thanks for the feed back, i am quiet embarrassed by the spelling mistake aha.
the reason i used that saber was because the main character in the story uses this saber. but i could see the point in using sidious's light saber. the font was temporary any way this is not the final design i think a few tweaks are in order but thanks for the ideas.
Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me.
The rule of two -
One to embody the power,
One to crave it