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Old 08-04-2002, 07:50 PM   #81
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That was great man. Captured my character pretty much perfectly, so there's no need of changing it. As for Malice's tale, I'll post his beginning's here soon. But right now, I'm going to be posting in the Episode II thread, with a totally new story. There may even be a blue skinned Twi'lek in there somewhere...


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Old 08-04-2002, 07:57 PM   #82
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Can't wait. I'm just gaoing to wait around for Devine to come back before doing anything else. Don't want to get too carried away. Thanks for the support.


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Old 08-04-2002, 08:00 PM   #83
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well fine people i must say the stories have gotten better but i need to say bye for the time being. i have to go back to school now starting with band camp so i shall be making less appearences from now untill i can get on the pc.

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Old 08-04-2002, 09:27 PM   #84
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I'm working on part 3 of my story, kinda putting the pieces together, so stay tuned for another exciting episode of Dissectional's backstory.


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Old 08-04-2002, 09:54 PM   #85
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so what do you guys think of my story


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Old 08-04-2002, 10:12 PM   #86
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That was pretty cool Whitedragon! Baby killers......(shudder). Keep up the good work!


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Old 08-04-2002, 10:32 PM   #87
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That was pretty cool Whitedragon! Baby killers......(shudder). Keep up the good work!
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Old 08-06-2002, 06:35 AM   #88
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This thread is falling behind guys

I will post my story a little later maybe, but I'd like to keep this going for a little bit longer, to give evryone a chance to write about their character's history.

I'm kinda wanting Divine to get back so he can write the next part of our story: The Jedi Games. I think its basically just lightsaber duel competition, but I'm not sure exactlyI'll let whoever carries on with it to think of it.

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Old 08-07-2002, 12:42 AM   #89
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Yeah, i included the jedi games in my story. thats where all the stuff between my rival and I is going to unfold. i figure i'll write the last piece of my story, which will be the longest. as always, stay tumed saber ass whoopin fans!


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Old 08-08-2002, 01:14 AM   #90
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C'mon guy's Darklighter has a point, this thred is falling behind.

I'm not planning on adding anything else here, unless things get bad enough for this thread. I'll be concentrating more on the main battle thread for now.

C'mon guy's, don't be shy.....


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Old 08-09-2002, 10:32 PM   #91
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Come on guys, this is on page 3! I'll write a little more tomorrow...in the mean time can we keep it in the Swamp please?


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Old 08-20-2002, 09:29 PM   #92
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Eh....*giggle* A shameless bump on my behalf to raise this thread from the ashes. lol.

Surely there is somebody out there who has yet to put in a character backgound story? Anyone? Hmmmmmm?

C'mon! This was on page 6 for crying out loud.


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Old 08-20-2002, 10:23 PM   #93
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ok ill put my last one

it had been 6 months sence ians family died and the hurt was still with him, it isent exactly something you get over with quickly when your wife and child were murdered by someone youve never met. dragon had started teaching lightsaber tacktics and found with surprise that he was the only real lightsaber trainer. obi-wan, darklighter and devine spirit had taken ian in as if he were their own brother, and in a sence he was. ian decided to change his name to white dragon, it was his nick name, because the name ian redhammer brought back so many bad memorys. dragon finnaly felt at peace when h was at the acadamy, something that was rare in his life.

dragon had been searching in his free time for the demon named shadow angel and devine spirit helped him alot, devine was a very powerful jedi and there was something about him that dident feel quite right but dragon always dismissed it. one day they were looking and devine found something. "if what you said was correct i beleve his ship is headed for coruscant" said devine "coruscant, ive never been there, whats it like," devine thought dragon had brain damage but then remembered that dragon was from a backwater planet. "well its....big" devine said.

when dragon got to coruscant he thought he mite faint. he had never seen so many buildings or people, not even in books, even if devine had given him a full map, a lecture, pictures, and every single fact about the planet it still wouldent have prepaired him for it. he tryed to keep his mind focused and use the force to sooth him. after hours of useing data banks and asking in local bars he found out where shadow angel was.

the building that dragon came to was at least 200 storys tall. he walked in and found no people, no furniture, no nothing. dragon was on his guard as he walked through the empty room. the door in front of him suddenly opened and a man with blue hair and a trench coat came in. "follow me"

dragon knew who this was and knew why he had killed his family...because dragon killed angels family first. angel led dragon to a large circlular platform out side on the top floor. "we are both here for revenge, yes" angel said. dragon was silent. "well then lets get started" without warning angel tookout his saber and charged. dragon started only blocking at first because he knew that revenge was the way of the dark side. they got into saber lock and shadow angel started talking. "why dont you attack redhammer arent yo angry that i killed your family....you should have seen you wifes face when i stabed her, i knew she wanted to cry out for you but i stoped her ability to talk...and of your child well i took it slow so that it would stop that annoying crying." dragons rage exploded and he began attacking in an insain bunch of sweeps from his saber. they both jumped backwards. "do you know how your father died" dragon said "he died a slow death, a death of a coward, if i had delayed my final blow he would have beged me to let him live, you father was a COWARD" both of them ran and clashed to gether so hard they both fell backwards. they were about to get up again but a clocked figure came into view "enough" he said "what do you want old man" angel said. a blue light came from the mans hand and hit them both and they both fell down uncounsious.

dragon woke up next to his ship and had a spliting headache. he decided that he would come back when he had more strength. and tell obi-wan what had happened. but some day dragon would see angel again and he would make it their final meeting.

dragon got back to the jedi acadamy and rested for a day. when he got up he decided to roam th acadamy grounds. he saw obi-wan in the cortyard. "good morning" dragon said. "oh good morning dident see you." they both stood for a moment and looked at the acadamy grounds. "nice morning for a moch duel" obi-wan said. dragon thought his mouth would fall off he was grining so much. "my thoughts exactly" they both headed off towards the dueling room and dragon thought that he was finnally some place that felt like home



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Old 09-11-2002, 02:07 PM   #94
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Wow this thread brings back memories eh?...it seems so long ago we did this, but nevertheless this thread will be resurrected once again...

...I am working on compiling the stories, and even though this is such an old thread I'd like to finish off what we started...so in the next few days I will be finding time to finish my story, and others can do the same if the so wish...

This is also a good opportunity for all the new-ish guys to check out all the Academy member's writing talentslol...

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Old 09-11-2002, 02:35 PM   #95
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First of all, I would like to complimemt the story! Its a great story and well written! I really like the energy that you put into it!

Now for the more serious part! Whats this Acadamy Wars? Could any1 fill me in?

Well, I dont hope that this has cost to much trouble, but a wise man once told me.....No question is ever stupid ~ Darth Groovy *Looks at Darth Groovy*

Well, thx in advance!!

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Old 09-11-2002, 02:44 PM   #96
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It's no stupid questionsno worries, it's my fault I should have explained...

Basically, a few months back obi-wan13 set up the LucasForums Jedi Academy (and what a brilliant Academy it is) it's main purpose was for teachers (ppl with over 1000 posts) to take on padawans who needed guidance in the way of using LucasForums (i.e. not spamming, flaming, etc.)

Well, as we built up more of a following, we decided it would be fun to begin a story thread, using our usernames as character names in the story...and thus, the Academy Wars was born. The main plot was about the rivalry between obi-wan's and Divine Spirit's opposing Academies, and how the story of the battle ensued...good stuff I'll say lol, it was a lot of fun...

But after a while the hype died down a little...the summer was over, ppl started going back to school, and the story was left a little unfinished...well, Episode was unfinished, but it only needed a good ending...Groovy and Reb were working on it I think...this thread contains all the character's backstories, and how they came to teh Academy...

If enough ppl are still interested, it would be cool to get the story to Episode 3


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Old 09-11-2002, 03:47 PM   #97
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my story still wasent finished and i wasent supposed to stay on the darkside


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Old 09-11-2002, 03:51 PM   #98
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yeeeahh.... ok.... well i fight using the lightside, and I win with it. so yeah


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Old 09-11-2002, 05:12 PM   #99
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Well it depends if I'm in the academy. I'm gonna start working on the map shortly almost done with them tutorials.
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Old 09-11-2002, 05:54 PM   #100
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Well it depends if I'm in the academy. I'm gonna start working on the map shortly almost done with them tutorials.
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Old 09-11-2002, 06:20 PM   #101
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Well it depends if I'm in the academy. I'm gonna start working on the map shortly almost done with them tutorials.
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Old 09-11-2002, 06:26 PM   #102
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Old 09-11-2002, 06:48 PM   #103
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make that two cookies and i dont know about anybody else but ill owe you one


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Old 09-11-2002, 06:59 PM   #105
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Old 09-11-2002, 07:01 PM   #106
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*takes ewok's cigar and bashes it on whitedragon's head and gives ewok another cigar* nummy cookies
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Old 09-11-2002, 07:08 PM   #107
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Old 10-14-2002, 06:13 PM   #108
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I'm digging up the past again it seemslol...

Well, could one of the mods please please please move this thread into the RPG forum (like you did with the Academy Wars threads)...this thread fits into the same story series...so if you could move it to there it would be much appreciatedThank you.



edit - Thanks for moving the thread Rhett m8


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Old 10-14-2002, 07:44 PM   #109
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The name of the thread backround story

A long time ago........(Before the sith academy) when drinking was legal and smoking was everywhere there was one, one who could stop the love and began hate his name was "Lionel Hutz"
A lawyer. He massed an invasion of polotics to destroy the simple world and he succecded






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Old 10-14-2002, 08:29 PM   #110
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Do you think you could keep your story and this one seperate?...If you're going to post a link to a different RPG, then can you post it in another topic...this is for the Academy Wars Prequel stories, and that's how it will stay. Thanks


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Old 11-24-2002, 12:23 PM   #112
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Well, as we are waiting for Episode 3 to start, and my writer's block has long since disappeared (lol), I would like to carry on with the unfinished story of me, Obi-wan and Divine's Academy history.

(To find the last post in the story, look at mine and Obi-wan's posts at the bottom of page 2)

We left off where Darklighter had returned from killing the assassin who had killed his family and love. It had been many months since then, and Darklighter was to take part in the Academy Jedi Fighting Games, against Divine Spirit. This is where our story continues...

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Darklighter sat, alone in meditation. All about was dark; one light on the wall above illuminated his facial features, as his head was propped back against the head of his seat, his eyes shut fast. His heart beat quickly, getting faster and faster with each palpitation. He was nervous, excited and agitated, all at the same time, as he began to hear the crowd’s roar and cheer faintly in the background. He stood up, and walked to the door of the room. As it opened slowly, the light began to filter in, and the noise becoming louder. Tidus stepped out, and the spectators gave a cry as they saw him. These were the Academy’s Jedi Fighting Games.

Darklighter walked up onto the platform, and proceeded to the lift. The Arena was a gigantic square hall, with a huge glass octagonal prism in the centre, reaching from the floor to the ceiling, with a lift on either side. This was where the Jedi would fight. On opposite walls were the audience stands, two rows on top of each other, and at the far side was the booth for higher Academy personnel. Obi-wan sat in the centre chair, his accomplices on either side. On the opposite wall from the booth was the entrance door, massive, and on either side two high platforms, where the two combatants would enter the arena. Darklighter was on one side, and on the other stood Divine Spirit. The pair had not spoken since their last fateful encounter. It had been many months since then. There was infinite tension between them; it was ironic that these two would be faced against each other. Both great swordsmen, none better than the other. Obi-wan looked out into the arena with a degree of agitated anticipation. He quickly shrugged off the feeling and concentrated on enjoying the fight.

Divine and Darklighter stepped onto the elevators next to their platforms, which carried them down to the floor. Divine turned his head toward Tidus, and gave a sneering smile. He turned away his head in response, as they both proceeded to the centre fighting showground. They both walked onto their corresponding lift platforms, as the crowds roared with excitement. A voice came over the speakers.

“You know the rules,” came the voice, harsh and loud over the amplifier, “First one to hit the other wins the round. There will be 3 rounds altogether. The buzzer will sound at the end of each. At the end, the participant with the most victors wins.”

They proceeded to put on their protective clothing, to reduce the damage caused by the lightsabers.

Divine stared at Darklighter, who stared back in return. Their eyes fixated on one another.

“Divine Spirit…” the announcer’s voice blurted out, “…are you ready?”

“Ready when you are Tidus” he said, sneering in a half smile once again.

“Darklighter…” came the voice once again, “…are you ready?

“Ready!” he yelled bluntly, and the lifts shook as they elevated the two high up to the openings at the top of the glass case. The lifts, when at the top, moved forward inside, and brought Darklighter and Divine down to the bottom. They stepped off, and walked forward into their stances.

“Round One!” said the voice again, “Begin!”

The buzzer sounded, and both Jedi bowed before each other. They began to walk around in a circle, keeping eye contact, never flinching away from each other’s stare. Divine was the first to speak.

“It is futile to even consider to face me, Tidus” he said with a menacing tone. “You will never defeat me!”

“We’ll just see about that” he replied with an unfeeling smile. Divine was the first to strike, and leapt forward, his saber unsheathed, held high above his head, charging with devastating speed. Darklighter was too quick, as he parried the attack, drawing his brandished orange saber as he escaped the strike. Divine stood and composed himself, before swinging his saber to the left of Tidus, he blocked the move, and threw Divine back, knocking sabers as he drove him backwards. Divine force pushed Darklighter back onto the floor, and he back flipped over him and brought his saber down onto Darklighter’s chest.

The buzzer sounded, and the round ended. Divine held out his hand and pulled Darklighter to his feet.

“Round Two!” said the announcer, “Begin!”

Divine gave a small smirk, and Darklighter charged at Divine, and Divine ran towards him as well. They both leapt into the air and knocked sabers, Darklighter landing facing one of the walls. Divine quickly turned and ran towards the back of Darklighter, holding his saber high above his head once again. But Tidus, with amazing speed, ran up the wall, and flipping backwards behind Divine, brought his saber down onto his shoulder. Though this time, Divine span round and blocked it, and lunged at Tidus. He was quick to jump back out of harms way, and proceeded to attack Divine. They hit once, twice, then a third time, and Darklighter hit Divine’s saber hard, as he spun round Tidus ducked, and struck his leg.

The buzzer’s sound was heard again, only muted by the wailing of the crowds. It was a draw, and the outcome of this round would decide the winner.

“Not your lucky day eh, Divine?” Darklighter sarcastically asked with a smile. This surely would do far worse for him than he had anticipated. The fire in Divine’s eyes burned with rage. Aggravating him wouldn’t be the smart thing to do.

“Final Round…” the announcer broke Tidus’ deep contemplation. “Begin!”

Divine immediately charged at Tidus, who was unprepared, and knocked him back. Divine swiped overhead from the side, but Darklighter ducked out of way, and rose to block the attack as his saber was brought back. Darklighter drove Divine back with strike after strike, each being blocked and parried perfectly. Tidus flipped off of the wall, and landed in time for Divine to block once again. Divine back flipped as he swiped low, and began to charge again. As he ran, with pure anger in his eyes, he held his saber up and brought it down on Tidus. Though he was too quick to respond. Darklighter span round, knocking Divine’s saber, and send him flying onto the ground ten or so meters away. Divine could stand it no longer. The use of force powers to cause harm was strictly forbidden in the games, though Divine walked up towards Darklighter, knocking his saber out of his hand furiously, and force pushing him with extreme power towards the glass. He went straight through it, and collapsed in a heap at the bottom of the stands. Divine ran towards him on the floor, ready to strike him once again, when he was thrown to the other side of the arena by some unknown force. Darklighter lifted his head with difficulty, and saw Obi-wan standing there, looking at him worriedly.

“Take him away to isolation!” Obi-wan yelled to the Jedi guards standing at the entrance doors, as they lifted Divine to his feet and walked him out of the hall. Darklighter lay bruised and battered, unable to move, as Obi-wan rushed to kneel before him.

“Hold on son” Obi-wan whispered to him with a smile, “you’ll be fine.”

Darklighter’s head fell the ground, and he drifted into a calm sleep.

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Well, I hope you enjoyed itI'd like to keep this thread going for a bit before I compile the stories. So anyways, tell me what you think lol


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Old 11-24-2002, 05:26 PM   #113
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nice story darky

mabey you could help me out with something.
i need to figure out when i should come into the jedi acadamy after obi-wan persuaded me to join the acadamy when my wife and son died. what i mean is should it be right before the acadamy wars or a year or two before


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Old 11-26-2002, 06:13 PM   #114
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a lil short about yom and his lil adventure to helping the sith.
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it was a dark stormy night in on the planet of coruscent in the goverment district. standing out by were the jedi temple was once standing. Yom was standing on the strees with a robe covering the armor, the armor that carries the marks that strikes fear in the eyes of his vitems. standing on the some what diserted street. a Twi'lek walks up with green brades hanging out of the hood of his robe.
"Were is my money?" Yom asks as the distortion comes though the helmet to mask his voice.
The Twi'lek awnsers back in a hars tone " i have the money. but did u keep up with your end of the deal?"
Yom reaches in to his robe and starts to search, the Twi'lek reaches for his light saber. so now Yom Knew who he was dealing with. so be for he the Twi'lek could ignight his saber yom pulled out and threw down a blody scalp and a light saber of a jedi. then reaches back in to pull out another scalp and saber. this belonged to the padawn.
" the jedi had a padawan so i took care of him as well." the Twi'lek picks up the scalps and the sabers. and throws down a case.
" there is a added bouns for the padawan in there" the Twi'lek says with a lighter attitude for a sith. "My employer is very plezed with you. You have earnd his great amount of trust he whants to see u soon."
"tell him i thank him for the invite" he says being his normal polite self, "but i must get back i think by mentor is geting Ill and i need to tend to him"
"Yes, if u must but..." The shot came no were The Twi'lek was on the ground and Yom was out in the open for a open kill. but the Twi'lek was a decoy it was no sith would of senced that coming. Yom grabs the case and runs around the corner only to find a dead end and a blast of shots coming from the rear. Yom is quick to fire of his jet pack and mack it to the balcony to see were the shots were coming from. he is quick to spot the shooter and then pulls out his small blaster and opens fire on the perpertrator. but as he was shooting he noticed to see the armor of the shooter. it was similar to Yom's but with the colors of Black and silver.



to leave you all hanging to be continud


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