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Old 07-07-2001, 11:10 PM   #1
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well this is one of my poems...

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VIDA.

En la vida solo hay sangre,
en la vida solo hay dolor,
en la vida solo hay muerte,
si no estoy en tu corazón.

¿Por qué cuando amamos a alguien terminamos odiandolo?
¿Por qué cuando odiamos a una persona terminamos amandola?

Solo sé que cuando vi a tus ojos, sentí que mi alma volaba...
Solo sé que cuando te perdí de vista, mi corazón de ti se alejaba.

Cuando estuviste en mis brazos por primera vez,
vi tu alma a través de tus ojos.
Se que no pude hacer nada...
Se que fui un inútil.
Se que no pudiste vencer a la muerte...
Por eso llore al perderte.

Solo vi tus ojos cerrados
tus labios cerrados fuertemente
no quise aceptarlo...
pero te venció la muerte.


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When the Dark Angel came to see me... He ripped away my soul...
I lost my humanity...
I´m a Shadow in this world of darkness...
I`m chasing my shadow inside my own soul...
I´m the persegutor.
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Old 07-08-2001, 12:38 AM   #2
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That's nice.
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Old 07-08-2001, 02:04 AM   #3
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thanx... i hope you like it

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When the Dark Angel came to see me... He ripped away my soul...
I lost my humanity...
I´m a Shadow in this world of darkness...
I`m chasing my shadow inside my own soul...
I´m the persegutor.
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Old 07-08-2001, 03:13 AM   #4
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Cool! Now my clumsy translation...

[what's "/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-/-" ???]
LIFE.

In life there is only blood
In life there is only pain
In life there is only death
If I'm not in your heart.

Why, when we love someone we end up hating them?
Why, when we hate someone we end up loving them?

I only know that when I saw your eyes, I felt that my soul flew...
Only I know that when I lost you from view, my heart grew distant from you.

When you were in my arms for the first time,
I saw your soul through your eyes.
That I could do nothing...
That I was useless.
That you could not overcome death...
For that reason I cried to lose you.

I only saw your closed eyes
your tightly closed lips
I did not want to accept it...
but death defeated you.

(OK, that might have problems...but it's the best me and my mom could do What!? Who cares I had my mom help me! )

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At last we will reveal ourselves to the Jedi.
At last we will have revenge.
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Old 07-08-2001, 03:47 AM   #5
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very good, thanx.!!! tell your mom that i love her... no.. wait ill tell her:

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!! !!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!

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When the Dark Angel came to see me... He ripped away my soul...
I lost my humanity...
I´m a Shadow in this world of darkness...
I`m chasing my shadow inside my own soul...
I´m the persegutor.
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Old 07-08-2001, 04:16 AM   #6
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My mom says "Mucho gusto" (which she says means pleased to meet you) and that she can't think of anything really intelligent to say right now

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Old 07-08-2001, 04:28 AM   #7
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Wow, that's really good Shadow. You have a way with words! Very cool!

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Old 07-08-2001, 04:43 AM   #8
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thanx lady death, red wing.. tell your mom if she want a mexican son?

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When the Dark Angel came to see me... He ripped away my soul...
I lost my humanity...
I´m a Shadow in this world of darkness...
I`m chasing my shadow inside my own soul...
I´m the persegutor.
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Old 07-08-2001, 04:49 AM   #9
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My mom says, if you don't mind having ten brothers and sisters, sure no problem

BTW yes, I do indeed have nine brothers and sisters and two have posted here Jared and amidalarocks.

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Old 07-08-2001, 05:37 AM   #10
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No problem Shadow. As a fellow writer I know how critical feedback is. Do you have more stuff that I could read?

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Old 07-08-2001, 05:57 AM   #11
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yea sure... ill put some more later
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