Interesting, very intersting. And I mean that in a good way.
This has peaked my curiosity as to how SMG Anthony can to be in this predicament, and where his story will lead. You are discriptive, which is good, though I would reccommend making the chapters a bit longer. For these two is worked out fine, but when you get into the beef of the story, I reccommend lengthening them.
I'll keep my eyes pealed for updates. Keep on writiong!