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Old 02-14-2008, 01:14 PM   #1
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Intro of the Plot

The game takes place 7-10 years after kotor2. There are Phantom Ships appearing out of no where attacking small Republic instillations. Many of the leaders in the Senate have put blame on the criminal organizations: Exchange and the Hutts. There is conflict growing from worlds who felt the restoration of the outer rim have been to costly. Many systems are pushing for more power over their own systems which could weaken the Republic’s military strength. The Lost Jedi have return after the battle at Telos IV to rebuild the Order. The Jedi are still to few and the fear of the Sith still lingers in minds of the Jedi who survived the Purge.

This game will send you on an adventure that will force you to search for Revan, the Exile and the Sith. You will be hunted by the Sith and the Jedi. You will have no allies except your party members but can they be trusted. You will unlock a secret that will plunge the Galaxy into a War.

Every secret will be revealed...
Every character’s Fate will be fulfilled…..

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Old 02-14-2008, 06:42 PM   #2
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Wait are you writing a fanfic? Whats the more to come?

Anyway to the story you arent very specific about the PC. Why is the PC searching for Revan and the Exile, is he a jedi. Is he taking the Ebon Hawk. Who is going with him. Where exactly is he going. You provided a lot of backstory but not a lot of story

Also if it takes place 10 years after Kotor 2 why choose now to look for the Exile or Revan. Its been practically a decade. They are probably dead

I'd think that Kotor 3 would have a more original plotline then this. More focusing on the PC in general


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Old 02-14-2008, 08:20 PM   #3
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The opening scene is a space station over Corellia is shot out of orbit by an uncloaked Sith War Ship…….

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Male or Female/ age 18-20/ species- ….

The PC is a padawan to Jedi Master Quan Drayan. The PC meets the Jedi Master while his master is in Exile. The Jedi Master is one of the Lost Jedi who survived the purge. Quan Drayan takes the kid (PC) in since his/her mother dies of a disease. He senses the force in the child. He does not train him/her until a few years later when they return to the Jedi order on Coruscant. If the Order knew what he knows about the PC, the PC would never be trained as a Jedi. The PC will become close with another fellow student named Liana Arrel. She is a year older then the PC. They become good friends. Arrel will become a Jedi right before the beginning of the story.

The Lost Jedi- These are the Jedi who were in hiding during the events of kotor2. These lost Jedi survived the purge and after the battle of Telos IV, they came out of hiding to help rebuild the Jedi Order. The Jedi order believes that Revan and the Exile are dead. The council is made up of Jedi who are not the most experienced. There is only a few Jedi Masters which include…….

The Official Planets:

Coruscant
Corellia
Malachor V
Rattatak
Duro
M4-78
Thule
Ziost
Dromund Kaas
Hutt space station
Rhen Var

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Is this a fan-fic? If so it should probably go in the CEC section.

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Old 02-14-2008, 09:25 PM   #5
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This is not a fan-fiction.

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Old 02-14-2008, 09:51 PM   #6
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Okay, so what is this? Is it the plot to what you think KotOR III is going to be about? You should probably give us the specifics.

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Old 02-15-2008, 09:15 PM   #7
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Quan Drayen
Jedi Master/ male/ species Kiffar

He is your Jedi Master and teacher. He is one of the lost Jedi who came back from hiding after the battle at Telos IV. He is very secretive. He has been looking for clues to where the Exile and Revan went. He will later be accused of being a Sith spy since his research. Later in the game you will be able to talk to the spirit of your Jedi Master only when you have completed a certain task and become 99-100 percent light side. He will appear in a certain part of the Sister Hawk.
Your Jedi master history:
The PC’s Jedi master trained on Dantoonie with the Exile. They were close friends. Your master did not join the war against the Mandalorians. He did fight in the Jedi Civil war on the side of the Republic. He was present when Malak launched his attack on Datoonie. He will tell you how master Vandar and Vrook survived the attack. Your Jedi master was not present at the battle of the Star forge. Shortly after the end of kotor1, he left the order and went into exile. He stayed there for many years. He did fight the sith assassins sent by Sion. Your master will sense the enemy was defeated and your master returns to the order with the PC who he picks up shortly around the time he comes across the Jedi Exile.

Kaila Saris
age 20-26
Pilot/ smuggler
Female/species-Human

She was arrested transporting arms to the exchange. When your party escapes the Republic's ship, she will fly you to Natta Hutt’s space station. She is confronted by her contact about her failure. You will be given a side quest to go to a planet and get some arms and bring them to the space station. The Exchange will attack Natta Hutt and take over the station completely. You can do this or double cross your contact and tell Natta Hutt and aid him in getting rid of the exchange from the space station.

Nindo Bahr
Male/ species-Duros
Mechanic, tech upgrades

Nindo Bahr is expert in creating new weapons. He can alter your armor and weapons. The Duro has a dark humor to him. He is Kaila’s smuggling partner. Nindo actually worked on the Ebon Hawk back when it was owned by Davik. His father was Davik’s top mechanic. Nindo’s father died on Taris when the Sith attacked. Nindo survived the attack along with a few friends and his mother. Nindo then started to work on a new ship using the basic design of the Ebon Hawk. Kaila and Nindo meet up and start working for the Hutts as well as the Exchange

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I personally think that you should be a force adapt found by Atton who takes you on and trains you as he was taught by the exile to use his force powers and if not by Bastila who he met a couple of years after the events of Kotor 2. You start off in a major city(Not after crash) but after atton has just saved you from some criminals trying to steal your credits. After that atton leaves and you go on your way but are attacked again later by more thugs because they think you killed there comrades this time you have to fight them off and afterwards you are attacked by there leader where it goes into a type of movie where atton saves your life again but does not kill the leader.

Afterwards Atton becomes your companion by force or by choice and he tells you the thugs will be back and you should stock up on some weapons and start collecting infomation on where they might be. Your attacked a couple of times kill a few thugs yadayadayada and you end up killing the bosses little brother in a racing match and the boss afterward by choice or force. When you fight the boss naseua comes over you and you see a glimpse of to people in grey with masks on shaking hands(revan and the exile shaking hands). then you wake up to find atton fighting with a lightsaber. He tells you you are strong in the force and should come met master Bastila. You go to corusant and met Bastila and at this point you choose who will be your companion and master Bastila or Atton. Each changing the storyline minorly in different ways but leaving the main story intact. You learn the ways of the force become a padawan choose your crystal color and decide wat happened in the exlies and revans past.

THATS ALL FOR NOW TELL ME WAT U THINK AND ILL POST MORE UP LATER!

The Sith are on the doorstep!
The Jedi are too few!
Only 3 stand in there way!
One a conqueror of Battles Tactician and Warrior!
The 2nd A power in the force who creates bonds with the others!
The third non know for the Phrophecy of him was lost!
But is it Enough!!!!!
They are coming!!!!!!!!

STARWARS KNIGHTS OF THE OLD REPUBLIC: THE MISSING LINK!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-15-2008, 11:14 PM   #9
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Okay no bad Kotor 3 idea plot fights. Logan23 I would think that Kotor would have a more original plot line and would have better characters. I don't think very many people are interested in what your idea of Kotor 3 is going to be. If you want your idea to be a reality then make it into a mod by all means


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Old 02-15-2008, 11:44 PM   #10
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Please somebody close this thread. It's foolish

Logan has not given what the heck he is talking about. Whether he thinks this is what is going to happen or whether this is what is going to happen.

Either way, it's random and he does not state what the heck we are reading.
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Well, ummm, okay, there are some good 'points', I guess you could say with what you think is going to happen. I agree with RakataDark,

"Kotor would have a more original plot line and would have better characters"

You should also give us a little clearer understanding about what exactly you are trying to say in this thread. Yes, I know this because I myself have done this several times, just because you understand what you are saying in your own head, doesn't mean that others will interpret it the way that you intended it to do interpreted. You need to clearly specify what you are saying so that everyone, or at least most, of the population understands you. Just a little advice. As for what Padawan Bushu said, I think that that is completely random.

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Old 02-16-2008, 11:06 AM   #12
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RakataDarku, Rav7, and everyone,

This is a TC mod for kotor2 that I was working on. I am limited by the engine to what I can do in the story of the game but I have created a story which could stand alone from the kotors and explain a lot of open hoops with in the past two games.

I know some one mention Atton in a post to me about having him as a party member. In the story when you are questioned by your Jedi Master about the Exile, you can say he was light side or dark side. If you select the Exile as dark side then you will have Atton show up in the game as a bounty/Jedi hunter. He will hunt down the PC half way through the game. Atton will be a high level dark side character. He will have a light saber and force powers.

The only characters from the last 2 games which will become party members are HK-47 and T3-M4. T3-M4 will not be an active party member but a supportive one.

I have over 45 pages of story, characters, scenes, and even map layout. I know which maps from kotor2 would be used and how they would connect to create the new worlds like Corellia and Rhen Var. I have made sure that everything with in my game is something that can be done. Example is to reuse the ebon hawk flying to planets and just change the color tone of the planets to give the view that it’s a new planet.

What do you want to know about the game?

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Old 02-16-2008, 01:10 PM   #13
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Ahh as you said, it is a mod so it should go in to Holowan Labs. I would also advise you to say what you are doing before jumping off the cliff.


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Thank you very much for clarifiying. It helps a great deal. As Taak said it should go into the Holowan Lab area. Thanks again!

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Old 02-16-2008, 02:01 PM   #15
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The thing is that a mod this size is basically impossible to do or complete. I'm right now just sharing the story and the makeup of the mod. Should i move this to the Holowan Lab?

Thanks for all guidiance...

I just want to share what i created since i felt it would be a waste if i just never allow others who are fans of kotor to see and read it.
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I know what you mean. It gives you the sense of acomplishment, and makes you feel good because you know that you did it.
As for the moving part, you should leave that to the moderators to do. I am not sure, but if you did, I think that it would be considered spamming, which is agains the rules on these forums. You can also PM (private message) one of the moderators if you need some more guidance. Thanks!

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Thank you for clarifying Logan.

A moderator should move your topic to the appropriate place momentarily
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Should i move it or create a new thread in Holowan lab, as long as i use a new title right?
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You can't move it. Only mods can. Don't worry, state you wish it moved and when one sees it, he'll do so.


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I'm saying i will let this thread die, and start a new one on this topic/game in holowan lab's forums, which is where the thread should be
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You can't really let a topic die if people keep posting. Just ask a moderator to close it if you wish to restart it and they will do so.
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Ok, i believe i will PM a moderator and have them close it, and i will start a new thread in Holowan lab, which section if it would be best to post this??

If i just post the story alone i will do it in the fan-fiction area.

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You've answered your own question:

Holowan, if you want to make this storyline a reality

Or the Entertainment Centre, if you just want to post a fic.


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