Laster in his first form but can't do my cool fire transformation that results in death to any passer but will" he tried to finish.

"SHUT UP!" Andrew and Splint both shouted.

"How dare you silence me I'LL CRUSH YOU" Dreaded flame finished.

"Dreaded Flame" Andrew said under his breath then lifting his head to see the stronger version of Dreep that was flaming hot.

"Make a run for it, get the Green Fields, then we can do more than being cramped in here" Splint whispered in Andrew's ear.

They both sprinted easily passing the chunky Dreaded Flame who tried to thump them with his fists. When it collided with the ground the whole tunnel seemed to shake madly.

Then came Laster, who now looking weak and puny compared to his successor, went for them. He was still quicker, by being smaller but Andrew brushed past him. Splint crashed into him knocking him over and Laster thought fast and tried to grab his feet but he was too slow for Splint.

Dreaded Flame had just came along and was staring dumbly at them running away.
"Get them you over-grown cooker!" Laster bellowed and Flame started running, each footstep sounding like a bomb crashing down and exploding with might.

Splint and Andrew didn't dare stop as they knew their lives depended on it. Then when they thought they were going to fall down in agony, the light at the end of the tunnel came and they rushed out under the sun in the gorgeous world of Green Fields.

"What's all that noise?" screeched a Plant hog. It was tall, female and had long leaves as arms and a large flowery mouth that was slobbering all over Splint and Andrew.

"It's those Screats, one of them is a big fiery version!" Andrew panted pointing at the tunnel. The Plant hog waddled over to the tunnel and soon heard the loud thumping once again and a big flaming version of Dreep charged out looking down at the Plant hog.

"Fire ay?" the Plant hog cackled with a smirk. She took in a deep breath and then rushing out of its mouth was streams of water completely sucking the life out of the fire. Dreaded Flame weakened and then turned into his normal form. The Plant hog now looked just as strong.

Dreep trembled, then grabbed Laster and ran away as fast as his rocky legs could take him.

"Put me down you big ape, we need to fight that little missy!"
"Another time, Laster another!"

Chapter 17
Restoring the Island- Part 2

The gang had been walking for miles now, the blooming area around them was gorgeous to see. Flowers everywhere, fresh air and trees growing and giant fields everywhere. It was a lovely sight, then the further they walked, the worse it got and now they had walked into the next black area.

The group stopped for a break and prepared themselves for what they would fight.

Clifton walked forward and took a deep breath. He held up the crystal globe and it shone brightly. They expected to see another monster but to their shock a boy stood there holding two swords. He was older than them, about fifteen or sixteen. His head was down, he looked motionless and then he looked up and he laughed.

"Who are you?" Jamie asked mustering up the power to speak after this astonishment.
"Corey" he chuckled deeply.
"Cory" everyone gasped.
"No you fool. Corey, not your pig of a friend!"
"You shut up!" said Clifton pointing a finger at him. "We're taking you down!"
"Iím alot tougher than that monster you just thought" he said eyeing Clifton carefully. "It managed to knock you out, maybe you'll die this time!" he cackled maliciously. Clifton went bright red.
"How did you know that!" he spat back. Corey tapped his nose and laughed.

He looked at his two swords that were sharply made and looked brand new, ready to kill.

Clifton ran forward with speed kicking Corey in the face and then swinging his sword at the monster. Corey stumbled back and then ducked from the swing. In his low position he ran at Clifton and knocked him over onto the floor. Clifton rolled over as Corey stuck his sword into the ground where Clifton had just been.

"Impressive" grunted Corey looking a little annoyed now. Rebecca then ran forward about to strike when Clifton glared at her.

"Let me fight this one" he said standing up wearily. He raised his sword and chanted something.

"Stone Power!" The ground erupted and ripped into many pieces and stones rose up in front of him. Clifton was then wrapped up in a stone suit then holding a stone shield and his sword looked now sharper and more powerful. He nodded and the stones blasted forward crashing into Corey's chest.

"Uh!" she shouted blood splattering from his chest and he fell backwards smacking his head on the ground in pain. He winced and spat on the ground in disgust. "I thought you would be easier to take down" he spluttered.
Clifton smiled to himself as he looked at his most powerful form,

"Whoa! Clifton has a super form like us?" Jamie asked admiring the stone suit.
"Yes, I have stone power too" replied Firas smiling. "Most people do, they just need to have enough power and rage to release it."

Jamie looked around at the team. He wondered what their powers could be. In pairs though..

He knew his and Becca's was Silver, Mike and Cory's Gold, Firas and Clifton Stone. Jordan was a Mage. What were Riko, Fazlah and JJ's? Jamie had a rough guess that JJ would be paired with Jordan, but what about Riko and Fazlah? He looked up and Clifton and Corey's blades had clashed.

Clifton kicked him backwards. Corey stayed on balance and made a giant horizontal swing. Clifton bent down, grabbed Corey by the legs and picked him up. With his sheer stone force he threw him against a rock and there was a crack as his spine broke...

The world purified around them and it began to bloom again.....

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Chapter 18
The New War

"Ha-ha bye Laster or should I say degraded cooker" Andrew mocked as Dreep carried Laster away.

"Mark my words you two better not cross me again or Iíll make you scrub my feet with your tongues" Laster screeched back.

Andrew and Splint ran off crossing Mount Rage and crossed a river with small stepping stones till they reached their sides. Mount Rage loomed over the giant Green fields. They did not know it, but this was king Grazoidís home.

"Finally safe from those stupid rock heads" Splint sighed as he took off his red shirt and washed it in the river along with his brand new trainers that were torn to pieces with toes sticking out.

"We must not rest, we have to get to base before they decide to attack the Craltens" Andrew complained even though his feet felt worse than jelly.

"You're right we better get a move on then" Splint finished swiftly putting on his soaking wet t-shirt.

They made a run for it and decided to head for the Craltens base to warn them off the upcoming danger surrounding the once peaceful world.

"What is that!" Andrew shouted stopping before an oak tree.

They hid behind the tree as two small orc creatures half the size of Dreep walked by.

"I've had enough of any of those Screats" Splint moaned.

He shot out from behind the tree and sliced both orc monsters to pieces leaving two motionless heaps of dead bodies lying on the ground seeping green blood.

"Ahhh Splint Iíve never seen green blooded Screats, OHNO you killed a Cralten in disguise you idiot!" Andrew shouted alarming the whole camp.

"What!!! I did, no way" Splint looked horrified.

They ran off and decided to hide behind a bush again introducing Andrew's beard and hair to dirt.

"I hate hiding behind bushes they catch on me and it hurts" Andrew whispered pulling the parts of the bush out his beard.

"If you complain about that then if you were the one that super cooker tried flattening you'd be famous for moaning" Splint eyed Andrew before looking to where the two dead Craltens lay.

"No worries there Splint ,Craltens can reheal themselves I checked them when you hid, Craltens have amazing hidden power that can revive themselves along as they aren't damaged too badly.

The bodies on the floor were glowing and as they shined a light blue colour the bodies began to levitate themselves and in a bright flash they were healed.

"Let's get out of here before they spot us" Splint sighed.

"Never mind them look over there!" Andrew shouted horrified pointing in another direction.

A army of Screats were making their way up but as Andrew and Splint looked closer they noticed five shadows hiding close by just as the army got to the hidden fives hideout, the shadows flew out and the Screats began to screech and growl as swords clashed and roars trembled the earth.

"What do we do now" Splint looked at Andrew with a worried expression.

Chapter 19
Friends Return




Walking on in the second area they soon came to the darkness again.
"What do we fight this time Clift?" Jamie asked now extremely worried. "This last monster must be really tough."

Clifton once again held up the white orb, instead of glowing and sucking whatever was to come out of it, it shattered into tiny pieces blasting the whole team back with force. Then popping out of nowhere two dark bodies lay there. One stood up, with a dark cloak covering him. The face was quickly recognised by everyone. It was Cory. Then the second boy had ginger hair and was much taller. This was Mike.

"Cory, Mike!" everyone screamed. They were running towards them with open arms but Mike raised a hand and blasted them back with a dark force.
"What's your deal?" JJ asked confused. Something stuttered out of Cory and Mike's voice in a deep and terrifying tone.

"We are your final task, defeat us and Crystal Island shall be in peace once again, Cory and Mike will also return to their true forms, and return to this world once again." Everyone looked confused.

"Thatís it!" Firas shouted raising a finger. "They are evil! They are the final task, we beat them, the area is restored and they return normally!" Everyone gulped.
"We... canít beat them" Jordan said slowly.

"Yeh give up now then!" Rebecca shouted sarcastically. They all agreed to take on their possessed old friends.

"You under estimate us! Mike cackled evilly. He flipped forward using his standard but usually one shot death side swing. Jamie stood there and blocked it with no effort.
"What!" Mike shouted in utter shock.
"We got better" laughed Jamie proudly.. "You think we did nothing while we were away? Watch this!" he shouted kicking Mike in the face, jumping over him and grabbing his arms tossing him into the air. Mike landed with a thump holding onto his sword.

"Impressive" laughed Cory eyeing Jamie. Then the whole teamed charged towards them with force.

Cory jumped up high grabbing his belt and swinging his quoits all over the place in fury. The skilled team thought fast and blocked them as they shattered over their swords.

Rebecca pulled out her machete and swung at Cory, he jumped over it and kicked her face. She got angry and tugged at his ear and swung him onto the floor.

She put a foot on him, Cory was trapped and could not move. Mike was blocking every single attack that hit him, then Clifton rammed him and he stumbled over the whole team surrounding him.

"We got you" Clifton said panting dangerously.
"What do we do? Kill them?" she asked not sure if there was the right thing. They waited for something to happen, but nothing did.
"I guess we do, maybe then their true forms will come" Firas said. Rebecca looked down at the merciless looking Cory.
"Sorry if this is the wrong thing" she said looking up the skies and she sunk the sword into her heart. Then Clifton sunk his sword into Mikes and bright light erupted into the skies lighting the whole of Crystal Island.

There laying sleepily was Mike and Cory in their normal clothes. Tears trickled down everyoneís faces.

"I knew we'd bring them back" Jordan said with a smile on her face. Cory and Mike rolled over and looked up at the team. ďBread Monsters return!Ē

"We're a little.... eke err sleepy, thanks for bringing us back... I solo tired" mumbled Cory with a small grin on his face. The team laughed. Clifton grabbed Cory and carried him over his shoulder and Jamie did the same with Mike... they kept on walking and walking through the fully restored Crystal Island...

TWO DAYS LATER:

Two figures were blocking the path, dark cloaks blowing in the wind and heads unseen they were not easily recognised. Then one looked up with an evil grin across her face. It was unmistakably Leroy and Emma. Cory and Mike stood forward.

"We are taking you down!" Cory shouted staring at her with wide eyes.
"Yeh, we'll trash them!" Firas shouted raising a fist.
"No" said Mike quietly with his eyes closed. "This is something me and Cory must do, you guys go off to the war, and theyíll be meeting very soon."

The team nodded and left the area with the four staring each other down, who would strike first?

Half an hour later:

The whole team stood their blankly as the Craltens charged from one side, and the rocky Screats came running down the mountains. Then two shadows came running to them. They were both about thirteen.

"Who are they?"

Chapter 20
The duet meets the gang

"Get those Screats!" Splint said raising his bow and arrow, his sharpest type and aimed it carefully. Then he let go and the bow's horsehair's rattled to hard vibrating in Splint's hands. The arrows shot fast and straight and it shot right through a young Screats head and the rock crumbled from the force and the Screat fell to the floor dead for sure.

"Hey! It's those two boys!" shouted the other four. "Split up, you take boys!" said the Screat leader pointing at one of them. "I and you take Craltens, and you two take those five oddballs, apparently they're against the war!"

Andrew and Splint laughed as the scrawny Screat ran at them with power. Andrew kicked it over and cut it in half with his sword rocks flying everywhere.

"Whoa!" shouted Splint stopping in his tracks as he heard the sound of footsteps from everywhere. Andrew gasped in amazement.

The two looked up at the mighty Mount Rage. It towered over everything, its shadowy figure blocking out the sun. What was more amazing was hundreds of rocky Screats, Infact the whole army were marching down equipped with their rock guns and then began firing to something in the distance.

Then across the Green Fields marched the Craltens. They were similar to orcs. Their faces were brute ugly, skin over lapping skin and covered with wrinkles. Their best weapons were crossbows and now began firing with force at the Screats.

Bang smack in the middle was five humans. One was tall with curly hair and was shining in silver armour. Another one stood beside him, she was a girl and her long blonde hair tumbled behind her. She was also wearing bright silver armour. Then two more shadowy figures stood, one far taller than the other.

Then another girl with brown hair and glasses stood with two swords in her hands. They were trying to avoid the crossfireís and joined in with The Craltens. Despite being the ugly side, they were fighting to save Crystal Island.

Then two Goblin's flapped over with slingshots and started firing at the Screats with effort as they came running from the Mountain.

One smaller child who was screaming in a high pitched voice was hacking away at Screat after Screat.

Splint and Andrew ran over and the team looked at them.
"Your here to help? You want to save Crystal Island right?" the tall shadowy one asked.
"Yes!" the two shouted in sync.

"Ok, I am Jamie!" he shouted gallantly.
"I am Rebecca, his sister!"
"I am Clifton, and this is my great friend Firas!" the shadowy one said.
"I am Jordan!" shouted the brown haired one with glasses raising a fist. ďA bread monster!Ē
"I am Fazlah, this is my cool cousin Riko!" said the smallest winged goblin pointing to his cousin Riko.
"I am Jordan, but you can call me JJ!" he shouted hacking at an opposing Screat.
"We are out to save Crystal Island! Join the team!" they shouted together.
"Sure!" Andrew and Splint replied and the war began..

Chapter 21
Raging War

"Let's do this" Andrew shouted raising a silver sword.

"Alright Andrew letís do this" Splint nervously replied holding a bronze sword.

Andrew starts off by hacking his way through the smallest and at the front of the army of Screats easily slicing their heads as he went along while Splint uses a more ruthless way using the bronze sword to cutting through their heads cutting them in two.

Jamie kicks and stabs the taller ones with his sword along with Clifton who pushed the weaker Screats down and slashes the bigger Screats into pieces.

Fazlah and Riko flew into the air with their strong wings and shot their swords and pierced the head of many Screats.

While Rebecca doing an aggressive slash at some strong Screats that threw her back but she only got up and slashed through them like a paper shredder.

Lastly the two Jordanís were back to back slashing at whoever came in their distance.

"Alright we're doing pretty well for an army of them" Splint mocked as he split a weak Screat in half with his battle damaged sword.

"Uh there are too many left to gloat about Splint" Riko shouted as he narrowly dodged a pick axe thrown by a massive Screat.

"Riko stay back Iíll teach him a lesson" Fazlah finished as he circled the Screat making it dizzy then kicking it in the face making the massive Screat crush several of its allies while Riko then sliced the big Screats neck which spewed red blood.

Meanwhile the Craltens were getting ready to attack when they head the screech of many Screats and the leader of the Craltens rose to his feet and ordered them all to attack the invaders.

The Craltens shot out of their training areas and houses and ran straight towards the fight as the team continued to fight, Craltens met Screats as the battle against the Screats was now really a war.

"We won't give up" Jamie muttered to his team as he slashed and sliced at Screats.

Suddenly the sky went red and the whole war had stopped as everyone from the rock beastlike Screats to the slimy orc like Craltens stared into the sky.

"What's happening" Rebecca shouted as all the Craltens started to retreat to their base and the Screats were running back to the Mount Rage.

Flashing erupted the sky and then the sky opened up and the whole island was covered in darkness.

"Why is it so dark" JJ asked to Jordan who uttered slowly "This is no bread monster far from it.Ē

"Team prepare yourselves" Clifton shouted as a shockwave brushed past them knocking them all over except Fazlah and Riko who managed to dodge it by flying but seconds later were shot down by some invisible force.

"Garr friend or foe" JJ shouted knowing it couldn't be a friend.

"Transform, Golden Power Double!" Cory and Mike shouted in complete rage. A golden light whizzed down from the sky striking them with force. Gold light emitted from their bodies and there they appeared in the golden form.

"Dark Force Double!" Emma and Leroy hissed. A white light appeared round them, slowly getting bigger and then it flashed many times. The dark cloaks wisped round their bodies like a snake until they were more evil than before.

Cory grabbed his golden sword and swung it out holding it with one hand, the other hand raised as a fist. Mike pulled out his golden haired bow and placed the equally shining bow on it, ready to shoot.

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Chapter 22
Fight for Revenge

Mike then let go and the arrow fired streamlined going on target with Leroy's face. Seconds before hitting him he raised his sword and it bounced off triggering the arrow back the way it came. The arrow skimmed across Mike's hair and after that moment Cory ran forward his sword ready to come down upon Emma. She dodged and flung her foot out in front of his legs. Cory fell down his metal body crashing onto the ground but he quickly got up and Emma swung her sword. Cory grabbed it with his hand stopping the swing and he ripped the sword out of her hands and flung it like a boomerang towards Leroy.

Mike kicked Leroy in the stomach, holding his foot there one second too long as Leroy grabbed it and swung Mike round until he crashed into the wall.

"Uh!" he shouted as his back shuddered from the impact. He quickly got back up, charged with his head down and head butted Leroy in the stomach. Leroy gasped and the wind was knocked out of him. He scrambled around on the floor trying to catch his breath frantically.

Mike raised his heavy foot and it collided into Leroy's face and the blood splashed out. Cory grabbed Emma by her hair and began pulling.

"Ah you little crap!" she screamed highly and grabbed his ear and began pulling twice as hard. Mike ran forward and rammed Emma. She was knocked, and because Cory was holding to her hair it ripped and a giant chunk fell out. She sat there sobbing holding onto her ruined hair. She stopped crying and began laughing. Leroy caught his breath and did the same. Cory and Mike stood infuriated.

"Let's do it, they donít have the power to, and we'll wipe them!" Cory and Mike's eyes widened and both began to tremble and worry. Emma stood up and Leroy stood beside her.

"Dark Forces! UNITE!" they both screamed. Cory and Mike were both knocked over by an extreme force of wind and a black tornado high as a skyscraper began tumbling towards Emma and Leroy. They were scooped up, circling high into the red sky. That was when Cory and Mike noticed. Why was the sky red? What was happening, the source of the red came from where the others had gone. Then there was a black explosion and instead of two figures landing, one did.

This one was broader. His or her head hung down and hanging over them was a blue and black cloak. He/she looked up, one eye was blue and was one brown. The lips were thin as string and the purity of the face was easily recognised as Leroy's. However the hair belonged to Emma.

"Are they... one?" Mike stuttered blinking his eyes.
"I am Emroy" the voice said a mix between the two. "This is something, only the most controlled and clever of people can do. It's where two people, with the same super transformation unite into one person temporarily, to knock the other out. This transformation, is not twice as powerful, but four times as powerful.Ē

Cory and Mike stepped back in fright. The more they stared, the stronger it looked.

"If only we could do that" Cory whispered to Mike jealous.

Emroy then began to ran at an amazing speed swinging out a giant cutlass almost taller than their self and crashing it down into the ground. Cory and Mike dived to the side and the cutlass was stuck in the ground. Then Emroy bent over holding its neck.

"Ahhhhhhh!" they moaned bending down further. "Ahhhhhhh, its hurts.... so much, AIYAH!" they shouted falling over and rolling about in pain.

"I... we can't handle the force, we are..... not strong enough to control this power.... it's too much!" they screamed falling down. There was a black explosion and Leroy and Emma returned to their normal selves. Looking at Cory and Mike, they ran far away. Never to return to bother them again... not for a while.

Chapter 23
Splint vs. Dreaded Flame

The sky was rumbling now and the Mountain began shaking.
"I think it's going to be an Eruption!" shouted Jamie now trembling. Then there was a roar deeper than Laster's evil laugh.

"You pathetic Screats! Youíre all wasted! Can't defeat a bunch of kids!" There was another rumble and a giant explosion seemed to erupt vertically onto the Screats and rocks blasted everywhere.

"And for putting up such a good fight, I'll kill all you Craltens too!" Then another bomb like explosion crushed the slimy Craltens.

"You just killed two species, you wiped them all out!" shouted Clifton angrily.
"Not all" came the dark reply. "I have Laster and Dreep!" he cackled evilly. "Kill them, and if you beat them you can fight me!"

Laster then seemed to appear in front of them, with Dreep landing by his side. The whole team took a step forward ready to fight when Andrew spoke:

"We will take them, you go for Grazoid, and weíll come as back up once we're done with these loonies!"

The rest of team nodded reluctantly and ran for the giant mountain where Grazoid lived.

"So, you come to battle us once again?" sneered Laster sheathing his sword as it glinted under the red hot sun of Crystal Island. Dreep, full of anger began to grow grandly. Muscles began growing in his arms and legs and orange hairs grew wide on his back, his top ripping and the area becoming increasingly hot. Then the fire sprouted from his back and once again Dreep had transformed to his stronger form, Dreaded Flame.

"I'll take smart guy!" shouted Andrew running towards Laster. Splint grimaced watching his friend run off. He looked up at the red hot figure.

Splint ran at it, with full power his sword ready. Splint jumped and kicked Dreaded Flame his trainer burning a little.

Splint jumped back and Dreaded Flame roared angrily. He became larger by at least a metre.

"God" mumbled Splint. "If he keeps getting stronger how do I win?" Then an idea popped into my head. "That's it! If he keeps getting stronger!"

He kept dodging some giant fists slamming down from Dreaded Flame. Occasionally fire would blow from his mouth at Splint who would roll away from the fire. Flame kept growing and growing, then when he was bigger than Grazoid probably, it was then he tumbled. Splint ran the other direction and Flame smashed the ground killing himself, causing a giant earthquake if the impact of his flaming body to the ground.

Chapter 24
Lasterís Turn

"Splint watch out" Andrew cried as he started sprinting towards Splint.

"No problem Andrew I got it" Splint turned to Andrew

Suddenly the dead Dreep started to cough and just as he died he groaned:
"Laster avenge me and......." He stopped as he choked on a massive fireball that shot out his mouth and headed for Splint.

Splint stood scared stiff and the fireball turned at him but Andrew jumped in pushing Splint away then rolling away himself as the exact spot where Splint had been standing was now a really big crater burning madly.

"Ahhh thanks" Splint confessed holding his hand behind his head.

"Are you two quite done yet" a deep voice echoed behind them.

"Huh oh yeah we need to finish off Laster" Splint mocked the rocky figure.

"No Splint leave him to me" Andrew interrupted standing in front of Laster's view.

"Ha-ha you got guts for a loser" The rock creature shouted back.

Andrew grappled his sword that was shining silver in the sky and swung for Laster but being smaller he was faster and narrowly dodged the attack.

"Ha-ha you think Iím as slow as Dreep you idiots" Laster roared before punching Andrew in the back sending him back into a rock pile.

Andrew shook the dirt off him after using his sword to deflect the attack at the right time but still hurt from the impact but he carried on and aimed right for Lasterís head and slashed vigorously but resulted in no damage.

Laster tried to punch Andrew but he dodged about an inch and slashed his sword into Lasterís chest but the rocky figure suddenly absorbed the sword and in his hand appeared a red rock sword on fire.

"And Dreep couldn't absorb any weapon could he" Laster laughed evilly as he slashed at Andrew who just stood there dumbstruck.

"Andrew get out of there" Splint cried but Andrew didn't respond.

"ANDREW" Splint shouted and as Laster hit, Andrew jumped and landed on Laster's
sword then kicked Laster in the head but ended up with a sore foot.

"Wait thatís it" Andrew thought to himself "If he absorbs anything then can he absorb this" he finished.

"Laster you dumb rock monkey catch me" Andrew taunted as he began to run.

"Iíll show you rock monkey" he roared as he chased after Andrew and gaining.

"I'll crush you into bits" he again roared.

"Save it for when you do" Andrew sarcastically replied.

Laster chased Andrew around and as he almost caught Andrew he took a swipe and missed while Andrew jumped into a back flip on Lasterís back then pummelled at everything he had into Lasterís back.

"Heh not going to work" Laster shouted mockingly.

"But this will" Splint jumped into the air and shot two arrows directly into Lasterís mouth painfully hurting him.

"Ahhh the..at hurts" Laster screeched alarmingly.

Splint landed while Andrew leaped up and kicked straight at the arrows stuck in Lasterís mouth.

"Yeah but kicking them in so you absorb them and heehaw jab your insidesĒ Andrew chuckled as Laster choked.

"OooowĒ Laster fell to the ground dead as he bled inside to death.

Andrew kicks the rocky body to the end of a cliff and shoves him off. "That should kill him" He laughs. The tall rocky body of Laster tumbled of the end of a cliff where he splashed into the water, the body drowning.

Chapter 25
King Grazoid



Splint and Andrew looked up at the red and orange sky.
"How did Grazoid do that" Splint mumbled looking up at the sky which was clearly the wrong colour. "It's freaky."

They ran towards the Mountain in a desperate panic. Scrambling down a dark and deep hole they slid down the back of their shirts ripping dangerously so it cut their backs and drops of blood dripped down gently.

They landed with a thump in dirt and a giant foot was in front of them. Andrew wretched. It was rigidly cut and green. It smelled of a dump and Andrew and Splint stared up. The long legs were hairy, each hair almost a metre long and smelling of boiled sweat. Then, he wore ridiculously short shorts that looked like they should have been chucked out ten years ago.

Then, there was a hideous overcoat with nothing under it apart from his giant hairy chest. Then looking up was the terrifying face of King Grazoid. Blood was dripping down his face and the sags under his eyes dropped crazily. He had a short stubbly beard that was tangled with arrows and other piece of dirty objects. He had thick eyebrows that looked like the size of a snake. He was so tall, he was bending down and his head would crush through the top of the mountain.

Splint and Andrew looked around them wildly. Everyone was panting and coughing, or standing weakly.

"What are you all doing? Is this your best try? We just owned big boy Dreep and cocky boy Laster! Show your true forms!"

Everyone nodded.
"Some of have not showed our mega forms though" JJ panted dodging a punch from Grazoid's car-sized hand.

"Make it come from your heart!" shouted Andrew taking a deep breath. "I wonder what I am" he murmured. He held his body, and thought deeply reminding himself of the anger he felt towards Grazoid. Then he began shining and some words blasted out of his mouth of its own accord.

"Water Warrior!" he cried instinctively. Then Splint shouted the same thing and the area began flashing blue. Blue cloaks wrapped around them in a twisting form. Then the two realised they had water powers. Blasting out of their hands came water, and using their legs water could appear and they could surf across it.

"Wow!" everyone gasped amazed.
"Here I go" said JJ quietly. The world flashed purple and a staff appeared in his hand.
"Awesome, I'm a magician!" he shouted pleased.
"Cool, I'm a Mage!" Jordan shouted sticking a thumbs up.
"This all makes sense!" shouted Clifton. "We're in pairs, Me and Firas are rock power, the two Jordan's are magical, Jamie and Rebecca are Silver, Fazlah and Riko still need to be discovered, Andrew and Splint are water... plus Cory and Mike are Golden. say where are they?Ē

"Just on time guys!" they shouted in their golden form. Everyone cheered, but was quickly interrupted.

"All of you shut up! Turn into your stupid super forms and fight me instead of talking like cowards!" The mountain seemed to shake at his words. Rebecca and Jamie grew their silver light, Clifton and Firas became their rocky forms, Jordan became her Mage, and then Fazlah and Riko stood there helpless.

"Letís try cousin!" Riko squeaked. Then they began to grow, and grow until they were giant winged goblins that came to almost have of Grazoid's size.

"Whoa!" everyone shouted in utter surprise.
"Good, now all of you take me on!!" he roared crushing a fist towards the goblin Riko. Riko folded his wings over his face and the fist ricocheted of them.

"Nice defence!" JJ shouted up. He wasn't looking and that was when a foot came down and kicked him with power. There was a crack, and everything seemed to go slow. He tumbled helplessly and there was another deep crack as his head twisted behind and he landed on his back motionless.

"You killed him git!" Mike shouted flying up and throwing golden beams at Grazoid's face. He moaned slowly with the pain and flung a flimsy arm at Mike who dodged back quickly. Cory came up beside him.

"Now together!" Cory and Mike shouted. Riko and Fazlah flew up and grappled Grazoidís arms stopping him from using them at all. Clifton and Firas began throwing extremely heavy rocks at his legs which began to bleed and he began to tremble.

"Get off me, I am king!" he roared evilly. So he couldn't speak, Andrew and Splint began powering water into his mouth and he had difficulty breathing. Rebecca and Jamie flew up beside Cory and Mike. Grazoid was frantically trying to break free. Then Jordan fired a magical beam into his stomach and blood poured out like a river.

"Let's finish him!" Cory shouted. The four held hands, and blasted their golden and silver beams all over his body, the rest let go off him and he tumbled crashing down into the floor like a helpless doll, now dead. The giant body lay there, in a crumpled heap. The thing they had set out to do, they had achieved.

"We did it..." panted Mike bravely. Everyone transformed back to normal forms..

Chapters 26
Going home


Cory and Mike sat on the edge of the high mountain with their legs swinging freely of the edge.

"I donít like this..." Cory said looking at the sky with a worried face. "The sky is red" he mumbled.
"Weird isn't it. You probably farted and caused global warming...."
"Nah, muster been you" laughed Cory but still worried. "When are they going to get here?" he complained. Mike was about see but both noticed a gang of figures walking this way. Cory counted up and noticed one was missing.

"They have lost someone!" panicked Cory jumping to his feet.
"No way!" shouted Mike rising to his feet as well. The two friends rushed down the tall mountain and running down the dirt track they came across their friends.

They soon noticed the one missing was JJ.
"What happened to him" was the first thing Mike said.
"Got killed by Grazoid" Rebecca replied weakly.
"So, you defeated him?" Cory asked anxiously.
"Of course" Firas smiled. "We all showed our super forms. How did you get on with Leroy and Emma?"

"Now here is a story to tell" laughed Mike. The gang sat down and Mike and Cory told the story.
"Emroy?" Clifton asked after a while. "I didn't know combining was possible these days, I guess they just were not powerful enough."
"Yep" replied Mike.

The team looked up the sky. It was still that deep red.
"Do you know how that happened?" Cory asked still worried about the matter.
"Yes, Grazoid destroyed the Craltens and Screats before Andrew and Splint took Laster and Dreep. What a mouthful" chuckled Jamie.
"How does that affect the sky?" Mike asked frowning.
"I have no idea, but it was some giant attack he used."

"Well, I and Mike have been talking...Ē Cory said slowly. "And we are going to go home, back to Platinum Fields."
"Wha!" Firas cried.
"You dangly bread monsters!" hissed Jordan.
"No way!" Jamie shouted.
"Gits!" Rebecca screamed. Then the whole team began shouting until Clifton broke the ruckus.
"SHUT UP!" he shouted with a roar like an angry tiger. "They have lives back in the Fields, parents, family and school! They pretty much have to!" The whole team went silent for a moment.

"Clifton is right" Jamie said nodding to himself. "They're parents must be wondering."
"We'll come back" Mike said with a weak smile. Then the whole team burst into tears. Rebecca and Jordan dived at Cory and Mike hugging them to death so they could almost be strangled. Riko and Fazlah patted both of them on the back. Andrew and Splint gave them a tight hug. Firas tearfully ruffled their hair. Clifton walked forward and shook their hands.

"Good luck" he said with a brave smile on his face. Even Clifton was heartbroken. Jamie hugged them both.

The team trecked to the top of Muki that day, the highest mountain on Crystal Island's mountain trek.

"Why are we going here?" Jordan asked. "For bread?"
"This should take you guys back to the Fields. This is a sacred area" Clifton said sighing as they reached the top.

There were ten giant crystals stuck into the ground firmly. They shone like the sun and were the colour of cloudy lemonade.

Clifton stood there and chanted something. Giant beams of light poured into the skies.
"Christ" Andrew said watching them fly high into the skies. Then, silver writing was wound into the skies, and it returned to its blue state.

The writing red:

"Ten crystals, all for each of you. JJ was not meant to be. This is why only ten are here. When one of you dies, so will the rest, as you are the saviours of this world. Cory and Mike must leave the gang, and return to their homeland. When they come back, all of you will receive something, and you will need it to save universe this time. Not just Crystal Island."

Then the light from two of the crystals grabbed Cory and Mike and sucked them into the skies. The two boys had tears in their eyes, there was a small "pop" and they disappeared from Crystal Island...

THREE MONTHS LATER:

Cory had sweat dripping from his head. Mike kept on hacking at the ground with his pickaxe. They hit something hard. Scrabbling away at the rock, they found two giant crystals. Cory and Mike looked at each other with happiness in their eyes. They grabbed the crystals and held on tight.....

THE END

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