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Old 06-15-2008, 03:50 PM   #1
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[Comic] Apprentice.



I hope it's big enough to see the writing.
Haven't got photoshop yet, so the shading and that isn't too good.
but soon, i will. [:

hope you enjoy!


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Old 06-15-2008, 05:29 PM   #2
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Nice!... Revan is a woman in the comic right? ... Still nice!



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Old 06-15-2008, 05:42 PM   #3
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I like this...I like the style and even though it's manga-ish, it's awersome!
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Old 06-15-2008, 05:48 PM   #4
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Not bad at all Burnseyy. Much better than I can draw. Keep up the good work!

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Old 06-15-2008, 06:59 PM   #5
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thank you everyone!
updates will be up soon hopefully. [:
and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol


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Old 06-15-2008, 07:13 PM   #6
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You are quite the artist...


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Old 06-16-2008, 05:14 PM   #7
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thank you everyone!
updates will be up soon hopefully. [:
and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol
Looks great none the less, oh do you got a script allready ?
My tries at comics always end at page 15 or something , cause I get bogged down in having no real plot points what so ever

But the art is real nice, show us some more :drool:


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Old 06-16-2008, 05:19 PM   #8
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Very nice comic.

My only real suggestion is try to keep the text in the text bubble, and maybe more centered. Then it'll be great!

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Old 06-17-2008, 08:51 AM   #9
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Looks great none the less, oh do you got a script allready ?

yer, but it only oes up to page 3, so far. i'm gonna be working on it [:


My only real suggestion is try to keep the text in the text bubble, and maybe more centered. Then it'll be great!

i tried to centre it, but that's the best i could do, since there was no centre option on Comic Life lol
thanks though. [:


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Old 07-10-2008, 09:39 AM   #10
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Nice work there Burnseyy. Great artisticsism! (Heh, I'm MAKING that a word! :P)
Hope to see some more of it soon??

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Old 07-10-2008, 10:23 AM   #11
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Nice job!!!


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Old 08-07-2008, 07:14 PM   #12
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i had no idea u did a comic strip this is awsome =]


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Old 08-08-2008, 09:39 AM   #13
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Its nice to see something different in the CEC. Keep it up.
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Old 08-09-2008, 08:38 AM   #14
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Good work, very well drawn,
(Geez, I really use that smilie alot)


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Old 08-14-2008, 12:52 PM   #15
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thank you everyone!
updates will be up soon hopefully. [:
and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol

And a great one it is. Don´t know how I´m just seeing this now , but whatever. I like your comic. Not only did you draw it well, but it has that real comic feel to it, you know. Not just two people in a box with speech bubbles...like the perspectives - Revan in the third box and how in the last one, Revan is speaking but we see Malak... I do love your art Burnseyy!

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