Other: KotOR Film

[SithLordDrew]

Hello all. I wanted to share my newest creation! Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic Film. Using FRAPs and Adobe Premiere, After Effects I have the first 20 mins done.

http://www.holocrons.com/component/c...blic-episode-1

I have much more written but thought I would share what I have so far. Please tell me what you think, good or bad. I have learned a lot already but would really enjoy some feedback.


-=Sith Lord Drew=-

[Tysyacha]

That film was amazing, even though I've only watched the first 10 min. Loved the Selkath Jedi--he was my favorite character in the first installment!

[RC-1162]

I love how you incorporated the Wilhelm scream into that

For a small critique, Revan's voice seems a little forced and not very natural sounding, like when

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the Selkath Jedi gets trapped in the room with the Sith, the expression of shock doesn't feel genuine

Perhaps in the next sequence you could deal with that. Since its an attack on their ship, and they're facing waves of Sith troops, try to instill an element of hurry and battle-readiness, as demonstrated in Trask's manner of speaking.
Also, there were a few typos in the Selkath Jedi's subtitles. Nothing too glaring, but making them as perfect as you can gives your work a more professional look.

Otherwise it was well done. I like the way you added an echo effect to Carth's lines to make it seem as if it was over the PA, and the bluish tint for video feeds.

Great work, hope to see more.

[machievelli]

watched

[DeadYorick]

Oh wow a Selkath Jedi character.

I was quite engaged, it was very well done. But I felt that whole Selkath Jedi thing was the icing on the cake.