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Old 08-10-2009, 09:47 PM   #1
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What do you think of this front cover for the story i am wrting?

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Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me.


The rule of two -
One to embody the power,
And,
One to crave it
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Old 08-10-2009, 09:51 PM   #2
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Not a bad cover. However, if you mean Sidious, you probably should use his lightsaber, along with a bit better blade(I can help you with that, if you'd like). Only other change is "Emperor's", along with possibly a bit better font for the book title.

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Old 08-10-2009, 10:01 PM   #3
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thanks for the feed back, i am quiet embarrassed by the spelling mistake aha.
the reason i used that saber was because the main character in the story uses this saber. but i could see the point in using sidious's light saber. the font was temporary any way this is not the final design i think a few tweaks are in order but thanks for the ideas.


Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me.


The rule of two -
One to embody the power,
And,
One to crave it
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Old 08-12-2009, 02:12 PM   #4
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I thought i would upload another one tell me what you think.


Peace is a lie, there is only passion.
Through passion, I gain strength.
Through strength, I gain power.
Through power, I gain victory.
Through victory, my chains are broken.
The Force shall free me.


The rule of two -
One to embody the power,
And,
One to crave it
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