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Old 07-22-2002, 01:28 AM   #81
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I liked that blatant "Damn. That's not good" ripoff by the way.
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I couldn't think of anything better for him to say, so I just ripped off luke, because I figured Luke wouldn't care.
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Old 07-22-2002, 04:54 AM   #82
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Hey guys! The forums are really screwed up I was writing my next part of the story which would have fitted in soooo well, and then they started moving in the middle of writing, and it erased evrything when I replied I came back today after trying to remember what I had said (writing it out all again) when you'd carried on Oh well...

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Old 07-22-2002, 07:03 AM   #83
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I will advise you, that this is an extremely long post, so please bear with. I did not want to leave all of my previous story out of, so I combine it and my new improvised version together. Sorry about this.


The air was warm and comfortable inside the Academy halls, a refreshing relief from the icy chill of the planes where the battle had taken place. Everything seemed calm, but tensions were running high, and urgent matters had to be attended to. Obi-wan had arrived not a few hours before, aboard a tie interceptor which crashed among the forests around the Academy, adjacent to the lake. He had been through much, but refrained from speaking of it...the thought of the enemy being more powerful was too much for him to comprehend, even begin to understand.

Darklighter now stood, pacing in the courtyard-like garden area circled off by the Jedi Council building and the Academy main building. His steps were light, almost unheard. His ghostly silouette only a black shadow against the dark green grass shining in the moonlight.

"Beautiful isn't it?" a figure emerged from behind the tree next to the doors of the building. "The sound..."

"Yes" he quickly replied. "The sound of the grass whistling in the breeze. The splash and drop of water in the lake. The calming soothness of the air" he laughed to himself, "even though it cannot be heard" he stood thinking, recollecting, "I remember Obi-wan telling me that."

The man now fully emerged. AB_legion stood before Darklighter, his hands folded behind his waist, across the back of his silk brown cloak. His hood covered his face.

"The calm before the battle" added Legion.

"There is nothing beautiful about battle" Darklighter's eyes narrowed, his gaze now towards Legion was unsettling.

"True, true...yet it is all we have left. I sensed this in Divine when I taught him. I knew he wouldn't obey what he was told. I sensed the darkside in him. He was never a focussed student" Legion began, when he was cut short.

"Not all of them are" Darklighter's voice was now harsh, he turned to face Legion and they stopped in each other's paths. "No one could have foreseen this...not even you Legion" the remark was cold and direct.

"No...you can't tell...but you can think it and I did" Legion replied. "Everybody is hurt at times like these...Obi-wan was powerful enough to escape the torment of the enemy because of his link to the force, can you say the same about Agen" it hit Darklighter like steel hammer. Agen would not last much longer. A plan had to be arranged.

"You're right" he replied with a blank look, and standing tall walked back to his quarters. He paced pondering the thought, of what he should do. We cannot go as a grouped force, he thought frustratingly. I will have to go alone. Obi-wan would object with the upmost concern, insisting if anyone were to go it would be himself. Tidus was not about to put his master through the same torment as before. He removed his uniform and placed on his white Jedi garments. It was up to him now.

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He snuck off between the Academy's defenses in the dead of the night towards the side of the hanger bay. The defenses were so tight only a Jedi could get past them. As he reached the rim of the Academy boundaries, Darklighter looked out towards his destination. It was far to the West, a long run, but he could make it easily, and with that thought, he set off.

"The emperor will attack again" Darklighterís voice was harsh and almost shrill in the cold night air, as he spoke into the comlink. He continued to wade across the open land, his black boots tainted with the clear white snow that splashed and crunched under his feet as he ran. Apart from that and the sound of his lightsaber hilt hitting against his black belt, nothing was heard. He moved swiftly and stealthily across the snowy plane, camouflaged by his white-beige garments.

The warmth of dusk had long since passed, and the night was now drawing to an end. Darklighter could see the warm glow of early sunlight creeping above the hills, the red and orange tint of morning already beginning to surface. The bright penumbra of the sun was beginning to rise towards the east. He would have to hurry to avoid being seen in the daylight.

"He knows our weakness. There is a gap in the energy force field surrounding the Academy. Re-route all power available to the shields before it is too late. Itís our only chance." His voice seemed desperate.

"Yes Admiral" the voice of that was Greedo, his only contact, and the only man he could trust to obey his wishes.

"Do not inform Master Obi-wan of my position. The bunker will be swarming with the Emperorís troopers. Infiltration is the only option here." Dark Jedi too, he thought to himself. Sith apprentices trained by the Emperor himself. He would want to avoid confrontations with them at all costs.

"Yes Sir" Greedoís loyalty was unmatched. He would carry out orders from his superiors, and always respected their decision. "May the force be with you." He swallowed hard and replaced the com to his belt on his side. Darklighter continued his long run into the west.

The bunker he was heading for was not unbeknownst to him, as the Academy itself had undergone its construction. The small, compact outward appearance of it was a thin veneer, hiding a large network of underground corridors and monitoring equipment. It had also been used to contain captured prisoners, rebels and enemy soldiers forced to surrender in battle. But that was a long time ago. The tables had turned, now Agen was being kept there. Just thinking about it made him angry.

He arrived just in time. The light was just dim enough to hide him in the shadows. The bunker was made of stone and metal, surrounded by a thick forest. Two sentries were positioned guarding the entrance. With a wave of his hand, a twig snapped loudly to the right of the guards, diverting their attention, giving just enough time for Darklighter to sneak around the back. He jumped to the roof of the bunker, and stooped down as the guards began talking about Agen.

"Apparently heís someone important" came the voice of the first, muffled through the clone trooper helmet, "Almost as much as that Obi-wan fellow."

"This ainít gonna be easy for this guy though. The Emperor has given strict instructions to use any methods necessary in obtaining the information we need" replied the second trooper.

"Iíd be interested to see how long he holds up" both laughed to themselves, "These Jedi canít be so tough."

His friend was in danger and needed help. He removed the ventilation shaft cover from the roof of the bunker and dropped down into the darkness.


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Old 07-22-2002, 07:16 AM   #84
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is this still messed up??
i posted 3 things yesterday and they all showed up after my previous post and not at the end of the thread so i say again.

i just got my story to get to obi-wan13 and he leaves and now im with the emperor.

Go ME... ohh forget it!


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Old 07-22-2002, 07:25 AM   #85
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I think they've just about worked it out...everything seems to be going okay now.

BTW, with the stories, it should be Divine to write next, then Shadow, then Reb/Talliusc, then Obi-wan and then me. Maximus, you can write at any time if you want, cos you haven't foe a while

Just kind of stick to that order for now...I know Shadow doesn't post much, so you can kind of leave him out if he's not around sorry Shadow....

BTW, once we have finished this first Episode (I'll call it episode, as the first chunk of the Academy wars ) we have to compile them and give them chapter names...but we don't need to worry about that now...I think the stories are going great, so keep up the good work!


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Old 07-22-2002, 08:05 AM   #86
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i had a nemesis but i killed him


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Old 07-22-2002, 10:22 AM   #87
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Already Max?...lol

It really doesn't matter what order you fo the stories in. If there is no one else around, just put a little warning saying you are giong to carry on with your story, then write it.

BTW Reb, you know you have invisible mode on, well we can't see when you're online. Its not a big deal really, just can't tell if you're online, so don't know if you're writing at all, so make sure you let us know

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Old 07-22-2002, 11:12 AM   #88
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BTW, with the stories, it should be Divine to write next, then Shadow, then Reb/Talliusc, then Obi-wan and then me. Maximus, you can write at any time if you want, cos you haven't foe a while
I think i might write my next bit of story independent of everyone else - that means i get a bit more freedom about it

So someone else should be going next.


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Old 07-22-2002, 01:07 PM   #89
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Okay guys, you can really write anytime, just not twice in a row, ok?

We should try to keep this going for a while, its really fun


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Old 07-22-2002, 01:21 PM   #90
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Well i will be unable to finish the story cause im leaving for a week again.

but you guys can finish it for me.

ok i was planing on having the emperer some how making me sorta like like vader and turning me against you guys but you will turn me back to the good side.


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Old 07-22-2002, 03:42 PM   #91
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Well I want to go off into a tangent and talk about battles that are fought in the back ground that do not directly affect the story line, but help in aiding the Academy in victories that will lead to and overall victory... OK?


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Old 07-22-2002, 03:58 PM   #92
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Well I want to go off into a tangent and talk about battles that are fought in the back ground that do not directly affect the story line, but help in aiding the Academy in victories that will lead to and overall victory... OK?
go for it

Obi-wan woke, and meditated on the words he had heard in his dreams. He played them over and over, like a broken record.

Later, he stood, and limped to the cafeteria for a cup of Earl Grey. He took his drink, and sat down at one of the Local tables, with a few soldeirs. They saw him, and stood up at attention.

"As you where." Obi-wan told them, and they continued to eat their breakfast. Obi-wan hardly ever ate anything, and thie morning was no different. He finished his tea, and walked to the Saber Training gorunds. WhiteDragon and one of the students where having a mock'Duel, and Obi-wan watched. It was truly a magnificent sight, for WhiteDragon was quite the Swordsman. He himself had a duel with whitedragon once, A duel which he barely won. It was one of the longest duels Obi-wan had ever had. He thought about it, and brought his attention back to the duel.

The young padawan took a swing at WhiteDragon's leg, and WHitDragon blocked, and brought the other side of the wooden saber onto the Padawans side.

"Your dead." WhiteDragon told him. "Good fight, you where on a roll for a while. More practice, and you will be wualified to be my assistant."

"Thank you Master." The young man said, as he bowed, Put the Wooden saber on the table, and walked off.

"Good fight. The boy is learning a lot from you." Obi-wan told WhiteDragon.

"Yes, he is one of my best students. He practices hours on end every day. He will not stop until he is perfect, either. Thats the third time this week he has challenged me, and the third time he has lossed." WhiteDragon said, as both of the men laughed.

"He is an asset to this academy. We all are. I am going to need you to keep the student's spirit's up. These are very stressful times, and we need to keep our heads calm and cool." Obi-wan said, and WhiteDragon agreed.

"Have you seen Admrial Darklighter?" Obi-wan asked.

"No, I have no clue as to his location." WhiteDragon said.

Obi-wan and whitedragon said their goodbye's, and Obi-wan walked off. He went back to his Quarters, to meditate on the location of Darklighter. He hadn't seen him for a while, and neither has anyone else. He had to find his old freind, and soon, because this worried him a great deal.

to be continued........

(I'll finish this part too, I have something special planned. )




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Old 07-22-2002, 04:16 PM   #93
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Oh and by the way... I wanted to give props to all of the guys who have already posted. Looking good. You make my monday here at work go by faster. Thanks. Very Entertaining. Now, I will work on my little vignet to help in making this a masterpiece, lol.


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Old 07-22-2002, 04:25 PM   #94
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Re: Academy Wars: Episode 1 "Dark Academy Rising" Official Battle Thread

you started a war and im missing it.

*bam* die pig die youll never take the white dragon alive


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Old 07-22-2002, 04:39 PM   #95
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Agen_Terminator woke with pain all over, with guards been torturing him over and over again and trying to obtain infromation, he had not yet spilled but he himself knew that he woudl be able to last much longer. Knowing that the time had almost come for him. He was strapped up and his force drained by a machine. Tho he could not use the force physically he could still feel that things were going wrong outside.

He lifted his head to view the room aroudn him, very dark and dusty floor with a few chains on the ceiling, the only light was coming from the machine, he had no weapons and had been stripped of his robes.

Soon after a while he felt a new hope of saviour and sensed that it was darklgihter but Agen lost his consciousness and konked out.

After an hour or so a regiment of troopers came in and took him to a room with all sorts of scriptures but by this time Agen was limp and had to be carried by the troopers, he was lifted by soem sort of beam thing and trapped (liek in ep 2 that obi is in)
The dark lord himself came in and and the troopers walked away swiftly while one caem to report news but limped and went dead and divinespirit said
" i know. Well Terminator, a high member of the academy trapped and weak liek the rest of that pitiful association, i have a good mind o tell you my secret plans but this is no james bond film."

Croaking and finding it hard to breathe Agen coughed out

" you will not prevail from this war"

"oh but you are wrong, you see you jedi are always to sure of everything, i mean you think that Darklighter is going to save you right now, but you are wrong."

With a swift movement Divine gripped Darklgihter out of the vents and whacked him off the wall and let him slump to the floor where he lifted him by the throat and placed him in the beam beside Agen.

"Farewell jedi" said Divine as he left the room and his robes waved abotu as he walked away. By this time Agen had figured he was udnergroudn and now concentrated on trying to get lighter to snap out of it.


Edit: oh yeh obi about your part 2, i didn't actually read the end about it and darklighter properly and i really hope my part doesn't interfere with your part or you can get it to fit around itt.
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oh dont be so melodromatic


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Old 07-22-2002, 04:45 PM   #97
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hey i missed out all the way and everyone forgot about my character So i just decided to fill myself in and the whereabouts of lgihter. I won't be so selfish alter tho.
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hey i missed out all the way and everyone forgot about my character So i just decided to fill myself in and the whereabouts of lgihter. I won't be so selfish alter tho.
ok what ever. *takes out rocket luauncher and fires it at a coupel dark jedi*


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*splat*
dragon looks around and dosent see any dark jedi so he walks forward toward the bunker where agen and darklighter were held. no one is guarding the doors or inside but the dark side is hard to see. suddenly dark jedi are all over the place and activate their lightsabers. dragon activates his own and waits for them to make their move


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Old 07-22-2002, 05:28 PM   #101
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Hey, nice going Agen Cool plot twist...

Do you mind if I carry on with our little story and escape? I didn't know you'd be coming in with it but that was good. Now we actually have a good reason to get out lol

Would you mind if I carried on? Then we could get out and continue with our own stories...


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Hey, nice going Agen Cool plot twist...

Do you mind if I carry on with our little story and escape? I didn't know you'd be coming in with it but that was good. Now we actually have a good reason to get out lol

Would you mind if I carried on? Then we could get out and continue with our own stories...
im sure he dosent mind


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the first dark jedi jumps at dragon, dragon quickly dodges and cuts the dark jedi while hes still in the air. the others charge after him. dragon knew he couldent take them on all at once so he projected force lightening through his body in a shock wave to scater them. dragon cut two down while they were still getting up and ran for the door to take him to the next room. the dark jedi ran after him. dragon dident go through the door he instead he jumped and kicked off it he landed behind them and cut down three more. dragon fliped backwards and saw that there were only five left so he summed up the last bit of force lightening he could use and shocked them all to death. dragon needed to wait for his energy to replinish but he dident have time for that. he walked toward the door and opened it


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The pain was agonising. He could feel it long before he could even open his eyes. The air was cold, but musty and it stank of drying blood. Slowly, Darklighter raised his eyelids. His vision was blurry, and it made his head feel light and achy. He stared blankly at bars criss-crossed in front of his face, and the floor was frozen against his skin. As his sight became more clear, Tidus lifted his limp body with his weak hands. His arm slipped and he fell again, but with more effort he dragged his bruised body upwards and kneeled on the floor. It was dark all around, the looming shadows black as night and it surrounding him, engulfing his body into darkness.

"You've awoken" the voice behind him was loud and shocking. Darklighter turned round quickly to see, "I was hoping you would soon."

The figure sat motionless on the bench that hung from rusted chains on the wall, his face blackened by the shadows. He did not move an inch. Darklighter knew it was him though.

"Agen" his voice weak and faint, it hurt his throat and made his head ache. "What's going on...where am I?"

"You know where you are" he still did not move. "As for what is going on, I'll let you guess" he replied, a hint of sarcasm in his deep voice. It did not encourage Darklighter.

Darklighter now looked around him. His vision was now more clear, he was imprisoned, that much was certain. His robes had been removed from his torso, and as he looked at his bare chest Darklighter saw slashes and bruises covering his front, the blood had runand stained his skin. He thought back to his encounter with the Emperor - he really was powerful, able to throw him to the ground without raising an eyebrow. Amazing Obi-wan could have survived his wrath he thought to himself. Darklighter shuddered at the thought, and proceeded to heal his wounds using the power of the force.

"It's no use" Agen said immediately. "They have drained the power out of you. You are too weak my friend."

The anger began to swell in him. His hatred for Divine stemmed back from when they had trained as padawans...they would have always confronted each other, Divine always provoking him, getting Tidus into trouble. The thought that this man was the cause of their suffering now was too much. His eyes narrowed, his head bowed towards the ground, his devilish eyes looking straight.

His lightsaber stood now in the guards position, over a few metres away from the cell entrance. His hands gripped the bars tightly, and he trembled with deep rage. Everything bad happened to us has been your fault Divine! , his thoughts echoed in the back of his mind.

"Admiral..." Agen's voice was worried, he began to stand, watching Darklighter shake with anger, his face bright red. Darklighter stood up, glaring at the guard, reaching out with all his strength.

"Nooooooo!" his scream rang in their ears, and the lightsaber flew to his hand. He ignited it, and sliced the bars. The guard began shooting frantically, but he was too late. Darklighter walked forward towards the gurad, blocking every shot. One precise hit fired the laser right through the troopers helmet, as he fell to the ground lifeless.

Darklighter leant to retrieve Agen's saber from the guard's belt. He still stod in the cell, amazed at his power and will with the force. He threw Agen's lightsaber to him. Darklighter had calmed down now, his face no longer red, his eyes just as before.

"Lets go" he said, as both men proceeded to the exit door.

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The only option here was stealth. One false move, one wrong sound, and the alarm would be activated. The two Jedi crawled amongst the shadows and dodged out of the guard's line of view. They were weak, but hope was in them, and their confidence as well as strength was building again. They finally reached the ventilation shaft through which Darklighter had entered the bunker. They leapt up into it, and proceeded to the roof. The day had now come. It was the next morning, the sun was warm against their skin and the sky was cloudless.

As they both emerged, a terrible sight struck them. One of the Emperor's royal shuttles was loading a few hundred metres away. They both ducked behind a metal ridge for cover, and peered over.

Darth Talliusc was stood, ordering troopers to carry things to the shuttle. He was dressed in a dark cloak, his face sheilded. At that moment, Daklighter felt it. A strange sensation. It made him shiver, and his heart felt cold. The darkside, he could feel it in his blood, Agen too. Talliusc's head slowly turned to face them, but the two Jedi managed to duck before he could glimpse then. Talliusc shrugged off the feeling and entered the shuttle, two guards on either side of him. Agen and Darklighter stood as the engines glowed red and propelled it into space.

"The Emperor is here. I can feel it. I felt it from him" Agen suggested, and Darklighter quickly nodded. But now Darklighter felt something else. It was familiar, and the words came out of his mouth involuntarily.

"Whitedragon!" he yelled, "He needs our help!"

"Okay, lets go!" Agen replied, and without hesitation, the Jedi jumped from the bunker and disappeared through the blast doors, cutting the troopers as they went.

To be continued...


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Very nice work, i'm tired now and i'm gonna go to bed, let's see if anyone else can add to this saga heh.
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dragon walked through the door. he walked into a bright room with a mat on the entire floor there were tables in the corners of the room that were stacked high with books. a very large man sat on the floor in the middle of the room. he was wearing flexible gauntlets that were made of mandalorian iron, they were used to block light sabers. "welcome" said the man "i am here to stop you from rescuing your friend. he is being held here but you must fight me first. i will not tell you where he Is because like devine sprit said this In no james bond film." dragon put his light saber on the floor along with his jacket "very well mr. scaramanga. I mean mr. badguy. sense you fight with your hands I will fight with my hands" dragon went Into a defensive stance. badguy didnít miss a beat, he ran forward punching dragon In the gut. badguy started a barrage of kicks and punches and didnít stop until dragon was on the floor coughing up blood. "you weak coward" badguy said "you mite as well run back to the jedi sense you are no match for me." dragon got up without any trouble and wiped the blood from his mouth "wow your good that actually hurt" dragon said. badguy look dumbfounded, he used his strongest moves. dragon grinned "but now that Iíve seen all your moves youíre all mine." dragon ran forward and kicked badguy In the face. badguy stumbled back wards and swung his fist at dragon, dragon blocked It, tripped him, and then brought an ax kick down on badguys neck. badguy was dead. "sheesh" dragon said to himself "maybe It would have been the same result If I didnít let him hit me." dragon picked up his stuff and walked to the door at the end of the room.


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BTW, whitedragon, me and Agen kind of escaped already...that's what I just wrote I'm sorry if it kind of hinders your story


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first off, thanks again Reb, i really like how our stories compliment each other and our rivalry grows, oh and darklighter very nice work. congrats. i like how i was portrayed in your most recent story. im really pleased with all this war so far. keep it coming, well im going to wright another fairly lengthy story now but ill just edit this post and attatch it when im done so look for it here.

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Darth Talliusc flinched in the nights cold. it wasnt due to the near freezing temperature around his masters academy grounds. it was something else... Talliusc's first thought was of the jedi, but no they could not have escaped, the guardsmen watching over the jedi were competent and the jedi didnt have the strength to escape anyway, at least not without the Dark Emperor knowing of it. "no matter" thought Talliusc grimly.
Talliusc was about to enter the shuttles hold when something caught his eye, he looked over towards a stack of supply crates but found nothing, stretching out with his dark force powers he found nothing as well. "jumping at shadows" Talliusc scolded himself "i must remain focused on the task at hand" and with that he checked to see that everything necessary was on the shuttle and he climbed aboard. it was not long after that the shuttle shot off into space and entered the hold of the mark III star destroyer Dreadhold. it was not the most massive vessel in the fleet but it was fast, maneuverable and Talliusc's favourite. His master had allowed him a crew of the finest clones. they took longer to make but were were more efficient and expensive then the bulwark of clones in the imperial navy, with one exception, the commander of the vessel was not a clone. Talliusc had first met Admiral Relnick 5 years before, and had instated Relnick as the commander of Talliusc's personal vessel just months ago.

Onboard the Star Destroyer Dreadhold:

"i shall remain in my quarters until we reach the target, forward all messages for me there, interrupt me ONLY if the dark lord Divine Spirit summons me!" said Talliusc to the now aged Admiral.
"yes my lord, will you lead the attack when we arrive or stay onboard?" asked Relnick timidly.
"i shall inform you when we reach the target zone" with these last words Talliusc closed down the comm and sealed his room shut. this room was like no other, to some it would seem to be a waste of space, but not to a man like Talliusc, complete with obstacle course, dueling circle and observation gallery Talliusc had all that he would need to survive. he would have some time to himself to practice with his lightsabers. Talliusc removed the Doublebladed lightstaff that always hung along his back and placed it on a table across the room with the force, he then took up both of his curve handled duelling sabers and connected their backs to each other. "Marvelous" thought Talliusc to himself, the only thing he enjoyed more then practicing his saber techniques was putting those techniques to use against Jedi. with the two sabers connected the blades came out either end of an S shaped handle, one blade shot back to Talliusc 's right, close to his body, the other blade shot out to his left somewhat farther away from him. Talliusc spent the better part of 7 hours twirling the blade about and jumping all over his own personal obstacle course. finally he retired the blades, separating them from each other and placing them on either hip in the fashion of bounty hunters placing guns in holsters. Talliusc walked up to his observation galley and stared out into the cold bleakness of hyperspace. His thoughts dwelled on the jedi, they proclaimed to be the right doers of the galaxy, they were so wise in their own way, yet so foolishly blind to not sieze power where it lay. the jedi would pay for their ignorance with blood, and Talliusc planned to have a front row seat when their lives came crashing down around them. but one matter remained, that cursed Starblazer, he was an enigma. Talliusc knew that he could become a powerful ally if turned, but turning him would prove difficult and agravating, but that was good. anger was necessary for a siths existence. Talliusc continued to ponder the problem of Starblazer well into the night and into the early hours of the morning.

When the Dreadhold came out of hyperspace immediately sirens blared throughout the ship. "these were not typical alarms, something is wrong!" thought Talliusc as he took up his lightsabers and made for the bridge.




well there you have it, im hoping that Reb will do something interesting with this story and take it forward, if he doesnt then ill just have to think of something myself. well what do you guys think of my doublebladed curved saber? i was trying to describe it during the story but it didnt turn out so well, basically you take two curve bladed lightsabers, point ones end (the end where the blade comes out) and point it facing behind you, and the other saber facing in front of you, then snap the backs together. i wonder if they could make this work in ep3? ah well, keep the stories coming, im anxious to hear about agen_terminator and Darklighter


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Very nice work, i'm tired now and i'm gonna go to bed, let's see if anyone else can add to this saga heh.
ok ill write another part

dragon deflected another shot as the troopers still came. "of all places i could have ended up it had to be the storm trooper barrics." as another bunch of troopers came at him he used the force to push them into another bunch then he used the force to throw them all into the wall. a blaster bolt came at his back, he turned around to block it but he dident really need to. " where the hell did you two come from" standing before him was
agen-terminator and darklighter,they both were bleeding and looked like they had internal bleeding. dragon then decided that he needed to pause the fight. he used the force to bring the roof down on the doorway. "you two look like sh!t dragon said."thank you for that observation" agen said. dragon used the force to heal them both, then he reached in his back pac and took out some jedi robes and two lightsabers. after they had put on the robes dragon put some trip mines on the wall in front of the door.
"where to" dragon said "we need to end this today. the emperor has gone too far this time" darklighter said. dragon noded. they started off down a corridor and tryed to use the force to locate the emperor. the three of them opend a door and went inside. it was extreamly dark but they dident need their eyes, just the force. they all felt a desterbence in the force and they all activated their light sabers, agen and darklighter took out the light sabers dragon had given them. three very strong dark jedi came out of the darkness and activated their lightsabers. darklighter, agen-terminator and white dragon knew this wouldent be an easy fight


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BTW, whitedragon, me and Agen kind of escaped already...that's what I just wrote I'm sorry if it kind of hinders your story
yeah but my character dident know they escaped ya see


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Old 07-22-2002, 08:49 PM   #111
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It was truly a magnificent sight, for WhiteDragon was quite the Swordsman. He himself had a duel with whitedragon once, A duel which he barely won. It was one of the longest duels Obi-wan had ever had.
why thank you obi-wan.
sorry master but i kind of started with out you but why dont you put a part in where you tell me to find darklighter after you descover where he is


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Old 07-22-2002, 08:52 PM   #112
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yeah but my character dident know they escaped ya see
Well, I'm sorry, but kind of told that they escaped. Not sure how it should effext your story...just telling you...


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Well, I'm sorry, but kind of told that they escaped. Not sure how it should effext your story...just telling you...
well sorry but you should write the next part because we are going to kick ass


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Old 07-22-2002, 09:23 PM   #114
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Okay, I have a really good idea...I'll edit my last story to fit in, and then show them entering the bunker. Then I'll write the next part. I have to sleep now, so I'll do it tomorrow, okay? Night ya'll!

edit - here is the missing part of my story.

The shadows began glow as three Jedi emerged from them, lightsabers in hand, creeping along the floor swiftly and silently. They entered a great round room, which spanned a huge distamce. The walls were dark, the patterns mosaic, and he floor was silver-grey stone.

The three Jedi payed no notice, and using the force concentrated on the whereabouts of their enemies. Their's was the most atuned and keenest instincts of Jedi's. Darklighter stared about the room again, as they kept moving.

I don't remember this he said, examining the great hall. At that moment there was a flash of light. Lightning struck them from far off, as the three Jedi tumbled backwards to the ground. Divine Spirit now approached them far beyond, cackling menacingly.

"You thought that you could fool an Emperor?!" Divine's voice was croaky and deep, utterly evil and shrouded in malice. He laughed again at them, and descended from the steps in the distance, a figure on one side of him.

"I told you we would meet again, Darklighter" his name sounded bluntly. Shadow Angel, Darklighter's head sank as he thought the name. The Jedi were now raising to stand.

"You're kind are so predictable. The darkside cannot be foretold, but the light can" Divine walked closer to them, his eyes almost red with hatred. "Right now you're master is on his way to try and rescue you."

"Obi-wan" Darklighter's voice was desperate, he had to warn his master, but could not.

"Yes" the Emperor focussed his gaze on Darklighter. "I am so sorry, but I have some duties to attend to" he began to turn round, walking back towards the way he had entered, lifting his hands towards the ceiling as he said "The destruction of the Academy!

"No!" Whitdragon yelled furiously as he ran towards Divine, his lightsaber high above his head.

"Wait!" Agen's warning was too late. The Emperor turned and with one hand and propelled Whitedragoninto the far wall, his body hit it with amazing force, as his unconcious body feel to the ground. Darklighter and Agen looked in anger at their enemy, as he stared back.

"Farewell. Jedi" and he cackled again, walking with Shadow towards the lift on the far side of the hall. At that point, swarms of guards entered from all directions, surrounding the Jedi. Some carried lightsabers, obviously apprentices in Divine's Academy. The two looked around in despair.

"They win this round" Darklighter said horrified, and placed their weapons on the ground. They were carried off out of the hall.

Whitedragon lay unconcious, Agen and Darklighter had once again been captured, and it was certain doom for Obi-wan if he attempted to rescue them.

To be continued...


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Okay, I have a really good idea...I'll edit my last story to fit in, and then show them entering the bunker. Then I'll write the next part. I have to sleep now, so I'll do it tomorrow, okay? Night ya'll!
ok sounds cool


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Well, first off, I just wanna know, when does this "Episode" end? How far are we going to go with it? I think Obi and Divine have some kind of backstory worked out, but aren't revealing it. That's good though, I like it that way. Man, this is only the first part too!

Also, yea, I like where this is going as well Talliusc. And to think all this started when I PM'd you for permission to use your character I've got some interesting ideas for what to do with my character, and what to do involving our rivalry. Perhaps I'll PM you sometime, when I decide just which ideas I'm going to go with, and we can work out some details.

As for now, I'm heading to bed. Depending on what's happening in this thread tomorrow and how much time I have, I may post another part to my story. So Talliusc, I guess it's yours until then. I've got an idea kicking around for one of our future meetings, but that'll have to wait


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thats it! Obi-wan thought to himself. He's there, in the imperial incampment!

Obi-wan grabbed his new lightsaber, and put in on his belt. He took the lift down to the ground, and exited.

He limped across the academy grounds, and began his long hike to the camp. He allowed the force to guide him. When suddenly, he found himself stareing against a solid wall.

That's not right........ Obi-wan thought to himself. Why had the force led him here? For what significance is this?

Then, he got his answer.

THe spirit of his dead Master, Qui-gon Jinn walked from behind a tree.

"Hello, Obi-wan." He said. "It is good to see you again."

"Yes, it is. Why have you made contact with me? Are you the one who led me here?" Obi-wan asked, with a mixed feelings of joy and confusion at the sight of his old master.

"Your freind, Darklighter, Went to rescue a prisoner. That attempt will fail, and you will try to rescue them both." Qui-gon told him.

"I know, I have seen it in my visions." Obi-wan told him.

"No, you have not seen the whole truth. You will die in your attempt to rescue them, and then they shall be executed. If you return back now, you will live, and only one of them will die." Qui-gon said.

"With your warning, I know that I must prevent their death, and I know that I can prevent mine. I must help them. They are my Strongest allies, and my best freinds. I will help them, and I will free them. Both of them, they shall both live." Obi-wan replied.

"Obi-wan, I never knew you to be so closed-minded. Listen to me, for I know the truth!." Qui-gon said, as the spirit faded.

Obi-wan continued his hike for the incampment. When he arrived, he noticed two guards at the front, and approached them.

"Hey! You there!" one of them shouted. He walked up to them, without one word, and sliced through them with his Blue Lightsaber. He slashed a panel out of the wall and the blast doors opened. He walked in, and immidiatly guards began shouting, and shooting. Obi-wan called upon the force and deflected every shot. 4 sentry's came out of the wall, and began firing on him. He deflected the shots as he rolled forward behind a security desk. When they stoped their fire, he used the force to gain speed, and hurried his way into the main hallway.

The doors on both closed, and one of the walls opened, and revealed 4 officers and many troops, holding blasters to Darklighter and Agen's head.

"Surrender, and they will live. Resist, and you shall die." One of the officers shouted. Obi-wan Deactivated his lightsaber, and called on the force.

"You will release the prisoners." Obi-wan said.

"That Mind trick will not work on me, jedi. The emporer has trained me to have a strong mind, and that is what i have. Now, surrender." The officer said, as Obi-wan ran to them, igniting his lightsaber, and slashing 3 of the guards. One lucky shot by the officer blazed into obi-wan's back, as he fell to the ground, and his lightsaber deactivated.

"Obi-wan! NO!" Darklighter shouted. The two jedi stared at the body of Obi-wan, and decided it was time to stand up to the imperials. They looked at eachother, and nodded, knowing what each must do. Then, simultaniously, they stood, and kicked the guards behind them, and avoided the shots of the other guards and officers. They broke the cuffs, and force pushed them all to the gorund. The weapons where disposed of, and the imperials surrenderd.

Darklighter ran up to obi-wan, and picked his head up off of the ground.

to be continued.......




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Ok first thing is first. Since I am the one who started this thread I will now set the standards. I didn't expect this to get so big, but I am very greatful, and I tip my hat to all of you excellent writers out there.....the Force is with you!

Second Standard. Posting and story writing is unlimited however, in order to kill off an existing character, you must first have the existing characters permission. In other words if you want to kill AB_Legion off in your story.....you must PM AB_Legion and get his permission first. If he wants to work out a deal with you, that's his right.

Third Standard. I like the idea of Each side taking a turn, however it is impossible for everyone to be online at once. So post when you like but make sure you read the previous posts and try to keep things in chronological order if possible. As a side note, anyone who volunteers to compile this battle into chapters may do so, provided he sends a copy to all contributing writers.

Fourth Standard. The battle is not over until the founding members of both Academies agree to an ending. I don't think Divine Spirit is going to yield anytime soon, nor is Obi-Wan 13, so happy hunting! I would suggest waiting until everyone has completely run out of material and then we will close. Both leaders must agree on a conclusion before we end this.

Fifth and final Standard. Anything goes as far as story is concerned, I am not George Lucas and not as picky. If you want to bring Batman, Vash the Stampede, or Bugs Bunny into this story that is fine by me. The only thing I will put emphasis on, and It hasn't been a problem yet but I will still emphasize that all of Lucasforums previously laid ground rules apply to this thread. I don't want to see this thread locked because some idiot decided to be stupid. Ok enough standards...back to the battle.....and May the Force Be With You!
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What I am suggesting is that there is not an ultimate 'ending', if you will. We can carry on with another story someother time. This is like the first in something like 2 or 3 episodes, so I think the story might need to ended soon yes.

I'll have a go at compiling it once its finished. Once both Divine and Obi-wan have agreed to when it is finishing, you could PM me with your e-mails and I'll send the text file, punctuation all touched up and add in chapter names. If you would like to go back and edit your posts putting chapter names at the top be my guest

I am now going back to finish my story by editing my last post

edit - btw, I've just edited my last post and put a story in their...it fits well

Umm, I kinda added you in Divine and Shadow. It doesn't realy effect the story much, hope its ok


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